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Reviewer: banned2010 (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 12:15 PM · On: Chapter 7 - A Total Reality Shock
I wasn't sure if I would enjoy your story, but I am happy to say that it has become one of my favorites. I can't wait for the update! Story is a definite 10!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much, banned2010!
I'm so glad you decided to give my story a try, and it's wonderful that you're enjoying it. One of your favorites, wow! What a lovely compliment, thank you! :)
Hope to see you back again soon. The next chapter just updated today, yay!
-SwimmingBee
Reviewer: KathyK (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 08:58 AM · On: Chapter 7 - A Total Reality Shock
Yeah, she's the only girl who would say no to Rob. Where on earth did you find her?
Author's Response: Hey again KathyK,
Where on earth did I find Gemma? I found her living in a little apartment in Santa Monica with her best friend. :)
But really, I made her up. I like her. I tried to make her as real as possible, which means she makes silly decisions sometimes and gets confused about boys, like the rest of us do. She's had her heart-broken and has her defences up so she won't get hurt again. She'll get there, though!
Thanks again for reading and reviewing!
-SwimmingBee
Reviewer: skipabeat (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 01:20 AM · On: Chapter 7 - A Total Reality Shock
She is stringing both of them along. That is always dangerous and stupid....Interesting story otherwise. Until next update!
Author's Response: Hi skipabeat,
Aw, I don't think Gemma is really stringing them along - at least not intentionally. She's just so unsure about the whole Rob thing. I don't think she's really a dangerous or a stupid person... although we all have our moments! I try to write the characters as real as possible. We all make silly choices sometimes!
Thanks for the stars! I hope you continue to read and revlew. :)
-SwimmingBee
Reviewer: KathyK (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2010 06:45 PM · On: Chapter 3 - A Slow Recovery
My husband's name is Daniel, so, yeah, I would have gone to see Rob.
Author's Response: Ha! KathyK, your review made me laugh! Poor Daniel. :)
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
-SwimmingBee
Reviewer: KathyK (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2010 06:24 PM · On: Chapter 2 - One, Two, Three... Go!
Where's Gemma? We need a pic of her, too. Also Rob, Bobby and Marcus.
Author's Response: Hey again, KathyK!
Gemma and Rob are in the banner. There's a photo of her in a later chapter, too. As for Bobby and Marcus? I kinda figured everybody knew what they looked like anyway! There's a video of them over on the Days Like This thread on the forum though, if you want to check it out. You can never have enough Bobby and Marcus. :)
-SwimmingBee
Reviewer: KathyK (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2010 05:56 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Girls' Night Out!
I would probably faint and miss the whole thing.
Author's Response: Hi KathyK,
Great to see a new reader, yay! Welcome!
And I'm with you - I'd probably faint if Robert Pattinson spoke to me, as well.
Thanks for your review. Hope you like the rest of the story. :)
-SwimmingBee
Reviewer: twilight_dancer (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2010 09:35 AM · On: Chapter 7 - A Total Reality Shock
I loved this chapter. I was sad at the beginning but you had everything work out okay by the end. I would want to invite him over too, but I think she did the right thing. I think that they're date is going to go very well tomorrow night, and that they will be able to be with each other then. Who knows, the night might end in a nighttime cuddle and morning snuggle. Well, here's hoping!
Please post more soon.
Author's Response: Hi twilight_dancer,
Thanks for your lovely review! So great to hear you're still enjoying the story. :)
I loved reading your thoughts about the next chapter. They do have a fun night (mostly!) and nighttime cuddles and morning snuggles sounds perfect.
I'm hoping Chapter 8 should be up in the next couple of days. I've already submitted it, just waiting for validation now. *twiddles thumbs*
Thanks again!
-SwimmingBee
Reviewer: pearlgem (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2010 10:28 PM · On: Chapter 7 - A Total Reality Shock
You write the new 'dating' not sure what to call it anxiety perfectly! Oh I used to hate that guessing...anyway great chapter! I really don't think I would ever have the strength to tell Rob no! Gemma is much stronger than I ;)
Can't wait for Marcus's gig.
Author's Response: Hi pearlgem,
Great to hear you're still enjoying the story!
You're so right about all the anxieties and guessing that go along with the beginning of dating and getting to know someone. It's awful, isn't it? Poor Gemma's just freaking out because she's been hurt so badly in the past, but also because... it's Robert Pattinson! Gah! I'd be freaking out, too. She'll get there, though!
I wouldn't have been able to say no to Rob coming over late at night either. But Gemma knew what would happen if he came over, and it wasn't just going to be snuggles this time! She's not quite sure if she's ready to go there or not yet...
They definitely have fun at Marcus' gig though. :)
Thanks for your great review!
-SwimmingBee
Reviewer: babystar (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2010 03:28 PM · On: Chapter 7 - A Total Reality Shock
WOW! I absolutely loved this chapter! I squealed like an idiot reading it! The writing was extraordinary, mellifluous, and just so darn perfect! Thank you so very much for this story. It always brightens up my day that much more. I can’t tell you enough how much I appreciate you doing this simply out of the goodness of your heart. You take the time to write and share the story..gaining nothing in return and I can’t thank you enough.
Excellent chapter! Gemma oh Gemma…as much as I absolutely adore her…I wanted to shake her a tinsy bit during the “wake up” scene. Maybe it’s just me or I might be missing something, but I couldn’t understand what Rob did to upset her so much. He said “I’ll call you later”, why was that so wrong of him to have said? He was obviously in a hurry to make it to work on time (doesn’t it just irk you the way that men can just wake up and go without any fuss?) so what the heck did he do wrong? He kissed her goodbye and said he’d call her later…I know she wasn’t aware of the fact that he had her telephone number, and believed him to be lying because of it, but still…It wouldn’t have been difficult for him to obtain her cell phone number from Marcus who could have easily asked Ally, Sarah or Bobby etc...You know what? I just realized that I don’t understand her reaction because at 18, I’ve never been in her shoes. I’ve never had my heart trampled on by Aaron the loser, never been made to feel inferior, or had a wedding engagement cancelled. Her self esteem is so low, so off course she would immediately jump to the worst case scenario and wouldn’t take the time to analyze the situation the way that I would have. To me “I’ll call you later” means just that. To Gemma it means something else entirely…bringing forth all of her fears and insecurities about herself :(. Her fears and insecurities makes me want to hunt down Aaron and rip his testicles out!
"He taught me that I'll never understand women and I shouldn't try anymore."
HAHAHA! I LMAO when I read that line even though it was being utilized during a sad moment. Kudos to Gemma for being completely honest with Rob regarding her feelings, and also explaining her motivations in not taking the shirt home with her and also about the comment that she made to Marcus. I liked the Marcus and Gemma talk by the way. It was nice of him to attempt to soothe her fears even though he was unsuccessful. I MISS BOBBY LONG! LOL! Anyway, Gemma and Rob will be just fine provided they keep being completely honest with one another. Gemma is wonderfully adorable even though she does tend to jump to the wrong conclusions. Before I forget…Loving Sarah and Bobby’s developing relationship! You can go in any directions with these two and it will be absolutely perfect. I love the brother/sister vibe they seem to have going, but once again wouldn’t be oppose to it developing into something more. They are hilarious together and I’ll take them in any category. The original Nightmare on Elm Street also happens to be a favorite of mine! I absolutely love Johnny Depp in it! The scene in his bedroom after Freddy kills him…with all of the blood…is amazing!
Back to the review..Kudos to Gemma for not inviting Rob over! LOL, I don’t think that I could have been as strong! He is so obviously into her though, it’s sweet. I don’t know how I feel about her contacting Daniel again. I know she told him that she would, and there’s really nothing wrong with it but still..Daniel seems to be a really nice guy and I don’t want to see him hurt. I know that Gemma isn’t the type, and she might not even be aware of it, but I almost get the feeling that Daniel is her plan B, because she is so sure that things will not last with Robert. I love her childlike ways :).
In conclusion, LOL! I have to make greater efforts to connect with Marcus and Ally. I don’t understand why I’m not as attached to them as I am to Bobby, Sarah, Gemma and Rob..especially Gemma, as she is my absolute favorite. Excellent chapter once again, can’t wait for the Marcus gig and the purple dinosaur shirt! Oh and the texts at the end were HOT!
Author's Response: Babystar, WOW!!
I think that's the longest, most detailed, amazing review in the history of Twilighted reviews!
Well I don't know about that, but it's definitely a record for Days Like This! WOW! Wherever will I begin!?
I'm so glad you liked the chapter, even if some of Gemma's reactions confused you a bit. And thank you, for thanking me! I LOVE writing this story, so I do get something out of it too. I love Gemma and Rob and I have lots of fun writing about them. And it makes me so happy that other people seem to like them too. Reading reviews like yours is the best thing I could ever receive in response... Aside from a large cash bonus perhaps, but whatever. So thank YOU for reading and reviewing!
So I know, Gemma over-reacted to Rob saying, "I'll call you later". But even though you say you don't understand it, you totally do! As you said, she's had her heart broken and her self-esteem is pretty low. She never imagined anything would actually become of their night together, so when Rob said he'd call her, her thoughts immediately went to "But you don't have my number," and she thought he was just brushing her off. If she had have stopped to think about it, she might have realized that he could get her number from Marcus or Bobby, but she didn't stop to think. She suspected the worst, because that's where her head is at the moment with boys. Especially boys she really likes. She's just scared to have her little heart trampled on again!
Aww, I like the line about not understanding women, too. Poor Rob, he was so confused! Hehee. He really had no idea what he'd done wrong. Luckily, they're good at talking and being honest, so they fixed things up pretty quickly. Phew. :)
Don't worry, there's plenty more Bobby Long in the next chapter! I like Sarah and Bobby's relationship (or whatever!) too. Gemma desperately wants there to be something between the two of them, but is there? Hmmm, time will tell!
Nightmare on Elm Street terrifies me. I saw it when I was little and couldn't sleep for ages! I have no idea why i was allowed to watch it, but gah! *shudder* Do you know what? I didn't even know Johnny Depp was in it! Wow. Duh, me!
As for Gemma contacting Daniel... she only did it after googling Robert Pattinson, right?! Hmm. Rob didn't seem "real" to her at that point, and Daniel is so real and safe. That being said, I don't think Daniel is her Plan B. I think she's still just trying to work out what she wants, and can't really accept that the Rob thing is actually going to lead anywhere. Daniel was around first, so she's really just proceeding with their plans as normal. Does that make sense!? I hope so! Daniel will be okay though, don't worry. :)
Hmm, sorry you're not as attached to Marcus and Ally as you are to the rest of them. But everybody has their favorites, right!? So that's okay. They have a different way of operating than Gemma and Rob. I think they're both pretty cool and laid-back, really. Ally's fun and definitely knows what she's doing, and Marcus is just... Marcus. I totally see him as the fatherly, sensible one of the Brit-Pack. His gig and the purple dinosaur shirt is coming right up!
Yay for hot texts! There's plenty more of those coming up. ;)
Thank you soooo much for such a fabulous review, babystar! You're amazing! I hope I did it justice!
*hugs*
-SwimmingBee
Reviewer: lola1991 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2010 02:24 PM · On: Chapter 7 - A Total Reality Shock
awwww! so hot and so sweeeeet and so fun and so intense and so UPDATE LIKE RIGHT NOW!! lol
I really like the way Gemma is handling things.. yeah she shouldn't invite him over.. I really think that nothing is going to happen between them before she goes out with Dan again and finds out that it's not going to work with him.. sadly, but that's the right thing to do right?
ooooh validation please hurry up!
Awesome work see ya next chap :)
Author's Response: Hey Lola!
So glad you liked the chapter. Thank you for your lovely review!
I've already submitted the next chapter, so hopefully validation won't take too long. Fingers crossed!
Yep, working things out with Daniel is definitely the right thing to do... But meeting Rob at Marcus' concert comes next! Don't worry, they'll all sort themselves out eventually. :)
Thanks again!
-SwimmingBee
Reviewer: lunaluna72 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2010 06:23 AM · On: Chapter 7 - A Total Reality Shock
I promise I wont throw any !
Author's Response: Hehee, thanks lunaluna! I appreciate that. :)
*hugs*
-SwimmingBee
Reviewer: lunaluna72 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2010 06:00 AM · On: Chapter 7 - A Total Reality Shock
Not perfect, what the hell do you mean Rob's not perfect !! Ha Ha, I'll let you into a secret, the more imperfect he is, the more I love him !
Author's Response: Hehee! So silly, lunaluna. I know what you mean though... Rob's imperfections just make us love him more!
Phew. You should love my story Rob then. ;)
We get a little sneak peak of his imperfections in the next chapter. Eeek! I shall prepare to have rotten tomatoes thrown at me through the computer! :)
-SwimmingBee
Reviewer: perfect Rob (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2010 05:12 AM · On: Chapter 7 - A Total Reality Shock
so gooooooood!!!
i love it!!!
next chapter ASAP!!!!!!
THANK YOU!!!
Author's Response: Hi perfect Rob,
Yay, I'm so glad you're still enjoying the story! :)
More Rob and Gemma coming soon, I promise.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
-SwimmingBee
Reviewer: RobAussieFan (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2010 04:10 AM · On: Chapter 7 - A Total Reality Shock
Another awesome chapter! Loved it. Thanks!
Author's Response: So glad you're still enjoying the story!
Thanks, RobAussieFan. :)
More coming up soon!
-SwimmingBee
Reviewer: gopher4953 (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2010 10:26 PM · On: Chapter 7 - A Total Reality Shock
Great chappie, sweetie!
I am so in love with these two! They are precious together! I can't wait for Marcus' concert and their date! Waiting anxiously for MORE PLEASE!
Loves ya!
Ellen
Author's Response: Thank you Ellen!
Yay, I'm so pleased you're in love with Rob and Gemma. I am too, and it makes me squee to know that other people are enjoying them as much as me!
The next chapter should be up soon... They definitely have fun at Marcus' concert! ;)
-SwimmingBee
Reviewer: sg360girl (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2010 09:43 PM · On: Chapter 7 - A Total Reality Shock
this is an amazing story... and awww, they already miss each other! I hope you update soon! I crave your story every day!
Author's Response: Wow, thanks so much, sg360girl!
I'm so pleased you're enjoying the story. I've already submitted the next chapter, it's just waiting in the validation queue now. Hopefully it shouldn't take too long, so your Rob and Gemma craving will be satisfied. :)
-SwimmingBee
Reviewer: trixie11 (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2010 08:11 PM · On: Chapter 7 - A Total Reality Shock
I soooooo love this story! It has very quickly become one of my favorites and I have to admit to being giddy with excitement whenever I see you update! Keep up the excellent work!!
Author's Response: Aww, thank you trixie!
Your review made me giddy with excitement, so now we're even. :)
I hope you continue to read and enjoy. The next chapter should be up soon. Rob and Gemma definitely have fun at Marcus' gig!
-SwimmingBee
Reviewer: Gabi-b (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2010 05:10 PM · On: Chapter 7 - A Total Reality Shock
Amaaaaaaaaaaazing, looking very foward for the next chap.
Update ASAP, pleaseee
Xo, G
Author's Response: Thanks Gabi!
Glad you enjoyed it. The next chapter is on it's way. Shouldn't be too much longer. :)
-SwimmingBee
Reviewer: wendemyre (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2010 04:29 PM · On: Chapter 7 - A Total Reality Shock
First let me say kudos to you for making Gemma strong enough to turn down Rob when he asked her to invite him over… Because let me tell you, I would have given him directions to my house so fast his head would spin… I enjoy this story so much I found myself grinning like an idot over the text message they were sending back and forth and I can see why Gemma would be a little mad and insecure over when Rob said he would call her.
My only question to you is what is going to happen with “Dan with the Dimples” ? How could you make a date with him when you have Robert Pattinson interested in you!?!? I know; I know she unsure of the Robster.
As always I will be waiting very impatiently for the next chapter… Thank you …. Wendy
Author's Response: Hey Wendy,
Thanks for another lovely review!
Haha, I would have been right with you, giving Rob directions to my house for the late night booty call. But that's what makes her Gemma... She overthinks things. She likes Rob, but she's not quite ready to admit that to herself yet. She's been hurt in the past and is overly cautious at the moment, to protect herself.
Which is also why she contacted Daniel with the dimples. He's still the safe, easy choice. If you don't really like someone, you're not going to get hurt, right?! She texted him right after she'd been googling Rob. He didn't seem "real" to her at that point, hence the security blanket of Daniel.
Don't worry, Daniel with the dimples won't be around forever. Is that big enough of a hint for you? ;)
Thanks again Wendy. Hope you enjoy the next chapter!
-SwimmingBee
Reviewer: duders79 (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2010 11:19 AM · On: Chapter 7 - A Total Reality Shock
Awwww! Miscommunicado!! He called her an adorable girl!! He likes her sooo much! He's probably just being a boy and totally missing the point at that moment that he doesn't have her number! Oh, poor Gem...I can see why she got all worked up. Of course, that was my initial thought - til I saw that he'd been a sneaky monkey and put his number in her phone and vice versa! Way to go Rob!
And double awwww! Then Rob's all upset 'cause she left his shirt behind and he didn't hear from her! It's so hard when you're getting to know someone and you get all these miscommunicated issues that become huge 'cause you like someone so much.
And note to Rob - Marcus is sooo right, you shall never understand the female species. Most men don't. But you're not far off! Bless!
'It's only been 36 hours since I've seen you...'And he misses her! Woohoo! Gem, you've got him snared in the girlie trap!
'Invite me over Gemma...' Holy-flippin-heck! I would have so crumbled...Fair play to Gem there. Best line of the chapter. I flipped, somersaulted and squee-ed!
Gorgeous! Love it as always! So, you've submitted the next instalment, yes?! ;)
Big mwah!
Duders x
Author's Response: Duders!
Is this your longest review ever!? Hehee, I think so!
I got the feeling you were writing as you were reading. It was great to read your thoughts as you went along.
Miscommunicado indeed! If only Rob had been brave enough to actually have the conversation of, "Hey Gemma, can I please have your number?" then that all would have been avoided! Pfft, boys!
Yep, Rob was so disappointed that he hadn't heard from Gemma. Aww. Poor thing was so confused, he had no idea what he'd done wrong! He was nearly ready to accept that she didn't want to see him anymore because of his crazy life though... poor boy.
Snared in the girlie trap!? Bwah, haa! That's hilarious. But yes, she certainly has snared him! She's not quite sure whether she's ready to believe that or not yet, though. Plus, isn't he hooking up with some other girl in England? Evie or something? ;)
Sorry, way to confuse our stories...
I like the "Invite me over, Gemma" line too. Sigh! She has far too much restraint, doesn't she? But she knew what would happen if he came over, and it certainly wasn't just snuggles. Hopefully they can behave themselves at Marcus' concert. Or... not. :)
And yes, of course I've submitted the next instalment! You know me too well. I'll post a teaser over on the forum soon.
Thanks for another fabulously entertaining review!
Big mwah right back!
-SwimmingBee
Reviewer: Lilliana (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2010 08:21 AM · On: Chapter 7 - A Total Reality Shock
FANTASTIC CHAPTER! :)
I love how you showed Gemma as a real girl - one who jumps to conclusions like we all do. ;) And I'm really glad there was resolution with her and Rob! Whew! :)
Can't wait to read the next chapter!
-Mandy
Lilliana in reviews, MrsFrost041208 in forums
Author's Response: Hi Mandy,
Aw, thank you for a lovely review!
I'm so glad you like that Gemma is a 'real girl'. You're right, she jumps to conclusions, overthinks things and makes mistakes. She's not perfect, and neither is Rob. I tried to write them realistically, and I'm so pleased that's coming across. :)
The next chapter shouldn't be too far away. I've already submitted it... Just waiting for validation now!
Thanks again,
-SwimmingBee
Reviewer: alexandra (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2010 08:02 AM · On: Chapter 7 - A Total Reality Shock
I like the slow burn... it will make the "sexin'" that much hotter. I assume you've got the lemons outlined??? :)
Author's Response: Hey alexandra,
So pleased to hear you like the slow burn... There's plenty more of it! ;)
And yep, the lemons have most definitely been outlined. I've written the majority of the story already, so trust me when I say there's plenty of "sexin'" coming up!
Thanks for reading and reviewing. *hugs*
-SwimmingBee
Reviewer: edwyna (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2010 07:27 AM · On: Chapter 7 - A Total Reality Shock
lol biddyswife, I thought the same thing,.... omg if I had this man asking me to "invite me over" I seriously seriously seriously don't think I could hold back, I'd want him in my bed..... I guess she must have a way stronger constitution than the weakling I am, lol !!!!! Seriously, I understand why she is waiting (I think, slight frown). Great story, please update soon.
Author's Response: Hi again edwyna!
I'm with you - I wouldn't be able to say no to him coving over late at night either... booty call or not! But poor Gemma is still a bit of a scaredy-cat. She knew what would happen if he came over, and she's not quite sure if she's ready for that yet. She really likes him, and that scares her, even if she's not ready to admit it. She's had her heart broken in the past and she's overly cautious now.
But don't worry, she'll sort herself out soon enough! :)
Hope you enjoy the next chapter too.
-SwimmingBee
Reviewer: biddyswife (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2010 06:31 AM · On: Chapter 7 - A Total Reality Shock
is she mad? Rob wanting to be invited to her bed? OMG.
But I do totally understand. She's been hurt and is protecting herself. Let's see where the date Tuesday goes... can't wait.... hugs Clare x
Author's Response: Hey again Clare,
Gemma sure has restraint, doesn't she?! I'm pretty sure I wouldn't have said no to him!
But you're right... She is trying to protect herself from getting hurt again. I hope you enjoy reading about their date in the next chapter. They certainly enjoy themselves, anyway! ;)
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. I really appreciate all your kind words!
-SwimmingBee
Reviewer: biddyswife (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2010 06:10 AM · On: Chapter 6 - So Good
can Rob come and kiss my eyelids and tell me to sleep tight? please??
Author's Response: Ha, biddyswife! Sure! Just hop in line behind me, okay? :)
Glad you liked the sofa snuggling.
Thanks for another fun review!
-SwimmingBee
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