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Reviewer: perfect Rob (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2010 08:35 AM · On: Chapter 10 - Please...

Just Adorable !!!And your Rob is so SEXY andcaring, I just love him!

And You updated so soon i was up to the ceiling with joy!

THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Waiting for more .................. 



Author's Response:

Hey perfect Rob,

Thanks so much! I'm so pleased you're still enjoying the story!

Aww, Rob is lovely, isn't he?

I've already submitted the next chapter, so fingers crossed for another speedy validation! :)

-SwimmingBee

Reviewer: wendemyre (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2010 05:48 AM · On: Chapter 10 - Please...

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I was sooooo excited and surprised to see a new chapter last night!!!!

 

SwimmingBee, it was so GOOOOOOD!!!!! At first I was feeling a little disappointment  But then I was totally on board with where you coming from Rob’s POV about waiting.  (He soooo digs her )

 

Mr. Fingers did get some hot action !!! Woo Hoo  I loved it!!!!

 

So can’t wait to see what happens on the date with Mr. Dimples… Is Mr. Fingers going to become Mr. Stalker???

 

 Thank you…… Wendy

 



Author's Response:

Hiya Wendy!

This updated so speedily, didn't it!? It was all due to my validation beta! She was ultra-speedy this time. Yay!

Great to hear you enjoyed the chapter. I'm so glad you were on board with Rob's POV about waiting until Gemma is ready. Aww. He's lovely, isn't he? And yep, he's really quite smitten with our Gemma!

Yep, Mr Fingers definitely got some hot action this time! Phew!

Gemma's date with Daniel with the dimples is coming up next... He doesn't actually become Mr. Stalker, but, well... you're pretty close! I can't say anymore, I don't want to spoil it for you! I'm posting a teaser in the forums very soon... Pop over and check it out!

Thanks again for all your support and encouragement. :)

-SwimmingBee

Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2010 04:37 AM · On: Chapter 10 - Please...

Wow, a heart-to-heart, a spectacular blow-job for 'Robbie', acknowledgement by a member of the Brit-pack, and our man of the moment telling Gemma that he wants to make love to her and he wants to wait until she's ready to accept that, and he's ready to give her that. I can't imagine how hard it would be for a guy to pull himself up and behave when they physically want one another that badly.

Gemma's conversations with her Mum and Sarah really highlighted what I suspected to be Rob's reasoning behind why he wants her to still go on the lunch date with Daniel. Personally, I'm hoping she politely excuses herself from the lunch and then tells Rob that she appreciates the sentiment but she only wants to be with him for him. Just HER Rob.

 



Author's Response:

Hi AussieECfan,

Thanks so much for another lovely review! It's great to know you're still enjoying the story. :)

Rob definitely has a lot of restraint, doesn't he? Augh! He really does want to make sure she's ready for that step now that he knows about her shaky history with men, but also, he wants to make sure he's ready too. He knows sleeping with her would be more than just sex now... And that's a big deal.

I'm glad you appreciated the conversations between Gemma and her Mum and Sarah. I hate to devastate you though... but Gemma really does go on her date with Daniel. We find out how that goes in the next chapter... and we'll see how Rob deals with it too. Hmm! It would be great if Gemma could tell Rob that she just wants to be with him and not Daniel, but really, she already has. She told him that at Marcus' concert, and Rob told her to go on the date anyway. Ho-hum. Poor Gemma! She's so confused.

They'll get there eventually though, don't worry! :)

Thanks again, I love hearing from you!

-SwimmingBee

Reviewer: random_affair (Anonymous) · Date: September 02, 2010 03:51 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Girls' Night Out!

I just had to come out of lurkdom to let you how awesome this is!!! I absolutely looove this story and I'm already looking forward for the next update. (maybe you can make it three in one week hehe)



Author's Response:

Hi random_affair,

Aww, thanks so much for coming out of lurkdom! I'm so glad you did!

It's great to hear you're loving the story. I'm having such a great time writing it, and reading reviews like yours just makes it all the more fun!

Thanks for your lovely words. The next chapter shouldn't be too far away. :)

-SwimmingBee

Reviewer: lunaluna72 (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2010 11:24 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Please...

Bloody Hell Girly !! Firstly, 2 updates in one week, THANK YOU ! Secondly, yes it was a very happy sigh and thirdly I am now pulling my hair out Rob style, what the bloody hell, I get it, really I do, the cock blocking thing, but Gemma love, you cant give him a blow job after that !! I was shouting NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO at her !

Daniel with the bloody dimple is the bain of my life, and Robert just get a grip, argh ! This is the longest review I have ever written ! I LOVE YOUR STORY, hey you already know that, can't wait for the next chapter, would 3 update in a week be greedy ?????



Author's Response:

Yay, lunaluna! The longest review you've ever written? I'm honoured, thank you! Hehee! :)

I'm so pleased that was a happy sigh last chapter. I was a little bit worried for a while there!

Sorry for making you pull your hair out! Gemma and Rob will sort themselves out soon enough, don't worry! I had to laugh about you shouting "Nooooooooo!" at Gemma for giving him a blow job. I can't help but wonder why. Because he was bad and didn't deserve it after his cock blocking? Hehee. Are you really saying... Rob's not perfect!? Gasp!! *ducks from the flying tomatoes*

Poor Daniel... the bain of your life!? Hehehee. That made me smile. Gemma and Daniel's date is coming up next, but don't worry, there's lots of Rob too. :)

Thanks so much for your fun review and kind words! I've already submitted the next chapter... It's just waiting to be validated now.

-SwimmingBee

 

Reviewer: gopher4953 (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2010 10:21 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Please...

Hi Sweetie!

What a sweet, romantic, hot, tellin' chapter! Love the lemons!! And snugglin' and talkin' is always good. They are gettin' to know one another. Yes, that's a good thing!

Oh, I think that Rob has fallen hard for our Gemma. He's just very insecure in himself. He also knows what his crazy life is like and is not sure he wants to subject her to all that madness.

Givin' her an out with Daniel seems like the responsible thing for him to do for her. But I think that Gem has already...albeit subconsciously... made her choice. Or maybe Rob himself has made her doubt herself.  I hope that they can get it all worked out before too much longer.

I'm glad that he wants to wait until she's emotionally sure that she wants him to make love to her and not just a mindless fuck. He's definitely showing maturity there. I'm anxious to see how the date with Daniel goes. I think that he will realize that they will only ever be good friends and always be there for her like a "big brother". Again, ala Emmett!

Ooh! and she gets to meet Tom!!!

Okay, enough or I'll end up writing a book! I'm detail oriented, at least that's what my reviewers say about my fic, I do tend to go on and on! So, with that said, I really want.....MORE PLEASE! This is sooooo good!

Love ya,

Ellen



Author's Response:

Hey Ellen,

Wow, another fabulous review! Thank you!

So glad you enjoyed this chapter. It was fun to write... They're definitely getting to know each other and really starting to open up, which is always a good thing. :)

Yep, Rob has definitely fallen hard for our Gemma! You're right - he is very insecure and doesn't quite trust himself to be good enough for her yet. Hence the thing about giving her an out with Daniel. Gemma and Daniel's date is coming up next... We'll see how Rob handles that one!

Don't worry, they'll get themselves sorted out before too long. :)

Rob's lovely with Gemma, wanting to wait until she's ready, isn't he? Part of him wants to make sure he's ready too. As you said, he knows it would be much more than a mindless fuck and he wants to make sure he's ready to commit to that. Hmm!

And yay, she gets to meet Tom soon! Not the next chapter... the one after that!

I love that you're detail oriented - I am too! I think I might need to start reading your fic this weekend. I'm not really a Kellan-girl, but I'm definitely an Ellen-girl, and I'd love to check it out! :)

Thanks again!

-SwimmingBee

Reviewer: FrostysWiff08 (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2010 09:34 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Please...

....what was in those pancakes?!?! :D 

I really love the romance/tortured side of Rob that we're seeing.  I love that he's so thoughtful of Gemma and her feelings and emotions.  That makes me happy. :) 

Also, I really want Sarah to be my new best friend. ;) 

I do think that Rob is falling for her, but knowing the industry he's in (agreeing with Sarah here), he's trying to keep Gem open for other men.  Which sucks for both of them. :) 

Can't WAIT for the next one!

xoxoxox

Mandy



Author's Response:

Ha! I know, what was in those pancakes!? A secret Gemma ingredient perhaps, to woo famous men into her bed? Hehee.

And yep, poor Rob is quite tortured, for reasons Gemma (and in turn, the rest of us) don't really understand yet. He's lovely to her though. You're right - he is trying to keep Gem open to other men. We'll see how he handles that in the next chapter. ;)

Aww, I'm so glad you like Sarah! She's certainly not afraid to call it how she sees it. She's a good mix of protective and fun. :)

Thanks so much Mandy, for all your support, encouragement and dancing bananas! You're fabulous and I really appreciate all your kind words. :)

See you over in the forums!

-SwimmingBee

Reviewer: sadie_nikol (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2010 09:07 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Only You

Doors, sometimes they can shield you and others they hurt ya! It better happen soon cause I'm all hot and definitely bothered here!

Author's Response:

Hey sadie_nikol,

Ha, sorry for making you all hot and bothered! Those damn doors!

Thanks so much for continuing to read and review! The next chapter is up now too. :)

-SwimmingBee

Reviewer: KathyK (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2010 08:43 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Please...

Of course, he's falling for her. He only wants her to be sure about him. Why that would be a problem for anyone, I couldn't imagine. He's Rob. End of story.



Author's Response:

Hey KathyK,

Aw, Rob is definitely falling for Gemma, isn't he? You're right - he wants her to be sure about him. He knows all about her shaky past with men now, and he wants to make sure she's ready. He also wants to make sure he's ready though... He knows sleeping with her would be more than just sex, and does he want to actually get that involved? Hmmm...

Thanks so much for continuing to read and review! :)

-SwimmingBee

Reviewer: fawnlike (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2010 08:41 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Please...

Aww, I loved it. It's freaking adorable that your Rob wants to wait to be able to make love to her. That part made me melt.. Great job!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much, fawnlike!

Great to hear you're still enjoying the story. Rob is pretty sweet, isn't he? :)

-SwimmingBee

Reviewer: sg360girl (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2010 07:57 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Please...

I doubt Rob is deliberately distancing himself because his actions prove otherwise. He wants to WAIT to MAKE LOVE.

It seems the issue is more that Rob isn't sure Gem will want to stick around, but he definitely wants her to. Am I right?



Author's Response:

Hi sg360girl,

Great to see you back again! Thanks for continuing to read and review. :)

Yep, Rob wants to wait to make love. Aww, he's lovely! You're right - he's worried that Gemma won't want to stick around. She doesn't really understand why yet though, and since the story is all from her point of view, either do we. More will be revealed soon though!

Thanks again!

-SwimmingBee

 

Reviewer: twi_mom_teddi (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2010 07:52 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Please...

Wow...GREAT chapter...I guess I understand his reasoning for pushing her to go w/Daniel...let's hope she just gets him out of her system and she & Rob can move forward!  : )

t



Author's Response:

Hey teddi,

Thanks so much! Lovely to hear you're still enjoying the adventures of Rob and Gemma.

Gemma and Daniel's date is coming up next... We'll see how that goes, and how Rob handles the situation. Hmm. ;)

-SwimmingBee

Reviewer: MarissaNS (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2010 07:45 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Please...

I hope you update this soon! Loving the story!



Author's Response:

Hi MarissaNS,

Great to hear you're loving the story! I've submitted the next update... Just waiting for it to be validated now. Fingers crossed for a speedy turnover!

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. :)

-SwimmingBee

Reviewer: kyles1979 (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2010 07:40 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Please...

Excellent update girlie! :)

I loved the talk, Rob really is trying to play the good guy here isn't he? I think he is trying to get Gemma to keep her options open in case she suddenly freaks out on him and decides that she can't do it.

I am thinking that the date with Daniel will push her more to Rob though.. or so I am hoping!

She is still starstruck isn't she... One would think she would get over that after having his .. you know... in her mouth.. lol.

Awesome quick update this time... I think it was my McPeel on my post I did a couple of hours ago.... *winks*



Author's Response:

I'm chatting to you on Twitter right now. This is kinda weird. Hehee.

Anyway, thanks for another wonderful review! I love hearing your thoughts about Gemma and Rob and what lies ahead for them. :)

Rob really is trying to play the good guy. Is he playing though, or is he actually the good guy? Oooh, way too deep and meaningful for this late hour. You're right though - he is worried that Gemma might freak out on him, in one way or another. We find out a bit more about his thoughts in the next chapter.

Yep, Gemma is still starstruck at times. She's slowly getting better though! She really only freaked out when she saw herself and Rob in the bathroom mirror together. I think that would freak me out too. Would it help you to be less starstruck if you'd had his... you know... in your mouth? I think it would just make me worse! Ha!

Thanks for all your dancing McPeels. It totally did the trick, I'm sure of it! :)

-SwimmingBee

Reviewer: wendemyre (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2010 07:37 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Only You

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****So with my pouty face on L****  I don’t know who is more frustrated Rob or me….. Hehe No action again ;-(……

But that being said.

 

How sweet is he taking care of our very lucky  girl wanting to make sure the moment is right.? At least she got to meet Mr. Fingers

** eyebrows wagging ** ( I am hoping for some VERY HOT morning  action ) Pretty please ….  Pretty  Pretty Please….. I think

Mr. fingers is owed some payback J ….Can you imagine waking up to Rob in the morning??? Let’s just think about that for a minute or 10…...MMMMM *sigh*

 

So is Mr Fingers going to be hanging a lot Gemma’s ???  I hope so..

 

So I will be trying to wait patiently for the next chapter ….

 

Thank you Swimmingbee for your talent …

 

Sorry for the cut and paste

 

 

   Wendy

 

 

 



Author's Response:

Ohhh, sorry for the frustration, Wendy!

But yep, Rob is very sweet, taking care of Gemma. He's such a nice boy!

Mr Fingers!? Bwah, haha! That cracked me up.

I hope you liked your morning action in the next chapter. Rob definitely got some payback, didn't he? Phew! And I know... waking up next to a sleepy Rob in the morning would be heaven, wouldn't it? Sigh!

Hmm, it seems he might be spending a bit of time at Gemma's place now and then, yep! I don't want to give too much away for you, sneaky girl. ;)

Thanks so much for all your kind words and support! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter!

-SwimmingBee

Reviewer: Gabi-b (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 05:11 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Only You

A-M-A-Z-I-N-G!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love it. They are sooooo perfect togheter.

I want more, pleaseee

Xo, G.



Author's Response:

T-H-A-N-K Y-O-U, Gabi-b!!!!!!!

Great to hear you're still enjoying the adventures of Rob and Gemma. They are pretty cute together, aren't they!?

More will be coming up soon, I promise!

-SwimmingBee

Reviewer: lola1991 (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 04:53 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Only You

*Good night Rob! I love you! marry me!  euuuh ahim ahim  wake up! wake up Lola! stop daydreaming! it wasn't you there it was Gemma! siiiigh*

Are you trying to kill us here? oooh the kissing! your description was perfect! it felt so real! Damn girl! you are really talented!

And that fingers work there!!! oooh I almost melted!

Ahis is amazing! perfect! "sans faute" as we say in french!

Ok, now, bye, see u next chap, I'm going back to my dreams..

:))))



Author's Response:

Haha! Lola, your reviews always crack me up!

Sorry to disturb you from your little daydream... It sounded like a good one! :)

I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter, especially the kissing and the fingers. Lucky Gemma, huh!? I had to go and google what "sans faute" meant. Ooh la la, thank you! I'm learning some French as I go, now! Who'd have thought!?

Thanks again for another fun, lovely review! See you at the next chapter! Hope you enjoyed your Rob dreams...

-SwimmingBee

Reviewer: peacheschica (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 04:33 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Only You

I'm glad they didn't have sex together thefirst time while they were both drunk- gemma more so.

Author's Response:

Hi peacheschica,

I'm glad they didn't have sex as well! As you said, Gemma was way too drunk and there's some stuff they both need to sort through before they eventually go there. They still had fun though, up until Gemma hit her head!

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! Great to hear from you. :)

-SwimmingBee

Reviewer: KathyK (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 03:07 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Only You

Alright, the tension is killing me. But that only makes it better, doesn't it? All in good time...     Great story, by the way.



Author's Response:

Hehee, poor KathyK! That tension really builds up after a while, doesn't it!? But you're right... It will only make it better in the long run. ;)

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! Hope you enjoy the next chapter too.

-SwimmingBee

Reviewer: duders79 (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 11:34 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Only You

Oh Ally...such a friend thing to be concerned about, but how embarrassing for Gem!  Awww!

And yes Rob, we all knew you'd remember Gem telling you where she wanted your fingers later! ;) I really loved the visual of them waiting for the car, it stood out for me a lot.  Naughty and nice...

Their exchange in the cab...whooaa!

"You feel fucking amazing."  Errrm, yep....SwimmingBee.  I just combusted...Waaaaaah!  "You turn bad when you come." THUUUUD!

Oh poor Gem!  Knocking her head like that.  Soooo sweet of Rob with the peas!

When he told her they weren't doing this tonight...well, that is so Rob in my opinion.  Blue balls and all, he's taking care of her.  Awwww!  The way he made himself comfy - lovely.  Ahhhh!

Well, it was totally worth the wait.  Really it was.  Beautiful.  *Sigh* Can't wait to find out what happens in the morning.

And Traniel??  Pffft! Who?!

Duders xx



Author's Response:

Hello, lovely Duders!

Haha, Traniel! They didn't even mention him in this chapter, but you just had to get his name in there somewhere, didn't you!? Bwah, haa! We love Traniel and Trent!

I'm so pleased you enjoyed this chapter. Whew! Doesn't it give all those pictures of Rob's fingers a whole new meaning?! Thanks again for all the crazy banana dancing over on the forums while we waited together!

Aww, I would never have predicted that your favourite visual from this chapter would have been them waiting for the car. It was a quiet, yet naughty, moment between the two of them. :)

Sorry for making you combust! Hehee! Hopefully it was a happy combustion...

So glad you liked sweet Rob with the frozen peas. That was my favourite part of the chapter! And yep, he was lovely, taking care of her even though he must have been feeling rather frustrated himself! He was so well-behaved, wasn't he?!

Thanks again for another fabulous review, Duders! See you on the forums with McPeel!

*hugs*

-SwimmingBee

Reviewer: edwyna (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 10:01 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Only You

wonderfully written !!!  can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much, edwyna!

I'm so pleased you're still enjoying the story. More will be coming up very soon! :)

-SwimmingBee

Reviewer: Lilliana (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 09:44 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Only You

Mop, please? :)

Excellent, Bee - simply excellent. ;)

I love that Gemma is so real - clumsy, rambles when she's drunk - she's a real girl and not some superhuman perfect girl.  I love that - and I hope that real Rob ends up with a girl like that for himself.  

Can't wait for the next one - I want to know what morning-after Rob and Gemma are like... (please no headache, please no headache!) ;)



Author's Response:

Hi Mandy!

I'm so pleased you enjoyed this chapter... Thanks so much for hanging out with me on the forums and for all the crazy banana dancing while we waited together!

Aw, I love that you appreciate the flaws in Gemma. She's certainly not perfect, and either is Rob, but that's what makes life interesting, right?! They both do silly things and make frustrating choices at times, but don't we all!?

I've submitted the next chapter, so let's get those bananas dancing again! I posted a teaser on the forum too, if you fancy checking it out. We get a little sneak peek into their next day. :)

Please no headache?! Hehee. If you drank wine and vodka all night, then slammed your head against the door, do you think you might have just a little headache? I do!! You crack me up!

Thank youuuu! *hugs*

-SwimmingBee

Reviewer: Ladymerlot (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 07:24 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Only You

So our dear Gemma is a bit klutzy.  And dear Rob has an underlying sadness.  His fame makes him lonely.  His attraction to Gemma is a need to find normalcy.  To be himself.  Have a relationship apart from the craziness that is his life.  Self deprecation is a coping mechanism to defend against being hurt.  Gemma is very real.  Honest.  THey both have an underlying passion.  She needs to stop bumping into things.  How many bags of peas does he have to go thru?  Loving this story.  (I tend to get wordy. When I review, I take it seriously. I try to give honest feedback. Sexy times are always great.  But without good story and character definition it's like frosting without the cake for substance.)

Linda



Author's Response:

Hey Linda,

Great to see you back again! I loved your thoughtful, perceptive review. Thank you!

Yep, Gemma was definitely klutzy last night, but I think it more to do with the large amount of alcohol she'd drunk than anything else. Hehee. Thank goodness for frozen peas!

You're so right about Rob... there's definitely some underlying issues there, that Gemma is yet to really understand. It'll come out a bit more in the next couple of chapters as they get to know each other better. He's definitely attracted to Gemma because she's so real and honest, but on the other hand, it freaks him out a little bit too, because he knows very well what his crazy life is like. Sigh!

I'm so glad you're loving the story, and don't worry, I love wordy, honest reviews! I get wordy too, clearly. I tried to make my characters as real and as flawed as the rest of us... Sometimes they frustrate even me, but that's life! There will be sexy times along the way but I don't think it's the focal point of my story... Is it? Eeek!

Thanks again!

-SwimmingBee

Reviewer: RobAussieFan (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 06:55 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Only You

Another great chapter SB! It was so hot. Yet somehow you managed to turn it into something so romantic at the end. He was so sweet to hold the frozen peas on her head. I had to LOL at Sarah with the earplugs. Can't wait to read about what happens when they wake up.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much, RobAussieFan!

Aww, I'm so glad you enjoyed Rob being sweet and holding the frozen peas on Gemma's head. That was my favourite part of the chapter! And I know, poor Sarah with those earplugs. We'll find out what she has to say about it all in the next chapter!

Thanks again!

-SwimmingBee

Reviewer: alexandra (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 06:37 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Only You

Still with the slow burn... but Gemma got what she wanted! (fingers) Looking forward to the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Hey alexandra!

I know, I know... Is the slow burn killing you, or are you enjoying it? Hehee. I can never really tell.

Yay for Rob's fingers though! Next chapter should be coming up soon!

*hugs*

-SwimmingBee

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