K,I hate these things,ya know where ya pour your heart out to a stranger about thier story and they never respond? But I just have to say.............................I LOVE YOU!!!!! This is the best  real Rob fic Ive read in forever! You kick serious ass.

I don't want the "Waaaaa poor me" but my marriage kinda sucks,Im lonely as all fuck and your story makes my night.I look forward to each night reading a chapter.Thanks so much for making a 40ish lonely housewife and Mom of three smile!!!! Mmmmmuuuhhh!!

 

Yours VERY sincerely,

Joan

Author's Response:

Whoops, for some reason I got your review twice. Hi again! :)

Thank you!

-SwimmingBee

Wow Bee, how could you make them have sex without the use of a condom!  I'm so disappointed in the chapter! You have reduced me to tears! LOL, KIDDING! I swear, I'm really just messing with you. After the condom rant in my last review,  I couldn't resist teasing you about it.  I absolutely loved the chapter!  You have really cemented your title of The Queen of Writing Love Scenes with this chapter! The sex was AMAZING! Beyond hot! Hell, it was even better than their first time!  The rawness, and spontaneity of it almost had me seeing stars.  I can't decide which one I liked the most...the counter or the chair... I think I'll go with the kitchen counter.  It would have ruined the scene if you were to  have him stop in order to get a condom.  I'm so very happy that Robbie choose to experience his first sexual encounter minus the use of a condom with our girl Gemma.  He couldn't have picked a lovelier girl to share that with.  I also liked the fact that they acknowledged the importance of doing so though.  You really did a lovely job with that scene Bee.  Huge virtual hugs for you :)

Thank you, thank you, thank you for making Ally ask the million dollar Aaron question!  I know that it's terribly wrong and mean of me to unremittingly receive such joy and entertainment at Aaron's expense, but I really can't help it!    After spending such an awesome night of passion with Robert, It was really inevitable that she would compare the two, as they comprise the entirety of her sexual experience. I loved her realizing that Aaron's skills (or lack thereof) in the bedroom was substandard in comparison to Roberts. It really  had me jumping for joy and engaging in an impromptu celebratory dance.  I know that my Aaron hate might seem a bit extreme to some, as he has yet to make a real  appearance within the story, but I'm completely okay with that  because  I absolutely loathe him for his shabby treatment of Gemma.  I know that his sorry ass will come crawling out of the woodwork when the news of Robert and Gemma's relationship is made public and I really want to see her squish him like the parasite he really is.

Beautiful, excellent, witty, clever, wonderful, magnificent, outstanding…I’m running out of adjectives to describe how I feel about this story and your writing.  I hope you realize that the appeal of this story is truly transcendent.  Your writing makes me laugh, cry, and giggle almost continuously.  I found myself going through a gamut of emotions while reading this superb chapter, and really didn’t want it to come to an end.  I have a little confession to make though….at first, I found myself hoping that Gemma would rush through the girl’s night in order to be with Robert.  I very much hoped that he would interrupt their night and whisk her away.  It wasn’t till later that I realized how wrong I was in my thinking.  It’s a very good thing that she kept her girl’s night outing with Ally and Sarah.  She is staying true to herself, staying true to who Gemma Taylor really is…regardless of the fact that she is dating Robert Pattinson.  It’s a true testament of her character that she didn’t blow of her friends in favor of spending time with her hot as hell boyfriend.  I can’t believe that I’m going to say this, but I was also very impressed with Robert for not interrupting her nights out with her friends.  Yes, they texted each other back and forth but he choose to stay home while she was out clubbing with her friends.  He knew exactly where she was…it wouldn’t have been difficult for him to get dressed and make an appearance.  Not many guys would have been as cool about it as he was, so big ups to Robbie for that.

I’m okay with you holding me to saying that your Robert and I were in it for life, because we really are LOL! Believe me when I say that I don't have any illusions when it comes to him and his capacity for engaging in asshole-like behavior.  I absolutely LOVE him just the way that he is.  I've come to the realization that I like his rough and not so sweet side, just as much as I do his sweet and chivalrous side. He is an awesome dichotomy of gentleman/insolent asshole, and I find it hot as hell. :)

Let me revisit the girls night out for a bit…the dress was ridiculously fantastic! I wanted that dress! Thank you very much for providing us with the picture of it.  It really did help with the scene visualization.  I know that I’ve said it before, but I really love Gemma’s girly side. I love the fact that she loves hair, makeup, and getting ready with her girls.  Sarah and Ally are absolutely wonderful friends for her to have.  Some lesser “friends” might have been jealous of her relationship with Robert and might have even tried to sabotage it, but nope, not those two.  They are aces.  I’m a bit worried about Marcus and Ally though.  Long distance relationships can be so very difficult to maintain.  I really hope they make it through whatever hardships they might find themselves facing in the future.  I loved the dynamics between Gemma, Sarah, and Ally! They tell one another absolutely everything….I wonder if the boys do as well.  I was a bit worried with their multiple mentions of Robert Pattinson during the night though.  You never know when someone might be listening, just to make a quick a dollar.  It really wouldn’t bother me if they did go public with their relationship, but Rob might feel differently.  I really can’t wait to see what, if any impact, that this relationship will have in Gemma’s life.

AWE, Bobby Long in the house!  I MISS YOU BOBBY! I LOL, @ Gemma wondering if he and Sarah were messing with her in regards to their possible relationship!  I wondered the same exact thing!  OMG, I just had a scary thought…..you aren’t waiting to hook Daniel up with Kristen Stewart are you?  Oh, Please, please, please say it isn’t so!  Okay, okay, I’ll wait and see before having a full-fledged panic attack.  My poor Daniel….just the thought…..NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!  Bla, that thought was enough to bring this review to an end, LOL.

Favorite Lines

"Yes, Ally. Actually much, much better than Aaron."

"I love you, Rob. I love you so much," I whispered as he slowly came down from his high.
Rob, I want you so badly. I wouldn't want sleepy sex now either. Rough hallway sex maybe or wherever we ended up sex. I wouldn't care where, as long as you were inside me.

Where are you, my beautiful Gemma? I need you here with me. I want to taste you and fuck you and make you come all around me.

Wow. My whole body was reacting to the Rob sex.

Hello my lazy girl,
Almost about to finish up here for the day. It's been busy but good - your day sounds excellent. Glad you like the book. I'll give you the script to read too, if you want. Have a fun girls' night out, beautiful.
I miss you.
Love, Rob.
PS. I still haven't showered and I love it.

"But yes. I kind of want him to just really fuck me."

"It's okay, Rob. I'm fine. I'm on the pill. Just fuck me. Please."

"Seriously? We're doing this?"
I nodded. "We're doing this. Now. Please."
"I love you Gemma. I love fucking you like this. I'm going to come inside of you, so hard."

"So you, Gemma Taylor, are a very naughty girl."

"It's okay, Rob. I've done those things before. I just want you. I don't care what we do together. As long as I'm with you."
"My life's better with you in it."

Till next time, Kari

P.S. Loved her picking the flower for him on her way inside, LOL.  Can’t wait for the set visit!

Author's Response:

Hi babystar!

Ohhh, I know! I'm such a horrible, irresponsible writer. Tut tut, shame on them, not using a condom! Hehee, seriously though, I'm so glad you liked the chapter. It definitely got pretty raunchy there for a while, didn't it!? Woo! The counter or the chair... what a tough decision. ;) As for Rob choosing to have his first experience without a condom with Gemma... I'm not quite sure if he chose, or if he was just ridiculously turned on and forgot all about it for a second. Hehee. But no, you're right - eventually there was a decision which involved a lot of trust on both their parts, and they made that decision together, even if it was in the heat of the moment. Thanks for the virtual hugs - I'm just glad you liked it and didn't get cross with them!

Bwah, ha! I love how much you hate Aaron. It makes me giggle. He deserves it though - he treated Gemma horribly. Out of everybody in the story, I think Sarah hates Aaron the most for hurting Gemma so much... but you hate him even more than Sarah does. Hehee. So I'm glad you were pleased that Rob is much better in bed than Aaron! I'm sure Rob's pleased to hear it too! Ooh, you think Aaron will come crawling out of the woodwork? Hmmm, time will tell. ;) I'm not good at keeping secret, so I'm going to change the subject now!

I think it's totally understandable that you wanted Gemma to go straight to Rob, instead of going out with the girls. That is, in fact, what she wanted to do for a while! They were never going to spend the whole night apart from each other... especially after finally sleeping together for the first time the night before. That being said, she loves her girls. They have a lot of fun together, but they've also seen her through the awful Aaron break-up, so she definitely knows how important they are and values their friendship. She would never have dumped them for Rob... It was really only when they told her to go, that she decided to leave. They're good friends and really only want what's best for her - and at the moment, they know that's Rob! Aww.

On the same line of thought, Rob was never going to show up and interrupt her girls' night. Sure, he couldn't stop texting her, but we know how much he values friendship too, so he respects hers... And he probably knew exactly what would happen if he showed up at the bar. He is Robert Pattinson, after all! He didn't want to spoil her night with fangirls chasing him. Good on him! :)

Speaking of Rob, I adore this line of yours... "He is an awesome dichotomy of gentleman/insolent asshole, and I find it hot as hell." That's hilarious! You're right though... he can be an absolute gentleman when he wants to be, but we've also seen his insolent asshole side. His little jealous streak popped up a bit even in this chapter when he texted her about telling the other guy to fuck off. And believe me, that's not the last time we'll see it. I'm still going to hold you to that! Come chapter 38 or so, I'm quite sure you'll change your mind. Just sayin'. *whistles*

I want Gemma's dress too! It's cute, isn't it? And I know, poor Ally is missing Marcus a lot. It probably doesn't help that Gemma is still seeing Rob all the time, but she's a nice friend and hasn't pointed that out. Sarah, Ally and Gemma really do tell each other everything... especially when they've consumed too much vodka! I'm thinking the boys definitely tell each other everything too. Tom and Rob especially. He seemed to know a lot about Gemma when they met, remember? None of them are scared to be honest with each other, either, which is always a good thing! The girls were definitely letting Rob's name fly around a bit too easily, weren't they? Even so, if you saw three girls out at a club talking about having sex with Robert Pattinson, would you believe them? Hehee, no. You'd tell them to join the queue! There's nothing sinister happening there, don't worry!

Bobby Long, woohooo! I thought you'd like his brief little mention. And OMG! You have my word - no, Daniel will definitely not hook up with Kristen Stewart! Haaa! That's hilarious!! Can you imagine? He's way too polite and clean for her. I think he'd want to run a steaming hot shower for her and push her inside. Hehee. I don't see those two together at all. But it's fun to imagine! Interesting you mentioned KStew though... you'd better go check out the teaser on the forum to see what I mean by that! Eeek! We're definitely on the same wavelength!

Enjoyed reading your choice of favourite lines, as always! And I liked when she picked the flower for him too. It was a random, cute little Gemma thing to do, and such a Rob thing to do when he paid no attention to the flower whatsoever. Hehee.

Babystar... you rock! I love, love, love your reviews! You always give me so much to contemplate in regards to my story, and you make me blush with your lovely compliments! I'm so happy you're still enjoying the story and truly appreciate you taking the time to put so much thought and time into your amazing reviews. THANK YOU!!

-SwimmingBee

PS. There's a little surprise in the next chapter for you! Can you guess what it might be!? :)

Watching TV in the shower? How cool is that?!  I'd be giggling away to myself too! 

I love what Gem wants to do for Rob, to get his place more homely by putting so pics of him and his buddies up. And Water for Elephants.  What a wonderful read indeed!  I cannot wait to see Rob as Jacob.  He seems perfect for the role.  Naughty, dirty boy Rob not having showered!  Hehe! Ally's comment - "You've totally been fucked by Robert Pattinson!"  Bwah!  I love girlie times, getting ready to go out. 

Aww, he used a hammer and everything to put the painting up!  Toooooo sweet! 

‘I loved this place.  I loved my girls.'  It's so nice to read about Gem's friendships. Good, honest friendships are hard to come by and should be valued and held close to your heart.  It's just gorgeous.

Rough hallway sex?!  Way to go Gem!  I love her brazenness with Rob.  She's really letting herself go.  And yes, Rob.  Of course she can come see you!!!  I knew it!!!  I love the girls questions - they sound just like my friends!  And Gem's responses!  Brilliant!  So, Gem wants Rob to lose some of his restraint and control with her too...Ask and you shall receive!  And it's just fantastic that the girls understood she wanted to go when she did.  Good friends. 

The texts...Marvellous.  What a build up...And THEN....THUD....

Grunting Rob, kitchen counter...THUD.  There's so much more I want to say, but I can't...The chair...Uhhm....Gem's observations about it...and then....THUD, THUD.  Uhmmn, yeah.  That is all I can manage right now.  Mwah! xx

Author's Response:

Hi Duders,

Wow, what a fabulous, detailed review! Thank you! I just love hearing from you, my newbie buddy. :)

Watching TV in the shower would definitely be an experience, wouldn't it!? That shower pops up later in the story too, as does the bath. No rubber duckies though! ;)

Ooh, I think you were the only person to mention the photos she wants to decorate his apartment with. Everybody else got so distracted with what happens later in the chapter. Hehee. We find out how she goes with organising that soon!

Water For Elephants... I just love it! Such a good book. And I agree, I think Rob will be perfect as Jacob. Gemma's little infatuation with Reese Witherspoon totally comes from me - I love her too! Even before she was with Jake. Imagine my squee-ness when they first got together! Hehee. I was so hoping Jake might visit her on the set and happen to be photographed with Rob, but no. They broke up instead. Boooo! Anyway, back to your review...

Gemma definitely appreciates her friends. They have lots of fun together but they've also seen her through some bad Aaron break-up times, so she's very aware how important they are to her.

And yayyy, you picked it! Hehee! Rob and Gem were never going to be able to go the whole night without seeing each other, especially since they'd just made love for the first time the night before. You totally worked it out. See? #samebrain! She's definitely brazen around Rob... He brings out a side in her she's never really been aware of before. It still surprises her I think, but she loves it anyway. Hehee.

Wow, there was lots of thudding there, Duders. I hope you picked yourself up okay afterwards! :)

Thanks again for your lovely review! Hope your throat feels better soon.

-SwimmingBee x

 

Oh my Rob! That was amazing.

I fucking love these 2! Keep going lady! This is such a cute/wonderful/sexy story. I don't want it to end...

Author's Response:

Haha! "Oh my Rob" indeed!

I'm so glad you liked it, pearlgem. And I love that you love Rob and Gemma, too! Yay! 

Don't worry, the story has a loooong way to go yet. I've already written up to Chapter 45, and haven't finished yet!

Thanks for another great review!

-SwimmingBee

Well, you know already about how I felt about this chapter, but I'll say again... wow. 

The time in the club with Ally and Sarah really made me miss my besties (who are across the US away from me) - it's so something they'd have done.  :)  I'm glad Gemma has good friends like them.

And as far as the 'departure,' well, like we said - it was needed.  It can't always be romantic and tender - sometimes, you just need to go mad. ;)

Lovely, Bee! xoxoxo

Author's Response:

Hey Mandy!

I'm so happy you liked the chapter, but awww, sorry for making you miss your besties! It must be difficult having them so far away. I hope you still get to catch up with them now and then. :)

But you're so right... sometimes you just need to go mad! Hehee. Love that phrase. And that they did! They were never going to last the whole night apart - not after sleeping together for the first time the night before!

Thanks so much for another lovely review. I love hearing your thoughts, even if we did chat about it on Twitter first! Hehee.

-SwimmingBee

Wow, that was hot *fanning myself*  Loved the text from handyman Rob, I have a vision of Rob with a tool belt slung low on his hips, shirtless with his 'hammer' in his hand, ahem *phew.*  Anyway dragging my mind back from the gutter, I'm all caught up now, yay, but now I'll have to wait for the next update, boooo for waiting.  Please update soon, I know you've only just posted this one, but pleasey, please I need to keep my Rob and Gem fix going.  Jane x

Author's Response:

Hi Jane,

Haha, I love your Handyman Rob vision! I think it's so cute because it's so unlike him. He was so proud of himself! 

Wow, I'm still amazed that you read all the chapters (so far!) and replied to every single one. You're a star! Thanks so much for sharing your thoughts with me along the way. Hopefully the next update won't be too far away. I've already written up to Chapter 45 so I post the next chapter straight away - it's really in the hands of my beta, as to how quickly it gets posted. It's usually around a week, sometimes faster. Fingers crossed for speediness!

Thank you so much for all your fabulous reviews! Until next chapter... :)

-SwimmingBee

Oh, I'm just a puddle of goo, I love these two.  *Snigger* Rob brings out Gemma's inner slut - go Rob, go Rob *cheering from the sidelines doing a happy dance.*  There is no way that these two will be able to go a night without seeing each other, plus if they are together they can go straight to the set together - perfect.  Lovin' this story {:o) Jane x

Author's Response:

*wipes the puddle of goo off the floor*

Hehee, I hope you've recovered from the gooeyness. I'm so pleased you love Gemma and Rob - I do too, and I'm so excited when other people share the love! And ooh, you totally worked out the next chapter. You're right - there was no way they were going to be able to spend the next night apart! They're both far too smitten. :)

Loving your reviews as much as you love the story! Hehee! Thanks so much!

-SwimmingBee

Awwww Gemma....*sigh.*  Gemma should have gone down to answer the door and tell Rob that Daniel with the dimples was there and why, then maybe things wouldn't have got so bad, but hey that would be in a perfect world and not one of us lives there, if we did there would be enough rpattz to go around, LOL.  Can't wait to find out how she gets him back.  Reading slowing down, I'm having to share one laptop charger between 2 laptops and my battery only lasts 20mins at a time, aarrrgghh, roll on Wednesday when the new one turns up.  Jane x

Author's Response:

Hmm, you had some very good thoughts there about Gemma going downstairs to see Rob first! That definitely would have been the wiser option, but she was just so freaked out about it all that I don't think it would have even occurred to her. She could have communicated better with him about the whole thing, but he could have given her more of a chance to explain, too. Sigh!

Bummer about your laptop! Roll on Wednesday indeed... it's closer to Friday! :)

Thank youuuu!

-SwimmingBee

Wow, you don´t do things halfheartedly , eh? When the cockblocking stops , it STOPS. THis was so HAWT. Me likey very muchly. :) Keep it up . *grin*

Author's Response:

Oooh, Hester! No, I don't believe in doing things halfheartedly - and neither do Rob or Gemma, apparently!

Haha, your review made me laugh! There will be no more cockblocking! 

So glad you liked it. I'll catch you on Twitter!

(And the teaser for the next chapter is up in the forums if you fancy checking it out, too.)

Thanks so much!

-SwimmingBee

I love the pictures! I love this story, she's so good for him. I never thought I would like these stories without Kristen, but she is quite annoying, even in fiction, so, no, I do not miss her. Gemma is adorable, even Rob thinks so. Thanks so much for writing.

Author's Response:

Hey KathyK,

So happy to hear you're still enjoying the story - and the pictures too! They're just for fun, really. :)

Oooh, Kristen. She hasn't really featured in this story much, has she!? *whispers*... That might change in the next chapter! Shhh!

I'm glad you like Gemma though! This whole story was really just based on a simple thought - "What if Rob met a nice, normal girl and they just really liked each other?" And it grew from there! He's definitely pretty smitten with her, aww.

Thanks so much for another great review, Kathy!

-SwimmingBee

oh my! where is my husband when i need him????  that was some kind of HOT SEXY!!!

Author's Response:

Hey kimjhill,

Haha! Thanks so much for your review. It made me chuckle!

Hope you found your husband. It definitely got pretty raunchy there between Rob and Gemma, didn't it?! :)

-SwimmingBee

Thank you.  You made me smile on a cloudy day.

Author's Response:

Aww, thanks so much Emily Belle! You're lovely!

Glad Rob and Gemma cheered you up. :)

-SwimmingBee

That was fun!!!  Oh and the dress is cuuuute!

Author's Response:

Yay, thanks boomerand! So happy you liked the chapter. It was definitely fun to write!

Gemma's dress was pretty cute, wasn't it?! :)

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

-SwimmingBee