Hey, Bee!

Okay, I wrote a super long review early this AM...like 1:00 o'clock...and when I went to submit it, my IE froze up on me. So, I'm gonna try again!

I LOVE this story! I smile from the first word to the end of each chapter, because no matter what angst sometimes comes up, the love is always there! Awesome!

Another super chapter...fun and lovin'! Gemma's easy friendliness with Luke amuses Rob, but I think that he will soon be just as friendly with him. Gem's influence will take over! lol It was sweet of her to think of the two fans at the gate, even if it wasn't a good idea with her in the car!

A secluded dinner on the Thai restuarant rooftop in her home town was soooo romantic! For Rob to completely buy out the area was the ultimate. He loves Gem so much and wants to shower her with that love! Durin' this time of relaxation and conversation, the sexual tension is reachin' a new level and when he said this: "Is it wrong that I just want to fuck you right here on the roof?" he asked, and I looked at him and smiled. I groaned!

The lusty cab ride...hot! And I giggled when Rob had to force Gem to go into the apartment building. Then findin' Sarah and Ben in an awkward situation! The readin' of Gem's Facebook page let Rob see alittle more of his Gem. And the pics of her and Aaron could have been emotional, but Rob accepted them, even though he didn't like them. Seems like he's gettin' a handle on his insecurities and I was so proud of him!

He really wants to go to Max's birthday party but it worries me a little. Will Aaron show up? And if he does, how will it go down. I'm kinda concerned about Kristen, too! Will she cause probs for our lovers?

The sexual tension is continuin' to grow...hehehe...as they spend time watchin' the movie with Sarah and Ben. Finally the couples head to their separate bedrooms! The haste in undressin' and finally bein' able to pleasure one another, WOW! When the music was turned up, I laughed. Seems Rob is very vocal in his passion, not to mention Gemma!

The position when Rob finally gets his wish to taste her, is one of my faves! Thud!! I even used a version of it in my Kellan fic! All I could concentrate on was the feeling of his mouth on me. His tongue was swirling around me, teasing my clit and tasting me. I grabbed onto the headboard in front of me and tried very, very hard not to grind myself on his face. OMK!!! 

And the wonderfully erotic couplin' after was amazin'! It was one of the most sensual lemons I've read in a long time! Great job, sweetie!

And these last four lines made my heart stutter and smile!

His blue-grey eyes studied me and he spoke quietly and earnestly. "I love you, Gemma. I love you more than I've ever loved anybody in my entire life."

I touched my fingers to his jaw. "I love you too, Rob. I love you so much."

He kissed me, slowly and gently, and filled with so much love that it made my insides ache from sweetness.

Sleep came quickly. I'm pretty sure I still had a smile on my face when I woke up the next morning.

This story is one of the best...IMHO. I like a lot of stories, but only a few make it to my best list! Thank you , sweet Jen, for lettin' us into you remarkable imagination.

Now, I'm really waitin' for MORE PLEASE! ASAP

Love you,

Ellen xx

Author's Response:

Hi Ellen!

Bummer to hear that Twilighted crashed out on you after you wrote your big long review. Booooo! It does that to me all the time too. But thanks for writing it all out again! You're a star!

Aww, I love that this story makes you smile. I wrote it primarily to be a fun, girly story. There is some angst along the way, but mostly I wanted to keep the tone pretty upbeat and happy. I'm so glad that's coming across!

Rob reserving the whole rooftop was pretty sweet, wasn't it? It's really his first big romantic thing that he's done for her. He's not one to flaunt his money, even though he clearly has lots of it. That's not what their evening was about though - he just quietly paid the bill and didn't let Gemma see it. Aww. It was much more about spending a lovely, quiet evening together without being hassled by photographers or fans. :)

Yep, Rob does seem to be getting a handle on his insecurities, as evident when he found photos of Aaron. He promised Gemma, remember? After the Daniel with the dimples debacle, Rob promised that he would try to keep his jealousy at bay. So he's trying very hard!

Oooh, Max's birthday party. We'll find out what they decide to do about that in the next chapter! Aaron is in Vegas, remember? And don't worry about Kristen. She won't be causing any problems, I promise! Rob has had her talk with her and even though she was a bit confused about it, she's not going to stand in the way of Rob's happiness. :)

Their sexual tension is definitely out there, isn't it? They're both very vocal in bed... Rob just likes to talk and Gemma can't quite help herself! Hehee! They waited a long time to actually sleep together, and now that they have, there's no stopping them! Sarah's loud music idea was definitely a good one!

Aww, I'm so glad I could make your heart stutter and smile. You're lovely!

Thanks so much for your wonderful, kind comments Ellen. I always love hearing from you!

More coming up soon, I promise! :)

-SwimmingBee

I have to tell you I love that you include photos of the things you reference in your chapters, it is awesome to get the visual and it adds so much depth to your story.  I even Googled Bulan to see it, perfect description!  Thank you!  Can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response:

Hey britojhb,

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

I'm glad you like the photos. They're just for fun, really. I'm a very visual person and need a clear image of who I'm writing about, so I thought I'd put them in the story so others can see too! How funny that you googled Bulan! Love it! I changed the location and some other bits and pieces to suit the story, but it's still pretty close. :)

Next chapter is on the way very soon! Hope to see you back again then!

-SwimmingBee

 

So cool that you include pictures!  PC

Author's Response:

Hi Pinkcookie!

Glad you're enjoying the pictures. They're just for fun, really! There's more to come in the next chapter too. :)

Thanks so much for reading!

-SwimmingBee

these guys are too cute!! and very very horny too :)  what ever do you mean the happy bubble is intact for now??? will the party be rough???  oh no- update soon.....

Author's Response:

Hi kimjhill,

Aww, Gemma and Rob are pretty cute - and yes, very horny! They waited a long time to actually sleep together, and now that they have, there's no stopping them! :)

Ooh, I didn't mean anything too sinister by saying their happy bubble is in tact for now, sorry! There's a few little bumps in the road coming up, but they'll be okay. The party? Hmm, we'll find out more about that in the next couple of chapters!

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

-SwimmingBee

Ohh I get so happy when I see you've updated!!! I LOVE this story. that was one hot chapter! they are so amazingly cute together. can't wait for more of this story. :)

Author's Response:

Thanks so much, friends1000!

It's so great to hear that you're enjoying the story. I love writing it! There's lots more Rob and Gemma to come! The next chapter is in the validation queue - hopefully it won't be too much longer!

-SwimmingBee

Max'x party should be very interesting.

Author's Response:

Hi maizeandblueinvalpo,

Yep, Max's party should be very interesting indeed! We find out what they decide in the next chapter. :)

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

-SwimmingBee

I dont remember is she on birth control or did he put a condom on???? HMMMMMMM

Author's Response:

Hi Cullenbabe1231,

Hmmmm! No, he didn't put a condom on, but yes, she is on birth control. They had a big discussion about that a couple of chapters ago, when they slept together for the first time without a condom. So it's okay, don't panic! :)

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

-SwimmingBee

I just realized that I have never reviewed --- Makes me feel bad -- I guess that makes me a lurker -- I  normally review after each chapter -- I promise to do better.

But,  I have truly enjoyed your wonderful story of Rob and Gemma.

This chapter was especially zesty!!!!  I enjoy the music and the photos that you include with your story.

Is Gemma someone you know?  She certainly is a pretty girl.

Look forward to future chapters.  Thank you for writing.

Sparkledamnu on twitter

 

Author's Response:

Hi emozing,

Yay, I'm so happy you decided to review and say hi! Thank you! :)

Great to hear you've been enjoying the story so far. There's lots more Rob and Gemma to come!

Hehee, great description - this chapter was pretty zesty, wasn't it!? *blushes*

Glad you're enjoying the photos... They're just for fun, really! I'm a very visual person and need to have a clear image in my head of someone before I can write about them, so I thought I'd add the photos on the end for readers too. Nope, I don't know 'Gemma' - her photos are actually of Odette Yustman, the actress. Shhh! Don't tell! ;) She's gorgeous, but she also comes across really nice and friendly, like Gemma!

Thanks so much for reviewing. I really appreciate it!

-SwimmingBee

i loved loved this chappie...god, I hope the angst isn't too bad...don't think i can handle a long drawn-out breakup or separation...i fucking adore rob and gemma..they r positively delicious together

Author's Response:

Hiya!

So happy to hear your loved the chapter! I love that you adore Rob and Gemma together - you're so kind, thank you!

And don't worry, there's only little shades of angst coming up. Nothing too major! You'll be okay, I'm sure of it. :)

Thanks so much for your review!

-SwimmingBee

Generally I don't like stories like this ( it's mostly the wording used to describe certain anatomy ). But this story is so like something I may like to write. 

 

I find it very believable. It really does seem a lot like it could be Rob's personality.

 

Can't wait to see where you go with this? Does he meet her family does she meet his?

 

Author's Response:

Hey Twidult2771,

Welcome! So pleased you're enjoying my story!

Eeek, anatomy wording can be tricky! But it's great to hear you're finding it belieavable and like something you might like to write. So lovely of you to say. I always wanted this to be a fun, girly story. There's angst along the way of course, but mostly it's just about two people who really, really like each other. :)

Ooh, there's lots more to Rob and Gemma to come! I've already written most of the story, so I don't want to give too much away. But yes, families are involved a bit further down the line! For now, my lips are sealed... ;)

Thanks so much for your kind words. I hope you continue to read and review!

-SwimmingBee

Another fantastic chapter!

Gem has been living in blissful Rob bubble, and now it's her turn to experience his world, I have a feeling she'll be put through a few tests along the way... starting with the phone call from Kristen...

Hmmm...wonder what you've got planned for these two...

Love your work as always!

xxx

Sareenna

Author's Response:

Hi Sareenna,

You're so right - Gemma's definitely been happily stuck in her little Rob bubble, and it almost started to burst at the beginning there! It was definitely a shock for her to hear Kristen's voice on Rob's answering machine though. Bit of a slam back to reality for a moment! Luckily, she pulled herself together and she and Rob had a lovely afternoon together after a good, honest talk.

Ooh, I have so much planned for these two! More on the way soon! :)

Thanks so much for another lovely review!

-SwimmingBee

First of all, sorry for the dual review....with the amount of rambling I did in the first one, I can't believe that I forgot to tell you how funny you made the rap line!  I kept feeling as if I was forgetting to say something, and so in typical Kari behavior, just kept writing and writing hoping that I didn't leave anything out.  I can't believe it took me 24 hours to figure out exactly what it was that I forgot to say.

Author's Response:

Hey again Kari, 

Aww, a dual review! Yay! :)

I'm glad you liked the rap line placement. It just fit Gemma so perfectly, I had to use it! Thanks so much for the idea, I loved it!

-SwimmingBee