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Reviewer: wendemyre (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2010 04:48 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Naughty Things
So another great, wonderful chapter.. ( I am running out of accolades for you)
I was very surprised and pleased that Rob invited himself to Gemma's friends party, was shocked at her reluctance to bring him... I get the whole she is worried about people finding out he has a girlfriend but she was thinking about her ex finding out to some degree.... If it were my ex's friends party I would definitly be taking a guy ....... And If I had RobPat!!! I would be strolling(strutting) in that party like (you may have dumped me but look who wants me!!) Oh yay I would be workin it!!!
I can't wait to see where you are going with the Kristen thing!?!? I still am hoping maybe for a jealous Kristen finding a naked Gemma in his appt. Anyways should be very intrusting with her thinking Rob is not serious about Gemma..
So have a great week!!! Thank you...
Wendy
Author's Response: Hi Wendy,
Aw, thanks so much for your lovely words, yet again! You make me blush! :)
Rob can be pretty persistent when he wants to be, can't he? He totally invited himself to Max's party, good for him! As for Gemma, I think she was just completely overwhelmed at the thought of bringing him along. Aaron (her ex) won't be there anyway, so I don't think that was really the issue. It was more that Rob is her first real boyfriend since Aaron, and he wants their first official 'outing' to be at a party full of her ex's friends. I think that would be a pretty difficult thing to do.
I totally get your side of things too though - I'd be totally bring Robert Pattinson along! Hehee!
And oooh, Kristen. I hope you won't be mad when I tell you that the Kristen thing isn't going to be a major issue in this story. I always wrote it as a Rob and Gemma story... not a Kristen story. She really doesn't play a very big part in it. I hope you still decide to stick with Rob and Gemma, even if there's no jealous KStew! Rob had his big talk with her and told her that he was pretty serious with Gemma. We don't know exactly how she took to that news, but probably not very well, considering Rob didn't tell Gemma much about the phonecall at all.
You have a great week too! I'm hoping the next chapter will be up in the next couple of days. :)
Thanks again!
-SwimmingBee
Reviewer: niven (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2010 04:18 PM · On: Chapter 19 - Strap Yourself In
Author's Response: Hi niven,
Thanks for the stars! :)
-SwimmingBee
Reviewer: duders79 (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2010 01:58 AM · On: Chapter 20 - Naughty Things
Ahhh! Rob can't keep secrets! Why doesn't that surprise me? I love he was all nervous when they arrived at the restaurant. So Rob...One minute a sex God, the next minute all nerves again! I can picture him like this. And it's so great to see that they can do something normal like go for dinner together without hassle. Lovely.
"Is it wrong that I just want to fuck you right here on the roof?" Oh my goodness! Fanning self here! Nervy Rob left the building then!
He looked at me purposefully. "See?" See, I would've died right there. Flipping heck!
I loved the Facebook interactions. Eeeek! Aaron! But Rob - the pussy comment! If I think about Rob saying ‘pussy' I just get maniacal giggles!
He's a little unrelenting about the party, isn't he? Hmmn...Not sure whether that's just Rob wanting to go with Gemma to meet her friends, or if he's being a little territorial.
It was so cute how Rob and Ben had that little exchange about what they'd both gotten into! So realistic.
Errm, naughty things....yes, indeed! It's fantastic how bold Gem is with Rob. Brilliant. You write their ‘naughty' times beautifully. Sexy but comfortable - that's how best I can describe it right now. I'm still reeling from *ahem* oral Rob.
Fantastic Bee! Loves ya! Look at all this love you're getting! It's wonderful, and I'm so pleased to be on this newbie journey with you. I still feel like a newbie - do you? Hehee!
Duders xx
Author's Response: Hi Duders,
Aww, nervous Rob! He definitely has his moments where his nerves get the better of him, and it usually has to do with when he's trying to make a good impression... Gemma going to his apartment for the first time, visiting him on the set, taking her to the restaurant... Yep, nervous Rob definitely shows his face now and then! He also has a bit of a habit of blurting anything and everything out before he thinks about it, hence the "Is it wrong that I just want to fuck you right here on the roof?" question. Hehee. Silly Rob.
Eeeek, Aaron indeed! Rob was on his best behaviour then though, wasn't he? He'd promised Gemma after the Daniel debacle that he would try to control that jealous streak, and he was trying so very hard to be good with the Facebook stuff! Even despite the pussy comment. Hehee. I'd giggle too. And probably faint.
He is a bit unrelenting about the party, you're right. And this is where I love reading reviews! Some people are a bit cross with Gemma for not accepting his offer to take her straight away, and others (like you!) are suspicious of Rob. I'm kind of in between somewhere - I don't think Gemma meant anything sinister by saying no to him; she was just overwhelmed by the thought of it. And as for Rob? I think he's only unrelenting because he wants her to go to the party and have fun without being worried about Aaron stuff. And because he wants to be 'normal' for a night and go to a fun party with her. Hmm. We'll find out what they decide to do in the next chapter!
Sexy but comfortable. That's a lovely way to describe their 'naughty' times! And yay for newbies... until Chapter 30, remember!? You're a bit closer than me!
Thanks so much for your wonderful review. Sorry for my rambling response!
-SwimmingBee x
Reviewer: roxiegirl (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2010 09:34 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Naughty Things
Swoon!! Fucking hell. Need a ciggie AND a cold shower! Unf! Thanks bb! Hmmm I caught the things were good for now....hey I love me some angst, and I can't wait to hear about the party!
Author's Response: Hey roxiegirl,
*Passes you a cigarette*... Hope that helps! It was a bit naughty, wasn't it!?
Things are definitely good for now! My lips are sealed. ;) The party won't be too far away - they have a few plans to make first!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
-SwimmingBee
Reviewer: kyles1979 (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2010 07:09 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Naughty Things
Can I just say, I love the visuals!! *whispers* is that you??
Why do I feel like a bubble is going to pop soon!? WAH?! No!!
These two are so hot and heavy! They are so sweet together!
So YAY!! I'm all caught up! Now this afternoon is Duder's turn!! *jumpy claps*
Author's Response: Hi again Kyles,
I'm glad you like the pictures! I have to have a clear image in my head of someone before I can write about them, so I thought I'd put them on the end of the chapters for readers to see too, just for fun. And... *whispers*... no, that's not me! ;)
Why do you feel like a bubble is going to pop soon? Hmm... maybe because you've watched too much Packed To The Rafters! Gemma and Rob are very hot and heavy. Quite intense, in fact. But don't worry, there will be no bubble popping for a while. A few little bumps in the road perhaps, but nothing too horrible, I promise! :)
Thanks so much for catching up! I love that you reviewed each chapter as you went, too. You're lovely!
Until next time...
-SwimmingBee
Reviewer: kyles1979 (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2010 06:05 PM · On: Chapter 19 - Strap Yourself In
So all the way thru that chapter all I could think was.. "Can I be Rob's slut too?"
LMAO!! Oops.. my bad!
That was a sweet visit! I am glad that she got to have a little look around and the whole kissing Jake thing was funny! Yes, I see you and Duders on Twitter! ;P
Love that they managed to stump Nick! That was epic!! Poor boy must have felt like an idiot!
OK, one more chapter and I'm all caught up!! *fist pump* YES!
Author's Response: Bwah, haaa! Yes Kyles! You can totally be Rob's slut too. Why not!? :)
Aww, I'm glad you liked the set visit. It wasn't exactly how Gemma imagined it going, but they had such a nice, relaxing afternoon together. And yep, I had to sneak Jake in there somewhere! Hehee!
Nick was definitely surprised! He behaved himself relatively well though. It was awkward, but polite! Phew!
One more chapter! Yay!
Thanks again for reading and catching up! You're awesome!
-SwimmingBee
Reviewer: kyles1979 (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2010 05:47 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Need
Woah!! Drunken girls night and then drunken sex!! WIN!!!
I loved her idea of the photo's that was awesome and I can't wait to see that come into play!
I was giggling at all the texts!! Too cute!!
They seem so much more settled now that the ILY's are out in the open!
Good for them! Hope it lasts awhile! *quirks an eyebrow at you*
LOVED IT!
Author's Response: Hi Kyles,
Yay for drunken girls' nights and drunken sex! It was definitely a big night, wasn't it!? Whew!
I'm happy to hear you like the idea of the photos. We get to see how that eventuates very soon!
Ooh, yes. They're definitely much more open and settled now that they've got the 'I love you's out of the way. They took a long time to actually get it together and sleep together, so there's no stopping them now! :)
It will last a while, I promise! Lots of happy Rob and Gemma to come! *quirks an eyebrow right back at you*
Thanks for reading and reviewing, Kyles!
-SwimmingBee
Reviewer: mizz_music (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2010 03:32 AM · On: Chapter 20 - Naughty Things
This just keeps getting better and better!
I LOVE Thai food, and the rooftop sounded magical.
I was cringing when they were facebooking, but they got past that in typical Gemma and Rob fashion lol.
This was another fun and sexy chapter, can't wait to see what Max's party is going to be like...hmmm...
Love your attention to detail, thank you for the pics at the end! You Rock!
xxx
Sareenna
Author's Response: Hi Sareenna,
Yay, I'm so pleased you're still enjoying the story! :)
I love Thai food too, yum! Rob did a good job with the rooftop, didn't he? It was nice and quiet without being too overly flashy. Very sweet. And oh, the facebooking! There were definitely some cringeworthy moments in there! Rob promised Gemma after the Daniel debacle that he would try to keep his jealousy at bay, and he's trying so hard! They had a laugh and some kisses instead. Phew!
Glad you liked the pics at the end! They're just for fun, really. We find out more about Max's party in the next chapter, which hopefully won't be too far away.
Thanks so much for all your lovely comments! You rock too!! Hehee!
-SwimmingBee
Reviewer: babystar (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2010 08:40 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Naughty Things
Whoa! This chapter was indeed naughty but oh so very good! You will never believe the discussions that this chapter sparked amongst my friends at dinner yesterday. I don’t know if I have mentioned this before, but I've gotten about 10 of my friends hooked on Robert and Gemma. We even started this little Gemma club amongst us just for fun. It’s nothing organized and the only activity we have consists of occasionally getting together when we have the time, to read and discuss the new chapters. LOL, we've only been able to come together about 8 times or so. Well guess what! I was summarily kicked out of the Gemma club for making an innocent comment regarding this chapter. Don’t worry it was all in jest, but man did it start a beauty of a debate. Maybe I should backtrack a little bit. We all decided to have dinner together yesterday. After gossiping about school and significant others for a period of time, the conversation eventually led to your new chapter. Everyone loved it off course and ooh’ed and ahh’ed appropriately. My friend Melissa mentioned how wonderful she found the Facebook conversation and credited this chapter for making her realize the potential pitfalls of retaining old photographs of her ex boyfriend on her profile, especially now that she has a new boyfriend. She then confessed to having removed all of her ex boyfriends photographs out of her Facebook account as soon as she finished reading the new chapter. I was shocked to hear a lot of the other girls at the table echoing the same sentiment. I’m ashamed to say that I blatantly laughed at them and rejoiced in my hate of all social networking sites. Their reactions, as well as Gemma’s situation with Robert viewing the profile photo’s of Aaron and herself, made me feel vindicated in my hate of Facebook. I've always had a snobbery against social networking sites like Facebook, Twitter, and MySpace. I had a giant fit when I discovered that my Blackberry came with Facebook preinstalled. Needless to say, it has long been disabled! There's never been a valid reason behind my snobbery other than the fact that, I have always been determined to be against what the majority is for; just because the majority is for it. Stupid I know, but that’s just one of my many deficiencies that I’ve yet to conquer.
Bla, I can already tell that this is going to be one long review…I apologize in advance. Anyway, I digressed…While the Facebook episode proved to be the most important part of that conversation for my friends, that was not the case for me. After reading that scene, my first thought was that Gemma accidentally messed up during the party discussion. I said as much to my friends, and this is what led to them kicking me out of the Gemma Club, LOL. I absolutely adore Gemma and hardly ever have anything negative to say about her. As a matter of fact, I don’t recall ever finding an action of hers questionable before. However, her hesitance in accepting Robert’s offer of escorting her to the party is a disaster in the making. She was right in thinking the conversation to be far from over. I’ve rarely been baffled by a reaction of Gemma’s, but find myself exactly that right now. I’m starting to realize that Gemma still hasn’t fully comprehend the extent of Robert’s insecurities in regards to their relationship. He really believes that she can do better than him…that she deserves much better than somebody like him. I know he didn’t show it, but her refusal in allowing him the honor, of attending the party as her escort; had to have hurt on some level…even subconsciously. I really understand and believe the reasons she offered for her unwillingness in allowing to him attend, but I just think there is a lot more to it than that. God, but these two are a pair! Gemma being Gemma and so very nice and innocent, will never even consider the possibility that Robert could ever misconstrue her hesitance in attending Max’s party with him, as something sinister; like Gemma being ashamed of presenting him to her lifelong friends. After all, he is thee Robert Pattinson….movie star extraordinaire, and due to Aaron’s fuckery, in her mind; she is the unworthy one. Robert’s perceived conception of himself, is vastly different from that of Gemma’s and somebody needs to make her realize it. They both appear to be suffering from the same low self worth problems, which will only fester overtime if left untreated. They have taken great strides within their relationship recently, but still have yet to completely lay themselves bare to one another. I know that she loves Rob, but maybe Gemma still hasn’t completely let go of the life that she was suppose to have with Aaron; and introducing Robert into that environment, will surely obliterate all the remaining pieces.
I love the ease and familiarity of Robert and Sarah’s relationship. They really do have that brother/sister vibe to their relationship. So…does that make date number two for Sarah and Ben? Is she beginning to have feelings for him and vice versa? Something Gemma said got me thinking…the part about Sarah liking the unattainable bad boys, LOL. Maybe that’s the problem with Bobby Long, the fact that he isn’t an unattainable bad boy. Or maybe there’s just zero chemistry for anything other than friendship. However, I would like to see her reaction to him suddenly becoming unattainable by maybe getting a girlfriend back in London :) Ben seems to be a very nice guy on the surface. I do have some concerns though. For example, what if he feels more for Sarah than she does for him and she stops seeing him….is he the type of guy to sell them out to the tabloids for revenge and a quick dollar? Hmz, I never had this concern with Daniel, so maybe I just haven’t gotten used to Ben yet.
I really, really, really, really wanted to “listen” to Robert’s conversations with Kristen Stewart and Nick. I loved the fact that he made them aware of his feelings for her, even though they didn’t believe him. I didn’t expect Kristen to have a favorable reaction to the news, but I was disappointed by Nick’s reaction. I don’t know about anyone else, but if my boss were to make a point of telling me of another person’s importance to him, you better believe that I would take the news seriously and not belittle it. I understand that Kristen doesn’t know Gemma and Nick was only recently introduced to her, but that doesn’t excuse their reactions. Nick is an employee and Kristen is only a former booty call/friend, so them not knowing Gemma previously, really isn’t too big of a deal and does not excuse their reactions. All of his real friends have met her and that’s all that’s important. I just realized something…ALL of Robert’s childhood friends know of his feelings for Gemma, so why is she reluctant to having her childhood friends meet him? Bla, I can’t believe I’m back to this point once again. I don’t understand why, but for reason, it really seems to be sticking with me. Remember how I once said that I felt as if Robert was ashamed of being seen out in public with Gemma? Now I’m feelings as if it’s the other way around, and the weird thing is that I know that Gemma isn’t like that. I know she isn’t ashamed of being seen with him and that she absolutely adores him, but the thought won’t go away :(
I’ve given up on judging who loves the other more…in one chapter, I’ll say that Rob loves her more only to contradict myself the following chapter. I’ll just leave it at them being two, deeply flawed souls who love one another equally; doing the best that they can with the hand that life dealt them. Uhm, on second thought, make Robert the only one who is flawed :) I really, really, do adore Robbie, I’ve just developed a liking for picking on him :) Now unto the naughtiness…You really do bring it each and every time. Their love making sessions gets hotter and hotter every single chapter. I love how open and raw they are with one another. The fact that he can tease her about the words coming out of her mouth and not have her get offended by it, really says it all. The dinner date was awesome! You really did a wonderful job with the scenery and diner selections. It was very easy for me to visualize and I absolutely love that. I LOL in the beginning, when Robert and Gemma discussed him stopping to chat with the fans. I really wanted him to do it, but completely understood why he didn’t. Maybe that’s something that he can do once they’ve gone public with their relationship. Lastly, I really hope that Sarah can get Gemma to see reason on Robert attending the party with her. Gemma should also be the one to ask him to go with her, instead of him asking to attend with her. Hope I didn’t confuse you there…Anyway, LMAO at Robert’s descriptions of Aaron! The jerk!
Favorite Lines
"What if I wanted to go with my girlfriend to her friend's party?"
"Hmm. Well he looks unfortunately normal. I imagined him to have two little red horns sticking out the top of his head."
"No, he is," he continued. "In a suave, George Clooney type of way."
"Just lots of ‘Fuck me harder Rob,' over and over again. Amongst other things. So fucking sexy." He leaned even closer, murmuring in my ear so I could only barely hear him. "You really wanted it fucking hard last night, Gemma. You come across so gentle and sweet and then... Christ. I was fucking you as hard as I could and it still wasn't enough. I can't even think about it without getting seriously turned on."
"It's fine. He's pretty, but he's a fuckwit. What sort of a guy wouldn't want to go down on your sweet pussy?"
"Sorry, Miss Innocent. Miss ‘Fuck me harder, Rob'!"
"I wouldn't mind tasting some of your sweet pussy right now actually..."
"I love it when you say cock."
"I'm not," I said quietly, kissing his lips. "I just love you and you make me want to do naughty things."
"I love you, Gemma. I love you more than I've ever loved anybody in my life."
P.S. Just realized that all of my favorite lines came from Robert this chapter :)
P.S.S. Sorry for the extra long review, I just couldn’t stop myself, and I loved the pictures! Thanks for putting them.
Till next time, Kari
Author's Response: Hey Kari,
First of all, don't apologize for an extra long review! You know I love your reviews!! You certainly don't need to apologize! :)
Second of all, you have a Gemma club!!?!! Hehehee! I... what... who.... eeek! I just don't know what to say about that! It's amazing! And kind of hilarious! I totally want to come to your next meeting, just so I can hear what you all say! I'm just so amazed that my little story has captured your imagination so much. I love Gemma, but I'm still surprised when other people do too. So... thank you! You rock! And psst, tell your other nine friends to start reviewing too! Hehee. I'm glad Gemma could be of service to them all as an important reminder to delete those ex photos on Facebook! It's a very important lesson to learn! Bummer that you don't like Twitter though... We could have played together and discussed Gemma all day! Have I convinced you yet? Hmm, no? Never mind then!
So you got kicked out of the Gemma club? Oh no! Hehee! I hope they'll let you back in again soon. But do you know what? I'm kind of glad you found something she did baffling. Is that bad? It's good to be baffled at times. It helps keep us intrigued! If we were never baffled by somebody, life would be a boring place! I think it's good that you found something she did questionable. She's not perfect and she makes silly decisions sometimes. Don't we all? She frustrates me a lot as I write her. Sometimes she's too nice and a bit naive, and I want her to be a bit tougher at times... but she's not tough, she's just Gemma! *shrugs*
Anyway, in regards to your concerns... You're totally right to be worried. She really hasn't comprehended the extent of his insecurities in regards to their relationship and the one time he really wanted to initiate something with her, she shot him down. He's in love with her and can be very persistent when he wants to be though, so he's not letting her get away with it. Phew! He really wants to take her to Max's party because he believes it will help her, but also because it's a fun beach party! Who wouldn't want to go? As for Gemma though, she really doesn't mean anything sinister by it. She's just overwhelmed at the thought of bringing her new boyfriend to the party - whether it's thee Robert Pattinson or not! He's her first real boyfriend since Aaron, and he wants their first official 'outing' to be at Aaron's best friend's party. It has to be a bit difficult for her, right? Not because she's ashamed of Rob or anything like that - but because it's a scary thing to do. Plus, that's combined with the fact that people might take their photos and he might be swarmed by women all night. That's never happened with Gemma there before and she's quite sure what to think about that either. So basically, she's just feeling overwhelmed by it! They make their decision about the party in the next chapter. Hopefully Gemma will explain her feelings a bit better for you then, so you're not quite so baffled by her!
Ooh, Sarah and Ben! Yep, that was date number two. Well, if you can call them dates. Maybe 'hook-ups' might be more appropriate. Yep, she does like those unattainable bad boys! Will Ben be bad enough? Hmm. And Bobby? Hehee. There just really wasn't much chemistry there. They were friends and they had fun, but maybe you're right. Maybe he just wasn't bad enough! I love your predictions though! Sometimes I think you contemplate this story more than I do. Ha! Ben's not going to sell Gemma and Rob out, don't worry. He's just a hot work colleague who Sarah hooked up with a couple of times. That's all, really! :)
As for Kristen and Nick's conversations with Rob... Sometimes I wish I could write a Rob point-of-view, but then, no. The story's always been told from Gemma's perspective, so what she knows, we know. Rob's always been honest with her though, so the fact that he told her very little about his conversations with Kristen and Nick probably suggests some unpleasant things were said. We knew Kristen was going to take the news unfavorably, and Nick? Well... I thought he took the news quite well, actually! There are so many other stories out there where Nick is the evil one who tries to separate Rob from his new girlfriend, and I just didn't want to go there. I don't think he could be that bad, really, or Rob wouldn't put up with him! So even though he didn't really take on board what Rob told him about Gemma, at least he just gave a little word of advice and that was it. Then Rob got to go back and cuddle Gemma, and all was well! :)
I think they really do love each other equally. They adore each other! Some times one of them is just better at showing it than the other. We all have our moments, I guess. Their love-making sessions always open them up though, even if one of them has been a bit hesitant for whatever reason before that. Rob is very vocal during sex and Gemma just can't seem to help herself. Hehee.
Loved all your favorite lines... And yes, a lot of them did come from Rob! This chapter was a bit of a turnaround for you, I think. Baffled at Gemma and liking Rob's lines instead! Yay! :)
Thanks so much for all your lovely, thoughtful comments Kari. You're just fantastic! I hope you get to rejoin the Gemma club! Say hi from me!
Until next time...
-SwimmingBee
Reviewer: kyles1979 (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2010 05:14 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Best Night Ever
HONEY I'M HOME!!! hehehe!!
Told you I'd make it back!
That was sweet, love me some make up smex! ;)
Mmmm Kyles thinks that there will be some naughty texts going back and forth from a drunk Gem!! *nods lots*
And a visit to the set?! Every fan girls dream!
OK onto the next chapter now!!
*runs to read*
Author's Response: Yayyyy! So happy to have you back, Kyles! :)
I'm so glad you made it back! Thanks so much for sticking with me! (And Rob and Gemma, of course!)
Hmm, your predictions were pretty much spot on! Everybody loves naughty texts, don't they? And a visit to the set, yay! Who wouldn't want to go play on the set with Rob? Rio, anybody? ;)
See you at the next chapter!
-SwimmingBee
Reviewer: lmjohn (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2010 01:32 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Naughty Things
ANother great chapter - but I wouldn't expect anything less! Seems like Rob might be ready faster than Gemma to go public with their relationship! I can't wait to see what happens with Kristen.... seems like with every other story it's "we're just friends" and "we don't like each other like that". would be nice to see Kristen actually really be jealous and be a complete bitch to Gemma when they meet and even try to flirt and steal Rob away - of course Gemma would have to put Kristen in her place!!!! But could definitely make for some interesting drama... can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: Hi lmjohn,
So glad you liked the chapter! You're lovely! :)
You might be right in that Rob seems ready faster than Gemma to go public with their relationship. But then again, he's had much more experience with this type of thing! He's her first real boyfriend since Aaron and he wants their first official 'outing' to be at Aaron's best friend's party. It's gotta be a bit tricky for her!
As for Kristen, hmm. Your suggestions would definitely make for some interesting drama! But eeek, sorry... This story isn't a Kristen story. It's a Rob and Gemma story so somewhere along the line, their exes needed to be addressed. Kristen doesn't play a big role in this story. Sorry! I hope you'll continue to read and enjoy Rob and Gemma's adventures though, minus KStew!
Thanks so much for your kind words. Hey, maybe you should start your own story with all your fabulous Kristen ideas! I'd read it! :)
-SwimmingBee
Reviewer: RobAussieFan (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2010 03:43 AM · On: Chapter 20 - Naughty Things
I loved this chapter! What am I saying? I love every chapter. LOL. It was hot, romantic, sweet, sexy, tension filled and really fun. Thank God they finally got to do it. It seemed like they both needed it. Aaron is hot but clearly a douchebag. Are we going to meet him sometime? Thankyou SB. More please!
Author's Response: Thanks so much, RobAussieFan!
So happy you enjoyed the chapter! It was a fun one to write... and I'm glad they finally got to do it too! Hehee! It had been a long day and they definitely needed it.
Ooh, Aaron. You never know, a meeting might happen eventually! My lips are sealed! ;)
-SwimmingBee
Reviewer: Newydd (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2010 12:45 AM · On: Chapter 20 - Naughty Things
Phew! HOT! You know I love RobGem!
I'm wondering what will be in store at the party, I don't think it'll be good somehow. I liked the Sarah and Ben situation, how embarrassing! And then to all sit and watch a film together when what all four wanted to do was jump under the covers! How very civilised of them, not sure I would have bee so patient with Rob laying behind me LOL Brilliant build up of the sexual tension though, bravo!
Now, I really wanted to be a fly on the bedroom wall for the phone calls...will we get to find out what happned I wonder?
If any of this review manes no sense whatsoever its because it's still early here, I'm on my first coffee and have not had much sleep...AGAIN!
Loved it again. Thanks Bee!
~Newydd x
Author's Response: Hi Newydd!
I love that you love RobGem! I have lots of fun writing about them. :)
Ooh, the party. We find out what they decide to do in the next chapter. My lips are sealed until then! I'm bad at keeping secrets, just like Rob. They were all very well-behaved while watching Point Break together, weren't they? Well, mostly. Rob and Gem got a little bit tense at one stage. Hehee.
As for the phone calls... That's all we're getting, I'm afraid! The story is told from Gemma's point of view, so we only know what she knows. Rob is always completely honest with her, so that fact that he told her very little about the Nick and Kristen calls probably means some not-so-nice words were said. But don't worry, nothing sinister will come of them. Nick's given his advice and Kristen decided against the sushi catch-up anyway. So for now, all is fine! :)
Your review made perfect sense! Thanks so much for reading and for all the Twitter fun. You're lovely!
-SwimmingBee
Reviewer: LondonCalling (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2010 10:03 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Naughty Things
I completley love this story. I always can't wait for the next chapter. It's one of my absolute favorites. I also love the pictures you provided. keep up the amazing job and I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Hi LondonCalling,
Thanks so much for your kind words! I love that you love this story!
Glad you're enjoying the pictures too. They're just for fun really! I'm a very visual person and need to have a clear image of who I'm writing about, so I thought I'd put the photos on the end for readers to see too. :)
The next chapter isn't far away. It's with my validation beta now... Fingers crossed for a speedy turnaround!
-SwimmingBee
Reviewer: trixie11 (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2010 08:35 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Naughty Things
Don't tell any of the other authors but this is easily my favorite fanfic! Your chapters are always full of heart and emotion... and usually alot of humor too. All of your characters are great and although I have never personally met Robert (we all can dream right?!) I would almost think the way you portray him is pretty true to life. Keep it up!
Author's Response: Aww, thanks so much trixie! You're lovely! Your favorite fanfic? Wow! *blushes*
Full of heart, emotion and humor... That's such a fantastic compliment, thank you! My intention when I started writing this story was to make it fun, happy and girly. There's angst along the way of course, but I wanted to keep a pretty upbeat tone overall, so I'm glad that's coming across. :)
There's lots more Rob and Gemma to come! Hope you continue to enjoy!
-SwimmingBee
Reviewer: twi_mom_teddi (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2010 08:07 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Naughty Things
Awesome chapter! Loved the dinner on the roof, surprising Sara and Ben...the whole thing was fantastic! ; )
teddi
Author's Response: Aww, thanks teddi!
So great to hear you're still enjoying the story. It was a fun chapter to write!
More coming soon! :)
-SwimmingBee
Reviewer: beautifulleyess (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2010 06:10 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Need
Hello again!!!
Sorry I havent actually read it yet.. Im in a rush.. Lol... But i wanted to find out if Rob did actually go find Gem.... Looks like I was wrong!!! :(... But from what I read Gem went to him... Lol
So my story wont be up for quite a while... Im just writing it on my non-internet connected laptop.... I'll hopefully be getting it back at the start of next year.. And the plus is Ill have lots of chapters written so i"ll be able to get them out quickly.. Lol... Im scabbing off my Dad at the moment.. Lol
So this is an I loved it before i actually read it Lol..
Author's Response: Hi beautifulleyess,
Wow, thanks for stopping to say hi, even though you haven't actually read the chapter fully yet! Hehee! You make me giggle!
So yep, Gemma went to Rob instead after the girls' night. But you were still pretty close in your predictions! There was no way they were going to able to stay away from each other the whole night. :)
Ooh, I like your plans of writing lots of your story before you put it up on Twilighted. I'd written a lot before my first chapter went up too, and I think it really helped. I'm writing Chapter 47 at the moment!
Thanks so much for reviewing and 'almost' reading! Ha! :)
-SwimmingBee
Reviewer: Gabi-b (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2010 04:33 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Naughty Things
OMG, wowwwwwwwwwwww that was soooooooooo hot. Loove it.
Love the pictures too.
Update ASAP, pleaseee
XO, G
Author's Response: Hi Gabi,
Thanks so much! It was a pretty raunchy chapter! :)
Glad you're enjoying the pictures too. They're just for fun, really!
Update coming soon!
-SwimmingBee
Reviewer: campcathryn (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2010 04:12 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Naughty Things
Love the updates
Author's Response: Hi campcathryn,
Great to hear you're still enjoying the story! Thank you!
-SwimmingBee
Reviewer: KathyK (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2010 04:03 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Naughty Things
How do you have photos? That was Matthew Fox, wasn't it? I love this story. Thanks so much for writing it.
Author's Response: Hey KathyK,
Shhh, the photos are actually of Odette Yustman, an actress, and her real-life husband, Dave Annable. Not Matthew Fox, no, but his stubble is similar! Hehee. She's exactly how I imagined Gemma to look as I wrote the story - hot, but still nice and friendly!
I love that you love this story! Thank you! :)
-SwimmingBee
Reviewer: Emily Belle (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2010 02:17 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Naughty Things
Wow so good
Author's Response: Thanks so much, Emily Belle!
More coming up soon!
-SwimmingBee
Reviewer: Enchanting Lilly (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2010 01:45 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Naughty Things
Well there day was really long. I don't know if I could have done what Gem did at the movie set . In the trailler that is another story. Dinner was wonderful. You keep writing and I'll keep reading.
Love Lilly
Author's Response: Hi Lilly,
They did have a big day, didn't they? I'm intrigued by what you mean about what Gemma did at the movie set!? Do you mean that she was well-behaved? Hmm, I'll keep wondering about that one! :)
Glad you liked their dinner! It was pretty sweet, wasn't it?
Thanks so much for your review! See you next time!
-SwimmingBee
Reviewer: JessNicole91 (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2010 01:25 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Naughty Things
I adore this story! I can't wait to see how it goes at the party! I wonder what Kristen actually said to Rob when he told her about Gem...
Author's Response: Hey JessNicole91,
Thank you! I love writing the story, so it's great to hear you adore it! :)
They sort out what to do about the party in the next chapter. It's coming up soon! And as for what Kristen actually said to Rob, hmm! I think only Rob and Kristen know that. We only know what Gemma knows, since the story is told from her point of view, and she's too nice to push for more details! Hmm!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.
-SwimmingBee
Reviewer: alexandra (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2010 11:58 AM · On: Chapter 20 - Naughty Things
I think Rob took to the photos pretty well. And hot smexing!
Author's Response: Hey Alexandra,
Aw, I think he took to the photos of Aaron pretty well too. He promised Gemma after the whole Daniel debacle that he would try to control his jealousy better, and it seems he's trying really hard to follow through with that. Nice boy! :)
Glad you liked the smexing! Hehee.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
-SwimmingBee
Reviewer: DarkMetalDoll (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2010 11:30 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Girls' Night Out!
Did you get "Gemma Taylor" from Sons of Anarchy?
Neat story
Author's Response: Hi DarkMetalDoll,
Nope, I didn't get the name 'Gemma Taylor' from Sons of Anarchy. I actually don't even know what that is! I just made the name up! Glad you're liking the story! :)
-SwimmingBee
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