Reviewer: ToTouchTheseInnocentLips (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2010 06:17 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Emmett's Here
GAAAAHHHH!!! That arrogant fool! Screw the whip, take a crowbar to his pompous ass! Well, at least Emmett is still cool. Great job, please update again soon!
-Jazz-
Reviewer: deborahlicious (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2010 03:27 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Emmett's Here
ok, we know they will end up together eventually, but I think Bella needs to be Edwards Dominatrix, and finally takes all her anger out on him by chaining and whipping his ass up!
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2010 12:58 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Emmett's Here
OMG!!! Who knew that Emmett would be the voice of reason in this situation. I loved it. He often gets the short end of the brain stick. I love a sensible if a little raunchy Emmett. He makes me warm all over.
Reviewer: sweeteternity8 (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2010 10:02 AM · On: Chapter 7 - Emmett's Here
I love Emmet!! He is so blunt!
Reviewer: Gwilwillith (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2010 08:28 AM · On: Chapter 7 - Emmett's Here
love emmet and he's so right, edward is just acting alike a spoilt brat!
Reviewer: Linzmshell (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2010 07:46 AM · On: Chapter 7 - Emmett's Here
I feel so bad for Edward here. But he shouldn't have left. I have a feeling things aren't going to go well when they talk. Hope I'm wrong.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2010 06:41 AM · On: Chapter 7 - Emmett's Here
LOL. Emmett is the BEST!
Reviewer: kalekada (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2010 06:11 AM · On: Chapter 7 - Emmett's Here
Reviewer: FanNan46 (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2010 05:00 AM · On: Chapter 7 - Emmett's Here
Edward might like it if she takes a whip to him! LOL
Poor clueless Edward - he has to realize the girl has grown up and he either has to leave her the heck alone or get her back fully. I'm sure she'd rather have option #2!
Frankly, the whole fake rape thing is a bit too much for me - and I like to be creative. I wonder if its Julian OR if Bella likes the danger because she misses our Eddie?!
Reviewer: tinamarie6624 (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2010 04:47 AM · On: Chapter 7 - Emmett's Here
Liked the chapter. Can't wait to see what Bella has to say to Edward. Update soon.
Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2010 04:02 AM · On: Chapter 7 - Emmett's Here
I love Emmett.
He's a great guy and you've portrayed him beautifully, here. Marriage to Rose for eons has taught him much wisdom in the feminine psyche and he is a GREAT advocate for Bella in this chapter.
He's totally right. Yes, Edward's only real option is to go get her back. Win her back, as your title indicates. I foresee all kinds of amusement as Edward is compelled to change to be with her on her terms.
So go, Emmett!
And I really, really hope Edward isn't too big a jerk while talking to Bella. Of course...heh...the story would be REALLY SHORT if Edward actually heeded Emmett, huh?
Reviewer: Cathrine1604 (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2010 03:48 AM · On: Chapter 7 - Emmett's Here
I can't seriously wait for the next chapter! I'm so in love with this story, and I desperately hope they end up together. Guys should be a little jaloux, and perhaps it's good for Edward to experience that kind of thing. I hope Bella realises that Edward's the dream guy eventuelly - but not after some 'courting' to her.
I hope you post soon - I'm dying to read it! :) Have a nice day.
Reviewer: Stormchild (Anonymous) · Date: August 05, 2010 01:25 AM · On: Chapter 7 - Emmett's Here
Two words - "update now!"
Reviewer: Stormchild (Anonymous) · Date: August 05, 2010 01:09 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Of All The Airports In The World...
Ok, so now you're breaking my heart, really breaking my heart - note the little pieces everywhere... why couldn't she have taken the ride he was offering...
Reviewer: Stormchild (Anonymous) · Date: August 05, 2010 12:03 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Georgia on My Mind
*sigh* this is chocolate for the soul.
I have no idea yet what you have planned for us but this is wonderful so far...
Author's Response: Thank you so much for giving this story a try :)
Reviewer: amberdee1219 (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 11:22 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Emmett's Here
Why don't anyone listen to Em?! He really is smart in his big, goofy ways!
As for Edward....*SMH*....he just can't wrap his brain around it. Poor thing.
Reviewer: Taylor Lyn (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 10:35 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Emmett's Here
i like this bella, she likes it rough....and there is nothing wrong with that but edward is really pissing me off.....but hey its your edward
Reviewer: jgibs18 (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 10:19 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Emmett's Here
Wow edward is a dumbass (but i still love him) i hope bella bitchs him out and puts him in his place :) please do hurry
Reviewer: mfoxee (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 09:35 AM · On: Chapter 6 - Consenting Adults
great story Edward is so naieve its amazing that he even lives in the 21st century.
Author's Response: Thank you for the review. I'm afraid Chapter 7 posted before I could send you the teaser. Hope you enjoy!
Reviewer: rubyred_fm_tx (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 03:16 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Consenting Adults
Oh Edward, time to leave the many years of teendom behind and grow into an adult, like Bella. Only way to get and keep her...
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 06:39 AM · On: Chapter 6 - Consenting Adults
Emmett is hysterical! Edward is going to have to face the music. He needs to really figure out what he wants... then GO for it!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 06:33 AM · On: Chapter 5-WTF?
Poor Edward. He doesn;t get it at all.
Reviewer: Bkwrm (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2010 11:02 AM · On: Chapter 6 - Consenting Adults
Yeah, Assward... Bella's kinky. Live with it. YOU had the chance to learn with her, moron.
"Bella's so innocent, so pure..." I'm beginning to wonder if he would have EVER done the deed; with that attitude.
Reviewer: mtoldme (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2010 03:31 AM · On: Chapter 6 - Consenting Adults
Thank goodness for Carlisle's cool head. The scene of Bella hugging and reuniting with Alice and Carlisle was great. Poor Edward, how is he going to cope with this new idea of Bella. I totally love Emmet's text! Hilarious
Reviewer: KLO (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2010 04:20 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Consenting Adults
Loving the story!!!!
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