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Reviewer: ElektraLane (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2010 02:29 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Research
THat was just fantastic! I loved smart aleck Edward, he's fun and I don't want to smack him! Poor Esme, I know she really wanted the nippple rings. Vampire approved sex toys.....Now that would serisouly hurt a human lol! FABULOUS!
Reviewer: Natalina (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2010 02:19 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Research
Stupid julian ... he did live in that time period...Great chapter I loved it!
Reviewer: txgrl (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2010 02:12 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Research
I get so tickled when there is a new update! Umm maybe Edward needs to go on the sexual offensive. He can last longer, jump higher and go faster all without wearing his KEDS! He should use that to his advantage! Thanks for the update!
Reviewer: FanNan46 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2010 02:05 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Research
Alright! Edward is playing it cool and smart!! :)
Personally, I love Emmett's business idea! Vampires are very intense in their loving, and I'm sure there would be a huge market for such products!!
Reviewer: Michellebelle (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2010 01:51 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Research
I absolutely love the thought of Em going into a vampire sex toy venture! Couldn't you just see Aro as his biggest customer? Something tells me that man is a kinky little fruit...lol This is great, and I really like how Edwards seems to be coming out of his shell a little bit, the inner "kinkward" is making it's presence known. :)
However, I wonder if Edward is so intent on getting Julian away from Bella, maybe he should get help from his "cousins" from the north. Maybe a Denali is just what Julian needs? lol
Reviewer: Michellebelle (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2010 01:51 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Research
I absolutely love the thought of Em going into a vampire sex toy venture! Couldn't you just see Aro as his biggest customer? Something tells me that man is a kinky little fruit...lol This is great, and I really like how Edwards seems to be coming out of his shell a little bit, the inner "kinkward" is making it's presence known. :)
However, I wonder if Edward is so intent on getting Julian away from Bella, maybe he should get help from his "cousins" from the north. Maybe a Denali is just what Julian needs? lol
Reviewer: boulderpa (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2010 01:46 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Research
Hello, Missypooh! Thanks for the update! I have been working all day and just took a moment to check emails and got a treat, an update to one of my current faves. I love your descriptions of what Edward is thinking in his head about Bella, that when she smiles at him in admiration its such a gift. Sweetness. Time to maim Julian, the guy is a tool in Handy Manny's box.Also, I bet Aro the pervmaster would be all over some vampire-tested and approved bondage gear, the dude is creeptastic.
More, please!!
Reviewer: Mom of 2 in WI (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2010 01:09 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Research
Too funny. I cannot imagine Esme getting into this stuff. Good progress with Bella in this chapter. Julian looks like he's getting panicky. Should be. Can't fight love..
Reviewer: mtoldme (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2010 12:59 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Research
Yay, there is some unpleasantness going on between Julian and Bella! And Edward is taking it all in stride, being a good "friend". Go Edward! Love, love, love Emmet.....so funny.
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2010 12:51 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Research
If only that asshat knew he did live through that time and with his memory he remembers everthing so he needs to step up his game before Julien steps up his I think our Bellas heart is melting emmett no matter what he does is funny as hell only he would think of making sturdy vampire sex toys hehe
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2010 12:43 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Research
I love Emmett. He is just too freaking funny. I don't think that he got the insult that Edward was providing. I liked the fact that Edward is starting to loosen up and flirt with Bella some. I think that makes him even sexier. Julian is stupid. And I love that they were trying to figure out if the nipple piercing was for Esme or Carlisle. Can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: Leenf (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2010 12:12 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Research
wow very very very good keep up the graet work and post soon
bye bye
Reviewer: clairesuter (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2010 11:47 AM · On: Chapter 16 - Research
I LOL at that title, I think it rocks! I can just see Em puffing out his chest right now with pride!
Reviewer: ToTouchTheseInnocentLips (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2010 11:23 AM · On: Chapter 16 - Research
I'm personally glad about the venom thing, because if he changes Bella than those will be gone. Yea, still not over the piercings. Other than that, this chapter went perfectly! Finally, Edward is gaining the upper hand, and Julian is looking like a jerk/pedo. You don't hear Edward calling Bella, the woman he fantasizes about sexually, a kid. Great job, please update again soon!
~Jazz~
Reviewer: songii (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2010 11:02 AM · On: Chapter 16 - Research
Sex toys for Vamps! Priceless
Reviewer: TwilightLove48 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2010 10:56 AM · On: Chapter 16 - Research
amazingg!! more more more!!
Reviewer: AnnaWinters (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2010 09:57 AM · On: Chapter 16 - Research
Get rid of Jullian already XD
Well edward shouldn't have pulled the new moon so long, that makes him kind of an ass.
Now he realises that Bella is his mate GEEZ are all guys stupid?
I gues they are XD
keep up the good work !!
Reviewer: maddierose (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2010 01:47 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Bella's Toys
oh mi god that was hillarious!!!!! I love it so much and Esme hahahahha who on earth wouldve guessed???? hahahahaha ur awesome and poor edward he is internally cringing when he hears she got her nipples pierced oh man that sounds painful! i can almost taste his pain! EKKK WHAT NEXT WHATS ??? i loovvee this story so much
I GIVE IT A PERFECT 10!!!!!
Reviewer: vampiregirl1001 (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2010 12:10 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Bella's Toys
I love it, this is funny.lol! can't wait 4 more. Even though, I am Team Edward all the way! I love Emmett's remarks in this chapter.lol!
Reviewer: nautical (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2010 10:36 AM · On: Chapter 15 - Bella's Toys
I don't know if I have ever laughed so hard from fic as I did when Esme asked Edward about her nipples!
Reviewer: nautical (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2010 09:30 AM · On: Chapter 5-WTF?
If only Em and Rose were there; they would set Eddie straight.
Reviewer: kufansvj (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2010 03:51 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Bella's Toys
This chapter was amazing. I love that Edward is finally stepping up to the game. About time Mister!! Thanks!
Reviewer: songii (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2010 03:44 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Bella's Toys
too funny! I have enjoyed every chapter...i am just terrible at reviews!
Reviewer: vanessa thibedoux (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2010 03:39 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Bella's Toys
OMG! I laughed out loud reading this chapter! Well done!
Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2010 02:45 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Bella's Toys
LOL Esme @ the end... he he he.
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