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Reviewer: PoisonousGarden (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2013 01:51 PM · On: Chapter 15 Hips Don't Lie
Any chance this story will be continued...? :)
Reviewer: twilightfreak2009 (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2013 02:09 PM · On: Chapter 15 Hips Don't Lie
I read this all in one sitting. I honestly could not walk away from it. Very engaging story, with tons of passion. From the fights to the kisses, you can't deny the chemistry that "Edroar" and Bella have together. My favourite scenes had to be: when Bella sprayed Edroar in the face with the foot fungus stuff, THE KISS IN THE RAIN?!?!, and Edroar insisting that he be the one to teach Bella martial arts.
I hope that your father-in-law is doing as well as he can be. Hopefully you and your family are also doing as well as possible.
I am looking forward to you updating! And thanks again for the brilliant story :)
Reviewer: RobwardLover (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2013 07:49 PM · On: Chapter 9 It's Electric
i haven't even finished the beginning of the chapter yet but i just had to comment! your line about angela's spiderfan moment while stalking 5point was genius! i've read that story so i immediately knew what you were talking about!! cracked me the helll up girl!
now back to our regularly scheduled program! which i am LOVING by the way! ;)
Reviewer: FrankieCullen18 (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2013 06:00 PM · On: Chapter 15 Hips Don't Lie
Oh god!! I'm so exited!! I LOVE your humour by the way, always has me giggling to myself!! Cant wait fir the next chapter! X
Reviewer: titotank (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2012 01:32 PM · On: Chapter 15 Hips Don't Lie
omg.....please finish this.....i cant stand it....i check every day for updates....please,please,please....im dying here
Reviewer: Shortcake (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2012 10:12 PM · On: Chapter 15 Hips Don't Lie
Can't wait to read more...PLEASE update soon :)
Reviewer: cutiepierumpel (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2012 04:54 PM · On: Chapter 15 Hips Don't Lie
i love this story....the only thing i dont like is i want it updated daily so i can read more. lol
Reviewer: Kendra (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2012 09:11 AM · On: Chapter 14 The Hungry Games
Still loving this! I love how you have made thier friendship more important than the physical attraction. You aren't taking the emotional damage lightly rushing through to the sex. Keep writing!
Reviewer: Kendra (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2012 06:35 PM · On: Chapter 2 - What's in a Name ?
I don't read non cannon fics as a rule. Yours is the second one that I have tried. Gotta tell you, I am loving this so far. It's pretty darn funny and very entertaining.
Reviewer: Leenf (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2012 02:22 PM · On: Chapter 15 Hips Don't Lie
this was very very good chapter keep up the great work and post soon
bye bye
Reviewer: Leenf (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2012 05:23 AM · On: Chapter 15 Hips Don't Lie
this was very very good chapter keep up the great work and post soon
bye bye
Reviewer: joy_1 (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2012 10:25 PM · On: Chapter 15 Hips Don't Lie
I cannot tell you how much I am loving this story. I love this Bella. This is the Bella I always saw beneath the surface. Thank you for bring her to light.
Reviewer: warning (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2012 07:44 PM · On: Chapter 15 Hips Don't Lie
The suspence is killing me but i love love love this story
Reviewer: sevanderslice (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2012 05:47 AM · On: Chapter 15 Hips Don't Lie
These guys are so cute together. Thank you for updating. I'm looking forward to more.
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2012 07:26 PM · On: Chapter 15 Hips Don't Lie
This is such a great tease to what is sure to be an epic chapter! Can't wait, so don't make us! K?
Reviewer: frances fatuma (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2012 01:38 PM · On: Chapter 15 Hips Don't Lie
That was such a fun chapter. I so enjoy your Edroar. He still is the brooding Darkward that is so passionate and sexy which i find so yummy while your Bella is one of the funniest and fiestiest I've ever come across. And that Mike and jessica, what can I say??? I think I actually know people who could actually be them. I've never laugh so hard while reading a story in this site. I'm torn between wanting you to take your time with the story so i can savour it some more and insisting that you update daily. Anyway, however way the story goes, you already have my vote as the most enjoyable story I've ever read in this site. Kudos to you. Thank you for the awesome effort.
Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2012 08:42 AM · On: Chapter 15 Hips Don't Lie
Great chapter. Please update soon. I really want to see how dinner goes
Reviewer: Cina24 (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2012 07:41 AM · On: Chapter 15 Hips Don't Lie
Love your Edward and your Bella is a hoot! Can't wait to see how their night unfolds.
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2012 07:51 PM · On: Chapter 15 Hips Don't Lie
Squeee I am so excited to see an update it feels like its been forever teehee!!! Love love love can't wait for more I hope she goes all teh way teehee we need soem lemony goodness teehee its deserved with all the teasing these two have been doing ugh lol! Postpost post please with a naked Edward on top teehee
Reviewer: lain16 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2012 05:19 PM · On: Chapter 15 Hips Don't Lie
Definatetly can't wait for the next chapter
Reviewer: taintedangel30 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2012 05:00 PM · On: Chapter 2 - What's in a Name ?
damn, now I'm really curious!
Reviewer: cindy75 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2012 04:37 PM · On: Chapter 15 Hips Don't Lie
more please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Lavaughn (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2012 01:12 PM · On: Chapter 15 Hips Don't Lie
Yea! You're back. I thought you had abandoned us. I love this story and Edroar is one of my favorite Edwards. This chapter was great, as all of them have been so far. Please update soon!
Reviewer: Rie (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2012 09:54 AM · On: Chapter 15 Hips Don't Lie
I am lovin this story! His grumpiness and her sillines together is awesome! Can not wait to see what happens next! Great job :)
~Marie
Reviewer: TheSneakyFox (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2012 08:36 AM · On: Chapter 15 Hips Don't Lie
Hey, you. You are amazing and I love this story. I would love you forever if you gave me lots of wonderful updates. I love Edroar. He really embodies my belief that there's good in everyone, even if no one else sees it.
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