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Reviewer: brandella14 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2013 02:39 PM · On: Chapter 1
Loved it!
Reviewer: twimom1960 (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2011 09:43 PM · On: Chapter 1
very very sweet thank you I enjoyed it. I bet there could be more to this. Thank you!
Reviewer: vixenjc (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2011 06:49 AM · On: Chapter 1
i dont understand this obsession with edward biting bella when she is changed if i have read the book right, vampires are meant to be able to see bites clearly as jasper is covered in them. if im wrong i will have to read the books some more lol
Author's Response: I think the obsession with the "biting" is a territory and sexual marking thing like a hickey would be. That's how I see it anyway. :-)
Cheers for reading.
Reviewer: tpol (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2011 07:24 AM · On: Chapter 1
Loved this one! Very well written and in character!
Reviewer: VampyreAngel (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2011 02:16 AM · On: Chapter 1
That was fun and really beautiful!!!
Reviewer: ElvaFae (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2011 07:20 AM · On: Chapter 1
this was awesome! just like I imagined their first time, not that the timing really mattered!! loved it!
thnx!
Reviewer: chyla1 (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2011 05:43 AM · On: Chapter 1
This was exquisite.
Author's Response: Thank you :-) I'm so pleased you liked it :-)
Reviewer: shecater (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2011 06:01 PM · On: Chapter 1
Loved this!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you enjoyed it :-)
Reviewer: Charlotteleew (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2011 04:23 PM · On: Chapter 1
awesome!!!
Reviewer: shecater (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2010 05:29 AM · On: Chapter 1
Very well written!
Reviewer: Tammygrrrl (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2010 05:04 AM · On: Chapter 1
Nicely done! And you included the feathers! Excellent!
Reviewer: greeneyes69 (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2010 08:09 PM · On: Chapter 1
EXCELLENT
Reviewer: VampNessa (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2010 03:44 PM · On: Chapter 1
wow that was awesome!!! I sorta wish my first time was like that!! lolage
Reviewer: vixenjc (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2010 08:45 AM · On: Chapter 1
really enjoyed reading your story till near the end, kinda like the idea of waiting for marriage have a feeling it actually means more
Reviewer: Uglybear23 (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2010 08:45 PM · On: Chapter 1
oh my gosh, i really love this. you're a great writer and i think you captured the characters really well. i'd love to read anything else you've written. once again, i loved this :) <3
Reviewer: Uglybear23 (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2010 08:44 PM · On: Chapter 1
oh my gosh, i really love this. you're a great writer and i think you captured the characters really well. i'd love to read anything else you've written. once again, i loved this :) <3
Reviewer: chris44 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 08:58 PM · On: Chapter 1
Very HOT!!
Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 05:57 PM · On: Chapter 1
loved it! so hot
Reviewer: Wilynn (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2010 08:58 PM · On: Chapter 1
Nicely done. Beautiful and loving.
Reviewer: mrsgunsage (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2010 10:37 PM · On: Chapter 1
Is it weird of me that I love the whole pillow biting thing? I think it's the intensity of it... I'm glad you worked it in. :p
Reviewer: LisaDawn75 (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2010 10:42 PM · On: Chapter 1
Hot damn! That was great, and I loved how you added the lines with the bits of confusion on Bella's and Edward's part. And the pillow. And Bella's thoughts on Jessica's advice. Those just totally made for a perfect piece. Great job.
Reviewer: Nessarie (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2010 07:06 PM · On: Chapter 1
You should SO continue with this! It's awesome! :)
~Ness
Reviewer: shell371 (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2010 01:06 PM · On: Chapter 1
Pervy and sweet at the same time, very well written, i could imagine Bella saying and thinking these things. Great attention to detail.
Author's Response: Glad you enjoys it my lubberly. Might take some notes on the plane tomorrow for a sequel... Post change as per another lovely reviewers request... X
Reviewer: Gwilwillith (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 09:39 AM · On: Chapter 1
well that just brightened up my sunday evening! :D
Author's Response: And now you have just made mine bright! Thank you x
Reviewer: Horizon77 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 08:57 AM · On: Chapter 1
Very well done! Equal parts sweet and so very hot! ;) You did an excellent job capturing their insecurities along the way. I just love your take on Edward and Bella.
Since Edward seems to think that biting makes "things" more enjoyable, I think you need to write some post-change fic at one point and prove it! :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your lovely comments. A post change fic... Perhaps. I'm currently writing my pre-twilight story about Esme and Carlisle (A Mother's Pain) and have another longish oneshot on the go... But maybe that can be my next project ;)
I'm glad you enjoyed the story x
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