Reviewer: twilightfan4ever2009 (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2009 02:16 PM · On: Chapter 12- Opening My Eyes To the Sun
i hope there is more soon. im glad that you changed it from breaking dawn.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2009 01:49 PM · On: Chapter 12- Opening My Eyes To the Sun
Okay, I am not going to STONE you.... although I am a little shaken to the core with this one. Poor, poor Edward. I DO like it. I love it. Just please, please, for all that is good in the world, please update this soon. I don't think I am going to be able to think about anything else.....
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2009 01:48 PM · On: Chapter 12- Opening My Eyes To the Sun
OMG!!! All jer memories are locked away in her shield sniffle let them out all not just teh bad sniffle!
Reviewer: ForeverATwilighter (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2009 01:39 PM · On: Chapter 12- Opening My Eyes To the Sun
I have said that I love your take on the story of Bella nd Edward's love...but man..I was so happy when she remembered everyone! Especially alice! Oh that was such a sweet scene. But the moment I started reading her memory of edward and i freaked!! You had to pick that one...*sighs* I agree if you hadn't made them struggle just a little then their coming together wouldn't be as sweet right? We, the readers, wouldn't be so hooked and wanting to know what happened next right? I am mad you choce that memory but I understand why you did it and I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAP!!!!!
HURRY AND UPDATE SOON!!! WONDERFUL CHAPTER!!
Reviewer: Twilight_Fanatic123 (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2009 12:44 PM · On: Chapter 12- Opening My Eyes To the Sun
That was... so... sad....
Seriously, halfway through the story, my eyes were starting to tear up. Poor Edward. I feel so bad for him, especially at the end where the one memory she remembered was the worst one to remember.
It'll all turn out okay in the future...right?
UPDATE SOON!
Reviewer: bga1974 (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2009 12:23 PM · On: Chapter 12- Opening My Eyes To the Sun
OK, so yes I would love to throw things right now. But just this ONCE I will trust that you will make this ok. Please don't dissappoint. And give us more ASAP. That would only be fair after all, :)
Reviewer: Mya Jacobs (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2009 11:43 AM · On: Chapter 12- Opening My Eyes To the Sun
What a curveball!! I won't throw things at you if you promise to update soon...very soon!! Great chapter, amazing detail, just please don't keep us waiting long. I hate to think of Bella and Edward so sad in the woods for the next few weeks.
Reviewer: sambois (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2009 11:43 AM · On: Chapter 12- Opening My Eyes To the Sun
aww poor Edward he is probably ready to back to Italy by now...
Reviewer: dazzled eyes (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2009 11:09 AM · On: Chapter 12- Opening My Eyes To the Sun
She forgot the love of her life. Oh my! I would think Alice and Edward would be the last ones that she would remember because how much they filled her life. It is funny how the important parts of Bella and Edward's romance may look to one not involved in it as it happened.
Reviewer: Usagi-chan (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2009 10:57 AM · On: Chapter 12- Opening My Eyes To the Sun
*throws apple* DAMNIT! Stupid plot devises... *sobs*
Reviewer: Twilight131 (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2009 09:36 AM · On: Chapter 12- Opening My Eyes To the Sun
This story is so good, but ahhhh - I hope there's not too much suffering left (their suffering is my suffering)! Update soon!
Reviewer: sweetishbubble (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2009 09:25 AM · On: Chapter 12- Opening My Eyes To the Sun
I liked the chapter. I liked that she woke and didn't remember anyone. It makes sense. I really liked it.
Reviewer: luckii00 (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2009 08:30 AM · On: Chapter 1- Preparations
Awesome! So well written... she remembers him leaving, but nothing after!
Please hurry and post the next chapter! I can't get enough of this...
Reviewer: bellas shrink (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2009 07:39 AM · On: Chapter 12- Opening My Eyes To the Sun
You are evil...even though he does deserve her rage (she never gave it to him, you know) so maybe he should hurt...but man, you have a cruel side for her to remember EVERYONE (even rose) but him. Ouch!
Well, his biggest fear was realized...he will have to get her back...again!
Nicely done!
Reviewer: JLBMOctober (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2009 06:23 AM · On: Chapter 12- Opening My Eyes To the Sun
Oh my....now that I am sitting in front of my computer in hysterics....
It was a wonderfully written chapter. While I love SM's version of Bella's waking up and all, I think that it was a little too neat. This way, Bella really had to WORK to remember, and it'll just bring more satisfaction when she realizes that he came back because she saved him and all that.
*sigh* I'll save the stoning for another day. :)
Update soon, though, to placate us! :)
Reviewer: TwilightMommy (Anonymous) · Date: January 21, 2009 06:19 AM · On: Chapter 12- Opening My Eyes To the Sun
Ah, the drama, I LOVE IT!
Reviewer: Jessie (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2009 05:35 AM · On: Chapter 12- Opening My Eyes To the Sun
ACK! You have to fix this!
Reviewer: chocolatelover (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2009 05:33 AM · On: Chapter 12- Opening My Eyes To the Sun
i have to say i am disappopinted : ( (sorry!) i just dont find it believeable at all that she would remember everyone else and not remember him....i am really hoping that the next several chapters arent all revolving around her only remembering the bad stuff...if that is the case then i probably wont read the story for awhile as i just dont find it believeable. not that this will happen but the easy solution: the rest of the family could sit her down and tell her that she is married to Edward and that they are in love...and she trusts them now so she should believe them. but she will probably now be annoying and irrational, interrupt people, not let them finish their sentences, etc, etc. this chapter really just seemed like it was just reaching for angst.
i hope that wasnt too harsh - up until this point, i really really loved this story which is what compelled this review.
Reviewer: The Wicked One (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2009 05:17 AM · On: Chapter 12- Opening My Eyes To the Sun
ok .. well that was just a let down... I am sorry but that is soooo OOC for Bella. I hope that the story gets much better after this. I am really let down.
Reviewer: edwards_debussy (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2009 05:16 AM · On: Chapter 12- Opening My Eyes To the Sun
Ow, this chapter stung a bit! But a little angst is good--it will make them stronger.
I just found this story a few days ago, and I love it! Keep up the great work!
Reviewer: jemm101 (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2009 04:16 AM · On: Chapter 12- Opening My Eyes To the Sun
Loved it but please let her remember next chapter! Like, have a huge enormous epiphany!!! Please!
Reviewer: chicabonita51983 (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2009 03:26 AM · On: Chapter 12- Opening My Eyes To the Sun
*sigh* I seriously was almost in tears... Like I feel Edward's pain.
Please post soon.
Reviewer: sandyk199 (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2009 03:06 AM · On: Chapter 12- Opening My Eyes To the Sun
Ohhhh and you've added some more conflict. This is great!
I think that's one of the parts of Breaking Dawn that I really struggled with - apart from the fact that it was written in 3 different 'books'. But in BD, Bella got everything she wanted with very little struggle - it was ridiculous. Even at the end of the book there was a massive build up to a battle that didn't happen.
You've managed to take a familiar story and make it something entirely your own, and for that I'm very thankful. This is great stuff.
Reviewer: keepingupwiththekids (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2009 02:58 AM · On: Chapter 12- Opening My Eyes To the Sun
Oh - no! you must fix this!
Reviewer: sandyk199 (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2009 02:57 AM · On: Chapter 11- Burning
"Pretty please with Eddie on top" - great idea!
Again with the gushy review - are you sick of hearing from me yet? This is wonderful. I'm SO impressed with your writing...
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