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Reviewer: a beautiful night (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 01:03 PM · On: Chapter 15- Rapture
Wow ...Wow ... omg WOW! I've missed your writing. This story was my first fanfc obsession and since catching up, I've read dozens of others which I've loved...but reading this chapter has reminded me that your writing is beyond amazing! I get completely swept away in your words...I've never felt this connected in a story like I have with yours! Thank you so much for continuing this masterpiece and I look forward to reading anything else that comes from that briliant mind of yours no matter how long it takes!! I can't wait to see whats in store for these two! =oD ...Wow!
Reviewer: Wbwagner01 (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 12:58 PM · On: Chapter 15- Rapture
Loved it! Thank you!
Reviewer: Edwardsgirl83 (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 12:30 PM · On: Chapter 3- Here Comes the Bride...
This was a really good chapter. You felt like you were there. Very well written.
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 11:09 AM · On: Chapter 15- Rapture
That was an awesome chapter. Loved the lemon, and how sweet everything about it was. Very well done.
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: dazzled eyes (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 10:57 AM · On: Chapter 15- Rapture
The chapter was very well written and I loved how the dialogue mixed with the intimacy. Bella remembering as they began was very romantic. I laughed out loud when Bella pulled too hard on Edward's hair. Great lemons.
Reviewer: ncchris (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 10:45 AM · On: Chapter 6- Mrs. Edward Cullen: Part II
I love that Bella is sticking to her guns and not just forgetting everything because of Edward's apology! I always thought it would do him some good to see her as a REAL person and not just his love!
Reviewer: nox76 (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 10:19 AM · On: Chapter 15- Rapture
AWESOME!!! Totally sensual and beautiful!
Reviewer: Derryni (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 10:13 AM · On: Chapter 15- Rapture
Well worth the wait, I love it. Please don't make us wait so long next time :)
Reviewer: iwantedwardtobemine (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 08:13 AM · On: Chapter 15- Rapture
i THINK THAT IS WAS AMAZING!!!!!!! YEAH NOT TOO ORIGINAL HUH? BUT NONE THE LESS, YOU LEMON WAS INCREDIBLE ! :D
Reviewer: Panda1499 (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 06:57 AM · On: Chapter 15- Rapture
Alyssa,
Very good job. This was perfect. Definitely worth the wait.
Hope your midterms went well. And Congrats on your initiation. Joining a sorority was probably one of the best things I did in college, I still (3 years after graduation) talk to both active sisters and other alums. I'm a member of Phi Mu. What sorority did you join?
Thanks for another great chapter and i look forward to more!
Manda
Reviewer: Grace Ryan (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 06:49 AM · On: Chapter 15- Rapture
Love the ending, Dear! So sweet
Reviewer: chaseman (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 06:38 AM · On: Chapter 15- Rapture
great read
Reviewer: Stephanie Cullen (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 06:28 AM · On: Chapter 15- Rapture
THanks so much for updating..it was so worth the wait..it was one of the most beautiful chapters you have ever written..Finally we see how much pain Edward has been in and the only release from it was Bella...your wonderful..absolutely wonderful!! Good Luck with everything!
Reviewer: Jada (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 06:21 AM · On: Chapter 15- Rapture
So sweet and utterly heart-felt. But I am now wondering about Bella's mind. Is her shield going to come back? Or is her mind now open to all (including people like Aro, Jane, and Alec)? I can't wait to see where this goes. Great story. It's is one of my favorites!
Reviewer: Team Edward (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 06:19 AM · On: Chapter 15- Rapture
I enjoyed this chapter. You are so descriptive, it feels like I'm watching a movie. It was very interesting to see Edward so vulnerable after the change. Keep em coming!
Reviewer: eviltigereye (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 05:52 AM · On: Chapter 15- Rapture
i loved this chapter! it was all about remembering their love for each other, and you made it absolutely beautiful!
Reviewer: AlissaDawn (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 05:00 AM · On: Chapter 15- Rapture
I've been waiting for this one! Many thanks, it was wonderful!
Reviewer: belladog (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 04:56 AM · On: Chapter 15- Rapture
Wow! Worth the wait! I have tears in my eyes, that was beautiful!
Reviewer: CNB123 (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 04:35 AM · On: Chapter 15- Rapture
Amazing! Completely amazing! Your writing style is so great! I am convinced you will be a published author one of these days :-)
Your version of Breaking Dawn is so much better than the actual one. Thanks so much for updating!
Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 03:03 AM · On: Chapter 15- Rapture
lovely:)
Reviewer: sherinalmashor (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 02:24 AM · On: Chapter 4- Fire and Ice
wow!!! It was so amazing. You're awesome. Thanks for that missing link we didn't get from the book!
Reviewer: BellaGioia (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 01:30 AM · On: Chapter 15- Rapture
Just beautiful!
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 12:07 AM · On: Chapter 15- Rapture
I just love it- it is so very very sweet
Reviewer: naner26 (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2009 10:14 PM · On: Chapter 15- Rapture
worth the wait, awesome
Reviewer: breakingdusk (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2009 10:09 PM · On: Chapter 15- Rapture
Very very awesome! Couldn't have been better! Keep up the goos work.
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