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Reviews For His...At Long Last
Reviewer: One crazy monkey (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 10:58 AM · On: Chapter 9- Warmed By the Fire

WOW!!!!!! OMG I LOVED IT!!!!!!!! WOW!!!!!

Reviewer: PaulineAH (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 10:32 AM · On: Chapter 15- Rapture

Again...another great chapter!  Gotta love the lemons...lol!  Keep them coming.  I would love to see how their lives are together in all aspects of life now that Bella is changed.

Reviewer: kew191 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 10:03 AM · On: Chapter 3- Here Comes the Bride...

i just started reading fan fiction and its wonderful! i like this one especially because of the details and you can really picture everything that is going on so far...almost like you attended Edward and Bella's wedding...keep up the good work!

Reviewer: bellasunderstudy (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2009 11:57 AM · On: Chapter 15- Rapture

Amazing is the only word I can come up with...I really am totally speechless to describe this chapter! Great Job!

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2009 11:50 AM · On: Chapter 15- Rapture

UPdate soon that was so passionate it was mind blowing!!!  I loved it!!!!

Reviewer: murmureetoile (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2009 09:50 AM · On: Chapter 15- Rapture

Amazing story, beautifully written!! Probably one of the best Twilight fanfictions I've ever read until now (and, believe me, I've read quite a lot of them!) I definitely prefer your version to the actual version of BD... Particularly the Alice/Bella moments, that really missed in the book, and, of course, the Edward/Bella interaction!!

Please, continue!!

Reviewer: New-moon-rising (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 05:14 PM · On: Chapter 10- Decision

Very emotional and very good.

Reviewer: Twilight_Fanatic123 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 02:39 PM · On: Chapter 15- Rapture

This was amazing! Totally worth the wait! And as far as their lovemaking was concerned, there wasn't a way more perfect in my opinion. But when Edward started crying afterwards, I almost lost it. Gah, can I have a man like that? Pretty please? Seriously, this chapter was awesome!

Reviewer: Hollywood_678 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 11:40 AM · On: Chapter 15- Rapture

Beautiful. I love it. Great job! I only gave it 9/10 cos I just can't imagine SM's Edward blaspheming so much... not meant as a critisism, just an opinion. I have loved this story though, my favourite part being their struggle at the beginning. Hope to read more soon.

Reviewer: edwards_debussy (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 06:42 AM · On: Chapter 15- Rapture

A very beautiful experience for these two, now as equals.  I loved it!

Reviewer: k89g (Anonymous) · Date: April 01, 2009 04:06 AM · On: Chapter 15- Rapture

One of my most favourite stories in existence, I was estatic to see this update! It was as beautiful as always. Your writing is truly wonderful, the attention to detail and characterisations are just absolutely perfect.

Reviewer: Timmer (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 02:18 AM · On: Chapter 15- Rapture

Ah that was lovely !Great job !

Reviewer: jbluvs2sing (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 11:21 PM · On: Chapter 15- Rapture

Wow! I don't have any other word to describe it. This chapter was phenominal (sp) and I loved every word. You poured out your soul and I am sure that all of your readers are loving you right now. Awesome...awesome job!

Reviewer: Snowball Sniper (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 11:06 PM · On: Chapter 15- Rapture

I loved it. I was so entranced. I wish I had a man like him in my life... :(

Reviewer: riotrolla9 (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 07:38 PM · On: Chapter 15- Rapture

need more!!! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!! I LOVE IT !

.....oh yeah, UPDATE!!

Reviewer: my1edward (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 07:10 PM · On: Chapter 15- Rapture

Mmmm, yum--fans self and exhales, sated.  Loved the end section, very emotionally satisfying!!

Reviewer: Britt (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 07:06 PM · On: Chapter 6- Mrs. Edward Cullen: Part II

I have to be honest, I have just recently got into fanfiction. It is so nice to hear other peoples' perspectives of the characters and such drastically different storylines. I am particularly intrigued by yours. Very nice writing style. Awesome twist to the story. Keep up the great work:)

Reviewer: Luna_daydreamer (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 05:49 PM · On: Chapter 15- Rapture

awwww, their free!!!!!!
Yay for edward and bella!!!

Reviewer: kay321 (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 05:35 PM · On: Chapter 15- Rapture

LOVED it, I have been waiting for this update!

Reviewer: melissa95 (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 05:07 PM · On: Chapter 15- Rapture

stunning chapter very emotional i can not wait for 19! xoxo

Reviewer: Quarks89 (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 04:19 PM · On: Chapter 15- Rapture

NIce but plz finish......Love it!!! ;)

Reviewer: Marjojo (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 03:15 PM · On: Chapter 15- Rapture

Wonderful! Great speech by Edward at the end! 

Reviewer: shamrockon (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 02:44 PM · On: Chapter 15- Rapture

amazing amazing perfection wonderful fantastic hottt steamy.... there are so many words i would use to describe this!! and not enough time to do it!! update sooner rather than later, because you are my favorite author on twilighted, hands down!!

Reviewer: ncchris (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 02:29 PM · On: Chapter 15- Rapture

Beautiful! Amazing story...can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: psychocellochica (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 01:19 PM · On: Chapter 15- Rapture

ok... now I want more... i totes hate that i have to wait now.

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