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Reviewer: IslandWoman221 (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 02:29 PM · On: Chapter 11- Burning
I'm reading so voraciously that it's hard to want to stop to type.
It just keeps getting better and better. Very good transformation. One of the best I've read yet!
Thanks!!!!
Reviewer: JessicaB923 (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 11:40 PM · On: Chapter 15- Rapture
Great job! I wait for more.
Reviewer: IslandWoman221 (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 10:09 PM · On: Chapter 9- Warmed By the Fire
I'm thinking I'm loving the new Kama Sutra meets Twilight alt ending!!!
More please!
Reviewer: IslandWoman221 (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 08:58 PM · On: Chapter 8- Welcome Home
Ghnnnnn! That...was...hot!
Thanks, so!
Thank goodness I get to click next and have more!!!!!
Reviewer: JessicaB923 (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 08:08 PM · On: Chapter 4- Fire and Ice
Wow, I've read a lot of fan fiction and believe me when I say...wow! I mean you captured everything, every movement, every feeling, every bit of the experience. It is truly wonderful. And hot as he**! :)
Reviewer: IslandWoman221 (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 06:30 PM · On: Chapter 6- Mrs. Edward Cullen: Part III
Ch. 8
Just when I didn't think it could get more powerful, it did!
I'll have to save the rest of what I might say, because I just can't wait to click "next" and read some more!!!
Reviewer: IslandWoman221 (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 04:59 PM · On: Chapter 6- Mrs. Edward Cullen: Part II
Damn, Bella! You go, girl!!! I'm loving this more and more!
Reviewer: IslandWoman221 (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 04:29 PM · On: Chapter 6- Mrs. Edward Cullen: Part I
Wow! Powerful! I love that their separate assumptions and lack of facing the fear of talking are the only thing that cause their real problems! You've made reality out of this fairytale in the most delightful way!
Reviewer: Quarks89 (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 04:25 PM · On: Chapter 15- Rapture
plzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplpzlplzplplzplzplpzlzplzplz write mmmmmmmmmooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeee!!!(More)
Reviewer: IslandWoman221 (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 01:23 PM · On: Chapter 4- Fire and Ice
Damn, you're good! That was the most orriginal and exciting "first time" scene I have read yet!
I think my husband may want to thank you too, later. >)
Reviewer: IslandWoman221 (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 12:04 PM · On: Chapter 3- Here Comes the Bride...
Tingly, I'm all tingly in the most delicious ways!
I can see why this is an award winning story!!
Thanks for writing more!!!
Reviewer: magicdreams (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 03:17 AM · On: Chapter 3- Here Comes the Bride...
LOOOOOOOOOOVE it!!!
Reviewer: Sally_Deluca (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 10:17 PM · On: Chapter 9- Warmed By the Fire
I think that this chapter (#9 - Warmed by the Fire) is, by far, my favorite.
The part where Edward tells Bella to relax and "look!" -- Holy Cow! -- I was speechless...
Reviewer: kikabr (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 04:32 PM · On: Chapter 1- Preparations
wow!! your fic is so perfect, so amazing, so lovely and hot! you can take all the good stuffs and make a great history. nothing is missing, we got everything.
can´t wait to see what's going on in the next chapter.
Reviewer: Ava Pearce (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 08:30 AM · On: Chapter 15- Rapture
ok, WOAH! awesome! this story is so sweet and strange but sweet and the love between Edward and Bella is demonstrated beautifully! KEEP IT UP! you've just inspired me to read breaking dawn again LOL
Reviewer: kkelleher27 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 05:46 AM · On: Chapter 15- Rapture
All I can say is WOW! This is really good. I think I might acutally like this storyline more than BD. I hope you have a chance to write more soon!
Reviewer: BethyBoo (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 02:42 PM · On: Chapter 6- Mrs. Edward Cullen: Part II
I'm not done reading your series yet, but to be completely honest, so far, I like it better than SM's Breaking Dawn. You're a great writer, and I LOVE the direction that you've taken Edward and Bella. It's amazing. THANK YOU.
Reviewer: therealoriana (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 11:29 AM · On: Chapter 12- Opening My Eyes To the Sun
That is just soooooooo great do not worry about the struggles they're just perfect ! The best fan fic I've ever read ! Keep going please !
Reviewer: therealoriana (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 02:15 PM · On: Chapter 6- Mrs. Edward Cullen: Part II
your story is just so great keep on writing please !
Reviewer: phliphlip (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 12:05 PM · On: Chapter 15- Rapture
OKAY, so I know yo were asking for comments in previous chapters, but I'm sorry, I just couldn't stop reading. That was really really good. I loved all of it and didn't want it to end. So many romance novels lack the tenderness and love during the sex and I was hesitant to read any of this fanfiction because I couldn't bear to see Edward and Bellas love reduced to a porno, but you handled it perfectly. It was tender and loving and exciting. and just WOW. Thanks so much. If I smoked, I be smoking a cigarette right now. Your a great writer.
Thanks so much
:)
Reviewer: kingsley (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 02:15 AM · On: Chapter 6- Mrs. Edward Cullen: Part II
really enjoying this story - good mix of passion and then angsty emotional stuff. this chapter made me get the weepies! reminds me of the roller-coaster emotions of when i was first married.
thanks for writing!
Reviewer: Babe (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 05:36 PM · On: Chapter 12- Opening My Eyes To the Sun
VERY interesting, what you did here. Between the new ability in Edward and the flawed memory/ Nice introduction of tension. Good job.
Reviewer: Babe (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 08:13 PM · On: Chapter 6- Mrs. Edward Cullen: Part IV
Nice voice for Bella over the last few chapters. She is much more intelligent and a eloquent in your universe! Love it!
Reviewer: nidka (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 04:56 PM · On: Chapter 15- Rapture
HOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOT!
I need a bucket of ice.
My favorite lines:
“God, you’ll be the death of me,” he grunted before pulling almost completely out.
“I’m too late; you’re already dead.”
You are great. Keep up the great writting.
Already anticipating next chapter.
sincerely,
Karina.
Reviewer: nidka (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 04:44 PM · On: Chapter 14- 20 Questions
Excellent.
Favorite part:
"His retorting chuckle filled the room, and I growled right back at him. Only laughing harder, Edward shook his head. “Yes, Bella. You married me when you were just 18. And I was only 17…”
My hands flying off my face, I couldn’t help but glare at Edward as I chucked the pillow at him at lightning speed. “Not fair! You’re 107 years old and you know it!”
He laughed again as he caught the pillow. I was awestruck by his beauty, warmed by his love and joy. It was so relieving to see Edward at ease, the smile on his face exactly where it belonged instead of pain and agony. He was happy now—happy with me, even though he had sat with me for the past three and a half hours recapping my entire life.
“Look at what kind of a human you were; going about and seducing innocent minors.”"
LMAO. You are funny.
sincerely,
Karina.
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