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Reviewer: crackupmonkey (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 04:41 PM · On: Chapter 15- Rapture
Oh what a wonderful moment in time for them - they are so perfect and that was just a lovely chapter - great job
Reviewer: JaneVolturi (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 11:09 AM · On: Chapter 15- Rapture
*sob* it's so sweet and romantic~ i feel like i want to hug you for writing this..
Reviewer: yomama1212 (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 06:25 AM · On: Chapter 6- Mrs. Edward Cullen: Part III
sayyyy whaaaat?!
god i cant imagine how guilty edward would be.. he actually killed her in the last way youd think possible.
edward i think in s.m. book's is much more mature and is ..well perfect. so i doubt anything like this would have ever happened. the second bella was crying hed be apologizing. but still i like the OOC.. its.. refreshing i guess.
Reviewer: yomama1212 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 10:25 PM · On: Chapter 6- Mrs. Edward Cullen: Part I
hmm.. idk the very end was weird to me. like them all swearing him out.. i mean she did lie to him.. i guess to me it was out of character for them. but im definitely excited to see what happens next :]
Reviewer: yomama1212 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 09:00 PM · On: Chapter 4- Fire and Ice
umm.. damn.
ok it was very.. lemony and well writen lol but when she said "emmett!" i was like :0 oh no she didnt!! that scared me.. bad.
lol
Reviewer: yomama1212 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 07:53 PM · On: Chapter 3- Here Comes the Bride...
yes i like it lol
Reviewer: apricot (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 10:02 AM · On: Chapter 6- Mrs. Edward Cullen: Part III
you are totally breaking my heart in this chapter =(
Reviewer: chan1013 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 05:23 AM · On: Chapter 15- Rapture
Best way to end an incredible story. I absolutely loved it all!!
Reviewer: AmberrrJune (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 07:46 PM · On: Chapter 10- Decision
i really liked this
Reviewer: melkissa2004 (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 08:50 PM · On: Chapter 1- Preparations
I love it! Waiting for more :P
Reviewer: nicoleihca (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 11:02 PM · On: Chapter 3- Here Comes the Bride...
wonderfully written, absolutely brilliant. i loved it.
x
Reviewer: suture self (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 06:25 PM · On: Chapter 9- Warmed By the Fire
<3
Reviewer: Wants2BeACullen (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 05:36 PM · On: Chapter 15- Rapture
I could not bring myself to review your story because I had to read the next chapter. Now that I have read all that is posted, I loved it!!! Please keep'em coming!!! Also, when someone gives you lemons you make Lemonade ;)
Reviewer: moon_stone (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 02:18 PM · On: Chapter 15- Rapture
awesome I love this story i just found it last night and i just got so into i stayed up until i finished it. lol can't wait for more
Reviewer: tiggy616 (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 08:38 AM · On: Chapter 15- Rapture
I really enjoyed what you have written so far and look forward to reading more!!
Reviewer: amorvincitomnia (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 08:06 AM · On: Chapter 15- Rapture
YAY!!!! Please write more! I really need to see what happens with Emmett, and also we need some cheerfulness, maybe a lighter chapter next? I feel like I've been dragged through the coals on this one. Great read!
Reviewer: LoveSunshine (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 08:07 PM · On: Chapter 3- Here Comes the Bride...
Love it! Great story and I am looking very much so forward to reading everything you've written.
Reviewer: Quarks89 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 01:30 PM · On: Chapter 15- Rapture
Plz hurry and write the next chapter....
Reviewer: tiggy616 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 10:41 AM · On: Chapter 10- Decision
This is more of what I thought would of happened in Breaking Dawn.
In some of the chapters is seems like Jacob's temper has found its way into Edward, but I am liking it.
Reviewer: littlestarzy (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 09:21 AM · On: Chapter 7- Two Days Grace and Salvation
I have liked your story so far. Just one thing bothers me. You can't assemble a grand piano that way. Grand piano's have huge cast iron plates! The case is molded out of wood that is steamed and bent into shape as one piece. I guess this is fantasy so anything can happen.
Reviewer: alyssalove (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 10:55 PM · On: Chapter 11- Burning
"There was no twilight to have stars twinkle above me, not even a new moon to shine heaven upon me. I lived without the burning flash of blinding light from an eclipse, and ever reaching out for my horizon, my breaking dawn, I began, slowly, reliving every moment I had with Edward. The best of my memories and the worst. I wanted to remember everything. Starting from January 18th of last year."
...wow.
Reviewer: alyssalove (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 04:42 PM · On: Chapter 6- Mrs. Edward Cullen: Part I
Is it bad that I love asshole Edward? It makes him more real.
Reviewer: alyssalove (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 09:14 PM · On: Chapter 4- Fire and Ice
i appreciated this chapter SO MUCH! it was very realistic. some fan fics dance and fancy-foot over the wedding night when we all know it had to have been more like this! props.
Reviewer: alyssalove (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 01:46 PM · On: Chapter 3- Here Comes the Bride...
as per your request: i really, really like it! it's great so far & i can't wait to read on :)
Reviewer: tiggy616 (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 06:53 AM · On: Chapter 4- Fire and Ice
Great reading!! Just finished chapter 4 and I am looking forward to reading more!!
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