Reviewer: kwpband (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 09:23 AM · On: Chapter 6- Mrs. Edward Cullen: Part I
So much emotion! I like it! Drama!!!
Reviewer: lwfcullen (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2010 07:07 PM · On: Chapter 4- Fire and Ice
Wow! I certainly don't smoke cigarettes, but if I did...I'd need a whole pack now! That was great!!!
Reviewer: lwfcullen (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2010 06:36 PM · On: Chapter 3- Here Comes the Bride...
Very romantic!!!
Reviewer: Faultydroneunplugged (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 10:02 PM · On: Chapter 17 - God and Sinners Reconciled
nooooo need more!!! lol
love it love it love it! hehe on a more serious note, really well written, good pace, some good struggle/drama bits. I always enjoy things more when they have the darker parts. If a story was all happy happy perfect it wouldnt be much fun to read. So yea, love it! Can't wait to read more and really hope I dont have to wait long or I may just explode with anticipation haha
interested to see how you deal with the parents issue, eg/ if/when they return to Forks, and indeed before in regards to contact etc.. and even what would happen when/IF contact is made with Jacob again (though as youve made very minimal ref to him I'm not expecting anything).
Also interested in seeing if/how you approach the issue of her 'special vamp skill'/her mental shield thing.
So yea, really interested to see what happens from here in regards to specific stuff, and just generally.
xRavenx
ps- just noticed via the reviews that you must have put this chapter up in mid november... which was about 3mnths ago! really hoping this isnt the end for this story and that youre just taking a break.... really hope its not a long break though!!! xx
Reviewer: mommapurvis (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2010 08:47 PM · On: Chapter 3- Here Comes the Bride...
great so far
Reviewer: madcowtaylor (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 04:57 AM · On: Chapter 15- Rapture
Together at last......
Reviewer: madcowtaylor (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2010 11:30 PM · On: Chapter 6- Mrs. Edward Cullen: Part II
Loving it and don't want to stop reading.. thank you
Reviewer: madcowtaylor (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2010 06:33 PM · On: Chapter 6- Mrs. Edward Cullen: Part I
Love you comment at the end...... keep up the awesome work.
Reviewer: madcowtaylor (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2010 03:45 AM · On: Chapter 4- Fire and Ice
wow
Reviewer: midnightgirl (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 09:13 PM · On: Chapter 17 - God and Sinners Reconciled
Fantastic story! I think I like it better than the real book! Keep up the fabulous writing.
Reviewer: jklly12 (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2010 02:32 PM · On: Chapter 6- Mrs. Edward Cullen: Part II
Im sorry i love the story but bella is being stupid about this. She didnt want to talk about it. Yes, she was honest and he got mad but he cant read her mind and she not being totally hones with him about it. Is she that embarassed to talk about sex?
Reviewer: mtomlinson (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2010 01:38 PM · On: Chapter 17 - God and Sinners Reconciled
OMG...that was so good! Very detailed, a lot of lemons surprisingly, lol. But besides that, you are very talented or just a true Twilight fan. Keep it up and I hope that you continue to write this. It's like I don't want it to end! Lol...
Reviewer: jina-ha (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 09:53 AM · On: Chapter 1- Preparations
ive been checkin on your page so many times......WHERE ARE YOU :( its been a long time ago since you wrote a new chapter :(
Author's Response: I am so sorry that I've been MIA. I hate to say this....like HATE to, but this story is on hiatus. I've been captured by my other story that i can't seem to sake! It's called Love Story, and it's here on Twilighted, as well as Fan Fiction. Go on over to my author's page and check it out!!!
Alyssa
Reviewer: Mashknight (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 01:32 AM · On: Chapter 17 - God and Sinners Reconciled
OMFG that was.... well hot
Reviewer: Mashknight (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2010 07:57 PM · On: Chapter 11- Burning
I have read some of Bellas transformation, but this is the first one when she screams. This was good dude.
Reviewer: Mashknight (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2010 12:40 AM · On: Chapter 5- Betrayal, a Threat and Some Really Good Cinnamon Buns
That was great
Reviewer: Mashknight (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 11:52 PM · On: Chapter 4- Fire and Ice
This was just too real, and hot. I mean, really hot.
hahaha I blushed furiosly red for reading this.
Reviewer: Mashknight (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 10:12 PM · On: Chapter 3- Here Comes the Bride...
The wedding seemes beautiful, lets face it, I love Emmet for being so fun. I really like what im reading.
Reviewer: belladog (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2010 09:59 AM · On: Chapter 17 - God and Sinners Reconciled
Brilliant!! I love this whole story, but in particular, this chapter. I love how she uses his ability to read her mind to taunt him!
Reviewer: mdf3 (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2010 02:45 PM · On: Chapter 4- Fire and Ice
seriuosly hot!!!!
Reviewer: sarah21 (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 08:57 AM · On: Chapter 12- Opening My Eyes To the Sun
wow wow i like it like it like it you are a genius woooooooooooow perfect idea
Reviewer: melindadasril (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 08:03 AM · On: Chapter 9- Warmed By the Fire
hmmmm.....yummy.Lol.wish this movie a liittle bit like this.Lol!
Reviewer: melindadasril (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 05:02 AM · On: Chapter 6- Mrs. Edward Cullen: Part III
WOW!!!amazing!!make me cry n more cariousity!U Rock!lol
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2010 06:45 PM · On: Chapter 17 - God and Sinners Reconciled
Wow. I have been saving this chapter to read once the kiddos were back in school and I could have some time simply to focus on this update. I am SO glad that I did. It was incredibly erotic and fucking HOT!!!!!! More of that, please. I love Edward when he simply lets go and pounds into her. Excellent chapter!
Reviewer: sarah21 (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2010 06:39 AM · On: Chapter 6- Mrs. Edward Cullen: Part III
ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
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