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Reviewer: electrocityscape (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2009 10:36 PM · On: Chapter 6- Mrs. Edward Cullen: Part III
GOOD LORD.
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2009 12:00 PM · On: Chapter 1- Preparations
pretty pretty please update
Reviewer: chamita (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 09:14 PM · On: Chapter 4- Fire and Ice
Beautiful, Romantic, Innocent, Perfect
Reviewer: chamita (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 08:17 PM · On: Chapter 3- Here Comes the Bride...
more than liked, it was great!
Reviewer: Quarks89 (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 06:17 PM · On: Chapter 15- Rapture
Will you please write more? I WILL die if you don't...(no jokes)
Reviewer: Southern Vamp (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 08:33 PM · On: Chapter 15- Rapture
I really want more. I don't want the story to end.
Author's Response: NO worries! this is SOOO not over. There are 9 ch's left. I just have been crazy with my laptop not functioning for about a month =(
But i get it back today! yayayayaya
ch 16 on its way!
PS if you liked CH 9, then be on the lookout. Monday, July 27th I am guest writing for Ninapolitan's Smut Mondays. LOLOLLOL see you there!
Reviewer: redlilybose (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 11:38 AM · On: Chapter 10- Decision
I am in the process of reading this but I just wanted to let you know that this is an amazing story and I love it!! You have done a wonderful job and I will respond again when I am finished!!
Reviewer: apricot (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 08:37 AM · On: Chapter 15- Rapture
omg! finally was able to finish catching up with this story..this is so sweet and heartwarming.. omg... when will you update?? PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!
Reviewer: apricot (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 07:59 AM · On: Chapter 13- A Love Worth Fighting For
this chapter was a little heavy but i laughed when bella asked in the end who iosn't her biological parent. LOL =)
Reviewer: apricot (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 07:59 AM · On: Chapter 13- A Love Worth Fighting For
this chapter was a little heavy but i laughed when bella asked in the end who iosn't her biological parent. LOL =)
Reviewer: apricot (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 06:13 AM · On: Chapter 12- Opening My Eyes To the Sun
wth?? i feel for edward here.. but you're right.. every great love needs a little struggle..
Reviewer: amkh (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 06:35 PM · On: Chapter 15- Rapture
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i was wondering where you went :P
Author's Response: I'm here! I'm alive!
My laptop is dysfunctional. Literally. Its been in the computer equivalent of ICU for a while =(
But I get it back today!
YAY FOR CH 16 THIS WEEK! YAYYAYAA llol
SORRY. I'm a hyper college student. lol
Reviewer: JennB21 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 02:25 PM · On: Chapter 15- Rapture
Just finished reading all 15 chapters and it's so good! Thank you so much for sharing your work! Will there be more ? :) ? :)
Reviewer: Southern Vamp (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 09:25 PM · On: Chapter 5- Betrayal, a Threat and Some Really Good Cinnamon Buns
I'm so happy the next day was a good one. I love that the family heard her call his brother's name out. lol!!! There are no more secrects in the house of Cullens.
Reviewer: Southern Vamp (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 08:41 PM · On: Chapter 4- Fire and Ice
Wow! This is what was missing in the book. You did it!!!! It was very sweet and it was so Bella and Edward. I'm glad you made there wedding night a night that would be remembered in a happy way.
Reviewer: Southern Vamp (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 06:57 PM · On: Chapter 3- Here Comes the Bride...
I absolutely love this story. You have me wanting more and more. Your style of writing is awesome. Please, don't stop writing!
Reviewer: 30somethingmom (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 01:51 PM · On: Chapter 15- Rapture
Beautiful!!! I am so happy that her memories of Edward were finally triggered. I love it!!! Can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: Quarks89 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 12:19 PM · On: Chapter 1- Preparations
You HAVE to write another chapter, I swear....PLZ
Reviewer: swigwag (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 11:41 AM · On: Chapter 4- Fire and Ice
Wonderful read - very descriptive and satisfying without being raunchy.
Reviewer: 30somethingmom (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 10:43 AM · On: Chapter 11- Burning
GREAT!!!
Reviewer: 30somethingmom (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 10:10 AM · On: Chapter 10- Decision
GREAT!!!! I love th build-up to the moment he bites her. I really like that you included that Bella was honest with him about the morphine. Look forward to reading the other chapters. Keep up the good work.
Reviewer: apricot (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 09:49 AM · On: Chapter 10- Decision
i've been reading this story for the past 2 days now and i was intending on submitting a review once i finished all the chapters. but after reading this chapter, i just had to write a review right now because i was really moved on the scene when edward was listening to her heartbeat for the last time. when they cried, i cried too.. i was really touched it got me all emotional.. so i'm gonna stop right now and continue on reading it tomorrow (it's also 1am here already).. this is really a great story.. so far i've enjoyed all the chapters but this one so far is my favorite. =)
Reviewer: 30somethingmom (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 08:09 AM · On: Chapter 1- Preparations
HOT!HOT!HOT!
Reviewer: 30somethingmom (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 06:20 AM · On: Chapter 6- Mrs. Edward Cullen: Part IV
I love the story. It is so much different than the other stories on the site. It seems that it really takes something drastic happening to straighten Edward out when he screws up. I am so glad that the rest of the family were there and supported Bella. I think that is how they would have supported her in New Moon if Edward had given them the chance. GREAT WORK!!!!
Reviewer: MissMelancholy (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 07:28 PM · On: Chapter 15- Rapture
THIS is how the story should have ended!
One of the best I've read so far! Great job, you're very talented!
Author's Response: NOO it's not done yet!!
but thanks for the love!
there's like, 10 ch's left lol. We have technical difficulties; my laptop is in staples w. a seriosu virus, and all my writing files =(
more to come, and soon! (i hope!)
Alyssa
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