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Reviewer: Sacredom (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 11:34 PM · On: Chapter 6- Mrs. Edward Cullen: Part II
Still enthralling...
Reviewer: Sacredom (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 11:19 PM · On: Chapter 6- Mrs. Edward Cullen: Part I
I'm not mad about Edward's behavior...Bella is overreacting with her self deprecation...But, I think that Emmett's comment at the end was a little much...
Reviewer: Sacredom (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 07:04 PM · On: Chapter 3- Here Comes the Bride...
Now it's getting good!
Reviewer: Sacredom (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 06:03 PM · On: Chapter 2- Tortured Doll
I am liking the story so far...I really like the tame Rosalie...
Reviewer: Sacredom (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 05:40 PM · On: Chapter 1- Preparations
Wow...never been forced to write a review..I don't have anything to say...
Reviewer: JennB21 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 04:03 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Vile
I love this story! When will there be more? Thank you! :P -- Jenn --
Reviewer: JennB21 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 04:03 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Vile
I love this story! When will there be more? Thank you! :P -- Jenn --
Reviewer: antipyro (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 07:45 AM · On: Chapter 16 - Vile
I'm really hoping that this fic will be quite long - as long as it takes Bella to 'calm down'. I like the differences between this and the book. Are the Volturi still at odds if Bella has been changed? Will your story follow the book, as in the Volturi, or someone else, come in and cause some drama? I hope so.
Looking forward to your updates, now that I'm caught up.
Author's Response: thanks for your support!
No, no volturi here. I don't like them lol. but yes...there will be more drama. definitely.
glad you're enjoying it! it will be quite long!
Be Safe
Alyssa
Reviewer: dkpatton (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 09:01 PM · On: Chapter 3- Here Comes the Bride...
Loved it.
Reviewer: antipyro (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 08:38 PM · On: Chapter 15- Rapture
Ultimate love....does it exist? ....yeah....I'm a sucker for HEA. This was so beautifully done, you've really outdone yourself!!
Reviewer: antipyro (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 08:37 PM · On: Chapter 15- Rapture
Ultimate love....does it exist? ....yeah....I'm a sucker for HEA. This was so beautifully done, you've really outdone yourself!!
Reviewer: antipyro (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 08:33 PM · On: Chapter 15- Rapture
Ultimate love....does it exist? ....yeah....I'm a sucker for HEA. This was so beautifully done, you've really outdone yourself!!
Reviewer: antipyro (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 07:51 PM · On: Chapter 14- 20 Questions
Hey, you and me both! I girl can dream....
I really like how Edward is recounting his memories of Bella, helping her to put 2 and 2 together. The build up to the high points, knowing she loves him; recognizing her marriage; etc. are the cliffies, but since I'm still catching up on chapters, I get to see what the next one says....hahahahaha
Reviewer: antipyro (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 07:16 PM · On: Chapter 13- A Love Worth Fighting For
Yes, definately on the mend - it's funny though....the indecision; the two realities mixed with the surreal. What a great joy ride of new found love they would share - again.
Reviewer: aylah50 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 06:53 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Vile
Love this story! Can't wait for more chapters!
Reviewer: lolobird (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 06:50 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Vile
Can't wait to read more! I wanna know if they run into them (or other humans) on the hunt! :)
Reviewer: antipyro (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 05:46 PM · On: Chapter 12- Opening My Eyes To the Sun
Stoned!!! is that all you expect????? This is no little struggle and what do you mean they haven't struggled???? Bella's struggling now, to remember something she feels deeply about. It's part of her and she can't deny it. I agree she made an error in judgement, but she's still not all there yet. This is the one, single event that impacted her life, of course she'd settle on that.
I'm just waiting for her to see past that and centre in on the sex part!
Bring it soon, and you're forgiven.
Reviewer: antipyro (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 03:01 PM · On: Chapter 11- Burning
Dying with a Crescendo.....how appropriate!
Reviewer: antipyro (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 02:23 PM · On: Chapter 10- Decision
Definately explosive plus! There was so much emotion in that chapter, more so than the night of sex and their honeymoon night. It did almost seem they were saying good-bye, at least to the human Bella.
I'm surprised that Edward didn't get all lusty when he bit into Bella, not even a small growl.
Reviewer: Leslie Mc (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 12:14 PM · On: Chapter 6- Mrs. Edward Cullen: Part I
WOW! Found this one late and am just now reading it!
Reviewer: antipyro (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 12:10 PM · On: Chapter 9- Warmed By the Fire
You're thinking, "Entertainment - 101"; a new revelation for Edward; Bella finally gets how much Edward loves her; The biggest Lemons ever! LOL
MY, that was invigorating and also so revealing. I imagine that every one heard this round of foreplay/sex, and Bella didn't even think about being embarrassed.
Reviewer: absmw1618 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 01:43 AM · On: Chapter 16 - Vile
great chapter, i love this story!!!
cant wait to read more :)
Reviewer: antipyro (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 10:17 PM · On: Chapter 8- Welcome Home
Beautiful!
Reviewer: antipyro (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 08:20 PM · On: Chapter 7- Two Days Grace and Salvation
I really hope Bella gets over this waiting game thing - she does have all of eternity to pass through, not just a few hours.
Great support from Alice, Rose and Esme. I really hope that Edward likes the job the women did with the piano. It should probably be tuned.
Reviewer: lolobird (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 03:06 PM · On: Chapter 4- Fire and Ice
I'm just now reading your story & I wanted to tell you that it's great. You've done a wonderful job with the first 4 chapters I've read. I look forward to reading more.
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