I really like your story, can't read it fast enough, but damn!  How on earth did these two ever make it to the alter.  All this drama because it hurt when Bella lost her virginity, like it doesn't hurt almost every women on the planet.  Why did Bella jump from Edward being upset because he felt like he hurt her to her feeling worthless and unwanted?  Is there a vampire version of Jerry Springer?!  He said he regretted doing it before he changed her, not that he regretted doing it all together.  Wow these guys fight like 5 years olds...no deductive reasoning or listening skills.  How do you love someone for two years, go through all they experienced in Twilight, New Moon and Eclipse and know so little about each other that every sigh and silence is misconstrued. This is not a flame!!!!  Just me being curious. It sure has been a fun read!!!!!

so hot and romantic!

Great chapter - hard to see Bella struggle but still so glad she's finally a vamp!

Ugh. Angst. Should have expected it... things were going too well - well written regardless... please don't keep them apart for long!

Oh. My. God. Freaking. Amazing. Didn't think Angstward had it in him - great work! Ok, I need a cold shower now LOL!

wow this is really good i have only just found your story but read it from scratch starting yesterday.  can't wait to see what happens longing to see bella ask for it a little rougher from edward but we will see.

keep up the good work

Alyssa Cullen,

You are a wonderful writer.  You expertly describe every detail perfectly.  I am in love with this story.  I can feel the emotions you describe and imagine the settings you write of.  The visual in my mind can completley imagine everything! 

Thank you so very much for writing this.  I loved your recent addition to Smut Mondays by Ninapolitan. Your Authors Note in that was actually what led me to this story.  

I think I just wrote a really long review, didn't I? Opps... I ramble too much... Anyways, Great story! :-) <3 <3 <3   

It's so sweet and beautiful.  It's honest love, to be so trusting and to reassure Bella everything would be ok.

Very detailed and eloquently written.  Sex is so much more than "getting off", it's giving yourself to your partner not just physically, but mentally and emotionally as well.

I think this wonderfully describes the "Perfect First Time"

I think you've described... Love. 

Bless you for writing this! A juicy lemon indeed.

I think perhaps my husband should read this...

I absolutley loved this story...will there be more? This story was a PERFECT mix of EVERYTHING! Please let there be more...I just want Edward and Bella's story to go on and on and on...I can't get enough of them! Beautiful love story! Yes, you ROCK!

You Rock!!

You Rock!!