Reviewer: SimplySwissy (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2009 02:10 PM · On: Chapter 3- Here Comes the Bride...
I know this might be a bit late, because I'm not sure when you wrote this story, but it is very very good. I can't wait to continue. And please, don't feel bad when people don't write something...they are just so excited to get to the next chapter. I know I am quilty of that! lol So...great job! Love it!!
Reviewer: icemaiden2108 (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2009 10:29 AM · On: Chapter 3- Here Comes the Bride...
this is great. seriously, YOU should have written breaking dawn! ^^,
i'll be looking for more of your work. hope you write more.
xo.
Reviewer: ludo (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2009 02:43 AM · On: Chapter 16 - Vile
hi love this whole story, just wondered about the possibility of an update?
Reviewer: lilianyes (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 06:09 PM · On: Chapter 4- Fire and Ice
super good!!
Reviewer: Sattinson (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 06:53 AM · On: Chapter 4- Fire and Ice
The best E X B "first time" I have ever read. I am shocked. Very good job of depicting what they would do...she's nervous and clumsy but determined, he's extremely concerned about hurting her. Very romantic and touching.
Reviewer: danna0724 (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 05:22 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Vile
Can;t wait for more!!! I like the struggles she is enduring...
Reviewer: danna0724 (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 12:14 PM · On: Chapter 15- Rapture
So mushy and gushy...tender...loved it!
Reviewer: danna0724 (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 11:46 AM · On: Chapter 14- 20 Questions
Loved it...can't wait for the next chapter....sour lemon you OWE!!!
Reviewer: danna0724 (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 11:15 AM · On: Chapter 13- A Love Worth Fighting For
Ah, poor, poor confused Bella... so much so quickly...
I like the track you have this story on...
AS ALWAYS...can't wait for more =)
Reviewer: danna0724 (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2009 05:05 PM · On: Chapter 12- Opening My Eyes To the Sun
no stonings....Edward should suffer a little!
Reviewer: danna0724 (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2009 04:29 PM · On: Chapter 11- Burning
Feels like it went by too quick...but that's just my take on it... but as always i can't wait for more.
Reviewer: danna0724 (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2009 03:43 PM · On: Chapter 10- Decision
Great chapter. I enjoyed all of it! I can't wait for more =)
Reviewer: danna0724 (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2009 07:51 PM · On: Chapter 9- Warmed By the Fire
vey juicy lemon!! and I adore this new explorative Edward!
Reviewer: danna0724 (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2009 04:55 PM · On: Chapter 8- Welcome Home
Awe...Edward pulled the stick out of his ass!!!
Can't wait for more =)
Reviewer: danna0724 (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2009 03:25 PM · On: Chapter 7- Two Days Grace and Salvation
Enjoyed this chapter. Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: Angella83 (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2009 01:37 AM · On: Chapter 3- Here Comes the Bride...
absolutely stunning =)))
Reviewer: danna0724 (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2009 08:07 PM · On: Chapter 6- Mrs. Edward Cullen: Part IV
be safe
enjoying my self completely
thank you
Reviewer: danna0724 (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2009 02:20 PM · On: Chapter 6- Mrs. Edward Cullen: Part II
Strong willed Bella with a very strong Cullen backing!!! BAD Edward!!! Can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: danna0724 (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2009 02:00 PM · On: Chapter 6- Mrs. Edward Cullen: Part I
wow...wisked away to Alaska in a hurry much!!! oh the life of a Cullen...
Love the protective stances as they pulled up...can't wait to see where this goes!
Reviewer: danna0724 (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2009 01:20 PM · On: Chapter 5- Betrayal, a Threat and Some Really Good Cinnamon Buns
awe... I love the bantering with Em...gonna get good!!! Little disappointed that Bella has turned Edward down twice due to soreness...I don't remember being THAT sore...but I wasn't with Edward either, so? I guess I am just so into Edward that I would do it no matter the pain or discomfort to myself...idk...
Reviewer: danna0724 (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2009 12:12 PM · On: Chapter 4- Fire and Ice
oh what a night!!! beautifully written
Reviewer: danna0724 (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2009 08:07 AM · On: Chapter 3- Here Comes the Bride...
How do people not review?? Oh well...people are fickle...that's why I prefer vampries...
I enjoyed this chapter...very descriptive and able to picture everything. I love how you are portraying Em...he's one of my fav characters and I love him being smartass funny etc...
Reviewer: danna0724 (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2009 06:51 AM · On: Chapter 2- Tortured Doll
I liked. A lot... going in a good direction and I can't wait for more =)
Reviewer: danna0724 (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2009 06:37 AM · On: Chapter 1- Preparations
Really caught the essence of Alice. I like where this story is headed. I can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: jina-ha (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2009 05:52 AM · On: Chapter 8- Welcome Home
i love love love your whole story, it was sooooo sad when he hurt bella and i just wanted to read what would happen next the whole time. it was sooooo sad how he was beaten up by what he said to bella and i could feel her pain, goddddd i loved it! great job!
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