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Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2008 02:22 AM · On: Chapter 3- Here Comes the Bride...
That was mind-numbingly dazzling! You HAVE to give us more chapters! And QUICKLY! It feels like forever between your postings! UGH! I truly love your story line and writing. Please give me more. MORE, MORE, AND MORE.
Author's Response: Thank you for your review!! i'm trying dear, trust me. It's frustrating that i'M SO SLOW LOL More is coming, i swear! Alyssa Cullen
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2008 02:19 PM · On: Chapter 3- Here Comes the Bride...
LOVED IT! So descriptive and beautiful. I even got goose bumps wow wonderful!
Author's Response: FINALLY!! someone w. the same response that I have! Revising this, i get goosebumps everytime...an overactive heartbeat...i squirm under every re-read line of WEdward's touches...I like it to be very real. The goosebumps tell me i'm doing something right! Alyssa Cullen
Reviewer: obsidian (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2008 06:30 AM · On: Chapter 3- Here Comes the Bride...
i liked it. really good descriptions. you can't stop now!
Author's Response: Don't worry; I'm not stopping now =)
Reviewer: Laura Cullen (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2008 10:53 PM · On: Chapter 3- Here Comes the Bride...
I'm enjoying this! Good angst!
Author's Response: thank you for your review! the angst is absolutely killing me. My mind is screaming at me for them to just do it already, but it has to be right. *sigh* I'm just like Edward =) Alyssa Cullen
Reviewer: naner26 (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2008 10:34 PM · On: Chapter 1- Preparations
Can't wait for more. Nicely written, it's passionate .
Reviewer: rachaelprincess (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2008 10:27 PM · On: Chapter 3- Here Comes the Bride...
I loved the details of her dress! It made a beautiful picture. The very last of this latest chapter had me confused with Bella's movement. At one point she was sitting against Alice's chair and then it wasn't Alice - it was Edward, and then suddenly Edward was across the room and then Bella was slowly backing up the stairs? Might have been just me - I couldn't follow her positions.
Author's Response: that's allright...she was sitting against alice- when she realized it was edward singing, not alice, she met his gaze; he has the undulated look of lust and desire on his face, and she only gets more nervous. She stands up to get away, walks over to the steps to catch her breath...Thats's when he comes over and...the rest is yet to come ;) It's relle subtle..didnt wanna over do jerky movements and ruin the purity of the moment =)
Reviewer: GothicTemptress (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2008 10:12 PM · On: Chapter 3- Here Comes the Bride...
Like it? LOVE it!!!!!
Author's Response: THANK YOU!!! i'm glad you love it; I'm always so concerned that it sounds good to me, but everyone else thinks its terrible. More coming soon! The wedding night has its own ch. Alyssa Cullen
Reviewer: Morrigan728 (Anonymous) · Date: November 05, 2008 10:11 PM · On: Chapter 3- Here Comes the Bride...
This is so sweet!! I love the focus on the rest of the family.
Author's Response: thank you for your review! I'm glad you like it! We can never get enough of the Cullens, now, can we? =) Alyssa Cullen
Reviewer: Morrigan728 (Anonymous) · Date: November 05, 2008 10:01 PM · On: Chapter 2- Tortured Doll
Oh. My. Gods. I love your version of the day SOO much better than the book! I can SEE it, whereas the book left more to your imagination.
Reviewer: Djanga (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2008 08:48 PM · On: Chapter 3- Here Comes the Bride...
I'm enjoying it so far, and can't wait for the next update. Yeah, yeah, I know I'm greedy...
Author's Response: HAHA yes i know...i'm greedy too. some night i ask myself "What the hell are you doing procrastinating?!?! What happens with these two?" i should have this up by monday the latest...possibly tuesday. Revision is the hardest part Alyssa Cullen
Reviewer: Chelsea (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2008 08:07 PM · On: Chapter 3- Here Comes the Bride...
I'm enjoying your story. I was sad to see this lastest chapter end so soon. Can't wait to read more about the wedding night. :)
Author's Response: Thank you for your review!! I'g glad to hear that you are enjoying it. This chapter was one of my longest, but i'm not done w. the wedding night. I just couldnt lump it in there. it deserves a certain respect and reverence...they've waited too long! Alyssa Cullem
Reviewer: abcd1234 (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2008 07:54 PM · On: Chapter 3- Here Comes the Bride...
Good story! I am interested to see it deviate a little more from SM's story in the future. I really like it though. It's well written.
Author's Response: thank you for your review! It's not going to be exactly like SM's-- i wasnt satisifed w. the weddding, or the change-- def. bigg differences coming Alyssa Cullen
Reviewer: crybaby (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2008 07:18 PM · On: Chapter 3- Here Comes the Bride...
i love it.
Author's Response: thanks for your review! more definately coming soon! Alyssa Cullen
Reviewer: Porcelain Mortal (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2008 06:52 PM · On: Chapter 3- Here Comes the Bride...
AHHH i can't wait for the next chapter. :-D But the rest of the family is leaving, right? I mean... they don't have to do it with everyone hanging out in the house, listening in, do they? Awkward... ;o)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review!! I'm working out the finer details. Seriosuly, i think the only one who would need to get out of the house in this case is Emmett;p Carlise and Esme are understanding, Jasper can help out with, er, calming Edward, Alice has already seen it.... But then again...you never know. I've completely redone chapters in the last minute...you never quite know with me ;] But one thing is certain- it's going to happen. And it's not going to be harsh, or like, sick. It's what they deserve after all this time, all the wait, all the struggle. Alyssa Cullen =)
Reviewer: Twilightlvr (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2008 12:38 PM · On: Chapter 2- Tortured Doll
I like this so far. I've enjoyed all of your attention to details in the wedding preperations. I especially thought the part with Alice and Edward was cute. Can't wait for your next chapter and where you will be taking this story!
Author's Response: thank you so much for your review and critique; I feel that in throughout the saga there was alot of love between Alice, Edward and Bella, but never enought for me. I always wanted to bring more of that out. I guess you all enjoy that!
Reviewer: dawntwilight000 (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2008 06:19 AM · On: Chapter 2- Tortured Doll
Excellent!! Love it!
Author's Response: thank you so much!! more coming this week!
Reviewer: Demetria99 (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2008 01:21 PM · On: Chapter 1- Preparations
Really good start. I would really love to see where you take this!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review!! It's going to go somewhere interesting (or at least i think so!) Just testing it out...seeing if readers enjoy it; I aslo don't know where it may end...but I definately will be writing in Edward's perspective very soon =)
Reviewer: keepingupwiththekids (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2008 09:37 AM · On: Chapter 1- Preparations
Beautiful! When will you write more?
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review!! I'm currently revising ch's 2 & 3...this week!
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