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Reviewer: Life Is Everything (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2009 07:07 PM · On: Chapter 17 - God and Sinners Reconciled
Welcome back! Thanks for the awesome chapter! :D
Reviewer: IslandWoman221 (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2009 09:10 PM · On: Chapter 17 - God and Sinners Reconciled
Holy moley HOTNESS!!!
Christmas came early this year for the rest of us! *mwhaaha*
So glad you're back, that was certainly worth the wait. Lovely over all. Fabs details and character interation! I knew I missed ya for a reason!!
;D
Thanks for writing!!!
Reviewer: NKubie (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2009 08:27 PM · On: Chapter 17 - God and Sinners Reconciled
I love it when Edward finally lets loose.
Reviewer: Niphai (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2009 09:58 AM · On: Chapter 17 - God and Sinners Reconciled
Great chapter, as always!
I'm glad you're back <3
Reviewer: sconnolly318 (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2009 07:11 AM · On: Chapter 17 - God and Sinners Reconciled
Awesome, and HOT, as always! :-)
Reviewer: mommakat (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2009 04:02 PM · On: Chapter 17 - God and Sinners Reconciled
Thank you so much for sharing your story inspite of whatever real life throws at you. Please know that your story is worth waiting for:)
Reviewer: JennB21 (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2009 02:46 PM · On: Chapter 17 - God and Sinners Reconciled
I hope you're feeling better! Thank you for the great chapter :)
Reviewer: twilightedgurl22 (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2009 10:18 AM · On: Chapter 17 - God and Sinners Reconciled
love it update soon please
Reviewer: salem2004 (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2009 01:32 AM · On: Chapter 11- Burning
Glad thats over. Hope she knows Edward when she opens her eyes:) I love the story:)
Reviewer: jia (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2009 08:16 PM · On: Chapter 3- Here Comes the Bride...
i luvd it!!!....its grt!!
Reviewer: AppLeOfMyyEyee93 (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2009 04:07 PM · On: Chapter 17 - God and Sinners Reconciled
"I leaned back on my eyebrows" May want to fix that. I am pretty sure you meant to say elbows, but I definitely laughed at the error. I am so glad that you did not leave this story. I love it so much and I would be so sad if you had stopped updating. I can't wait for the next installment! <3
Reviewer: well thats me (Anonymous) · Date: November 16, 2009 03:19 PM · On: Chapter 17 - God and Sinners Reconciled
really like how you wrote this story!!!!!!
wtm
Reviewer: wingd writer (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2009 03:19 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Vile
its not "I've ashamed you".... It would be: " I am ashamed of myself" or "I have shamed myself" or "I have brought shame upon myself" or simply " I have let everyone down, Carlisle!"
I am really not one for constructive criticism but I had to re-read that several times.
I am really having fun reading your story. Bella is doing well, just more believably not so well. I personally would have drained them!
Thanks for the great writing!
Reviewer: mrsjjjcullen (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2009 12:09 PM · On: Chapter 17 - God and Sinners Reconciled
WOW!!! i sooooooooooooo loved that ... whew, i think i need a cigarette after reading that one - it was sooooooooo worth the wait :)
Reviewer: xtothey (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2009 11:58 AM · On: Chapter 17 - God and Sinners Reconciled
That was hott!!
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2009 09:26 AM · On: Chapter 17 - God and Sinners Reconciled
Mind numb no but I need a shower a cold shower! Naughty naugty! LMAO Great chapter can't waitto see how you have thinsg play out next! Will Bella get her shield back?Will they have Italy to deal with? So many questions Post again soon!!!
Reviewer: wingd writer (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2009 08:22 AM · On: Chapter 11- Burning
Your the first person to write about the body fluids. I wondered about that.
Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2009 04:21 AM · On: Chapter 4- Fire and Ice
Ok, am I the only woman on the planet who didn't have an orgasm for weeks after my first time? It hurt like hell!
Every story I've read always mentions the pain subsiding enough to eventually end in an amazing orgasm.
Author's Response: LOL No, you're probably not, but I've never done it so I don't know =( I went by what i read elsewhere. I'm taking your advice....
Reviewer: Disneyvampire (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2009 01:19 AM · On: Chapter 17 - God and Sinners Reconciled
Oh, forgot to add, be happy you quit smoking so young, I smoked for 26 years and quit when I met my hubby. It was the best thihg I ever did for my health. You will be so much happier not smoking. It is so bad for you. The lung infection may have been a not so gentle nudge that you needed to quit. A lung infection is no joke and smoking will only make your lungs weaker. So I say...Good for you for quitting the cigs! You are going to be happier and healthier for a long time!
Disney Vampire
Reviewer: Disneyvampire (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2009 01:13 AM · On: Chapter 17 - God and Sinners Reconciled
I don't hate you! Life happens!
Welcome back! I am glad to see you and a new chapter for one of my favorite stories here. I am happy to see you return. Great chapter.
Isn't it too bad ALL guys can't be like Edward or Jacob? I am sorry you got jerked around, went through a bit of that myself in my younger days. I married my guardian angel. When I say he is like Edward, I am not kidding. He is the perfect gentleman and just wonderful. It took me until I was 41 to meet him, so don't worry about the jerks, there is someone out there who will NOT jerk you around and who will treat you like a queen!
I am glad to hear that you are feeling better from your illness. It is no fun being sick. I hope you continue to thrive. Felling better physically always makes you feel better mentally and emotionally as well.
Thanks for coming back and updating with a new chapter! We love it and we love you! We could never be mad at you, unless you didn't finish this wonderful story! Then I might growl like Jacob right before he phases or when Edward reads a guy's mind who is having naughty thoughts about Bella. I might growl like that if you did not finish this story, but you came back and I am so happy I am purring! YOU ROCK and ROLL!
Disney Vampire
Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2009 11:33 PM · On: Chapter 17 - God and Sinners Reconciled
Some parts were really funny. I like funny so thanks.
The gifts were pretty awesome, but I think we can all agree that Bella's was the best.
Sorry about RL. I'm glad the jerk is gone! And hey, think about all the money you saved from not having to buy cigarettes!
Reviewer: Fleuritup (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2009 11:09 PM · On: Chapter 6- Mrs. Edward Cullen: Part II
sorry i didnt even get to point out some things, im really loving jaspers participation in this story i know his history with bella but the fact that he is around her more is nice because it seems like his way of showing he loves her even if he is always having to calm her. and what was edward and emmet fighting over in the garage, im not sure if i missed it.
so they got a 2 day honeymoon that surprised me i thought theyd have more time together but hey they can always have some alaskan lovin. so about the house that was bought for them, is it in alaska or is it in forks? and i think its sweet that edward started driving slower with bella because he wanted to spend time with her i mean she is his wife and they have been surrounded by people since a few hours after their wedding night. will they get some alone time together. i really want to see them bond and i dont just mean sex, i may be a perv for edward but i can control myself. edward deserves some happiness and so far its been nothing but stress from his wife.
Reviewer: Fleuritup (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2009 10:57 PM · On: Chapter 6- Mrs. Edward Cullen: Part II
wow bella is getting to be too much, she doesnt seem like the bella that is devoted to edward she is seriously stressing me out with all of this nonsense and i dont know why his family is all comforting her, hopefully the next chapter bella has some damn sense knocked into her. he apologized for his words, he only regretting hurting her when he made love to her not regretting making love to her alltogether. and for bella seeing how much pain shes inflicting on edward youd think she'd show some compassion. i'll check out the next chapter tomorrow and if shes still acting like an idiot there then i'll just say the story started off well enough until bella's idiotic notions took over. and check to see if you've written something else.
Reviewer: Fleuritup (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2009 10:40 PM · On: Chapter 6- Mrs. Edward Cullen: Part I
wow, not my favorite chapter, bella is so ridiculous in this chapter, it was quite annoying, is she pregnant i was wondering that from last chapter when she was yelling at edward but she gets soooo emotional and seriously overreacts, and then his family shooting him daggers if alice saw their argument she would see that it was a misunderstanding, i hate it when all the cullens side with bella, that girl gets herself into these situations. she has cried sooo much that im wondering where's dr. phil get her some help. oh well i hope things will turn around in the next chapter but i honestly hope everyones not getting in edwards face because bella is so thickheaded and always misinterprets things.
Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2009 10:17 PM · On: Chapter 17 - God and Sinners Reconciled
WOMAN, WOMAN, WOMAN....
Jesus. Where the hell do I begin?
First, THANK YOU so much for honoring me with your shout-out to me. Seriously Love, my cup runneth over. Sigh...
Now....
HOT. DAMN. Our Edward has found his inner beast, and what a beast it is!
And yet, amidst all the heat, behind all the hunger, and beneath all the explosive want, ran a deep need for love and reverence. I felt that Edward's entire reluctance and fear to give into Bella's teasing and coaxing, was very much in line with our canon Edward.
Edward's first and foremost purpose was his need to protect his Bella from anything and everything that could ever harm her, including his very self. The mere idea of being rough or ungentlemanly with his beloved wife was, I believe, an unfathomable notion in that he would never allow himself even the fantasy of it, fearing that said fantasy could intrude into reality and lead Bella to be harmed.
I love that Bella recognized this fear and so bravely helped her Edward reveal the beast within him that she so desperately craved, and he so badly needed discovered.
It was a delicious and all-consuming meeting: seductive and naughty Bella met possessive and lustful Edward. The earth stopped spinning on it's axis, nirvana achieved.
Nirvana indeed!!!
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