I really like your story and i hope youll keep going with it. how horrible would it be if bella never forgave edward?! ive read a bunch of other stories and i like yours the best because it sounds like something that would be published and not just some lame, dumb story. its also good because you got the characters so well and it sounds like them. thanks for putting in the time and submitting it and i cant wait to read more! 

Please dont leave us hanging.  Great story..

i love and hate this story...love more though!!! :))))) i just cant believe whats happening!! i really hope edward shapes up!!!! and bella tooooo!!!!!! i dont really know if 10 or 1? is the lowest or highest but know that i mean it to be super!!

 two thumbs way up??

p.s. will things get better? i cant stand anymore heartbreak from bella about edward!

ARGH!  I'm desperate to read more!  This is a great story, I'm really really loving it.  Another chapter asap, pretty please? 

This is a good story and you stayed with most of the basics. The things I like about this story is that you didnt copy the scene out of the book you did your own thing but still kept the charactors personality (Emmett was well described). Even cliff hangers to keep you wanting to kepp reading. I give you a 10. :-)

The last two chapters were absolutely amazing! The story started out sweet and fluffy, chapter 4 was hotter and lemony but in chapter 5 wer'e back to sweet and funny - and then suddenly, out of nowhere, you create this intense, ripping drama and angst between Bella and Edward! It was awesome, didn't see that one coming. Your writing is excellent, the hurt and despair and pain is just pouring from the text. Edward really went over the edge this time and my heart bleeds for Bella. Still I like that she is not immediately ready to forget and forgive just because he said "sorry", this time he will have to take a good look at his over-reacting and try to make amends.

Looking very much forward to more chapters, update soon!

HOLY CROW THAT WAS AWESOME!!! You really need to do the next chapter!!!!

LOVE the way the siblings take her in - if only her pigheadedness would allow her to see it!  Glad to see Bella didn't just take his half assed "I am in pain, fix me" apology.  Now, get to the next chapter!!! LOL!!

This story just gets better and better. I just wished I had such sister like Bella has in Rose and Alice.

I'm looking forward to read more.

My level of anxiety regarding this story is nothing short of ridiculous.  For the love of all things good, please have them make up soon so that my mind can be at peace.

Also, this story is freakin' awesome. 

Wow...this story brings such intensity.  I am truly loving it.  I want to slap Edward for being such an a-hole, but truly, wow, the writing is amazing and the plotline is fantastic.  Keep up the good work!

Damnit WOMAN! That was freakin' amazing! I love how tortured Edward is at the moment. He completely deserves it. And I feel so incredibly pained for our poor Bella. What more can Edward expect from her? But we should all remember that Edward did truly want Bella as she wanted him. It was just his panic at the thought that he had caused Bella more pain than she had let on that caused him to lash out at her. I truly hope that in the following chapters, Edward will remember in detail how while Bella did wince in pain on the wedding night, that pain soon subsided and became her ultimate (and by extension his as well) pleasure. Please post more asap! By the way, this chapter would be amazing as an EPOV! Just food for thought!

Author's Response:

ah you have no idea...the food for thought comment, that is...

 

mine...at long last  (epov) is in the works. theres about 3 more posts here, and then EPOV....JUST WAIT lol

 

he hasnt forgotten. he's just being Edward. When he realizes, everything will fall into place. It always does

Holy crap!  Bella grew some balls!  I like that she put him in his place, Mr. Melodramatic needs to catch a clue.  I am looking forward to seeing how you have the characters resolve this and am beggin you for a quick update!!!!!!!!