Incredible chapter, all four parts of chapter 6 were totally intense and spellbinding. The crisis also came totally out of the blue, after the fluffy wedding and the seriously erotic wedding night this immense angst suddenly burst out and just because of a few angry words. Have to say that both Edward and Bella over-reacted badly though, Edward due to his over-protectiveness and general self-loathing and Bella due to her self-esteem and insecurity issues. They were very near a fatal crisis with no turning back, hopefully they will now be able to somehow work out their differences.

Having said that, I still think they should have another go at it before Bella is changed (believe I wrote so in my review for chapter 4 already!). Both need a better memory to think bank to and as they say, practice makes perfect!

How far are you planning on taking this story, will it end with Bella's change or will you go on from there? Love your writing skills so would much like to read more.

This is a GREAT story!!!!! You should finish it so that I can read what happens!!!

Such an excellent story! So very much better the BD! Love the drama!

i like this edward now.

much much much much MUCH better than last chapter! i thought i was going to have to live through at least another chapter of it.

update soon!

That was a big scare I thought Bella was being changed, that she really had died, I'm glad she's still human, for now. Keep it coming, it's really good.

Awesome, awesome, awesome, OF COURSE. Omg, though, Edward like that was extremely painful. I'm a sucker for drama, though, so I loved it. I'm glad everything is resolved and I hope that they can have some fun now :)

Awesome!!!

OK, I am still loving this story, but (as usual and in canon) Bella pisses me off.  She was so close to being strong and having an honest conversation with him and then she sees his pain, blah blah blah...  Good grief!!  Just tell him he is an asshole and that he needs to stop it!!  They get close, but then *just* miss the line.  Tell him you are a big girl and took care of yourself all on your own for 17 years before he showed up.  You took care of your mother and then you were playing housekeeper for yoru father... HELLO BELLA!!!  Wake up and smell the independance!! 

OK, I think I have vented my Bella Frustration on you long enough... LOL!  

I think you have done beautifully and kept so cleanly within the Bella/Edward minds.

Woooooohooooo!  Now I'm crying happy tears.  What a rollercoaster ride!!! 

W.O.W. That could not have been written any better. Edward breaking the furniture and scaring Bella into a panic attack was perfect. The entire family's yelling at Edward was also...perfect. I'm sorry. I can't think of another word to describe my praise for your writing. Please continue on with this. I truly hope we get to see Bella & Edward make love at least once again before her transformation. Just to put any doubts or fears to rest. I know you're going to do the transforation and changing of Bella right? And the after scenes too right? I don't think I can handle you not! Please post more asap!

Wonderful and heartfelt....I feel all mushy...must go kiss my hubby....lol!  I am hoping that they have a least one session of make up sex so she can prove to him that he can make her feel wonderful and so that he can prove to her that it is great for him too.  I think they need that before moving on.....besides you know its fun to write lemons!

I wanted to finish your story before I said anything. It is absolutely amazing. I love how you wrote the wedding night. It was so tastfully done. It was perfect. Please post more chapters soon.