Reviewer: professormoody (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2008 09:30 PM · On: Chapter 8- Welcome Home
Hooray! Finally he let loose, look forward to the next chapter
Reviewer: crystalstars88 (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2008 09:15 PM · On: Chapter 8- Welcome Home
Hold on a sec. *hurriedly runs off to change panties* Okay I'm back. That was freaking HOT! The sex that just took place in my mind was hotter than any visual stimuli. And your writing did that to me. I love how you made it such an emotionally beautiful experience. When Bella had tears streaming down her cheeks, my traitorous eyes grew moist. You took this out of the technical term of 'intercourse' and really transported it into 'making love'.
I was pissed at Edward in the beginning for getting excited over the piano and not Bella. I wanted to reach through the screen and shake him (like Bella probably). I'm glad we found out what went on his head. And the mental image of his fist through the radio made me smile. How Emmett-like. It's actually a turn on to see Edward be aggressive and dominant, and not such a polite gentlemen all the time. Perhaps they will become that way in the bedroom too;) Awesome chapter. You have made my day-this is the reason I come to Twilighted.
Reviewer: lrynmjv (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2008 09:09 PM · On: Chapter 8- Welcome Home
Wow, that was hot. I wish my husband was home right now. I am glad to see Edward got a little rough.... I can't wait to read what happens next.
Reviewer: twilighter11 (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2008 08:57 PM · On: Chapter 3- Here Comes the Bride...
This is a great story...it is great how well you capture edward and bella's love for each other. I especially love edward's eyes!
Reviewer: Twilightlvr (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2008 08:45 PM · On: Chapter 8- Welcome Home
It's about time that boy came to his senses! Wow, romantic, hot chapter. Again, great job of capturing the newness of physical love for Bella. Thought you wrote it beautifully. Really liked how Jasper whispered to Bella how much Edward missed her. I'm hoping that you will soon have him change her. I'm curios to read your take on that. Great chapter!
Reviewer: historicvampirelover (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2008 08:34 PM · On: Chapter 8- Welcome Home
Yay! Now what would Renee have to say about THAT!
Now that he's all done being angsty, let's get to the change!
Reviewer: sillyinfatuation (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2008 05:59 PM · On: Chapter 7- Two Days Grace and Salvation
It's. SO. Gooooood.
You must update right now. I have got to see what happens next.
Reviewer: Twilight_Fanatic123 (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2008 11:52 AM · On: Chapter 7- Two Days Grace and Salvation
So... yeah... I'm dying to know what exactly is going to happen now ;-) I mean, either they're going to have sex or they're not. But it'll be interesting to see just how much things have changed now. I can't wait!
Reviewer: Usagi-chan (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2008 03:37 AM · On: Chapter 7- Two Days Grace and Salvation
Come on Edward! Stop being a prude and give in to your woman. You know you want to!
Reviewer: RMCC (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2008 01:06 AM · On: Chapter 7- Two Days Grace and Salvation
I love this story so very much. It's my very favorite story at the moment. It sounds like you already have chapter 8 ready, so you have no excuse for a long, drawn out torture this time...
Reviewer: Miss Poison (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2008 09:05 PM · On: Chapter 7- Two Days Grace and Salvation
This is very well written.
Reviewer: IntoTheTwilight (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2008 07:47 PM · On: Chapter 7- Two Days Grace and Salvation
Thank you so much for a great chapter! I am hardcore looking forward to the next :) I have a feeling you have a lot of fun in store for us... or maybe Edward is going to mess up again.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2008 06:36 PM · On: Chapter 7- Two Days Grace and Salvation
I can't wait for him to get home. I am excited for the possibilities! Great update!
Reviewer: kmartinez (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2008 06:08 PM · On: Chapter 7- Two Days Grace and Salvation
I love this story, i'm always looking forward to your updates.
Reviewer: dazzledbride (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2008 05:17 PM · On: Chapter 7- Two Days Grace and Salvation
Love love LOVE it!
Reviewer: Laura Cullen (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2008 03:32 PM · On: Chapter 7- Two Days Grace and Salvation
Bella should get mad and tell him she's going to kick his ass after she's changed. I'd love to see a vampire fight scene between them where she shows him she's not fragile anymore!
Reviewer: missjanelle (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2008 02:42 PM · On: Chapter 7- Two Days Grace and Salvation
oh, i was so excited to see this updated!
i want more! please tell me you will update soon!
Reviewer: jemm101 (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2008 12:25 PM · On: Chapter 7- Two Days Grace and Salvation
I was so so freaked out when you told us a couple weeks ago you weren't going to update the story for like SIX FREAKIN MONTHS!!! Thanks for the update - it was fabulous! Please write more! Love ya
Reviewer: lrynmjv (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2008 11:33 AM · On: Chapter 7- Two Days Grace and Salvation
I just started reading this today, and I love it!! When wil Edward and Bella be together again? When will Bella be changed? Keep up the good work!!
Reviewer: sherilynn (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2008 10:01 AM · On: Chapter 7- Two Days Grace and Salvation
Thanks for the update. Cant wait for the next one.
Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2008 09:22 AM · On: Chapter 7- Two Days Grace and Salvation
That ending was just PURE TORTURE. And yet, perfect! I absolutely cannot wait to read when the boys come home. It would be amazing if their homecoming could be from EPOV's. This is the first time he comes home with the other men to be not alone in his room, not alone amongst the other men who have their wives to welcome them with open arms, but now for the first time he has his Bella anxiously waiting for him. This should be pure bliss for our beloved Edward. And I know that you'll deliver nothing less than heaven for our B&E. You always do! Please post asap! I can't wait to read about their reunion!
Reviewer: bga1974 (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2008 09:05 AM · On: Chapter 7- Two Days Grace and Salvation
Great. I can't wait for more. Please tell me he missed her too !!! Poor frustrated Bella.
Reviewer: JLBMOctober (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2008 09:04 AM · On: Chapter 1- Preparations
I was going through withdrawl...thank goodness you updated! :) I laughed hysterically when Renee asked if Edward were gay...I'm sure Emmett and Rose wondered a bit, too, at one point! Ha. Great job. :)
Reviewer: twilightjie (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2008 08:55 AM · On: Chapter 7- Two Days Grace and Salvation
i love this chapter. how they waited for their husbands :) and the sex conversations with renee were too funny.
Reviewer: Twilight_Fanatic123 (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2008 04:32 PM · On: Chapter 6- Mrs. Edward Cullen: Part IV
Okay... I officially LOVE this story! I check back everyday to see if there's any updates. I don't know how fast you write, but please - for my sanity! - update soon! I want to know what happens next!
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