Reviewer: Miss Poison (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2008 06:03 PM · On: Chapter 10- Decision
This was an amazing chapter.
Reviewer: lolly3 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2008 05:26 PM · On: Chapter 10- Decision
Awesome chapter!!
Reviewer: Twilightlvr (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2008 04:51 PM · On: Chapter 10- Decision
Happy Holidays to you too! And what a nice, belated Christmas present this lastest chapter is. I found it to be very moving and powerful. Loved their playfulness in the beginning of the chapter. Also loved how Edward confessed to her that he's afraid she will try to leave him when she is a newborn and how he will never let her go. Heavy sigh... And the goodbye with Rosalee, very sweet. Really liked their little speech to each other about their hearts, it was very touching. I enjoy your writing and really feel the dephth of emotion you put into each chapter. Looking forward to your next update.
Reviewer: verlore (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2008 04:42 PM · On: Chapter 1- Preparations
Reviewer: bga1974 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2008 03:49 PM · On: Chapter 10- Decision
Wonderful chapter. I can't wait to read more. Give us some more soon. Happy Holidays.
Reviewer: Jada (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2008 03:47 PM · On: Chapter 10- Decision
This is truly amazing. I cried. I only wish this is what Breaking Dawn had been. You have such a nack for writing SM's characters, only making them more real, somehow. Cannot wait for the next part.
Reviewer: littlemissy1503 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2008 03:34 PM · On: Chapter 10- Decision
this chapter was so moving it made me cry. really can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: Laura Cullen (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2008 03:30 PM · On: Chapter 9- Warmed By the Fire
Yum-my! Me likes this new Edward!
Reviewer: CullenLove (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2008 02:49 AM · On: Chapter 9- Warmed By the Fire
Hottest fucking thing I've ever read. And I've read tonnes of lemons.
Reviewer: The Wicked One (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2008 09:57 AM · On: Chapter 9- Warmed By the Fire
This is wonderful. I can't wait to read more...
so when are you gonna make her one of him
Reviewer: Usagi-chan (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2008 04:26 AM · On: Chapter 9- Warmed By the Fire
Wow. I... Wow... That was amazing. Just... wow.
Reviewer: kmartinez (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2008 07:57 PM · On: Chapter 1- Preparations
This is my favorite story, I can't wait for another update
Reviewer: Morrigan728 (Anonymous) · Date: December 19, 2008 06:01 PM · On: Chapter 9- Warmed By the Fire
Just a few, short, simple words...
HELLS. YEAH.
Fucking A was THAT a way to start my day today!! I had an early meeting at work and when I get back to my office, I hit my iPhone for a little love and A WHOLE LOTTA LOVE is what I get....
HELL YEAH!!! I love this side of Edward!!! Sin me up baby, let me go to hell with you!
Reviewer: Butterfly114 (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2008 05:00 PM · On: Chapter 9- Warmed By the Fire
oh nooo that's it!!!???
Reviewer: Butterfly114 (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2008 04:59 PM · On: Chapter 9- Warmed By the Fire
oh my goodness.......what are you doing to me?? making a fictional character more and more appealing hahah
Reviewer: CNB123 (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2008 12:21 PM · On: Chapter 9- Warmed By the Fire
Ummm amazingly well done. I certainly hope you do other chapters. I joined on here just to review your work.
Reviewer: Butterfly114 (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2008 11:57 AM · On: Chapter 4- Fire and Ice
i registered just so i can tell you that you did SUCH a good job here. I'm 25 and i loved Breaking Dawn i understand the need for stephanie meyer to make the honeymoon PG rated. but it left me feeling like the huge build up was for nothing...it's hard for me to say that without sounding like a huge perv though. you did a wonderfull job i will definatly keep reading your work seeing as stephanie may not be providing us with anymore Cullen love. thankyou for filling the void.
Reviewer: JingleBells (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2008 10:33 AM · On: Chapter 9- Warmed By the Fire
Holy crow! I think I need to go take a cold shower, ASAP! :)
Love your story -- great job on these last few chapters especially!!!
Reviewer: goddess1871 (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2008 10:26 AM · On: Chapter 1- Preparations
This is such a wonderful story! You hit everything...lust, sex, and the lovemaking scenes are what I think we all want from life. Terrific work. Looking forward to reading more from you!
Reviewer: Twilight_Fanatic123 (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2008 10:13 AM · On: Chapter 9- Warmed By the Fire
Me likey this new side of Edward. I was seriously getting major hot flashes the entire time I was reading this chapter. H-O-T!
Reviewer: bga1974 (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2008 07:37 AM · On: Chapter 9- Warmed By the Fire
WOW !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Super good stuff. Keep up the great work. I can't wait to see what you come up with after her change.
Reviewer: JennaLCullen (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2008 07:28 AM · On: Chapter 9- Warmed By the Fire
All I can say is WOW!!! I loved it!!
Reviewer: catvet1999 (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2008 05:08 AM · On: Chapter 9- Warmed By the Fire
Ok, that was way hot!!!
Reviewer: Sophiegirl (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2008 04:49 AM · On: Chapter 9- Warmed By the Fire
I am thinking that cahpter was so HOT!!!! It certainly "woke me up" this morning when I read it!! Damn
Reviewer: Hannah (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2008 03:07 AM · On: Chapter 9- Warmed By the Fire
oh my god. that was....so good. my new favorite of all time. perfect.
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