You did top it, but I still read the other chapter.. I mean.. I have read it.. at least three times now....... cuz its just so DAMN HOT LADY!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and this chapter.. I actually teared up.. I don't often do that when reading anything... and I did.

 

I am going to be truly blown away by your next chapters. I know it. I have been from chapter one of this story. You have a gift with words and I thank you for sharing your story with me.

 

HOLY BANANANANANANANANANANAAAASSSSS!!!!!!!! 

(that's the excited version of bananas)

I'm so favoriting this story. Can't wait for you to update =D 

Wow great chapter. really  enjoyed the flow of it! can't wait for more.

yes, definitely another explosive chapter! can't wait to read the next one.

HEAVEN. BLISS. ECTASY. RAPTURE!


Dear Woman, thank you, thank you, thank you. I am stunned and utterly numb after reading what is undoubtedly the most amazing and heart stopping “transformation” scene I have ever read (off Canon). My tears are still drying on my damp cheeks, as they flowed so freely and effortlessly at the gravity (I love your use of that word in chapter 12) of your writing. Sobbing through your poetry, each tear of mine celebrated your every line and your every revelation.


“I want to die and be reborn in your arms, Edward.” Sweet Lord! What perfection in such words! Bella’s very thought of this is not only completely true to her very character (as created by S. Meyer), but it itself serves as the very epitome of their relationship. From the first moment Bella fell in love with Edward, this very need of hers has resonated in her being and has given her the strength to endure every heartbreak, every anguish, and every fear she has had since first laying eyes on him in that blessed cafeteria. And to have her voice such a conviction and determination in her attempt to finally convince Edward of her decision is the proof of your bravado and skill as a writer.


I love how it all played out so romantically and emotionally. As it would have! Hearing Edward confess his fears of her newborn state was completely hear breaking. And so beautiful. SO BEAUTIFUL.


And as to the moments she shared with Emmett, Esme, & Rosalie….what sweet closure you gave them. Especially Rosalie. Not only was it eye opening, but also it was also profound. After she had helped Bella through her “five panic attacks”, Rose & Bella’s relationship would’ve naturally developed into something more sisterly. And what you managed to so wonderfully achieve was to solidify Rose’s character into one of less resentment and one of more appreciation and love. And that is one mighty accomplishment!


The “ipod” scene was very much appreciated by myself, too. It served as a great moment of levity for our B&E, and for your audience as well. It gave my tears a chance to dry before spilling out mercilessly at the moment of Edward biting Bella. “I love you, Isabella Marie Cullen,” he whispered so soft, dripping with love and emotion. “I love you, Edward Anthony Masen Cullen…more than my own life.” Such beauty in such simple words. And yet, they encompass so much, so very much.


And now, as I’ve managed to calm my sobs, as my tears have dried enough for me to want to go back and re-read your latest masterpiece, I wait in complete and utter SUSPENSE for your next chapter. I pray you give our beloved B&E the righteousness that these next moments in their lives will demand. But I know that my prayers are not necessary. With your all-enthralling inspiration, you will most certainly not fail them. Or us. It’s just impossible.


Write away, my Dear! Our B&E are awaiting their Heaven! And so are we!

This was a seriously epic chapter.  You captured so much emotion between the entire family.  It was gripping.  Poor Edward, having to endure her pain.  It will be horrible for him.  It broke my heart when he confessed his fears about Bella not wanting him once she's a vampire.  God, I love Edward Cullen so freaking much.  Excellent chapter.  Simply excellent.

I hope you had very nice white Christmas. Thank you for this chapter it was incredible, wow, you can really write down emotions. I was almost crying, I must accept my eyes are kind of wet still. You really did an excellent job explaining why Bella was so sure of her decision, and how hard it was for Edward. Also how everyone else felt about it. it was very nice to see that Rosalie wasn't upset with Bella but there for here. The rest of the family of course was going to be there.

I can't wait to see how the changing goes and what happens next. So please update soon. And again congratulations on an excellent chapter.

Wow... that was beyond intense. Holy crow.... I'm anxious for the next chapter. Waiting on the edge of my seat, even.

This chapter was very good. You showed the emotion very well. :)

Sniffle!  That was an awesome chapter the first one I have read since the holiday!  Thank you so much your skills are above and beyond.  i Lovethis story thank you for the chapter and hope you post again soon happy new Year if you don't post before it!!

can't wait for the next update.

Well hot damn! That was amazing!

wow..I can't wait for the next chapter!