Amazing!!! Can't wait for the next chapter, you are uberly talented!!!

I want more! I got used to your chapters being longer (spoiled, I guess). I can't wait for you next installment.

THANK YOU!!!  LOVE that you used Jasper to try and help her through this!  I always wondered why the hell no one had thought of that in the original.... I mean, SERIOUSLY!  He has the ability to push emotions and change feelings - why WOULDN'T he be there for her change?!?!?  I can't say that the chapter was enjoyable, because of the topic, but what other word do you use for something that you enjoyed?  Well done, can't wait for the next one!

um...also?  looking VERY forward to Edward and vampire Bella lemons!!

Outstanding...absolutely outstanding!

I am starting to suspect you are Stephanie Meyer. Because I feel like I am reading what I expected her to write in Breaking Dawn, after reading Eclipse. But I doubt she would write the same mind-blowing smut, since she prefers fade-to-black non-sex scenes.

It really tugged at my heart, and I wished I could take some of her pain away. And Edward beng unable to stop drinking Bella's blood sounds alot more realistic than the ridiculously easy way he stopped himself at the end of Twilight. And you again bring realism to Bella's change by referring to her expulsion of bodily fluids/waste as it is replaced with venom. I always wondered about that when reading the books.

It will be interesting to see what you bring to vampire Bella. Will she find it perfect and easy like in Breaking Dawn? Somehow I think her road will be paved with temptation and angst;) I can't wait to see how you write Vampire Bella. We already know she'll be beautiful. But what will Edward's reaction to her be? Will he be guilt-ridden over almost killing her, and also turning her into a vamp? The fact that he didn't change Bella to save her life, but chose to change her when she was perfectly healthy will probably take a toll. Or will he love how strong and durable his wife is?

Whatever direction you take this, I will support you. Because you're writing is so amazing and consistent. You could probably write about a trash bag a make it interesting and engaging to the reader;)

This was AMAZING - I felt as though I were right there. The intensity as she suffered through the pain when she realized she ahd "forgotten him" and chose the pain and the burning to remember him - to stay connected.

I also really felt Edward's torture. His momentary inability to stop, her pain which I am sure brought back HIS pain of change, (all of his nightmares staring him down). And understanding how this was truly more intimate between them than making love had been - She turned herself over completely to him and her new family.

Very powerful, and brilliantly written! Can't wait until she is awake - and wonder if so much preparation will help her to be stong (like the final book!)

Bravo!!!!!

 

Your Proudest "shrink" xoxoxo

well if there's an Eddie on top...

 

 

That was AMAZING. You've written some of the hottest lemons...Ever...and this chapter broke my heart. I started tearing up a little bit when she was forgetting Edward. I guess I just want to believe that her love for him is so strong that she couldn't forget him. I guess the one thing I liked about Breaking Dawn was that she skipped bloodlust and still LOVED Edward. I hope that she doesn't forget him. 

This story is amazing =]

Wow, wow, wow, it was painful, filled with angst, love, tears, screams, fear, and this was just Bella's point of view, imagine if we could hear what Jasper went through.

Congratulations, you really did a great job here, I can't say it is my favorite chapter but it is very very good. Can't wait to what's coming next, how will she wake up to her new life and get used to it.

update soon please :)

That was chilling.

Fabulous, just fabulous!

AWESOME, AWESOME, AWESOME Story. I love it.

I don't know what to say. I truly don't know what to say.

As I calm my trembling hands, wipe away my tears as they trickle down my shivering cheeks, and as I calm my nervous breathing, I try oh so desperately to find the words that can, even if the most minimal form, convey just what I'm feeling...what this chapter has done to me....and how I sit here, still in my stunned and moved state.

Let me begin with saying that when I saw that you had updated, my heart literally jumped in my chest and my breathing came to a shocking stop. As I opened the link to your new chapter, I began to scroll down, ever so, so slowly, as I knew in my heart that I was about to experience something amazing and devastating.

With each passing word, with each tremor that shook my core, I kept retreating to a place in my mind where I actually became Bella. All of sudden, I wasn't reading a story. No. I was IN one. My heart burned with Bella, my nerves writhed in unison with her, and my mind gasped in harmony with her panic, her desperation, and her agony. The last time I remember living such an experience was when I first read "New Moon", and came upon the scene where Bella jumped off the cliff, and surrendered her broken heart to the water that engulfed her, freeing her from the pain of being without her Edward. And so here I sit, reliving such a humbling experience.

My dear, you write with utter divinity. And it breaks my heart, over and over. Oh, how I love it.

Bella's agony is so amazingly vivid and true to what S, Meyer herself created in "BD", that my mind stumbles in the need to form a coherent sentence to best celebrate this chapter's every word. I don't even bother to think that you can't exceed your accomplishment in your previous chapters. I never stop and wonder if it's going to be anywhere near as good as the others. Because I KNOW your writing now. I know that it's goodness is constant and unfaltering. And I'm so happy to be right.

Our beloved Edward was the most heart-breaking of all. The image alone of him rocking himself in the horror of almost having killed his Bella is an image that I neither expected nor imagined. I loved it. His weakness is his strength. His undying need for Bella, blood, body, and soul, are the anchors of his existance. And it is how he marries these anchors that his strength and consummation for all that is Bella thrives and burns. His sobbing and agony are directly linked with hers. He and his Bella are joined not only in their love, but also in eachother's anguish. His relief at her recognition of him was stunning. Wonderful.

Oh, how I loved their words to eachother. So reassuring, so desperate, so consuming. That is the essence of our B&E that lives in every word you write.

Epic is what it is, dear. Pure, unadulerated, epic glory.

My still trembling hands applaud you.

And now I retun to "Burning". I need to re-read this. I have no choice. It beckons my heart to another standstill. Oh, how I love it.