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Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2011 06:42 PM · On: Chapter 5
Oh, only one bed! Poor Edward is going to have a bad back if he has to sleep on the couch for a few weeks!
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2011 04:35 PM · On: Chapter 4
I feel sorry for Bella's roommates now! So many opportunities to catch the man in a towel gone! At least she has him to herself now! I know, she's not thrilled...yet!
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2011 03:06 PM · On: Chapter 3
Hmm, what will the roommates think? And where would he sleep? And will they develop a cover story? And is she even going to allow it!
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2011 02:51 PM · On: Chapter 2
Not what I was expecting at all! I'm pleasantly surprised! I thought this was going to be a fluff piece-not that I don't love me some fluff-but I love a thoughtful and suspenseful story even more!
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2011 01:36 PM · On: Chapter 1
And she's embarrassed? I think Edward should be the one with the red face, but I'm sure he will be haughty instead! Apparently not a chip off the old block!
Reviewer: oplok71 (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2011 09:18 AM · On: Chapter 9
oh no!! i was so happy to be reading someone's work who lives in the same state as i do and work in dc as well...but good luck on your move and looking forward to the next chapter.
Reviewer: Cina24 (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2011 07:37 AM · On: Chapter 9
Loved it thanks for the update and happy new year to you and all
Reviewer: bellamina (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2011 03:47 PM · On: Chapter 9
Hi, I've just found this story and I think its great! It's got a really good storyline, and I can't wait to see what happens next :)
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2011 07:34 PM · On: Chapter 9
looking forward to more
Reviewer: Cina24 (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2010 03:41 PM · On: Chapter 8
Love it! Thanks for the update
Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 02:32 PM · On: Chapter 8
HOLY SHIT I SE NOW THAT BLACK DOESN"T HAVE A PROBLEM DISPOSING OF PEOPLE HE PRECIEVES AS A PROBLEM, I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER
Reviewer: Vette58Lover (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2010 01:21 PM · On: Chapter 8
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2010 07:58 PM · On: Chapter 8
This is an excellant story
Great job and writting
Reviewer: team rob (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2010 06:32 PM · On: Chapter 4
:)
Reviewer: pnkats (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2010 02:52 PM · On: Chapter 8
the suspense thickens. can't wait for more. please update soon
Reviewer: Cina24 (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2010 03:49 PM · On: Chapter 7
great chapter. thanks for the update.
Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2010 04:48 PM · On: Chapter 7
WOW VICTORIA HAS AN ATTITUDE AS USUAL AND TRIED TO PUT BELLA DOWN AT LEAST THIS BELLA IS QUICK ON HER FEET I GUESS THAT STEMS FROM WORKING IN POLITICS
Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2010 04:36 PM · On: Chapter 6
VERY NICE
Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2010 04:25 PM · On: Chapter 5
OMG NO PLEASE IT'S NICE THAT THEY GET TO KNOW EACH OTHER AND THAT HE KNOWS BELLA'S FRIENDS ALSO AND THAT THEY KEEP THEIR SNACKS IN THE SAME PLACE,
Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2010 04:11 PM · On: Chapter 4
GEEZE WHO COULD COMPLAIN HAVING TO STAY WITH EDWARD IT WOULD BE VERY HARD TO CONCENTRATE LET ALONE GET ANY SERIOUS KIND OF WORK DONE
Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2010 04:06 PM · On: Chapter 3
WELL DAMN I WANT EDWARD CULLEN TO FOLLOW ME AROUND 24 -7 AND I WON'T MIND A BIT I PROMISE
Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2010 09:11 PM · On: Chapter 2
LOST A CHILD NAMED ALICE COULD IT BE THE SAME ALICE ALSO NO WONDER EDWARD'S SO ARROGANT HE'S FBI
Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2010 09:06 PM · On: Chapter 1
Well Edward's a naughty little shit isn't he
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2010 12:50 PM · On: Chapter 7
Sounds like Bella and Edward's reaction at the meeting with Victoria has made an enemy of her. Not happy to lose Edward from her unit while he is protecting Bella who doesn't mean anything to Victoria. Just someone politically in trouble for snooping into things she shouldn't be into. Not a good impression, but both Edward and Bella found her attitude and lack of authority since Edward's assignment was authorized above her head without her prior knowledge. She's been added to the chain as a after thought. Now neither knows what the rest of their day is going to be like. looking forward to the next chapters.
Reviewer: oplok71 (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2010 07:29 AM · On: Chapter 1
that was cute. is victoria jealous of Bella...maybe she has the hots for Edward??? who doesn't though! hHAHAHAh
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