Reviewer: LovelyinLavender (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2008 04:02 PM · On: Chapter 2: Doing The Best I Can
I think this story has a lot of potential. Great start!
Reviewer: sarawthouttheh (Anonymous) · Date: November 17, 2008 11:34 AM · On: Chapter 2: Doing The Best I Can
This is amazing, I'm so hooked and it's already chapter 2. I can't wait for more!
Reviewer: wmlaw (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2008 11:22 AM · On: Chapter 2: Doing The Best I Can
Cute start!!
Reviewer: emeraldduck (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2008 09:45 AM · On: Chapter 2: Doing The Best I Can
I really like the beginning so far and think you both have a great start to the story. I just wanted to offer - I am a graduate student (teaching and research) assistant at OU working on my PhD. Fan fiction has always been my escape from the dredges of writing and researching. I'm not only at OU currently but I'm a Norman native. I don't know how much the two of you know about Norman or the University but if you have any research questions about it let me know and I will happily answer them. Restaurants, locations, policies on teaching at a a university, etc. Just shoot.
Author's Response: SWEET! I live in Oklahoma City, so I'm not hip on the Norman stuff. I'll definitely let you know if I need help!
Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2008 08:37 AM · On: Chapter 2: Doing The Best I Can
Ha! I love that Jessica and the rest are all on semi-permanent cockblock. *biggrin* There's nothing like kids to cut through all the crap and get right to the heart of things, huh? Bella, meet Uncle Eddie!
Reviewer: Twilight_Momma2three (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2008 08:30 AM · On: Chapter 2: Doing The Best I Can
love it! lilly so cute :)
Reviewer: TwilightFan104 (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2008 07:59 AM · On: Chapter 2: Doing The Best I Can
The whole classroom scene was too funny. I liked Edward being open about trying to fit in. Too funny that Jessica and Lauren were asking about dating him. Can't wait for E&B to talk to each other.
Reviewer: sandyk199 (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2008 07:03 AM · On: Chapter 1: But Not For Me
love it, just love it! more please!
Author's Response: more is coming soon! thanks for reading!
Reviewer: DeltaSwan90 (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2008 06:54 AM · On: Chapter 2: Doing The Best I Can
so. irritated. I can't believe you left us there! lol, this has the makings to be a super cute story! I would seriously like another chapter! and the last line of this chapter... brilliant. =)
Reviewer: hippiehippieshake (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2008 05:45 AM · On: Chapter 2: Doing The Best I Can
This is cute! When I first saw the summary of it, I was like woah! I go to OU, and it's weird seeing anything written about it. Very unexpected. I wish all of my teachers looked like Edward. :( Great story, can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: sarah-jess (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2008 03:02 AM · On: Chapter 2: Doing The Best I Can
hehe :) epov <3 awesome btw, needs more updates sooner! :P
Reviewer: sarah-jess (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2008 03:02 AM · On: Chapter 1: But Not For Me
hehe i love this story so far :) great job.
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you're enjoying it!
Reviewer: anuddaone (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2008 02:06 AM · On: Chapter 2: Doing The Best I Can
enjoying this so far... can't wait to read more
Reviewer: maggiecullen (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2008 12:48 AM · On: Chapter 2: Doing The Best I Can
So imagine you've just spent 7 hours wranglin six-year olds when "Uncle Eddie" is foisted upon you? You're not looking your freshest - hell, you may be splattered with paint - and in walks Adonis? Holy Moly! Wish he'd come walkin' into my job. Good start.
Reviewer: gordonfan74 (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2008 12:26 AM · On: Chapter 1: But Not For Me
Sorry, I thought I reviewed this story already. I think you are off to a great start. The concept for the plot is fresh and intriguing and I can not wait to read more. Your writing skills are excellent and I love the characterizations you are creating. I can totally see Edward as a professor and Bella as an elementary teacher. Those roles just seem to fit. Even more so, I really like the closeness between Edward and his niece. That is very endearing, in my opinion. I believe this story has great potential and I have not doubts that you will deliver. I can not wait to read more, so please update soon if you can.
Reviewer: BeyondDreams19 (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2008 11:56 PM · On: Chapter 2: Doing The Best I Can
Awww! What bold students, love Edward's answers and I can't wait for Edward/Bella to have a conversation ;)
Reviewer: lulabelljane (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2008 11:35 PM · On: Chapter 2: Doing The Best I Can
Loved Edward in his class...but my favorite was of course the end when he met Lilly at school and got his first glance at Bella! Too great! :)
Reviewer: learn2fall (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2008 11:31 PM · On: Chapter 1: But Not For Me
I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: rara2007 (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2008 11:24 PM · On: Chapter 2: Doing The Best I Can
LOL!!! Edward in class with Lauren was hilarious...loved it!
Reviewer: HeartlessMagic (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2008 11:19 PM · On: Chapter 2: Doing The Best I Can
Ok, I think I reviewed already, but Twilighted was kind of weird, and had already posted the second chapter without saying it had. In any case, wonderful story! I love the portrayal of Edward and Bella, and I can't wait to see the interaction between them =D I hope you update soon! ~HeartlessMagic
Reviewer: obsessed92 (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2008 11:17 PM · On: Chapter 2: Doing The Best I Can
so cute i love Lillie! LOVE IT!! keep it up and update soon!
Reviewer: cullencrazy (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2008 01:12 PM · On: Chapter 1: But Not For Me
Great start! I liked it!
Reviewer: rara2007 (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2008 12:53 PM · On: Chapter 1: But Not For Me
I really like this story so far! I haven't read anything like it before, so I'm very excited about it!! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: Caramel161 (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2008 12:37 PM · On: Chapter 1: But Not For Me
I have to say, I am quite excited for this story. The first chapter is alright, althought I wish you'd placed Edward and Bella's actual introduction in this chapter as well. But, I am looking forward to the rest of this story. Update soon.
-Caramel161 PS: I really like the banner for this story. It's really wel ldone.
Reviewer: obsessive_reader11 (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2008 10:57 AM · On: Chapter 1: But Not For Me
i really like it and im looking forward to the next chapter. please update!
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