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Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2008 09:14 AM · On: Chapter 4: Free Dancing
Uncle edward is making his move!! Love it!1 Cannot wait for more!
Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2008 09:07 AM · On: Chapter 3: Mister Zero
GREAT!! Looking forward to more!
Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2008 09:01 AM · On: Chapter 2: Doing The Best I Can
HAHA!! Jessica and Lauren are too much!!Uncle eddie has eyes for Ms. Swan!!
Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2008 08:53 AM · On: Chapter 1: But Not For Me
YESS!!! AWESOME!! I'm suprised she didn't pass out at the sight of Edward!!Beautiful man tha he is!!
Reviewer: LovelyinLavender (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2008 08:34 AM · On: Chapter 4: Free Dancing
Oh, so if Edward wasn't there to pick up Lilly, then he must've had other motives for going to the school...hmm, I wonder what they could be :-) I definitely don't blame Bella for daydreaming about Edward. I do it all the time...and he's a fictional character! Great chapter! I look forward to the update :-)
Reviewer: irisandlights (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2008 04:28 AM · On: Chapter 4: Free Dancing
Your chapters aren't very long but they manage to get my heart soaring anyway! I can't wait for more! :D
Reviewer: The Night (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2008 04:10 AM · On: Chapter 4: Free Dancing
Aww so cute!! i love it!
Reviewer: Katrina (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2008 02:48 AM · On: Chapter 5: Baby Fish Mouth
Awwww just started this story and I'm really into it. Lilly is adorable! And the marching band geek/civil war geek moment was funny (and kinda cute too!). Thanks for sharing :)
Reviewer: falconcranelove (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2008 02:22 AM · On: Chapter 5: Baby Fish Mouth
Great chapter! I love that she said yes to another ice cream date in the future, and then reminded him of it before he went back into the house. They're both so cute when they're embarrassed too. LOL Lovin it! Keep it coming! :)
~Cat~
Reviewer: falconcranelove (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2008 02:10 AM · On: Chapter 4: Free Dancing
My thoughts right now? Are that you are evil!! LMAO Darn you for leaving us on that cliffie, it's no fair!! *pouts* Lovin this though! Love that she couldn't quit thinking about him. And that she was disappointed when he didn't drop Lilly off. Loving this, and can't wait for more! Keep it coming!! :)
~Cat~
Reviewer: starsandthemoon (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2008 01:53 AM · On: Chapter 4: Free Dancing
I like it! That's my thought! haha! great job, can't wait for more!
Reviewer: gordonfan74 (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2008 01:05 AM · On: Chapter 4: Free Dancing
Great chapter, even though it was a short one. Sometimes less is more you know. Alice's daughter is so adorable, at least the version of her you have created in my mind. She is a lot like her mother, bubbly and very personable. I think it is sweet that she told Bella about her being a topic of conversation for she and Edward during their earlier outing. I am so excited that he showed up at the school. I just hope he doesn't disappoint by being there for some way random reason. Please update soon if you can. This story is definitely one of my favorites and I can't wait to see what you have in store next.
Reviewer: IntoTheTwilight (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2008 12:51 AM · On: Chapter 4: Free Dancing
Oh, yay! So glad he showed up; I was beginning to think he wasn't going to make an appearance this chapter.
Reviewer: shwriteme (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2008 12:39 AM · On: Chapter 4: Free Dancing
Yummmmm. I really enjoy this story. Can't wait for more.
Reviewer: katopotato (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2008 12:37 AM · On: Chapter 4: Free Dancing
i love it :D, cant wait for more!
Reviewer: lulabelljane (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2008 12:31 AM · On: Chapter 4: Free Dancing
Well, way to keep a girl hanging...soooo hurry back already! Great update! :)
Reviewer: lovedforeternity (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2008 12:26 AM · On: Chapter 4: Free Dancing
Ooh, you left us hangin. Can't wait for more. Good chapter.
Reviewer: stargirl (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2008 12:25 AM · On: Chapter 4: Free Dancing
.....keep writing
Reviewer: irisandlights (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2008 02:40 AM · On: Chapter 3: Mister Zero
My heart started to accelerate when his did! The mere fact that he got so excited at just the mention of her name and that tidbit made me melt. I cannot wait for more! :)
Reviewer: irisandlights (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2008 01:59 AM · On: Chapter 2: Doing The Best I Can
Adorable. I like how you ended it as well. It got the point across, the attraction, in a non-cliche way. I like how the both of you are writing this story. Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: Bre (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2008 04:15 PM · On: Chapter 3: Mister Zero
hahaha! What a lovely idea for a story, I'm enjoying the writing so much, very nice! The Tanya touch is interesting, especially with the color of her cheeks, I can't wait to read more !:D
Reviewer: ipodRlover (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2008 03:27 AM · On: Chapter 3: Mister Zero
I love this story! It's so sweet and romantic and looks like it will stay that way. Glad to be rid of Tanya though.
Reviewer: litnerd (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2008 11:46 PM · On: Chapter 3: Mister Zero
It's adorable! And the banner is awesome. Great job, and update soon!
Reviewer: sarah-jess (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2008 11:35 PM · On: Chapter 3: Mister Zero
cute :) ^.^
Reviewer: movieandbookgirl (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2008 10:44 PM · On: Chapter 3: Mister Zero
This story is so cute! I'm thoroughly enjoying it so far!
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