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Reviewer: movieandbookgirl (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 09:28 AM · On: Chapter 11: We're Getting Married
Edwards POV was hilarious! I really enjoyed this chapter. :)
Author's Response: Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: HeavenDust (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 02:15 AM · On: Chapter 6: Call Me
Oooh... more flirty Edward please! And Bella's sweet. :) Great chapter!
Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2009 05:49 PM · On: Chapter 11: We're Getting Married
I just had a feeling she'd get him into the tights - bet Bella's going to love them!! :)
Author's Response: Does Edward ever not cave to Alice? Haha. Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: twilight_lamb (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2009 04:03 PM · On: Chapter 11: We're Getting Married
I enjoyed this sory so much, I cryed and laught ohhh can't wait for you to update soon...
Reviewer: CarrieJ (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2009 03:51 PM · On: Chapter 11: We're Getting Married
Very cute story! I can't wait to read more...I hope the next few chapters has more with Bella and Edward...when are they going to let down their walls already?
Author's Response: Walls are slowly coming down brick by brick :) Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: Jime (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2009 12:34 PM · On: Chapter 11: We're Getting Married
I followed Lilly to Bella, feeling the tights pull against the hair on my legs as I walked. I hate this.
LOL, poor Edward. Great update! I love Peter and Wendy :)
Reviewer: Babette (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2009 10:37 AM · On: Chapter 11: We're Getting Married
How cute was that date! They had fun together, and it wasn't all jumping into bed. It was sweet, fun, and them just enjoying each other's company. Just like getting-to-know-you dating is supposed to be.
When Edward was saying he would never wear tights, I just started giggling. When Bella found out she was dressing up as Wendy, I started laughing! Edward is just too sweet of a guy not to dress up like that for Lily. Of course, now that Peter and Wendy, along with Tinkerbelle, are all together, they can go get ice cream! It will be pixie dust for the already hyper child, while Peter and Wendy enjoy more time together! I'm looking forward to that!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading! And I like the idea of them going out for ice cream instead of staying in. It will definitely give Edward more publicity in those tights! :)
Reviewer: xchic (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2009 09:50 AM · On: Chapter 11: We're Getting Married
idiedandwenttoheaven! EDWARD IN TIGHTS! i looooooooooove it. bothe the tights and the chapter. LOL. UPDATE!
Reviewer: anna123 (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2009 09:22 AM · On: Chapter 11: We're Getting Married
I really like this story:) haha, Edward in tights! lol:D
Looking forward to reading more! :)
Reviewer: valelf (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2009 08:18 AM · On: Chapter 11: We're Getting Married
Edward in tights!!!! *girly giggle* What an image! Great chapter! I can't wait to see what you have coming up!
Reviewer: THBS (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2009 06:34 AM · On: Chapter 11: We're Getting Married
Ah ha! This was a great chapter. I was really missing you guys.
Reviewer: sixeightshuffle (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2009 03:47 AM · On: Chapter 11: We're Getting Married
This: 'To be honest, I felt self-conscious and like someone would see me and cry, “Pedophile!”'
had me dying of lulz. I love this story!!!
Reviewer: resident_cullen (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2009 01:02 AM · On: Chapter 11: We're Getting Married
please hurry the pace, it is too slow. there is no sparke that will leading to them emitting their feelings.
Reviewer: ablissfulday (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2009 12:03 AM · On: Chapter 7: You're Right
Awesome text message. However, I am thinking there is no way he would have gone to sleep after that! : ) Awesome job ladies!
Reviewer: ablissfulday (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 11:38 PM · On: Chapter 5: Baby Fish Mouth
Great chapter, love the crimson as OU comment.
Reviewer: ablissfulday (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 11:27 PM · On: Chapter 3: Mister Zero
So are they getting icecream at Braums?
Reviewer: ablissfulday (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 11:15 PM · On: Chapter 2: Doing The Best I Can
Very good. I like how you implemented the background characters into Edwards class. Great story.
Reviewer: ablissfulday (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 11:15 PM · On: Chapter 2: Doing The Best I Can
Very good. I like how you implemented the background characters into Edwards class. Great story.
Reviewer: beanbean (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 11:07 PM · On: Chapter 11: We're Getting Married
I like the story and the interactions in it, only comment that I have since I just started is that in chap 10 I believe, it could have been 9, there is a little timeline confusion, bouncing from being 3 months after Bella's arrival and the 3rd week where Parent Teacher confrences were held and they went out for Pizza....
other wise i like the story and what you have done with it... the differing POV's and styles/authors for them is good, you feel as if there is a definate shift like there would be with 'actors' playing the parts!
good job!
Reviewer: christine30974 (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 10:42 PM · On: Chapter 11: We're Getting Married
Thanks for the update. And oh my the thoughts of Edward in tights. LOL
Reviewer: ablissfulday (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 10:11 PM · On: Chapter 1: But Not For Me
I'm from OK, so I had to read this story! Sounds great so far! I'm interested to see how things go.
Reviewer: daisy3853 (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 10:09 PM · On: Chapter 11: We're Getting Married
so cute! i love the costumes. i can't wait to see his reaction when he figures out she's wendy.
Reviewer: Suelue123 (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 09:54 PM · On: Chapter 11: We're Getting Married
Good chapter, worth the wait. You have to love Alice!! Lilly is so sweet.
Reviewer: TwilightMommy (Anonymous) · Date: May 07, 2009 08:09 PM · On: Chapter 11: We're Getting Married
So glad to see the update, I love this story. I think I would pay money to see Edward dressed as Peter Pan!! lol
Reviewer: JingleBells (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 07:52 PM · On: Chapter 11: We're Getting Married
Yea! An update! :)
These two are so cute. An Eddie -- no erotic dreams so far of Miss Swan but I'm confident they're soon to come...
Can't wait for more. Thanks for writing!!!
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