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Reviewer: Amillyna (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 08:40 AM · On: Chapter 13: Meet the Family (AO)
I loved this chapter! It was great! I sense angst coming for Thanksgiving, but I'm sure you won't make it too terrible...at least I hope. Can't wait for the next update!!
Reviewer: SoImpossible (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 08:38 AM · On: Chapter 13: Meet the Family (AO)
I hope we get to the bottom of the Jacob BS soon. I think he's such a manipulative asshole in the books that I'm having a hard time understanding why Bella keeps pushing Edward away. He's an amazing man and if she doesn't change her tune there will be other women who are willing to put themselves out there. He's just so sweet that I'm getting a little annoyed at her continued reluctance. I'm not saying marry him next week.. but at least give him a shot.
Reviewer: katydid13 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 08:35 AM · On: Chapter 13: Meet the Family (AO)
Great chapter! I wonder what Thanksgiving holds.
Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 08:21 AM · On: Chapter 13: Meet the Family (AO)
i love how everone is so protective of bella.. making sure that edward doesnt' hurt her even before they get together.
Reviewer: bellagirl (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 08:18 AM · On: Chapter 13: Meet the Family (AO)
Edward needs to grow some balls and ask her what's up.
I have a feeling that Jake wasn't the great guy Charlie thought he was. Maybe he gave her more than a few put downs and also cheated on her numerous times. The last one of which she caught him in the act.
I have a feeling that Charlie doesn't know and is going to try and set them up again at Thanksgiving, which is going to set Bella up for a compelte and utter breakdown where she yells out all of her anger, saddness and completely rip them new assholes.
Am I warm? LOL
Reviewer: shelly551 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 08:15 AM · On: Chapter 13: Meet the Family (AO)
I am so happy you updated this story it has been too long, Love this chapter so much. thank you
Reviewer: Cristygen (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 07:47 AM · On: Chapter 13: Meet the Family (AO)
I just love this story! Lilly as always is as cute as a button. Love it!
And Edward needs to gets his ass in gear and do something about it! And hopefully Bella will give him a chance and I'm sure she'll open up to him sooner or later.
I'm glas Esme is fine.
Great chapter! Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: Princess (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 07:39 AM · On: Chapter 13: Meet the Family (AO)
Wonderful as always! And Edward just needs to make a move already!
Reviewer: hchambersmomx3 (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 09:36 PM · On: Chapter 12: Firefly From Hell
Love and hate the cliffhanger at the same time. But I must say you are goooood!
Reviewer: bigcap (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 08:50 AM · On: Chapter 12: Firefly From Hell
Leaving us with that??? I will always need you??? That next chapter better come quick...
:)
Reviewer: twilight_4_ever (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 10:14 AM · On: Chapter 12: Firefly From Hell
I love this chapter!
Reviewer: kerrybell (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 01:27 PM · On: Chapter 12: Firefly From Hell
Just read this all!!!! I love it to death!
Edward is so sweet and Bella is perfect. All the characters are great and I can't wait for an update!!!
ps-Does this story follow When Harry Met Sally? Like do they get seperated for a few years or something? I don't think so but just making sure.
Reviewer: littlelemon (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 08:00 AM · On: Chapter 5: Baby Fish Mouth
This story is completley amazing and should be published its so good! Keep on writing! I'm excited to read another story from either of you guys (or both!) soon!
Reviewer: Masochistic_Lion818 (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 04:30 PM · On: Chapter 5: Baby Fish Mouth
I like where this is going I recomend this story
Reviewer: Masochistic_Lion818 (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 03:46 PM · On: Chapter 1: But Not For Me
I love it! Well written and good start for a story line!!
Reviewer: TwilightFan104 (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 06:20 AM · On: Chapter 12: Firefly From Hell
Loved this chapter and all the playful banter and innuendos. The last line was perfct, especially after the almost kiss. And only Alice would think of those costumes. Now that they are starting to open up to each other, things should get more interesting. Hope all is well with Esme.
Reviewer: whitepoison (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 10:45 PM · On: Chapter 12: Firefly From Hell
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!
THANK YOU FOR UPDATING
THANK YOU SO SO SO SO MUCHH!!!!!!
I WAS BEGINNING TO THINK YOU GAVE UP/FORGOTT!!!!!
Reviewer: RightKindOfWrong (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 02:35 PM · On: Chapter 11: We're Getting Married
Adorable! Please update soon! Cant wait to read more!
Reviewer: valelf (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 01:27 PM · On: Chapter 12: Firefly From Hell
They almost kissed! I would've been frustrated, too. Poor Esme, she'll be okay, right? Edward's last line - I loved it! Great chapter!
Reviewer: fireonice1292 (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 03:11 AM · On: Chapter 12: Firefly From Hell
omg charlie brown haha
Reviewer: Melolabel (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 08:36 PM · On: Chapter 12: Firefly From Hell
Loved the whole convo between Edward and Bella, divulging important stuff and all, love the playful banter about their marriage, hope all is well with Esme, and LOVED the ending line!
Reviewer: katydid13 (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 04:10 PM · On: Chapter 12: Firefly From Hell
Great chapter!
Reviewer: shelly551 (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 05:19 AM · On: Chapter 1: But Not For Me
I love this story and the line " Bella I will always need you" uhhh my heart flipped. So sweet. great stuff. Love it.
Reviewer: mezzamorte (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 12:59 AM · On: Chapter 12: Firefly From Hell
That last line! Oh how I would kill to hear that. Just not with Bella at the beggining. And ESME!!!! NO SHE CAN'T GET SICK!!!!!!!!!!!! :O
Mezza
Reviewer: mezzamorte (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 12:24 AM · On: Chapter 11: We're Getting Married
That just made my day! :D i knew it was comming, but i still laughed my butt off over it!
Mezza
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