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Reviewer: KristenM82 (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 08:04 AM · On: Chapter 14: The Outtake
Now he is Edward Cullen? LOL I thought he was a Masen?
Reviewer: KristenM82 (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 07:52 AM · On: Chapter 13: Meet the Family (AO)
I like this story, but I have a few questions. I hope you can clarify. In the beginning chapters it mentioned that Bella had been teaching for 6 years??? I have gathered that she is around the age of 25...if she has been teaching for 6 yrs, that would have made her 19 when she started...not even a year after she started college? Also, there have been a few chapters that don't match up when going from one pov to the other? I thought Carlisle was a professor, not a doctor? You made reference to him being both? Getting Edward the job, but wanting to tend to Alice during labor? Also, how old is everyone? Lilly is 6, I know that...but if Alice is the same age as Bella then she would of had her when she was 19? Did she go to college? I have also noticed that they all have different last names, so I am assuming that they (Edward, Alice and Em) are all adopted by Carlisle and Esme Cullen? Edward said he was the oldest, so how old is Em? I know this seems like alot and I am enjoying your story, that is why I am keeping with it even though it has thrown me for some loops. Hope you can clarify. Thanks.
Reviewer: rtgirl (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 10:35 PM · On: Chapter 15: Was It Worth It?
this is such a cute story! i love all the build up. can't wait for more chaps!!
Reviewer: chan1013 (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2010 07:30 PM · On: Someone's Husband
I enjoyed this story so much and have been waiting so long for an update. Do you think you will be updating soon? I love hove Alive defends her porche and how she is so competative. Who won the footbal game?
Thanks
Reviewer: lmouille (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2009 09:29 PM · On: Someone's Husband
can you please tell me if you will update soon? I can't wait.
Reviewer: lmouille (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2009 09:29 PM · On: Someone's Husband
can you please tell me if you will update soon? I can't wait.
Reviewer: Kristina79 (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 01:07 AM · On: Someone's Husband
YAY! Brilliant. Thank you for the update - YOU ROCK!
Reviewer: xchic (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 12:36 PM · On: Someone's Husband
sorry, no thanksgivng here on brazil. the closest thing to a tradition i have is the tv show specials on thanksgiving, haha. anyways, i loooooooooooooooooooooove it. update soon, please
Reviewer: LovelyinLavender (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 08:59 PM · On: Someone's Husband
I'm so happy to see that you updated. Awesome chapter! It sounded like Bella had such a great time @ the Cullen's house on Thanksgiving. The football game...wow. That would be such a fun thing to participate in. Unfortunately, I'm not very good at it (then again, I only played touch football once), but I'd give it a try if I had Edward w/ me :-)
So Bella and Edward napping together @ the end of the chapter...too adorable. I'm looking forward to reading more.
Reviewer: Stellarrose (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 07:35 PM · On: Someone's Husband
Love this! Hmmm....if these two get their act in gear soon, he could go back to Forks with her for Christmas....bet THAT would be an interesting get together if Charlie invited Jake and bimbo!
Reviewer: TwilightFan104 (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 07:13 PM · On: Someone's Husband
Great update! Lillie cracks me up. Amazing sometimes what comes out of the mouths of babes. Now E&B seem to be getting somewhere. And your competitive Alice is hillarious. Hoping to read more soon.
Reviewer: bigsis0829 (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 04:35 PM · On: Someone's Husband
Aaaaahhhhhhh! NO! No that can't be the end of the chapter. It just can't! Please, please write soon or i might go crazy. It will be all your fault, lol! Post more......pleeeease!
Reviewer: Krismarie94 (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 12:11 PM · On: Someone's Husband
What I think:
This is one of the most beautiful and, well, heartwarming story that I've never read! Please update soon!
Reviewer: kaybrans (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 10:20 AM · On: Someone's Husband
I just read your whole story and I had to say that it's really great!! I can't wait to read more!!!
Reviewer: jackbauer (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 09:19 AM · On: Someone's Husband
Love it!
Reviewer: salem2004 (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 08:21 AM · On: Chapter 1: But Not For Me
I like the story. Lilly is alot like Alice. Can't wait to read the next chapter:)
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 08:12 AM · On: Someone's Husband
Great way to spend a Thanksgiving. With good friends, good food, watching football, and actually playing football in the backyard. Edward and Bella got caught kissing by Lilly. Hiding their engagement from crazy Alice the wedding planner. Not only does she go wild for weddings, but Black Friday shopping. She has to be the first person shopping upon opening. Poor Bella being dragged with her before the crack of dawn after being up late texting with Edward. Then having lunch and a nap with Edward. Bella is content, too bad Edward's mind won't relax enough for him to sleep. Just kept thoughts about Bella unable to allude them.
Reviewer: janna479 (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2009 10:41 PM · On: Someone's Husband
just stumbled across this story, really enjoying it, I think this is my favorite chapter
Reviewer: hannahbeth96 (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2009 09:42 PM · On: Someone's Husband
hurry with the next chapter this one was great! tho i gotta say alice is pretty mean around thanksgiving time
Reviewer: hopeless_romantic (Anonymous) · Date: December 01, 2009 09:13 PM · On: Someone's Husband
LOL. Loved the daddy to daughter comment! My husband always says that he's going to feed our daughter under the door until they're 31 before they're allowed out. I told him good luck!
Reviewer: hopeless_romantic (Anonymous) · Date: December 01, 2009 07:20 PM · On: Chapter 12: Firefly From Hell
So I've been reading this story non-stop since I found it this morning... well, I guess I should say as much as my little kids will allow me to... and it's been so cute! Not the whole Jake and Tanya things but the whole Edward/Bella story. I especially liked this chapter. I thought it was so cute and funny. Please keep writing!
Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2009 07:14 PM · On: Someone's Husband
Woman, Woman, Woman....
Thank you for this chapter! I can't believe how relieved I am that B&E are FINALLY getting somewhere. Good Lord!
Please post more asap. I don't know if I can survive such a long wait...again!
Woo-hoo!
Reviewer: TwilightMommy (Anonymous) · Date: December 01, 2009 06:56 PM · On: Someone's Husband
Great update, Alice was a riot in this chapter!
Reviewer: kerrylee (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2009 06:47 PM · On: Someone's Husband
So happy you updated and so happy they kissed again!
Reviewer: AppLeOfMyyEyee93 (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2009 06:06 PM · On: Chapter 12: Firefly From Hell
My favorite candies actually ARE licorice and DOTS. Except for the green ones. Nobody likes the green ones. Seriously, they should just get rid of the green altogether and just put in double amounts of pink. But yeah, I love Twizzlers, DOTS, and Swedish Fish. I am definitely a fan of the fruit flavored and gummy variety of candy. Although I would never pass up a 100 Grand bar. Mmmmmmm......:D
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