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Reviewer: mldewolf (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 04:10 PM · On: Chapter 15: Was It Worth It?

Okay, AWESOME chapter!!  This is the first time I've read this story.  I've throughouly enjoyed it.  Added it to my favorites.  Can't wait for the next chapter.  Hope it doesn't take too terribly long.

Reviewer: Akalei88 (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 02:21 AM · On: Chapter 15: Was It Worth It?

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: meaj123 (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 04:50 PM · On: Chapter 15: Was It Worth It?

Of course he loves her. Great story,cant wait for the next update!

Reviewer: doowee (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 06:57 AM · On: Chapter 15: Was It Worth It?

this is great... especially alice and edward's text banter!

 

im afraid of the dark too.and i hate the thunder.

Reviewer: mebonvicino (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 08:26 PM · On: Chapter 3: Mister Zero

ahhhhh.... i'm enjoying this story

Reviewer: scrapmypieces (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 12:58 PM · On: Chapter 15: Was It Worth It?

HA! Give it to Alice to be so blunt at that hour in the mornin´! lol

And awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww finally a kiss..... I thought I was gonna gave to kidnapp someone form there!  ;P

Reviewer: scrapmypieces (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 11:15 AM · On: Chapter 12: Firefly From Hell

Sweet god.... with this last quote... Brownie points to Edward!

Reviewer: pillow912 (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 06:39 PM · On: Chapter 15: Was It Worth It?

Great Chapter

Reviewer: LovelyinLavender (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 06:14 PM · On: Chapter 15: Was It Worth It?

To say that I'm extremely happy after reading this chapter would be an understatement!  I'm so excited that Edward and Bella had their first kiss, and such a sweet moment it was.  I love that it was during a storm.  Storms equal getting cozy on a couch with some blankets...perfect for kissing :-)  And hey, I'm glad Bella was able to open up and tell Edward the whole story about Jacob.  It's time he found out.  Speaking of Jacob, I'm really not sure what Charlie was thinking when he invited Jacob over for Thanksgiving, so I understand why Bella was upset.  But it sucks that she won't be seeing her dad for the holiday.  I know she loves him.

I'm looking forward to seeing how things progress with Edward and Bella after this kiss :-D  I hope you can update soon.

Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 11:46 AM · On: Chapter 15: Was It Worth It?

Great chapter! Edward is so cute. I really hope that Bella figures it out soon.

Reviewer: Kerri (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 07:58 AM · On: Chapter 15: Was It Worth It?

AWSOME STORY!!!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!

 

~Kerri~

Reviewer: miszjuicyx0x (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 10:38 PM · On: Chapter 15: Was It Worth It?

ughhh keep going please

Reviewer: dinx (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 09:24 PM · On: Chapter 15: Was It Worth It?

First review on the story so far, but I love where it's going. I was hoping that they would start working their way toward a more serious relationship. It seems that they have been beating around the bush for a while. I loved this chapter and can't wait until the next update. I hope it's soon.

Reviewer: amym9903 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 06:21 PM · On: Chapter 15: Was It Worth It?

WOW!  That was a great chapter!!!!!!  I'm so glad they finally kissed!!! What better way to wait out a storm and power outage than with sweet Edward!!!!  I had almost forgotten about this story......so glad you updated....I still love and can't wait to see what's next!

Reviewer: scrapmypieces (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 04:41 PM · On: Chapter 10: A Female Friend

Awwwwwwww.... he is her lobster!!!! Cuuuuteeee! I love this episode!   ;)

Reviewer: ksm (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 04:18 PM · On: Chapter 15: Was It Worth It?

Awww....our Edward has figured out that he's in love!  Now, our Bella needs to realize that she loves him!  Great chapter!  I loved the kisses.  They were so sweet! : )

Kat

Reviewer: sarahbellxx (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 04:11 PM · On: Chapter 11: We're Getting Married

I really love this! I just started reading this morning and I've read 11 chapters already haha. You're really distracting me from my school work.

Oh and question, how old are Bella and Edward supposed to be in this?

Reviewer: FearlessNot (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 03:18 PM · On: Chapter 15: Was It Worth It?

Can't remember if I reviewed, but did have to read it again.  This story is so sweet and romantic!

Reviewer: Jime (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 02:50 PM · On: Chapter 15: Was It Worth It?

Loved it!!

Reviewer: Sylvia Cullen (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 02:37 PM · On: Chapter 15: Was It Worth It?

Yes!! EDWARD LOVES BELLA!!!!! YIPEE I CANT WAIT |FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!

Reviewer: Babette (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 02:14 PM · On: Chapter 15: Was It Worth It?

LOVED the texting conversation!  That was hilarious.  Hmm, will he leave his phone out and Bella be able to see the history?  That would be interesting.  Of course, he is kissing on her now, so that should clue her in some. 

I think it would be great if Edward went home with her for Christmas.  Jacob would love that. 

I really liked how Edward handled her anger.  He let her be until she was ready.  Sometimes people need time to cool down, and he gave her that.

Reviewer: HeavenDust (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 01:08 PM · On: Chapter 15: Was It Worth It?

*ROTFL* I wasn't asleep. TMI for Edward! *snicker*

And the story came out! I'm thrilled about this, as this will inevitably bring Edward and Bella closer. I'm glad he shared his story too.

Thank goodness for thunderstorms. I love them :)

Reviewer: zinner (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 12:08 PM · On: Chapter 15: Was It Worth It?

 

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Good luck with the lessons plans!  I'm an elementary teacher - 4th grade.  It gets easier and save the plans from year to year - they are recyclable.

Love the story - and I hope you have the time to update soon.

Karen

 

Reviewer: bigcap (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 11:02 AM · On: Chapter 15: Was It Worth It?

fabulous, but its time for Edward to make a move.  I mean, I know he kissed her which was perfect, but its time for him to make her his girlfriends since that whole Tyler thing came up. 

Looking forward to Thanksgiving dinner!  (that'll be the next chapter - right?)

Reviewer: gpl993 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 09:36 AM · On: Chapter 15: Was It Worth It?

They kissed!  They kissed!  Sweet!  I'm so excited...maybe Bella will realize that she loves him soon!

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