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Reviewer: twilightmom96 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 07:52 PM · On: Chapter 3 - He's Just a Boy

i like this :)

i can't wait to see where you are going with this!



Author's Response:

Hey!  I'm so glad you like it so far!  Hope to see you again for the next chapter!

Duders

Reviewer: Wilynn (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 06:52 PM · On: Chapter 3 - He's Just a Boy

Okay, three consistant, amazingly well done chapters so far. I can't wait for the fourth!

You have done a wonderful job developing your characters and the setting is so interesting and believable. I am glad you are not rushing the relationship and letting it just unfold in a natural way. It is like this could really happen. Amazing.



Author's Response:

Eeeeeeek!  So nice to see you back again, and so very happy that you are still enjoying the story.  I feel more inspired to write about circumstances and settings that seem real to me, so incredibly pleased that you are with me on that!  I love the build up in stories, and want to convey their growing curiosity and attraction, so hopefully that will continue to come across.  Thanks so much for your kind words!

Duders

Reviewer: Rinell (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 12:17 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Red Cheeks and Clumsy Feet

Super great idea for a story!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  Hope you enjoy chapter 2 and 3...

Reviewer: claudia paris cullen (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 06:35 AM · On: Chapter 3 - He's Just a Boy

I started reading this and just could not stop. I absolutly adore Lilly and Evie.. They seem so real to me

Of course you picked 2 of my fave people too.. TomStu and Rob.. OMG this is totes win!!!!

I adore this story and it all ended FAR too fast. I need much much much more!!!

I am DYING for the next chappie.... I must have it soon please!!!

Cannot wait to see what happens when she cooks dinner for Rob.

By the way, I had one tiny little question... who were the mates that TomStu brought with him to the pub the first night? I wondered if by chance they were Bobby Long and perhaps Marcus Foster?? Just curious...

By the way your writing is really great too!!



Author's Response:

Ohhhhh, this review just totally made me squee!  Thank you!!

I agree with you, Rob and Tom are two of my fave peeps.  I was lucky enough to observe the two of them in their natural habitat *ahem* surrounded by their mates, drinking and smoking together, chatting all night when Tom hosted the Lyric Lounge in London earlier this year.  Complete bromance cuteness!  As a result, Tom appears in most chapters, sometimes offering pearls of wisdom to story Rob.  Some of what I hope are comical moments are provided by the two of them in this story. 

Re: your question, no, it was some of Tom's non-famous mates that first night, but Bobby, Marcus and Sam all make an appearance in a future chapter (New Years Eve). 

Muffins and Proclamations will hopefully be here soon...I've sent you a little taste of what's to come...Thanks again!

Duders

Reviewer: meldisil (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 05:49 AM · On: Chapter 3 - He's Just a Boy

I just found your story and I really like it so far. Good work!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I sent you a little extract...

Duders

Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 05:03 AM · On: Chapter 3 - He's Just a Boy

Dude, you're killing me in the best possible way. :) Well except for the fact you've cut us off at the knees before their Wednesday night dinner and more... *L*

LOVING the extra long chapters and cannot wait to see what you've got in stall for us with 'Muffins and Proclamations'.

I adore bashful Rob who's almost too shy and lacking in self confidence to tell Evie he really likes her. These two are perfect for one another so it's no great surprise that Tom & Lily are so on board with hooking the two of them up.



Author's Response:

Hey!  Thanks for dropping by again!  I'm sorry, I know, it's evil of me...but please, trust me.  The Wednesday night dinner will be on it's way soon and it's one of my fave chapters, although the ending is kind of unexpected...*Clamping my mouth shut before I spill!*

I write Rob how I imagine he might be, so happy to see you like that so far.

My chapters always come out long, sometimes I think too long, so it's so nice to hear you don't mind that!  Thanks for giving up some time to dive further into Rob and Evie's journey.  The next chapter will be on it's way soon, and I hope it delivers.  Oh, and I sent a little extract...sorry in advance! You'll know what I mean when you read it! ;-)

Duders

Reviewer: newyorkminute (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 02:53 AM · On: Chapter 3 - He's Just a Boy

I love this story, it just seems really realistic and you could actually imagine it happening. REALLY looking forward to your future chapters.



Author's Response:

Ahhh, thank you so very much!  I aim to be realistic with my writing, it's what I enjoy most when I read other people's stories.  I want to feel like it's a possibility, and I'm ecstatic that you get that!  I've sent you a teeny extract from the next chapter.  Come back soon! 

Duders

Reviewer: twi_mom_teddi (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 07:57 PM · On: Chapter 3 - He's Just a Boy

Really enjoying so far!  : )



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I've sent you a little extract of the next chapter...hope it reaches you okay, I am still a bit clueless with this site at times...

Hope to see you hear next time!

Duders

Reviewer: trixie11 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 05:30 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Red Cheeks and Clumsy Feet

Just read the first chapter and I have to admit, it's great! I'm already adding this story to my favorites and I haven't even got to chapter 2 yet!



Author's Response:

Ohhh, thank you!  So glad you like it!  Let me know what you think when you get to chapter 3 and I'll send you a little extract of what's to come...

Thanks again!

Duders

Reviewer: Wilynn (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 02:08 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Whiskey, Coneheads and Kisses

Okay, I am really loving this story. We know Rob is an intellectual and his conversation with Evie just fit. I agree with your opinion about lemons. The have to be based on emotions to mean anything, otherwise I don't bother reading.

You are doing a great job!



Author's Response:

Awwww!  Thank you so much!  I'm glad you understand my feelings about lemons.  There are plenty coming, but for me they are all the more sweeter with the depth of a story behind them. I like working on the details, the character's interactions and growing intimacy between them, and I really hope to achieve that balance.  Thanks again for dropping me your thoughts, I was getting a little disheartened at the amount of views, but lack of reviews and yours has just made my day! 

The next chapter has been submitted, so hopefully it won't be too long.

Duders 

Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2010 10:48 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Whiskey, Coneheads and Kisses

Woo! I could kill you for killing the lemon there - but with what I know of both Evie & Rob in this fic, neither of them is particularly into the screwing and dumping route, not at the heart of it anyway.

*shakes head at Rob jerking off into the basin* Dude! It's called a shower...I think I threw up in my mouth just a little bit at the thought you just did that. *LOL*

Wonder if Rob'll get drunk and send Evie some interesting smex-in texts!!?!? :)



Author's Response:

Awww, sorry!  I know, but you're right, story Rob and Evie don't really go down that route.  Not that they wouldn't follow their hearts, and trust me on this, the true lemons are just around the corner.  But I'm a story girl, and I like to build it up!

Rob and the basin...hmmmn....he was a little drunk, and a little horny...he's just a boy at the end of the day.  Hence the next chapter title ('He's Just a Boy').  Not his finest moment, but then, we never really have them when we're alone with our thoughts, do we?  *Lol*

Now regarding the texts, he does get a hold of her number, and he does text her...but it's the morning after.  It does however lead to an evening together...

Thanks for dropping me a line, I seem to be getting lots of reads and not so much in reviews at the moment :( so it's nice to hear your thoughts from out there in cyber space.  Thank you!

Duders

Reviewer: twichipie (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2010 10:56 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Red Cheeks and Clumsy Feet

I love rob fics, can't wait for what's to come!



Author's Response:

Hey there!  Thanks so much for dropping me a line!  There's lots more to come.  I've submitted the next chapter so fingers crossed the wait won't be too long.

Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2010 06:45 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Red Cheeks and Clumsy Feet

*LMAO* Oh Evie...that would have to be the most awkward conversation Rob's probably had with anyone. I think you both need a few drinks in you to loosen up and just hang out.

 



Author's Response:

*Ponders*...Hmmmn, sounds like a plan, eh?

Reviewer: Wilynn (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 10:28 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Red Cheeks and Clumsy Feet

Awkward, but very realistic! This was good. I like the way you introduced the characters. You left me wanting to read more!



Author's Response:

Awwww!  My first review!!  Thank you sooooo much for taking the time to let me know what you think.  This story is so very dear to me.  Awkward, yes....Let's see how they get on later...

Next chapter is already written and I will be submitting soon, so fingers crossed, if it passes the test, it'll be with you soon!

Reviewer: amber_v (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 03:47 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Red Cheeks and Clumsy Feet

Yeah that conversation was really really awful and awkward. Hope they'll improve though ;)



Author's Response:

I know, right?!  It will improve...they just need to get to know each other a bit...

 

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