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Reviewer: sadie_nikol (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2010 07:50 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Red Cheeks and Clumsy Feet

Totally awkward! I'm definitely itching to see where this will go...



Author's Response:

Totally awkward, yep!

Duders

Reviewer: Small_Alice (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2010 07:07 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Date Night

I want it!!!

You are really good. I like Evie.



Author's Response:

Why, thanking you muchly!

Duders

Reviewer: claudia paris cullen (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2010 06:23 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Date Night

Great chappie.. Your writing is so real ... Its just like I am standing beside them witnessing the entire thing..I love how you write the characters.

I love the movie the Woman in Black..its so creepy but good.. wow ...

The lemons were great but I totally do not get Rob and why he left so abruptly? Is it cuz he has to rush home to ring Kstew? I am so confused..

I hope he is not secretly still seeing Kstew and going to hurt Evie;s feelings.. and OMG he wants her to be with him on New Years! SQUEE!!! So he is not with Kstew?? OMG I am confused.. Please update fast ok??????



Author's Response:

Oh my goodness, what a gorgeous compliment!  THANK YOU!  I admit, I'm all about the characters, I love writing them and so happy to hear  that you enjoy them.

And yeah, it's a very creepy book and an even creepier film, right?  Scary...

Now, as for Rob's somewhat bizarre exit...I will say it has nothing to do with Kristen.  They aren't together in my story, he's single.  I just couldn't imagine writing Rob as a cheater in that respect.  So fear not, he's not a player in London Rain.  However, he is battling with some internal conflicts - all of which will be revealed next time.  And yep, he wants Evie there New Years.  There's a couple of chapters dedicated to that time with the Brit Pack in attendance.  Whether Evie attends as Rob's 'friend', or tags along with Tom and Lily...well, we'll see.

Thanks so much for sharing your thoughts again!

Duders

Reviewer: jsjohnson73 (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2010 05:17 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Date Night

Yes I do believe Tom needs to have a few words with our boy Rob.  Can't wait to hear that!  And Evie........she should have her say as well.  Rob........well, gotta love him even when he is being a bit of an arse  Can't wait to read more.  Enjoying the story so far!  Update soon



Author's Response:

He does, doesn't he?  There's lots more to come with Rob and his friendship with the Sturridge.  I just love writing the two of them!  And believe me, Tom's going to tell Rob exactly what he thinks of him leaving like that in the next chapter.  And yeah, I suppose I'm biased 'cause I know where story Rob is coming from here, but he's just a bit of a mess and needs to explain himself...which he will, in the next chapter, after Tom's had words.  Thanks so much for letting me know your thoughts!  Means lots!

Duders

Reviewer: trixie11 (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2010 05:14 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Date Night

Wow, that chapter went from so promising to *WTF@#?? in a matter of seconds. Great writing though, you actually made me cry for poor Evie and I DO NOT CRY... so good job! :)



Author's Response:

Awwww, I know, sorry about that.  It was a total 'What the f***?!' moment, wasn't it?  He will redeem himself next chapter, promise!  I made you cry?  Oh no!  But oh yes too, I guess...Thanks so much!

Duders

Reviewer: twi_mom_teddi (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2010 05:06 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Date Night

Great chapter!  Looking forward to hearing the explanation of the "head fug" lol

 

teddi



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I know, the head fug was kind of out there, wasn't it?  It will be explained in the next chapter.  Boys and their brains, eh? And they think we're complicated...

Duders

Reviewer: p00ckee (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2010 06:24 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Muffins and Proclamations

I'm going on vacation on Saturday and will HAVE NO INTERNET ACCESS!!! Please give me one more chapter before I go. I'm dying to read about the rest of their date. Missing it already. Maybe I'll just skip my vacation...

Author's Response:

Awwwww, no!!  I submitted it Tuesday night, so unfortunately it's in the hands of my fantastic beta on how quickly it goes up, fingers crossed it's okay etc...I know they have been super busy here on Twilighted. Soooo sorry!  If it's not up tomorrow, I'm sure it'll be up when you get back!  On a side note, it's so flattering that you are looking out for it!  I'm aiming to submit weekly, so there shouldn't be too long between chapters.  Especially if I get such wonderful comments and encouragement from people like you!  THANK YOU! Have a wonderful vacation, and if you don't catch it before you go, hopefully a Rob and Evie update will be waiting for you on your return! Mwah!

Duders

Reviewer: p00ckee (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2010 12:01 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Muffins and Proclamations

Ohhhhhh! Come on!!!! What a great story. I'm thoroughly addicted already. I also need to go back and read your bio. You're obviously British---with all the 'funny' little words and expressions! Love it. Fascinating too. Don't keep us waiting too much for the next chapter, please. Oh, by the way, you don't need to respond to this review due to the e-mail I'm registered under is my husband's and I'm a 'closeted' Rob fan. He's very aware of the Edward/Twilight fetish, but the 'real life' thing might piss him off a little. thanks---update, update, update!

Author's Response:

Ooooooh, thank you!  Hopefully I'm not breaking any rules by responding to you here?!  Don't want to wind up hubby!  Mine is the same...he just knows I'm writing a story on a Twilight site, that's it!  And yes, I am indeed British.  Is it that obvious?  Teehee!

I won't keep you waiting too long, I'm about to submit the next chapter, so fingers crossed it gets validated okay and the queue isn't too long.  My beta has been fantastically fast at checking my updates so far, I know they have been really busy over on this site recently.

Ps.  Your secret's safe with me!

Duders

Reviewer: midnightgirl (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2010 08:21 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Whiskey, Coneheads and Kisses

lemons make the story GOOD! otherwise its boring. as long as you continue with the lemons it will be good. they can be writen in a beautiful way, so maybe you should make them your thing, after all thats what everybodys fantacy about rob is. being the girl he falls in love with, the girl that he makes mad passionate love to. the girl that he cant live without.



Author's Response:

Hey midnightgirl!  Well, if it's lemons you're after, the next chapter will hopefully deliver...I wanted to build the characters up first, so you could see where they are both coming from, for me that makes the lemons all the more sweeter and more passionate.  I wanted their relationship to begin naturally, how I imagine Rob might respond to such a meeting of minds.  Really hope you enjoy the next one!

Duders

Reviewer: p00ckee (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2010 06:36 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Whiskey, Coneheads and Kisses

so excited for a new story!! I'm hooked already!!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!!  Really happy you are enjoying it thus far.  The rest of date night is coming soon...

Duders

Reviewer: EmeraldRomance (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2010 11:55 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Muffins and Proclamations

I am thoroughly enjoying this tale.  I love celebrity fics in general, but haven't come across too many in this genre where I feel the treatment of the 'celebrity crush' elephant was handled so well.  :)

 

I really hope you update soon!  I am not as patient as Evie LOL.



Author's Response:

Oh hey, thank you!  I really wanted to see where I could take a story where someone like Evie comes into contact with a celebrity crush, and show how the reality pans out for her.  So happy you are enjoying it!

I will update soon, promise!  I seem to be getting a few more reviews now which is spurring me on!  The next 10 or so chapters are already written, but I have to go through them again and again before I even consider submitting them.  I'm incredibly anal!  I hope to have posted again by the end of the week.

Hope to see you here again next time.

Duders

Reviewer: claudia paris cullen (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2010 08:30 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Muffins and Proclamations

He is quite smitten with her and I LOVE IT!!

Another really great chappie. I love their chemistry.

The realism and the visual you give us makes me literally feel like I am sitting off to the side watching this whole thing unfold.. I adore this story and cannot get enough of it!!!

I need so much more and I literally will be waiting with baited breath for the actual "date"

 



Author's Response:

'The realism and the visual you give us makes me literally feel like I am sitting off to the side watching...'

Gaaaaahh!  Thank you so much!  That is such a wonderful bit of feedback to receive!  This is what I strive for, and I'm so happy you are feeling that way so far about my little story.

The 'date' is coming, hopefully in the next few days.

Thanks so much for your sweet words,  Mwah!

Duders

Reviewer: SwimmingBee (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2010 06:19 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Whiskey, Coneheads and Kisses

Ooh, loving the first few chapters of your story!

Yay for Christmas kisses! And ewww, Rob! The bathroom sink!? Hehee. Couldn't help but laugh at that one!

Your story makes me want to go back to London and feel that icy cold air again. And the wind! Brrr, the wind!

Thanks for a fun story so far! Can't wait to read more!



Author's Response:

Hey SwimmingBee!  So glad you enjoyed it!  Christmas kisses are lush, especially when you're like Evie and lucky enough to get them from Rob...and chocolate muffins too!  Perfecto!  Teehee!

I love London, particulary in the Autumn / Winter, although it's really hot this weekend.  Just taken my 'Fuggles' out for a walk and we both nearly disintegrated into sweaty puddles!  Not pretty...

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Duders

 

Reviewer: underthestars (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2010 01:47 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Muffins and Proclamations

Now it's lost my original review! grr!

Loving the extra that shows Robs thought process about where this can go with Evie...it really helps understand where he is coming from later...

I'll keep checking for the extras but likely not review very much over here as I just can't deal and also I'm worried I'll have a foot in mouth moment and say something that will spoil it for people reading this for the first time. (wincing as I post...I hope I haven't managed to do that already...)



Author's Response:

Awwww, hey hon!  Thanks for venturing over here!  You didn't give anything away!  Your feedback has been so valuable, and I really hope you enjoy the additions I've made to the chapters you've already seen.  I wanted to make Rob's feelings a little clearer for 'future reference', that which you are party to!

Thanks hon! Mwah! xx

Duders

Reviewer: Emily Belle (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2010 07:50 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Muffins and Proclamations

Oh my goodness. I'm in love with these characters.



Author's Response:

Oh my goodness, I'm in love with the fact you are in love with the characters!  THANK YOU!

Duders

Reviewer: meldisil (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2010 03:40 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Muffins and Proclamations

whoa, a another great chapter. the granny underwear made me laught out loud. i`m really looking forward for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Hey there!  So glad I can make you laught a bit too.  Rob and Evie's relationship has a lot of banter in it, so I hope you continue to enjoy.  Next chapter is written (as are the next 10 or so in fact), so I'll post as soon as I can.

Duders

Reviewer: newyorkminute (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2010 10:18 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Muffins and Proclamations

Oh God, fabulous chapter, I soooo can't wait to read the next one! Seriously, you can see this happening in real life. I check this story for updates at least once a day!



Author's Response:

Squeeeeeeeeee!  Thank you! You have no idea how happy it makes me to read a review like this! 

Next chapter will be up soon!

Duders

Reviewer: twilightmom96 (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2010 08:42 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Muffins and Proclamations

Love it but worried about the Kristen thing....



Author's Response:

Hmmmn...she does crop up a bit in future chapters.  For now though it's just Rob and Evie...until after Christmas...

Thanks for stopping by!  Hope to see you next time!

Duders

Reviewer: twi_mom_teddi (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2010 08:17 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Muffins and Proclamations

Loved it! : )

Author's Response:

So glad!  Makes me smile!  Thank you!

Duders

Reviewer: Gabi-b (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2010 07:30 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Muffins and Proclamations

Amazing chap

Xo, G



Author's Response:

Thank you, thank you!

Duders x

Reviewer: Wilynn (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2010 07:24 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Muffins and Proclamations

You are turning out to be a very skilled pleasure delayer. I am glad, because I think it is important to the story for their relationship to develop. I love the natural awkwardness they both express when they are together, although it is getting better!



Author's Response:

Why thank you so much!  I do try...I didn't want them to just jump on each other the first night, it didn't feel right for how I'm portraying them both, so I just went with the story and let it unfold in my mind.  The awkwardness continues but eases bit by bit.  I'm so pleased you still like it!  I really hope to hear from you next time, especially as things do progress between them.  I'll be curious to know what your take is on it! 

Thanks so much again, and ta for the stars!

Duders

Reviewer: trixie11 (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2010 06:57 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Muffins and Proclamations

I'm in love with this story!! It's a very realistic take on what could happen to Rob in real life. Thanks for the quick updates and long chapters too! I have never heard the term "apple catchers" before and I almost peed myself laughing- sorry for the visual!  



Author's Response:

Oooohhh I just love it when I see words like 'realistic' in reviews!  Thank you!! 

Apple catchers are the most unappealing sort of pants, and I giggled when I wrote Evie's text to Rob about them.  Glad it made you chuckle too!

Hope you stop by again next time!

Duders

Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2010 06:13 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Muffins and Proclamations

*sigh* WOW...I'm like all hot & flustered after the bedroom 'horny teenager' make-out scene. I'm pleased you didn't turn Evie eating those cupcakes into some tease session against Rob 'cause I might have spontaneously combusted. *L*

Rob's so falling for her but I love the gentlemanly edge you still have him portraying because when I think about real-life Rob, I imagine him to be exactly that way. :)



Author's Response:

Awww, thanks!  I love your reviews!

Yes, he does seem to be quite enamoured with her...And I'm so happy that you like how I'm portraying him, 'cause I can't write him any other way than how I see him which is a complex individual.  I think he probably is quite gentlemanly at times, but with a cheeky edge!

Thanks for dropping me a line again!

Duders

Reviewer: Gabi-b (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2010 05:44 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Whiskey, Coneheads and Kisses

Of course this was soooooooo hot, I loved.



Author's Response:

Thank you hon!  And thanks for the five stars!  *Bows down on the floor* Not worthy, not worthy!  Teehee!

Duders

Reviewer: Emily Belle (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2010 07:03 PM · On: Chapter 3 - He's Just a Boy

I want the next chapter!!! Please.



Author's Response:

So glad you like it so far!  Next chapter hopefully won't be long, it's in the queue right now.

Duders

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