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Reviewer: louisianaartsyfartsy (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 06:36 AM · On: Chapter 12 - No Good at Casual
Ggggaaaahhhh...
That was some cup of f*n coffee...
Shit almighty,
Slap my ass and call me Sally...
Or Rob can just slap my ass and call me Nikki. Whatevs. Jeez, Louise. Fuck a duck.
Where's my husband? He needs to do something about this... one more chappy and Peace Out!
All your fault, duders. Blame it on the Duders.
Author's Response: louisianaartsyfartsy,
Or should I call you Sally?! Buahhaahaha! ;)
And yes, I'll take the blame...bring it on...Hehe!
Thanks chick! Hope you enjoy the next one...
Duders x
Reviewer: ksw3 (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 05:06 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Whiskey, Coneheads and Kisses
Just started your story! Liked it, I am following Need to Escape and Lost Luggage recommended it. I like your writing style and will continue to read it. Funny how just reading a couple of chapters on a story and you get a sense of an authors style. Some you know you are interested in and others your not. Thank you for my Sunday morning enjoyment. Have a good week!
Author's Response: ksw3,
Hey! Thanks so much for giving my little tale a crack! Lostluggage is awesome for recommending it!
I know what you mean - I always know after one or two chapters if I like an author's style or not and how I feel about a story's possibilities. I'm so incredibly chuffed that you're enjoying so far! Thank you.
Duders
Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 03:52 AM · On: Chapter 13 - Slipping Into Something Comfortable
*LMAO* About the desensitisation of Rob's 'vagina' allergy & the appearance of the rubber ducky. Glad he didn't get lost in the journey.
Phew. *fans herself* Jeez, I want some of what they're having. There's something oh so hot about Rob's need for visuals in their one-on-one time. When he licked her fingers I just about spontaneously combusted.
Off to NYC is our lovely Evie....with the boy that Rob only recently found out is not only gay, but has a MASSIVE crush on him. *LMAO* Hilarious stuff.
Author's Response: AussieECfan,
Yay to rubber ducky! The things he's seen...
Hehe! Yes, I wouldn't mind some of it either! All I keep thinking as I write is 'lucky Evie!' I wanted to show Rob having a need for visuals all along - so ecstatic you picked up on that!! To me, it's part of his intense nature, the need to know and see...
So indeed, NY beckons Twee and Benbo, and what a time they have!
Thank you hon, mwah! Hope you continue to enjoy!
Duders
Reviewer: joss859 (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 02:35 AM · On: Chapter 13 - Slipping Into Something Comfortable
Yeah, meeting the family, funny stories, rubber ducky, Evies work, Robs photo shoots, loved it all, but OMG, the sex!
Rob is really starting to get a little more adventurous, I wonder just how adventurous he can get!
A week apart is going to feel like a long time, I think they are really going to suffer, I looking forward to seeing how they cope! And if Rob is away working soon too, the reality of their releationship is going to hit home. But Evis is a strong character, I'm sure she will be fine, Rob I'm not so sure about though. He seems very young and lost and unsure in life. He comes accross to me as needing a lot more confidence. Perhaps it's just that he relaxes more when he is with Evie and dosn't have to work at it, but it would be nice to have a POV from him when he is away from Evie, showing us his mature side? So that we can see how much he relaxes when he is with her. That's just my take on the story anyway!
Really looking forward to another chapter soon...!!
Author's Response: joss859,
Hey! So very happy you enjoyed it! Thanks so much for letting me know!!
Rob is getting braver, it's Twee's influence! There's a little long distance moment between them that's instigated by him next chapter... ;)
You're right about a separation of just a week seeming like a long time for them both - particularly for Rob. Evie can handle it better believe it or not. You're right about him. He does relax more around Evie, she sort of grounds him, soothes him. There are both POV's in the next chapter so hopefully that will give some insight. I hope to post by the weekend, hope you enjoy chick!
Duders
Reviewer: newyorkminute (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 11:13 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Slipping Into Something Comfortable
“That underwear is ridiculous, absolutely ridiculous” – best line of the chapter!!!! God, god, god, my partner (he died three years ago) said those exact same words to me the first time we ever……..So, here I am wiping a tear away from my eye and smiling madlyJ I loved this chapter, LOVED IT. Am eagerly awaiting the next chapter, not looking forward to the separation but am looking forward to Evie Does NY. And I’m still determined not to succumb to visiting RP Fanfiction although how long that lasts is anyone’s guess. And I know I say this every review, but sooooooo realistic. Are you sure you don’t know these people in real life duders?
Jodi xo
Author's Response: newyorkminute,
Oh my gosh! I don't know what to say! That was one of my favourite Rob lines to write, and now it will hold and even dearer place in my heart...Wow...really...
And thank you - I am sooooo happy you loved it! And fear not, Evie certainly does do NY with Benbo! And yeah, please, pretty please nicely with orbiting condom Rob on top - stick with me here now you've started. The story has evolved sooooo much! And I don't care how often you say it, I still squee with joy every time I hear that it's realistic!!
And am I sure I don't know them...well.....
N'awwww! I wish!
Duders xx
Reviewer: kyles1979 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 11:03 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Slipping Into Something Comfortable
Well that update flew into our inboxs! I had a little skip in the air when I saw it there!
I loved Twee meeting the parents that was good. The funny stories about Rob were gold, I loved the brains in your balls comment! How very true!
They certainly are getting very attached to each other aren't they? Will be interesting to see how they go this week they are apart, it is the first real test of their new relationship.
Excellent chapter as always!
Author's Response: kyles1979,
Yay, I know! My Beta flipped it quick! I joined you with the skip!
I'm so pleased you enjoyed the embarrassing tales from Rob's Dad and Tom. The balls comment is oh so true!
Yep, Rob and Twee are falling hard and fast. You're right about the week being a test. It gives them both a chance to evaluate the situation they are in...
Thank you chick!
Duders
Reviewer: megsten (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 09:22 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Slipping Into Something Comfortable
this is slowly becoming my favorite RPF. your Rob has got to be close to spot on. i know we all want to believe he's perfect but come on...he's so cute when he's fumbly. lol. oh and i thought i'd mention i keep picturing actress Blake Lively as Evie.
Author's Response: megsten,
Whooooa! *THUDADUDDUD*
Thank you! Gosh, I'm bowled over by that...speechless...and that's saying something, really!
Now I googled Blake Lively, and I can see where you're coming from! I actually posted a pic of Evie over on the forum thread. She's blonde (I know, I just stated the obvious), with a girl next door type of look, but curvier than Blake. She's got an hourglass kind of figure - something for Rob to grab onto! ;) Well spotted chick!
*Sigh* I'm still incoherent over your review....
Mwah!
Duders
Reviewer: claudia paris cullen (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 09:21 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Slipping Into Something Comfortable
Cute chappie.. Love Mr P and the stories.. what a great guy... Mrs P was a great hostess and they both def seemed to like Evie. The sisters were great and I am sure they must have liked Evie too..
Lemons were nice and juicy the way I love them and so cute.. Rob is adorable when he gets his neck rubbed.. Oh to be the one to scratch his sexy neck.. whew.... And I adore how he talks to Miss Fuggles.. what a great guy he is...
Sad they are going to be apart for a bit but I am sure the reuniting will be great..
Hope she remembers to text him.. I love their texts..
Dying for more as always..
This story has totally clamied me!! I love it to bits!
Author's Response: claudia paris cullen,
Jeez! Thank you!! I like neck rubbed Rob too! ;) He does enjoy a good talking to with Fuggles too!
They are not apart for long - just the next chapter, although it's a biggie! And the texts? Well, there's emails!!
And thank you! As you can probably tell, this story owns me! I just can't seem to put Rob and Twee down...
Duders x
Reviewer: KathyK (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 09:18 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Slipping Into Something Comfortable
I know his parents are glad he found a nice English girl, yeah?
Author's Response: Hey KathyK,
Yes, indeed, Mama and Papa P are happy bunnies!
Duders
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 08:12 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Slipping Into Something Comfortable
ROFL that was so funny, your imagination knows no bounds. I can't wait to hear about Ben and Evie in New York, fun times to be had at the Pleasure Chest?? I can't believe that Rob did not realise that Ben is gay, talk about world of your own. Rob's going to be sad without Evie for the week, is this going to make his mind work overtime knowing that Brent is there and there's a good chance that Evie will meet up with him and possibly have to work alongside him at some point? I'm still lovin' this story - next chapter pleasey, please. Jane x
Author's Response: Robsblueeyes,
Hey hon! Yes, my imagination is a weird and wacky place! Of course, NY has a Pleasure Chest visit! She promised Lil! And yes, Rob is going to miss the Twee a little, but she'll be back. And I don't think he'll really contemplate the Brent thing, but Evie certainly does...?! I think you're onto something...Next chapter on its way!
Duders x
Reviewer: Chicsarah (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 07:46 PM · On: Chapter 3 - He's Just a Boy
Very sweet so far -- I love the sparks of interest. I can hear Evie's inner fan girl squealing from here.
Author's Response: Chicsarah, Thank you! Yep, Evie's inner fan girl is all of a tizz! Hope you continue to enjoy!
Duders
Reviewer: gopher4953 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 06:31 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Slipping Into Something Comfortable
Hey, darlin'!
Having found this story just the other day, I am in love with Rob and Evie! RPfics are my faves and although I am Team Kellan all the way, your characters have stolen a piece of my heart! I love romantic, naughty ,serious, and childish Rob, and Evie is super!
The potty story had me holdin' my mouth and snortin', tryin' not to disturb my husband sittin' across the room! How did Rob not know that Ben is gay? Desensitizing Rob's vagina allergy was awesome, with the lemon that followed...yum! Absolutely brilliant, sweetie! Lookin' to forward to more of those precious moments!
Now, what's goin' to happen in New York? Will Evie meet up with Brent, causin' Rob's insecurities to flare? Will Brent try somethin'?
This just gets better and better makin' me anxious for MORE PLEASE!
Thanks for such an entertainin' read!
Ellen
Author's Response: Gopher4953,
Wow! What a wonderful review! *Bows down, not worthy!*
I am very invested in my characters, it's sooooooo fantastic to hear from people about them. Thank you! So Mr P had plenty to dish on Rob didn't he? LOL! And yes, how slow on the uptake was Rob about Ben?! And of course, glad you liked the lemons 'cause believe it or not - I'm a bit lemon shy! I didn't know if I could write them or not....
Yep, New York is next. Lots going on over there for Evie and Ben. Will Evie meet up with Brent....uhmm....probably....ooooh, must keep schtum! LOL!
Gosh, this review is doing me in, it's so lovely! Thank you! It's really inspiring!
Next chapter coming v soon!
Duders
Reviewer: Chicsarah (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 06:30 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Red Cheeks and Clumsy Feet
I can't wait to find out what the "conehead" story is!
Author's Response: Chicsarah,
Hello there! Well, it's rather embarrassing for Evie - particularly the fact that Rob knows about it! Hope you enjoy! ;)
Duders
Reviewer: LaBellamora (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 06:30 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Slipping Into Something Comfortable
They are just a lovely couple. sometimes I feel like it is a diary i am peeking into. You give such great details.
Author's Response: LaBellamora,
Gosh, thanks! I am a details girl!
Duders
Reviewer: ellahudgens (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 05:50 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Slipping Into Something Comfortable
i really loved this chapter
Author's Response: ellahudgens,
I'm so pleased to hear that! Thank you!
Duders
Reviewer: jsjohnson73 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 05:41 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Slipping Into Something Comfortable
Love it. Awesome story
Author's Response: jsjohnson73,
Wow! Thank you!!
Duders
Reviewer: Uglybear23 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 12:44 PM · On: Chapter 12 - No Good at Casual
phew, thats a whole lot of lemonly goodness! I loved it very much! and romantic Rob, natught Rob, teasing Rob, its allll good with me! any Rob I'm sure would be great for anybody. Evie and him have come a long way like you said in such a short time, but thats how things go sometimes when they're meant to be. so happy to see that you updated! :)
Author's Response: Uglybear23,
Hehe! Thank you! Yes, rather a lemony chapter - it had to be though, as you say, they've come a long way in a relatively short time and that's partly because they just like each other so much. For Evie, she's not moved this fast before, but she's willing to see where it takes her.
Hope you enjoy the next one!
Duders
Reviewer: p00ckee (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 07:13 AM · On: Chapter 12 - No Good at Casual
Wow, again. I can't decide which Rob I like better--romantic or naughty Rob. OK,OK so naughty Rob wins out a couple pegs ahead. But I don't think naughty Rob would be as irresistable if the romance weren't part of the scenario. Great chapter. So looking forward to the next and the next and the NEXT.
Author's Response: poockee,
I think I'm with you on that - naughty Rob wins me over too! Although I think he can only get away with it because he is also a bit mushy at times too and is making it abundantly clear to Evie that he adores her already.
Thank you so much. Next chapter's up - hope you enjoy it!
Duders
Reviewer: Gabi-b (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 06:09 AM · On: Chapter 12 - No Good at Casual
I looove this chap. I want that too, pleaseee
Xo, G
Author's Response: Oh Gabi-b,
I looove that you love this chap! Thank you hon!
Duders x
Reviewer: mekent (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 03:16 AM · On: Chapter 12 - No Good at Casual
Rob and Evie are just both so adorable! Kristen you've only just redeemed yourself in my books, don't go annoying me again!! loved it as usual!
x
Author's Response: mekent,
Awwww, I love that you are still enjoying Rob and Evie! Thank you so much! And yes, you're right about Kristen - she did kind of redeem herself, and then took a step back with that but hey, Rob kind of manned up a bit so maybe she'll be a little more understanding now that she can see how important Evie is to him already.
Duders x
Reviewer: KathyK (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2010 05:24 PM · On: Chapter 12 - No Good at Casual
This is the first RL story I've read that is truly British. I love all the British words and phrases. And I do like Evie, she seems stronger than most of the women in the other stories. And Rob seems more real, too. And I always wondered what men felt. Thanks for sharing, Rob.
Author's Response: KathyK,
So very happy you are enjoying the Brit style of this story - I'm a Brit, born and bred, so it's the only way I can write anyway! But so pleased you are enjoying it. Evie is a strong girl, glad you enjoy that. She's very independent. I write Rob how I imagine him to be, so it always makes me smile and do the internal happy dance to hear that others picture him well in this story! As for the male POV, it's a challenge to write, but I love a good challenge. Of course, some research *ahem* is required for some aspects! ;)
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Duders
Reviewer: Vampyre (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2010 04:33 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Fireworks in Every Sense
Snockered - it's the only way to ring in the New Year! Yeah, it looks like Rob has a lot of stalwart mates. And a great deal of affection for Evie.
Kris is certainly being a brat. Looks like one of us should tell Evie it's okay to flip Kris the bird.
Hah!
Author's Response: Snockered indeed!! Glad you are enjoying the Brit Pack. And yes, Rob is quickly falling for Evie - he doesn't do things by halves I don't imagine.
Evie just needs to remember what Lily said - she is the one Rob has chosen to spend time with, and that's all that matters. I love that saying though - flip the bird! LOL!
Duders
Reviewer: Vampyre (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2010 04:15 PM · On: Chapter 9 - 'Sorry, Mr T...'
My a bit of a challenge for Rob in the beginning. I like what he said to Evie, " I could fall for you you so easily, Evangeline Russo." *sigh*
Author's Response: Hehe! Yes, a bit of an awkward exchange with Kristen followed by a grilling from the Brit Pack!
Thanks for the stars! I keep meaning to say that...
Duders
Reviewer: Vampyre (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2010 03:06 PM · On: Chapter 8 - 'So, Take Me Upstairs...'
Per your end note questions: Kitchen Rob is adorable, Naughty Rob is inquisitive and charming. But the best thing of all is your unfailingly ability to write a story as if I were a silent witness to the events and conversations. A veritable fly on the wall, so to speak.
Well done!
Author's Response: Hello again Vampyre,
So happy to see you're still with me and catching up! Wow! Thank you! I want so much for people reading to feel like they are a fly on the wall, in there with them, experiencing it. That is just such a wonderful compliment - I feel all humble and silly...Thank you...
Duders
Reviewer: heyjude08 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2010 12:36 PM · On: Chapter 12 - No Good at Casual
I loved it! I just discovered your story last night and read it all!
The Kristin in the story is horrendous...makes me want to smack her. surly teen, indeed.
Author's Response: heyjude08,
Thank you! So happy to see you over here! My story Kristen is not behaving all that well right now, but she does have good intentions - I know that's difficult to see. She wants to protect Rob, and there is also a touch of jealousy, and feeling that she might lose him in some way. Of course, to Evie, she is a bit of surly teen as you say right now! LOL!
Hope you continue to enjoy!
Duders
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