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Reviewer: Piperbpf (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2010 09:08 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Turkey, Texts and Tissues
Mwuaaahahaha! What a gorgeous excuse for a chapter. Frisky time, flirting, family time, Ben being... well, Ben..., New York potential, perfect Christmas presents, self loving with text assistance, the fabulous Papa P, sex advice from Tom and last but not least, a pissed off Kristen.
So... did I manage to cover everything? Phew!
Oh yeah... Really wanted to comment on Evie just telling Rob "Fuck me". How liberating! But also, how attractive to him!! Go my girly, just you go!
Author's Response: Wow! Yep, think you got it covered there! Hehe!
Oooh, glad you liked brazen Evie there! She has a tendency to talk first, think later, and in this case it worked out for her! ;)
Duders x
Reviewer: Piperbpf (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2010 06:21 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Red Cheeks and Clumsy Feet
Awww, some of that chapter had me laughing so hard... And I'm sure there was stuff in there that was new.
It's so much fun reliving all these chapters, and noticing things that either weren't there before or that I'd forgotten...
Yay for reunited RobTwee!! He was actually really rather eloquent outside the pub, wasn't he? Good for him.
Author's Response: Hehe! Glad to have you with me on the funny stuff!
As I said, love that you're here with me! It's so much fun hearing your thoughts again! And yeah, he kind of redeemed himself in the end, didn't he? Bless!
Duders x
Reviewer: Piperbpf (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2010 05:29 AM · On: Chapter 5 - Date Night
Mmmmmm, the lemons!! Oh, god, what gorgeous lemons!!
OK now that I've got that out of my system... There were so many sweet and lovely things going on in this chapter and it's a shame that Rob panicked and bolted at the end and kinda ruined it all. How is Evie supposed to feel? Not that he's thinking about that.... yet...
It's a good thing he wasn't too close to hand. I think Lily might have junkpunched him if he had been!
Ah Tommy boy, what a loyal friend you are.... *sighs* OK, I'll try and keep my Tomlove under wraps over here....
Looking forward to them sorting out their shit and getting back together!
Author's Response: Hello again lovely!
So glad to have you with me on here! You know how much your support means to me with this story!
Yep, he did the blokey bolt, and kept his feelings hidden. Doh moment! And you're right about Lily - she certainly would've junkpunched him! LOL! I know you love the Sturridge, awww, he is too sweet!
Mwah!
Duders
Reviewer: Piperbpf (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2010 04:49 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Muffins and Proclamations
Delicious, delicious, delicious!! What a sweet boy Rob is, coming and giving her such wonderful brain food.... (yeah, I wonder if I can convince my husband that chocolate muffins are brain food!)
And then the makeout session... loved it! I could quite happily go the hormonal teenager route with Rob.... Uh, did I just say that out loud? LOL
Looking forward to date night!
Author's Response: Oh wow! I'm going to end up reliving these chapters with your reviews! Love that! I love the idea of Rob and muffins...Happy you enjoyed the making out second time around! What I would do to be in Evie's shoes, just for that, I'd be totally fine with just having a long, leisurely, make out session with that boy....Mmmmn....
There's quite a bit more detail in Date Night, hope you enjoy! Mwah!
Duders
Reviewer: Piperbpf (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2010 11:14 PM · On: Chapter 3 - He's Just a Boy
Such a cute chapter. They're discovering the delicious tension between them.... Wonder what might have happened had not Lily and Tom returned right at that moment... *winks*
Author's Response: Hmmmn, *evil laugh*, what would have happened if Tom and Lily hadn't returned? Who knows...but it leaves us with a slow build for another chapter or so...
Love ya chick!
Duders
Reviewer: Piperbpf (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2010 07:06 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Whiskey, Coneheads and Kisses
Ahhhhhhh!! So satisfying! They got past the crap that happened at the pub and were just able to talk, like two real people.
And she kissed him. Gooooo Evie!!! Way to completely intrigue the man...
And Rob's self loving.... Ah, who doensn't love a bit of well written self loving, hey? It was the thoughts going throuh his head that were most interesting...
Author's Response: Hmmmn, yep, the awkwardness dissipated just a little...I must admit, I was singing in my head shamelessly 'Go Evie, go Evie, go!' when I wrote her kissing him! Brave!! Could have gone sooooo wrong...
As for Rob's self love...hehe! I tried to show that it wasn't just about that in a way, that he was looking for release of some kind, and that was where he found it in that moment, thinking about her...a sign of what's to come with how she impacts on his life I think. Glad you liked it! And I know I said it, but so happy you're here! Mwah!
Duders
Reviewer: Piperbpf (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2010 06:25 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Red Cheeks and Clumsy Feet
Oooh I love you girly and I love this story!! So, I finally joined Twilighted, had to come and see the tweaking that you said you'd done. And maybe it's because I'm so far ahead with the story and have kind of forgotten the beginning, but I can't tell what's new and what's not, I just know it's good.
Captivating intro.
Author's Response: Piperbpf,
Wow! So very happy to see you over here!! Seriously - I am doing the running man in my head! Girly I love you back and then some!
Duders
Reviewer: buff802y (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2010 08:34 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Slipping Into Something Comfortable
Good story!!!
Author's Response: Awww, why thank you so much! And thank you tons for the stars too! Hope you like the next one.
Duders
Author's Response: Awww, why thank you so much! And thank you tons for the stars too! Hope you like the next one.
Duders
Reviewer: ksw3 (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2010 01:23 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Cowards a Lonely Man
Cute! I enjoy your writing! Will read more later.
Author's Response: Awww, thank you ksw3!
Mwah!
Duders
Reviewer: ksw3 (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2010 12:34 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Date Night
I enjoyed this chapter a lot. I think maybe Rob was just overwelmed at what he felt or is feeling? He didnt expect to feel so much so fast? I dont know but any way loved the chapter and will read more later! Thank you for it.
Author's Response: ksw3,
Awww, so pleased yet again to see that you're still reading! Yes, Rob had a bit of boy moment at the end of Date Night. Poor Evie is perplexed and not best pleased! Think you're right though...he's a little overwhelmed...
Thank you so much for reviewing again. Hope you continue to enjoy.
Duders
Reviewer: Fuzzyfurr1977 (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2010 02:26 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Slipping Into Something Comfortable
Reading on the computer today. I just love embarrassed Rob. Hope Evie finds a nice coming home present for Rob while shopping!
Author's Response: Fuzzyfurr1977,
Yaaaay! So pleased you enjoyed embarrassed Rob...and a present from NY? Well, there is a free gift that Evie gets from her trip to The Pleasure Chest which could prove quite amusing!!! ;)
Duders
Reviewer: Leprechaun (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2010 02:03 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Red Cheeks and Clumsy Feet
Forgot to mention how much I loved the fact that you worked one of his ridiculously awkward interviewing moments into your story! Exposure therapy.....love it!
Author's Response: Leprechaun,
Hehe! Well, he needed a bit of desensitisation, and Twee was up to the challenge! ;)
Duders
Reviewer: p00ckee (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2010 12:15 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Slipping Into Something Comfortable
Love it, love it love it.
Author's Response: poockee,
Love it, love it, love it that you love it! THANK YOU!
Duders
Reviewer: SwimmingBee (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2010 05:55 AM · On: Chapter 13 - Slipping Into Something Comfortable
Yayyy, the rubber ducky is back! :)
Love the bathtime scene. So sweet! And Rob talking to Fuggles on the staircase, hehee!
One of my favourite parts though, was Richard kissing Evie's hand. Was that a shout-out to Rob's email from his Dad that he read on Leno? Or just a cute coincidence? Either way, loved it!
Do you know what? One thing worried me about this chapter. This line, from Evie...
If I felt trapped in any way, I would bolt.
Umm, oh-oh! Do I smell trouble down the line? Eeek, I hope not!
I could go on, but I don't wanna compete for the longest review title with you! ;)
Loved it, as always! Mwah!
Author's Response: SwimmingBee,
Hello lovely! You liked the bath and the Fuggles talk?! Awww, so pleased!
And yes, you got me with Richard! In a future chapter, I do have lots more of Richard and his 'advice'. And yes, totally Leno inspired!
Interesting what you picked up on about Evie's tendency to 'bolt'...interesting...just saying...
Thank you chick! Double mwah!
Duders x
Reviewer: ksw3 (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2010 05:50 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Muffins and Proclamations
I like lemons. Bring em on! Looking forward to more!
Author's Response: ksw3,
Ohhhhh, there is soooooooo much more....hope it delivers for you! ;)
Duders
Reviewer: ksw3 (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 06:46 PM · On: Chapter 3 - He's Just a Boy
I am liking your story. It is cute! I will keep reading! The two of them are getting to know each other a little better. LOL. Thank you for it!
Author's Response: ksw3,
Awwww, thank you!!!!!
Duders
Reviewer: Wilynn (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 05:45 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Slipping Into Something Comfortable
I will have to go back to review all the chapters I read on my phone. I haven't even been on my computer at home because I have spent almost every waking moment at work the last couple of weeks!
This was a great chapter! I love how they are slowly getting more comfortable with each other, and yet they know they should still not take anything for granted. I am glad Evie is independent and comfortable enough to be true to herself.
Rob's family was so funny. I just about fell out of my chair.
Author's Response: Wilynn,
Missed you!! So great to hear your thoughts!
Yes, they are doing what the latest chapter implies....Evie is fiercely independent, and that does allow her to be comfortable in seizing moments whilst remaining true to herself. So happy you see that.
I love the Pattinsons, and how I imagine them to be! So pleased you enjoyed it!
Mwah!
Duders
Reviewer: Vampyre (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 02:05 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Saying Hell to Logic and Sensibility
Wow the green-eyed monster sure raised her ugly head!
Thankfully, tub + fire = Kristen who?
Author's Response: Vampyre,
Yep, the tub and the fire kind of proved to be quite the distraction!! ;)
Glad you're still with me...
Duders x
Reviewer: Leprechaun (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 12:11 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Slipping Into Something Comfortable
Are you sure you don't know him?? Lol.
Author's Response: Leprechaun,
Gaaaah! That kills me!!! THANK YOU!
And uhmmm....no...I wish...I am basing my Rob entirely on one night where I was lucky enough to see him in his element - spending time with the boys in London.
Mwah!
Duders
Reviewer: Uglybear23 (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 11:37 AM · On: Chapter 13 - Slipping Into Something Comfortable
I can't say this enough, I really love this story. It's so simple, but it's so great. Everyone gets along and everything flows wonderfuly. You're a great writer and your Rob and Evie are truly great together. Hope they can make it through being apart from one another, they really are too good together. Love the quick updates :) <3
Author's Response: Uglybear23,
*Sigh*...I will never tire of reading that! Thank you!! Rob and Twee are simplistic in their connection - they just get each other, that's what I love about them. Two complex people joined in a connection that is entirely...simple...Gosh, thank you.
Quick updates will continue for as long as my tireless Beta allows!
Hope you continue to enjoy!
Duders x
Reviewer: mekent (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 10:59 AM · On: Chapter 13 - Slipping Into Something Comfortable
Haha loved Mr Pattinson's Rob stories, how embarrassing! Great update as usual! Absence does make the heart grow fonder as they say, we shall see though I guess
x
Author's Response: mekent,
Thank you! Am of course so very happy you're still with me and enjoying!
Absence does make the heart grow fonder, they do say that...hmmmn...
Duders x
Reviewer: nsturms72 (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 10:02 AM · On: Chapter 13 - Slipping Into Something Comfortable
Really good!
Author's Response: nsturms72,
Thanking you muchly lovely!
Duders
Reviewer: blb0157 (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 09:09 AM · On: Chapter 13 - Slipping Into Something Comfortable
This is a great story keep the chapters coming !!!!
brenda
Author's Response: Brenda,
Thank you so very, very much! They're coming, trust me! It's coming out of me in bucket loads!!
Duders
Reviewer: Gabi-b (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 08:01 AM · On: Chapter 13 - Slipping Into Something Comfortable
Another amazing chap, I love it.
Xo.
Author's Response: Gabi-b,
Awww, you are continually too kind! Thank you for the stars!
Mwah!!
Duders x
Reviewer: louisianaartsyfartsy (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 07:07 AM · On: Chapter 13 - Slipping Into Something Comfortable
Tee hee hee hee!!! Tom and Rob dancing, air guitar-ing and cooking!?! Oh mah LAWD!
Too much goodness.
Author's Response: Heeeey!
Glad you got some pleasure out of Tom and Rob's little kitchen performance!!
Thank you chick!
Mwah!
Duders
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