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Reviewer: nsturms72 (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2010 04:40 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Sunday's Are For...

Love it!



Author's Response:

nsturms72,

Oooooh thank you so much!

Duders

Reviewer: gopher4953 (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2010 03:51 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Sunday's Are For...

Oh, duders!

What a simply lovely, warm and exquisite chapter! I just love sexy, dirty, masterful Rob...and so does Evie!

This was so much fun! From the erotic, tense couplin' to the sweet love makin', with the shower sex in the middle! And the fun banter in the kitchen and the pillow fight while watchin' TV.

Yay! Rob kinda sorta said "it", but not quite! he is soooo in love with her, but unsure of himself and where this could go; his life bein' what it is.

He's asked her to visit him in Kent and now the BAFTAs. Will she attend the awards, or will she just meet him at the after party. Big descision for Evie. Only you know what she will do, darlin', so have a great holiday and then give us MORE PLEASE!

Love ya!

Ellen xx



Author's Response:

gopher4953,

*Happy sigh*....Gosh, I love hearing from you!  Rob was certainly doing a bit of channeling there wasn't he?  Lucky Evie!

I'm so pleased you enjoy their banter.  I love writing that between them!

He did kind of say 'it', he was soooooo close...Gaaaah!  He will, veeeery soon!  You're absolutely right though, he's starting to worry about the impact on Evie of being with him might involve.  Next chapter it hits him hard in the face!  Eeek!  He's trying to show her how important she is to him though, he just needs to keep that in mind next chapter though. ;)

The BAFTA's is a hard decision for Evie, just the idea of the after party is.  It's going to be a bumpy ride...Hope you'll stay with me on it and see her through to the other side!  I'm back from my hols now, but my Beta is away!  The next chapter is in the queue waiting for her return though. 

Thanks so much again!

Loves ya back!

Duders xx

Reviewer: louisianaartsyfartsy (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2010 03:43 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Sunday's Are For...

TEASE! No 'L' word! You're an iloveyou tease! ~raspberries~

Off to find hubby. You know how that works! =)

They are so funny together! I like the way they play... makes me wanna wrastle with hubs. Sounds like a good idea... Peace out!



Author's Response:

louisianaartsyfartsy,

Whooops!  I know!  I am an iloveyou tease!  Bwah! 

Off to find hubby again eh?  I must be doing something right then.... ;)

Enjoy the wrestle! 

Duders

Reviewer: cullenscougar (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2010 03:16 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Sunday's Are For...

Hi Duders! OH. MY. GOD. Seriously. I order a Rob wake up call for tomorrow at 7am please. Phew. To wake up like that, with him, every day. God you'd never get out of bed would you? Someone's gonna be seriously lucky to end up with him in real life.

Awesome chapter hun. Loved it. The bacon master, brilliant. Oooh so Evie's going to the Bafta's and to the 'secret' location for Bel Ami filming. Lucky girl. God I cannot wait for Bel Ami to come out. I bet he's fab.

Yeah I know I'm peppering this review with RL Rob but is that surprising? You write a very good story hun and can't wait for more.

Sorry that I'm not following on RPF but I find it really hard to follow stories on there. Yeah, I know I publish on there cos it's quick, but reading on here is so much easier.

Have a good holiday, going anywhere nice? hugs Clare x



Author's Response:

Hey cullenscougar!

So great to see you here!  Mmmmn, I would certainly like a wake up call from the Pretty like that too!  I'm not a morning person (like Evie), but yeah, I'd become one for that! 

Hehe!  The bacon master indeed.  He was all proud about his bacon sarnies!  And yep, Evie is off to the Bafta's after party.  It's going to be an interesting night, pretty rocky for her actually...But rest assured, she does still go to the secret Bel Ami location so things do work out!  I seriously can't wait for Bel Ami!  I read the book and was like 'Rob?  As Bel Ami?  I'm gonna explode in the cinema!!!' 

I try to write Rob just as I imagine him to be...done a lot of research!  ;)

Hey, don't worry!  I'd prefer it if you stuck with me over here anyways as the story has evolved soooooo much!  It's quite different, lengthier, more details.  I love hearing from you on here! I need to get over to your story though *hangs head in shame*.  Life is a wee bit on the hectic side though.  I will, promise! 

Just got back from Dubai with a friend.  It was amazing!  Loved it.  Tired now...

Hope to see you next chapter!

Hugs,

Duders x

Reviewer: TinyTangerine (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2010 03:15 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Sunday's Are For...

Yay!!

I hope you're doing great on your trip!

I love this chapter, it was fun and it was full with your average sunday with your boyfriend stuff... I must admit that I had to google some quotes because I had no idea what you were talking about (apparently I'm not that good Rob's fan) hahaha and i had to google other brit slang but all in the name of fun!!

I hope she goes to BAFTAs but if I remember correctly... Kristen also goes to them right? will she bring up trouble? I hope she doesn't... I don't really dislike the girl but in this fic she is clearly immature and annoying... soI hope that she finds another boyfriend and leaves these two alone :)

Post another soon!! please?

Andie



Author's Response:

TinyTangerine,

Hello there!  I had a lovely trip yes thanks!  Bit tired...Need a holiday after my holiday!  LOL!

I apologise for my Britishism's!  I know I do it a lot, and I try to put notes at the end to let people know what on earth I'm warbling on about, but sometimes I forget!  Glad you had fun Googling some of them! 

She does indeed go to the after party.  I can promise one thing - no drama from Kristen. They've kind of sorted their stuff out between them now.  However, it does get rocky for Evie for various reasons....Hopefully by now you have faith in her though, to know she'll sort out whatever crap comes her way...?!  Hope so! 

I've submitted the next one, but my lovely Beta is on a well deserved holiday!  Hopefully it won't be too long!

Duders

Reviewer: jsjohnson73 (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2010 03:09 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Sunday's Are For...

This was a fun and endearing  chapter.  Really great story and I"m enjoying every minute of it.



Author's Response:

jsjohnson73,

Wow, thank you so much.  I'm really pleased you are still enjoying Rob and Twee.  I adore writing them!  Thank you for dropping by again to share your thoughts.  It's always so great to hear from people. 

Duders

Reviewer: kyles1979 (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2010 03:00 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Sunday's Are For...

Gah! So close! I slammed my hand down on my chair when he stopped then! LOL!

These two are so cute together, it makes me giggle!

I hope she goes to the BAFTA's with Tom and Lily, although I have a feeling that it might be harder than what they think to keep their hands to themselves!

I hope you are having a good trip!



Author's Response:

Kyles1979,

I knooooow!  He almost said it...almost...

I like them together too, they are all kinds of awkward, naughty, confident, shy...a right funny mix! 

She's going to the after party for sure.  It's going to be a little bit tough for her, that's all I can say at the mo...Eeek! 

Dubai was fab!  Thank you hon!  And thank you for your kind words on Twitter!

Mwah,

Duders

Reviewer: twi_mom_teddi (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2010 02:48 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Sunday's Are For...

Fantastic chapter hun!  I love Rob just being Rob...Hmmm...the Baftas!  And I LOVE Fawlty Towers!  : )

teddi



Author's Response:

Teddi!

Awww, thank you so much!  I love Rob just being Rob too!  He's so lovely to write!  Fawlty Towers?  Oh yeah!  Classic Brit comedy!

Thank you!

Duders

Reviewer: louisianaartsyfartsy (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2010 08:05 AM · On: Chapter 15 - Home Turf

Possessive Rob is nomnom. I'll take it. He needs to get over being scared about saying the "L" word.

Can't wait for the morning wake up call! Yay!



Author's Response:

Hello louisianaartsyfartsy!

Nomnom!  Hehe! 

Morning wake up call on its way veeeeery soon! ;) He does get braver...

Duders

Reviewer: p00ckee (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2010 04:12 AM · On: Chapter 15 - Home Turf

SOOOO GOOD. JUST WANT HIM TO SAY IT AGAIN (OUT LOUD!) AND WITH CONVICTION!!! UPDATE SOOOOON!!
MARVELOUS, AS USUAL.

Author's Response:

Ahhh poockee,

He will!  Just not quite yet...he tries...and then uhm doesn't!  Hehe!  It's coming in the next few chapters!

Thank you so much!

Duders

Reviewer: Uglybear23 (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2010 03:46 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Home Turf

Hot damn! Possesive rob was very hot. haha but I really hope he says I love you for real to Evie because something tells me she feels the same way. I hope for nothing but the best for these two! and always love the story! :)



Author's Response:

Uglybear23,

Hehe!  Just the right amount of possessiveness yes?  That's what I aimed for anyway!  And he will say it, don't worry, just not quite...yet...

Thank you so much! Reviews are slowing a little, and hearing from lovely people like you spurs me on no end!

Duders

Reviewer: Vampyre (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2010 11:14 AM · On: Chapter 13 - Slipping Into Something Comfortable

I think I grinned through this whole chapter.  You have such a gift for storytelling.  Loved hearing about meeting the p's (stands for  parents in American) all the funny stories about Rob growing up.  Pricesless!

Another round of yummy sex!  And always enjoy hearing about their friends and their time spent with.

And . . .  one more thing . . .  I want Tub Time with Rob!!!!



Author's Response:

Hello again Vampyre,

Awwww!  So pleased you liked this one too.  A gift for storytelling?!  Wow.  Thank you! I loved writing the p's, loved it! 

Tub time with Rob, eh?  Yep, I'll agree with you on that one!  My story Rob does like to be included one way or another! ;)

Duders

Reviewer: Vampyre (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2010 10:33 AM · On: Chapter 12 - No Good at Casual

One of the best "romancing" scenes I've ever read!  And what's the deal with Kstew?  She just make herself look tacky as hell.

Jeesh.



Author's Response:

Oh Vampyre!

Your review just made me soooo happy!  Thank you!  I rather enjoyed writing it...*smirk*

As for story Kristen - she's just feeling very wary, and maybe rightfully so.  She doesn't know Evie, and she is very close to Rob and therefore makes her presence known.  Her intentions are well meant as far as Rob's concerned. 

Duders

Reviewer: mekent (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2010 11:02 AM · On: Chapter 15 - Home Turf

All caught up after my fleeting trip to a rather sunny spain, great update! Possessive Rob was great haha! I love your Rob he's so adorable even when he's in an emo funk, bless! I do think he should just fess up to Evie, it might be a little early on but I've got a feeling she feels the same, whether she's aware of it or not!

x



Author's Response:

mekent,

Hey you!  Did you have a lovely time in Spain?  Hope so!  I'm off to Dubai and all scared - just read some awful stories on the internet about the airport there!  Should have just left it!  Anyway, possessive Rob was in the building, right?  He is prone to emo funks, yes, but he also puts it out there when necessary!  Hehe!  He will let Evie know, eventually...not next chapter eventually..but eventually!  She of course feels the same, but she needs to process what that mean for her. 

Thank you so much for dropping me your thoughts - I love hearing from you!

Duders

Reviewer: LiRock (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2010 10:09 AM · On: Chapter 15 - Home Turf

Unggh, men!!! Why can't they say what they mean? He needs to grow a set and tell her! I'm sure she will be more than happy to hear it He needs to quit underestimating her. Right? Right!

Thanks for sharing. We appreciate you.

Lots.



Author's Response:

Unggh men indeed LiRock!

Haha! He was playing it safe wasn't he?!  He will tell her...eventually!  And yes, he maybe needs to not underestimate her so much, but also Twee is very head strong and independent, he feels that, gets that vibe from her - she may not be quite ready to say those three words! 

Awwww, but hearing that last bit - it really does mean so much. I get a heck of a lot of views, and not so many reviews on here, and so it's lovely to hear from you!  Thank you!

Mwah!

Duders

Reviewer: elvis4scilla (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2010 07:02 PM · On: Chapter 14 - Doing it All, Putting it Out There

I'm baaaack! Nice, long chapter, thanks, sweetie. I like that you've thrown Brent in there, it will make for some interesting tension. Rob has himself confessed he's possessive, so it will be interesting to see how that plays out. Love Ben, he's so fun. The phone sex was verra sexy. Can't wait for next chappy, so I can be all caught up. Muaa.



Author's Response:

Scilla!

Hello again lovely!  So happy you enjoyed!  Almost caught up now!  Brent is around in the next chapter - Cue Rob and a little possessive marking of territory!  ;) So happy you like Ben!  I love writing him. 

Mwah, mwah!

Duders

Reviewer: pearlgem (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2010 10:27 PM · On: Chapter 14 - Doing it All, Putting it Out There

Brent is going to be trouble!!!! Loved loved loved the phone sex!



Author's Response:

pearlgem,

Hmmn, Brent is a bit of a problem for Rob in the latest chapter, but he deals accordingly.  Glad you enjoyed the phone call!  ;)

Duders

Reviewer: TinyTangerine (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2010 03:02 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Home Turf

I spent the afternoon reading the whole story and let me tell you something: I love it!!

Evie is an awesome girl (and I love her name too!) and I like that Robert seems to be a little shy, normal and insecure guy, not the confident god that some people like him to be.

You must be from England right? I like the words you use too, it reminds me from my days in UK so its a familiar feeling...

Keep going! I absolutely love this story!

 

Andie.



Author's Response:

Andie,

Wow!  A mammoth Rob and Twee run!  I'm so happy you like Evie, she is very close to my heart and I adore writing her.  Rob in my story is a strange mix of shyness and boldness - how I imagine him to be, and how he comes across to me in the media. 

I am indeed from England!  Couldn't write any other way if I tried! 

There's tons more to come - 27 chapters written so far and still writing.  So hope you continue to enjoy!

Duders

Reviewer: claudia paris cullen (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2010 01:09 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Home Turf

Another delicious chappie. I love possesive Rob.. what a sexy beast! Tom's advice cracked me up, probably best Rob did not take his advice literally.

I don't like Brent. Something dark and sinister about him.. not sure what but I do not trust him.

Sad that Rob told Evie he loved her and she did not hear. I hope he will try when the timing might be better.

Duders, I just adore this story so much! I cannot get enough of it!

Dying all ready for the next chappie!



Author's Response:

claudia paris cullen,

Thank you so much!  Possessive Rob, in his own adorkable way!  Hehe!  Tom's advice has served him well so far hasn't it?  What with the pillow, the telling off over his disappearing act and the marking of territory...Go Sturridge!  I love that boy!

Brent...hmmn, he's certainly not popular. At the end of the day, he's jealous and a little put out that there won't be any more boundary blurring with him and Evie. 

Oooooh, I adore that you adore this story!  THANK YOU!

Mwah

Duders

Reviewer: Gabi-b (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2010 12:29 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Home Turf

I looove this chap.

Xo, G



Author's Response:

Gabi-b,

Ecstatic to hear you're still enjoying this!

Mwah!

Duders

Reviewer: newyorkminute (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2010 12:23 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Home Turf

Duders, Aaah, I don’t even know where to start, I’ve read this chapter twice, the first time I had to abandon my Weiss Bar and go and put it back in the freezer because I couldn’t concentrate on it!  I love this story to bits, I just can’t even say it enough.  I  LOVE the non-smoothness of Bedroom Rob, the embarrassment and the awkwards, “Please we could be quick, I’ll be quick, I promise”…God, that’s funny.  I LOVE the Sturridge quips and the advice and the whole matey, blokey thing and the way you write it, love it. And I love where this is going, the development of the relationship, it just feels so real and human and normal and every day…..but special.  And….can I say I love it one more time?


Please please please tell me the spanking stick makes an appearance in later chapters. I don’t know whether I want that more or Rob telling Twee that he loves her. It’s a close call. And I’m promising on my dog’s life that I won’t read anything from the RP forum, I’m loving this version too much!


I have a day off work on Monday, it’s supposed to be pissing down with rain and I’m seriously contemplating rereading the whole story…….


Jodi xoxo

 

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Author's Response:

newyorkminute,

Hey!  Waaaah!  Thank you!  Gosh!  *Blushes profusely*

Did you get to the Weiss Bar in the end?!  Hehe!  I just can't write Rob as totally smooth, and am so pleased you get that and enjoy it. His determination and attention to detail are what makes him a good lover in my story - his willingness and desire to please.  And his naughty whoops about being quick!  Hehe!  Well, he's twenty-three (at this point in the story), and his hormones are running riot!  Gah, what I wouldn't do to have one night with that!  ;) I adore writing Rob and Tom - they appear to be such a cute example of real, blokey friendship.  I LOVE that you enjoy the realness of this story, as I've said before, it's what I strive for!  Gah again! 

The spanking stick?  Hmmmn...well, Evie was a little freaked at Rob's intrigue there!  Will it appear in a later chapter?  Maybe in some shape or form...!  Haha!  Oh you are too lovely! Thank you!

And you're contemplating re-reading?!  THUD.  I am thrilled! Thank you!  Enjoy your day off, and if there's Rob and Twee in there for you, hope you enjoy again!

Duders xx

Reviewer: KathyK (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2010 08:45 AM · On: Chapter 15 - Home Turf

I'm glad this Rob isn't so crazy jealous, like so many other stories. He handled the ex very well, for a change.It's hard to imagine him being so insecure. Doesn't he know he doesn't even have to act, or sing, or anything, all he has to do is stand there? He's so beautiful and sweet.



Author's Response:

Hi KathyK,

Yeah, I can't really imagine him being overtly jealous, but he's certainly a little rattled by Brent here.  Glad you like my version of him here.  I know though right?  He really doesn't get it, does he? LOL! 

Duders

Reviewer: Ladymerlot (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2010 08:05 AM · On: Chapter 15 - Home Turf

Okay, where do I begin.  Of course, I love the story.  I particularly enjoy the fact I am following you, Duders, Scilla, and SwimmingBee; also Steph with "Need to Escape".  Rob fics. You each bring your own unique perspective to the pretty. Rob. The variable is your women. But, the common thread is his intropective, angsty and completely adorable, unabashed shyness. What always comes thru, is he is just a guy. A bloke who was completely unprepared for the tumultuous reaction to Twilight.  So, I read your beautiful, funny, quirky and sometimes angst-driven stories. Because. I, like so many women out there fell in love with this beautiful Englishman.  You each humanized him for the ordinary woman so we could live vicariously thru your female characters .  So thank you all for sweet Gemma, sparkly Evie Twee, sexy Marisa and compassionate Jen. They represent the need in all of us to be part of his life. And, SIGH to dream.   

PS. I am probably one of the oldest fans on Twilighted. Age has no reason for this addiction. Blush! I am 70. And loving every minute of it.

Mwah to you all.

Linda 



Author's Response:

Linda,

*Sigh*...The fact that you included me and my story in the same sentence as Scilla, SwimmingBee and Steph just makes me sooooo happy!  I love those girls and their stories so very much and they have each been incredibly supportive of me.  SwimmingBee and I had our stories come up at roughly the same time, so we're newbies together and have great fun cheering each other on over on the forum, and Steph and Scilla have been absolutely awesome in their support and encouragement.  I've always seen Rob as just a guy, someone as you say who was catapulted into this huge frenzy of a franchise and all the expectations and attentions that brings.  He is just a guy, but a special one, and I love writing him.  He is so easy to write in that respect.  I don't want perfect Rob, because he doesn't need to be perfect in my eyes.  He just needs to be Rob.  What I always intended to aim for with London Rain was a realistic work of fiction that represented how I imagine Rob to be, and how he might respond to someone like Evie.  The fact that people like you are reading makes me so happy.  'Sparkly Evie Twee' - awww, love that! What I love most about the female characters in mine and the stories you have mentioned is that they are individuals that share one common theme - strength.  I love that in all of Rob's girls in these stories! 

P.s. Pfft!  You're as young as you feel right?  I am eternally 26 in my mind...just not in body...add 5 years onto that! LOL! 

Mwah back at ya!

Duders x

Reviewer: gopher4953 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2010 07:49 AM · On: Chapter 15 - Home Turf

Hey sweetie!

What an amazin' chapter; from the homecomin' to the falling back to sleep and everythin' in between! ,WOW!

Simply love Rob's pursuit of Evie as soon as she got in the door and as she was gettin' ready fro the party. His "little boy" came out and made me smile and giggle. He was so "I've been without for seven days and I need relief" but in a truly adorkable way. And that he realized what he had just said!! lol

Again, Brent...yuk! He is such an insufferable prick. Thinkin''himself better than Rob! His annoyin' little barbs set my teeth on edge and made me want to punch him! "Who'd have thought we'd have a vampire in attendance though, eh?".... "I'm surprised to see her with someone like you if I'm honest,"  Then Rob's very mature responses, delivered with dignity... "Look, no offence, but I don't know you.  Evie and I are trying to keep things between ourselves for a bit."  and this one"Do you know what? You're right. She is an amazing, intelligent, beautiful girl, and I feel so fucking privileged to have her in my life right now.  But you're not me, and I have my reasons,"  Then the kiss knowin' that Brent was watchin', definitely  "marked his territory!"

The exchanges with Tom was so right on! I can just see the look that needed no words and his advice to Rob! Such a ggod friend!

The whole second half was simply beautiful! Rob's takin' the oral to completion and Evie's final acceptance of it! The first time sans condom and the surprise at the intense sensations this produced. The open exchange at the window, and the fact that he declared himself...even if she didn't hear it! I hope that he will tell her again while she is awake and totally focused on him, soon. Really lookin' forward to the wakeup call...Pattinson style!

Can you tell that I'm lovin' this story and your amazin' ability to "keep it real" in the tellin' of it!

Now that I've written a tome, I'll leave you with...MORE PLEASE! ASAP

Loves ya, darlin'!

Ellen xx

 



Author's Response:

Wow, Ellen!

I just had a squee moment over this!  Thank you!

Hehe!  Evie's welcome home!  He was rather eager wasn't he?  Naughty pickle trying to distract her in the bedroom when she was getting changed!  You're right - total boy moment there! I could just see him rolling around on the bed in frustration!

Oooh, Brent's got you riled up hasn't he? He certainly didn't come across too well here.  Evie still cares for him, and together as a couple they worked, but clearly not impressed with her new man and doesn't have any qualms about expressing his uncertainty about her choice.  Evie is obviously not really aware at this point in time, so it was down to Rob to deal with it.  I think those lines you picked out of what Rob said were great examples of how he dealt with it.  He didn't ignore it, brush it off, but he didn't rise to it either.  And the kiss - well, that was his 'boy' moment there!  Had to be done! ;)

I love writing Tom and Rob's friendship in this - they're clearly very close, and I can imagine little 'standard' looks and unspoken messages between the two of them!  They look out for each other in this story a lot, and I guess that mirrors real life.

Hehe!  Rob and his oral explorations! *Smirk* It was actually quite a meaningful moment for her, and him, and I think you picked up on that.  The talk at the window was important to me, to show his internal struggling with what he is asking of her just by being with her.  As for the next time the big ILY comes out - he will tell her again, soon...

Wow!  What a review!!  I am positively beaming!  I can't tell you how much it has made me grin and happy dance to read that!  Keeping it real is important to me.  Always.  So pleased you are enjoying this! 

More coming soon!

Loves ya back!

Duders xx

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2010 07:22 AM · On: Chapter 15 - Home Turf

Ohhh I love possessive Rob, he could get all possessive with me any day of the week and I wouldn't complain one bit.  I'm so happy he didn't go overboard on 'marking his territory' and I hope that Brent got the message, although I'm not too sure that Brent is one to take a hint?  Rob and Evie's reunion was hot and sweet, Rob is becoming more 'masterful' and Evie seems to be finding her internal screamer - LOL.  It's so sweet how both of them are still awkward with talking about sex and the things they do each other, they're fine doing 'it' but talking about 'it' and they revert to being 15, it's so cute and lovely.  I love them to death and as ever can't wait for the next chappy.  Jane x



Author's Response:

Robsblueeyes,

Hehe!  I quite like possessive Rob too!  He wasn't overly brash about it, just the right balance!  As for Brent getting the message, well, he certainly got a message from Rob! ;)

Rob is growing in confidence and of course, Evie's finding her internal screamer!  Bwah! Loved that term!  The awkwardness between them is sweet to write, so happy you are enjoying it.  They're at that stage where the attraction is full on, and there is passion and need, but they're still learning each other emotionally and that makes it hard for them to sometimes verbalise their thoughts.  For me, at this point, Rob flits between spouting stuff out without thinking, and then at other times considering his words with painstaking caution - from unabashed confidence, back to feelings of insecurity and apprehension.  It's a lot of fun to write, and so lovely to hear you like it!  And yep, as you say, fine doing 'it', but talking about 'it' whilst doing 'it'...cue awkward horny teen moments! 

Thanks so much!  As always, LOVE hearing from you!

Duders x

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