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Reviewer: gopher4953 (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2010 03:19 PM · On: Chapter 24 - Persistence of Time
OMK!! Duders,
As upset as I am for Evie, Lily and even Fuggles, my heart goes out to Rob and Tom! I can just feel the helplessness that they are undoubtedly feelin'! There is nothin' worse than seein' the one you love hurt and in pain, feelin' unable to do anything for them. Bless the taxi driver for takin' Fuggles in!
I think that both of them are goin' to blame themselves, even tho it wasn't their fault. Rob is already showin' signs of how this is affectin' him, like he is worthless in a crisis, although he did take charge before the ambulance got there
Rob is goin' to feel doubly guilty because he has to leave Evie. I'm glad that his dad is goin' to arrange for him to stay ay least one more day. But, as sensitive as he is, he'll have a very hard time tryin' to work, to keep himself focused. The elder Pattinsons are simply prescious!
Tom will have it a bit easier, as he'll be there durin' the recouperative time. I think that Ben will help them all. He's such a love!
Evie and Lily are goin' to have a lot to work through, too. Not only the physical trauma, but the psychological trauma as well. How violated they must feel!
Was it just a burgulary gone wrong, or is somethin' more sinister afoot? Does Rob's celebrity have anythin' to do with this? What will happen when the press gets wind of this...and you know they will?
There are so many questions to answer that only you, sweetie, have the answers to. We need MORE PLEASE to help ease our minds!
Thanks for keepin' us thoroughly invested in this tale of yours! It's a wonderful read that you present so well!
Lovy you!
Ellen xx
Author's Response: Ellen! You floor me every time! *sigh*
I agree, although Evie and Lily are in a tough place, the boys are suffering right now. It was a horrific night for all involved. Good job Rob has his parents on hands to help. Rob is in self-torture mode. He can't see that just being there will be enough. Of course, he is painfully aware that he has to leave soon. You're right about Tom. Although he's going to feel guilty, Lily won't allow it for long and at least he can be around to help the girls. Ben will play a key part too a bit later on.
Evie and Lily have a lot of mess to sort out - both in terms of the house and of course their emotional states. Your questions re: the burglary - All I can say is that it'll be a while before we find out. It's not going to be solved quickly, so hang tight. As for the press...well, we'll have to see whether that's an issue or not.
I do indeed have all the answers, and I will bring them to you gradually. Thank you so much for reading! It's so lovely to hear from you each time!
I adore the fact that I have such dedicated readers, and it really does motivate me to keep sharing. I'll always post regularly as long as people want me to.
Loves you too!!
Duders xx
Reviewer: FrostysWiff08 (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2010 02:45 PM · On: Chapter 24 - Persistence of Time
Oh, poor boys! :( So brave - but my goodness, I wanted desperately to give them both hugs and the whole lot of them some chicken noodle soup! I'm glad everyone's okay so far - sounds like Lily got the worst of it. :(
I really love how you captured Rob's internal torture with having to leave - he just doesn't want to, and you can tell that he's struggling with it. Excellently written, Duders.
It's okay that it's not 'boy meets girl.' You've made this so interesting and so drawing-in, your readers are going to stay with you. It's not fluff - it's serious stuff. You're incredible!
Can't wait to see what's next!
xoxoxo
Author's Response: Chicken noodle soup! Yummy! Could you send that in the next parcel please?! Hehee!
Yep, poor Lily got the worst in terms of physical injury. Lily's a tough cookie though!
Rob really doesn't want to leave, and he's going to continue to battle with that. It goes against his gut instincts - to stay and protect, look after Twee. Thank you for your sweet words! I do try so hard to make him believable.
Serious stuff, not fluff? Hehee! Yes, it certainly is at the mo. I'm looking forward to posting the forthcoming chapters, where their relationships all progress in different ways as a result of what's happened.
Awww! You're incredible! Thank you sweets! xoxox
Reviewer: AnnLinny (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2010 02:19 PM · On: Chapter 24 - Persistence of Time
*sobs* I love LR Rob & Tom. I love the story and can't wait to read where it goes!!
Author's Response: Awww, thank you. I love writing them so very much. Lots more to come. And the sad times won't be there forever. There's lots of change coming for Evie, and some it will actually work out okay for her. It's just going to take time to get through the initial ordeal and time for her to settleThank you so much for reading!
Reviewer: boomerand (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2010 01:59 PM · On: Chapter 24 - Persistence of Time
Wow - so, details, back stoey - was it rqandom or what? Great chapter. Thanks!
Author's Response: All will be revealed...a little way down the line. Not yet. Thank you! Hope you continue to enjoy!
Reviewer: trixie cullen (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2010 01:09 PM · On: Chapter 24 - Persistence of Time
Time for Evie to reevaluate what is important to her.
Author's Response: This is true. There's a lot of change coming for her.
Reviewer: twi_mom_teddi (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2010 11:50 AM · On: Chapter 24 - Persistence of Time
That was just incredible Clare! The dialogue, the situation with the dog...just everything!!! Love this fic, this Rob, everything about it! Just fantastic! I don't think I hardly breathed as I read! LOL
teddi
Author's Response: Thank you soooo much teddi! I felt like I was taking a big risk introducing something like this when I still feel green around the gills on Twilighted. It's a heavy part to the story. It really means so much to hear from people like you. I'm giddy. Thank you. Thank you. Thank you.
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2010 10:27 AM · On: Chapter 24 - Persistence of Time
WOW! Duders, you caught the drama of that situation perfectly, the thoughts, feelings and ramblings of everyone involved, amazing and the lovely ambulance service, God bless 'em, so comforting in a crisis. The taxi driver taking Fuggles to look after, everyone pulling together to look after each other, lovely. I worry for the girls and how this is going to affect them, I'm sure the police will put them in touch with vicitims support and counselling, I hope they don't turn it down. How is Rob going to cope being so far away? At least Tom will be able to be there for Lily and support her. I can't wait for your update, I love this story and do a little happy dance everytime I see its updated. Jane x
PS. Glad you found the amazingness that is Plan B (in response to an earlier question, I be Janeybo on twitter).
Author's Response: Ohh! Janeybo! Hello! I shall tweet you...Thank you so much. I've been nervous about this part of the story. There isn't this amount of angst throughout, but for obvious reasons it's going to be a bit bumpy for a little while. It means so much to know that people are sticking with the characters and rooting for them. Of course this is going to affect the girls, yes. And don't worry, due to the nature of their work, there will be a lot of support in the early days for them. Evie is a little resistant to begin with, but that's just Evie. She'll come around. And yes, it's going to be a real test for Rob and Evie having to be apart so soon after something like this. But then, Tom will battle his own demons about his guilt so neither have it easy. I'm so thrilled you do a happy dance over my updates! Really, it makes me smile soooooo wide!
And yeah! Plan B - love 'em! xx
Reviewer: Miss Sasha Fierce (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2010 09:01 AM · On: Chapter 24 - Persistence of Time
Awk poor Tom and Lily..I feel for them to the most. I wish there was a TPOV or something..I hope Lil'y Ok too..
And poor Rob, dosn't know what to do with himself..
Can't wait til next update <3
Author's Response: Mmmn, Tom...He's wracked with guilt. Bless his heart. A TPOV? There is another one coming not far away actually. It'll pop up in a couple of chapters time. Rob...he's going to struggle. But, the next chapter does see some smiles in the face of such an awful time, courtesy of Papa P! They will be okay. Trust me. Thank you!
Reviewer: jsjohnson73 (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2010 08:50 AM · On: Chapter 24 - Persistence of Time
Beautifully written. You handled the delicate subject matter perfectly. Poor Lilly and Evie. And Tom. Bless his heart. Rob---I think you captured his emotions perfectly. LOVE Rob's mom and dad.
Adversity makes us stronger and certainly has the ability to make relationships stronger.
Author's Response: Oooh, so came on quickly to assess the fall out following another angsty chapter to see this lovely review! Thank you so much. I can't skim over it, it was a horrible event, and I really appreciate you taking the time to let me know I handled it okay. I could just picture poor Tom breaking over Lily like that, and yep, Mama and Papa P were sorely needed!
I agree totally, adversity does make us stronger and it will with these four in different ways.
Thank you again!
Reviewer: Carly1989 (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2010 10:38 PM · On: Chapter 23 - With Hindsight Comes Regret
Just reread the story. Love it love it! I can’t wait for the next chapter. Hurry!
Author's Response: You reread it?! Wow! What a compliment!!! Thank you!!! Next chapter just posted...
Reviewer: MarieS (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2010 04:44 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Je T'Adore, Je T'Aime - Part 2
:D
Author's Response: *grin*
Reviewer: MarieS (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2010 04:17 PM · On: Chapter 19 - Je T'Adore, Je T'Aime - Part 1
I wonder if he can pull off being a bad boy.
Author's Response: Hmmn, *ponders*...I wonder? Hehee...
Reviewer: Liladanni (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2010 05:05 PM · On: Chapter 23 - With Hindsight Comes Regret
Gah! Post another ASAP!
Author's Response: Eeek! Okay then...
Reviewer: 2old2care (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2010 04:30 PM · On: Chapter 23 - With Hindsight Comes Regret
Your story is amazing and I'm so glad that it was recommended by a very discerning reader on RAoR. What I like best, I think, is that your Rob, unlike in other fictions I've read, is shy and struggles with self-doubt in the bedroom. In other stories, he seems to be an adventurous stud, so wise and experienced in the ways of pleasing a woman that he could write a sex manual. I love that the Rob you've created is discovering and experimenting; insecure about his "moves" and thrilled when they work out so well! This is a vulnerable Rob...and one I suspect is closer to the real deal. It may be one of the reasons your readers can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Wow! It always makes me so giddy when someone recommends this story. I'm so happy you found your way over here to read it. I try to write what I see as 'real' characters, and make them believable. I don't imagine Rob to be an absolute sex God in the bedroom - most blokes aren't, right? Especially blokes of his age! I am so incredibly happy that you see it as a closer reflection of what you feel Rob may be like in real life. Thank you so very much for taking the time to share your thoughts with me. I really hope you continue to enjoy this story! Thank you x
Reviewer: Carson1 (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2010 02:47 PM · On: Chapter 23 - With Hindsight Comes Regret
Hi hun,
Twilighted timed out on me, so I'm trying this again.
I am in awe of you and your ability to write such an emotional and terrifying chapter. My heart was pounding when I read this. Simply brilliant.
I hope they are both okay. I fear what this is going to do to their relationship. Something this major can really test you and those you love.
Looking forward to more, as always.
XO
Les
Author's Response: Oooh, pesky Twilighted! I always forget to tick the little box so that it remembers me. Grr...
*Gasp* Wow! Thank you so much! Coming from an author I have so much admiration for, that really made me smile! Thank you!
Yes, it is going to be a testing time for Rob and Evie now. For Evie, it's going to be the start of many changes in her life, some good though. It's not all doom and gloom.
Thank you so much! xx
Reviewer: MarieS (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2010 06:35 AM · On: Chapter 18 - Resolutions
What you said about Kristen and Rob, I agree, she is one of his pack.
Author's Response: Kristen and Rob are very close in my fic, yep. I think Kristen is looking out for Rob, just not communicating it in the best way perhaps.
Reviewer: MarieS (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2010 05:05 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Disconnected
She is controlling and attention seeking, the sex can only get a relationship so far.
Author's Response: Ouch! Evie is? Hmmn...Interesting perspective. For me, she had a meltdown moment and left in order to preserve her dignity. Rob pushed her when he rang, and he was fairly unrelenting. I think both had made mistakes at this point. And yes, the sex can only get a relationship so far, I agree. I don't think that's all that was there between them though. Hopefully you'll stick around to see where it takes them. I know Evie isn't the most loved Rob fic character around - she can be a little odd and scatty. That's what I like about her though...
Reviewer: blb0157 (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2010 04:26 AM · On: Chapter 23 - With Hindsight Comes Regret
Please hurry with the next chapter !! What will rob and tom do....I hope that they are okay.
Brenda
Author's Response: Eeeek! Poor Rob and Tom. Next chapter just posted! Hope it answers some questions. Thank you for your review!
Reviewer: MarieS (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2010 03:26 AM · On: Chapter 16 - Sunday's Are For...
;D
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: jpfree69 (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2010 02:02 AM · On: Chapter 23 - With Hindsight Comes Regret
Wow, that was a rollercoaster and you made me feel it all. Funny and teasing in Wales - love the authenticity of Evie's friends - I've spent many nights like that with my girlfriends gabbing about the blokes in our lives. Excited and frustrated at the Lyric - how hard it must be for Evie to hang back and try to convey what she feels with her eyes. You'd just want to launch yourself at him from across the room. Confronting and frightening at the house - OMG, those poor girls being attacked in their own home, and what about Fuggles, please let her be ok. I'm eager to see where you take the story now. Don't make us wait too long, pretty please. jp xxx
Author's Response: Aww, the girls talk. Nothing quite like it! Poor Evie at the Lyric, yes. I felt for her writing it and really wanted to convey how hard it was for her. Some people don't like Evie, they think she's too distant with Rob, but in my eyes she's just trying to protect herself a little from the chaos around him. It's all new for her. She's not perfect; no one is. And yes, you would want to launch yourself, wouldn't you? Hehee! Especially when he goes and gives you that particular look! Thank you so much for reviewing! I love hearing from everyone on here, it's so encouraging! xx
Reviewer: MarieS (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2010 06:02 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Home Turf
Pattinson Style;0
Author's Response: Pattinson style indeed... :p
Reviewer: MarieS (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2010 03:53 PM · On: Chapter 14 - Doing it All, Putting it Out There
I want vibrating knickers
Author's Response: Hehee! Do you now?!
Reviewer: GRLTRP (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2010 02:01 PM · On: Chapter 23 - With Hindsight Comes Regret
OMG - You better update quickly!!!!!!!!!!!! Awesome chapter. PLEASE update quickly!!!!!!
Author's Response: OMG!! Okay!!! Errm, done! Hehee!
Reviewer: Carly1989 (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2010 12:23 PM · On: Chapter 23 - With Hindsight Comes Regret
Wow! Didn't expect that! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you! It's up I think as I type this reply! Phew!
Reviewer: MarieS (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2010 06:01 AM · On: Chapter 13 - Slipping Into Something Comfortable
Quack quack
Author's Response: Rubber duckie...*happy sigh*
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