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Reviewer: GRLTRP (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2011 11:48 AM · On: Chapter 30 - Granny Knickers be Damned -

Yes, a bit teasing to leave it at that part! Can't wait for the update!! This story is just wonderful. You've done a great job with it!

Reviewer: GRLTRP (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2011 10:35 AM · On: Chapter 29 - The Hobo and the Booty Call

Love it as always! Great job with these two. SO glad to get back to normal!!

Reviewer: Carly1989 (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2011 06:52 AM · On: Chapter 30 - Granny Knickers be Damned -

Just read it again! Great! Can't wait for the next!

Reviewer: LynnO (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2011 01:17 AM · On: Chapter 30 - Granny Knickers be Damned -

yes you are mean for leaving it there!!  hope you post the next chapter ASAP!!  thanks!

Reviewer: Carly1989 (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2011 02:05 AM · On: Chapter 30 - Granny Knickers be Damned -

Great chapter! Can't wait to read what will happen next. 

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2011 12:56 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Granny Knickers be Damned -

Aw, Clare, I don't know about Rob combusting but leaving it there will have us all combusting, aarrrgghhh!

I loved Rob's gifts to for Twee and the maisonette, such a softy.  Hangin' their beanie's together on the hat & coat stand, awww and all those different uses for those pillows and cushions, he thought that one out well.

It's a shame that Twee is still so self conscious about her body, even though she knows Rob loves her as she is, I suppose we will always be our own worst enemies in that respect.  Maybe moving out of her comfort zone with Rob's birthday present will help boost her confidence and *giggle* relieve all of Rob's tension.  I don't think Rob has become too dependent on Twee, he is a man in love missing his girlfriend and I think he's just let everything get on top of him and is a little depressed.  They need to come up with a plan.

I can't wait for the next chapter.

Jane x

Reviewer: campcathryn (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2011 07:45 AM · On: Chapter 30 - Granny Knickers be Damned -

Love it

Reviewer: 4321 (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2011 06:38 AM · On: Chapter 30 - Granny Knickers be Damned -

Love these characters.  Can visualize the scene perfectly.

Cheers!

Reviewer: joss859 (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2011 04:57 AM · On: Chapter 30 - Granny Knickers be Damned -

I really fun chapter. Evie is such a 'real' character, shes great!

have to say though, I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

Reviewer: emozing (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2011 04:06 AM · On: Chapter 30 - Granny Knickers be Damned -

First off, let me say I was so glad to see this update.  It feels like it has been forever, even though I know it hasn’t.  Sorry, I guess I get a little impatient sometimes missing my Rob and Twee!


So Rob and Evie are both stressed.  Rob – well I’ll talk about that in a few … but Evie is doubly stressed.  Sexually and, oh yes, the birthday present.   It is difficult to find the perfect gift for someone who has everything .  But she is trying so hard.  And I think Lily has the perfect idea.  I can only imagine next chapter when Rob finally sees Twee in her “sexy, smexy, come hither” undies.  He is just gonna lose it for sure.  That is - once she takes off the wrinkled plaid shirt!  


Rob’s gifts were just perfect for Twee.


Loved the various cushions and sizes ”No patterns - no fuss.”   Very adorable that he even wrote a note telling her where they went and how he intends to use some of them.  “Or, when I come to visit, I can lay you down on them and do all sorts of unmentionables!  You know how much I like a good pillow, especially when it's under your hips or under your belly.  The possibilities! And yes, in case you were wondering, I am being filthy,”   So Rob.


The coat stand – well Twee definitely needed to upgrade since she moved into a mansionette.    And yet another note mentioning “where I lay my hat” --  just perfect.  Squee


The melting clock – Rob truly knows his Evie Twee.  Yes she is missing the Dali picture – but she probably would have a hard time looking at it every day.  Another wise decision.  And … the… note – OMG -- I want to officially hire you to write all of my love notes.  So heartfelt and loving.  Just PERFECTLY SPECIAL.   And let’s not forget the cheese theory. giggle


Now back to Rob’s stressed situation – poor baby – You wrote this segment so well.  I could sense all of the pent up stress that he is going thru.  Two weeks – gosh Clare – our poor boy is having a really rough time – even for fiction.   :(   And Tom – love the banter that these two wonderful friends enjoy.  Your writing of them always leaves me in stitches.  Tom always seems to have a fix for whatever Rob’ s problem might be.  Two things he can’t fix are the damned blue balls and the paps!!!!!  Seems odd writing that in the same sentence!  And let’s hope he doesn’t stress too much when he does recognize his dependence on Twee.  Hope this is not too huge a problem for him down the road – just saying!!!!


Evie is so nervous.  So hard for me to believe that someone in her age group hasn’t done something like this before.  (Don’t forget I’m 60. Ha ha  Maybe a little frost on the top, but sill some fire in the furnace!!!)   Glad that Lily was able to help her sort through her inhibitions and help her give Rob such a fantastic present – and she even gets to borrow Lily’s Jimmy Choo’s!!!!  And he will love the other presents when the time is appropriate.  Me think Evie worries too much --  Rob loves her unconditionally. 


I am already having a stressful (giggle)  time realizing that it will be at least a week or more until another update.  You have left us in such a predicament.  Note this is not a cliffie – this is a SITUATION!!!!!  But rest assured, I’ll be right here ready to read.   And by the way –  I’ve already told hubby I need a pack of cigarettes and a new bottle of wine when I read your update.  He thinks I am sooo  ----  well let’s say he respects my obsession of “my perfect sevens” and “Rob fettish.”  Oh – the perfect sevens – that’s what I call my favorite authors.  There are seven of you and I have a conniption every time I discover one of you has updated.  Thank God for Twilight Alerts!!!!!!  :D  By the by, I don’t smoke, but I do enjoy a good bottle of wine!!!!   :-)  snort – guffaw.


I so totally adore Rob and Twee.  Your brilliance at crafting them is breathtaking.  Thank you for writing such a perfect story.  I <3 U!!!!


Elaine – sparkledamnu on twitter

Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2011 02:22 AM · On: Chapter 30 - Granny Knickers be Damned -

wow...what a way to finish this chapter!  i loved the gifts that rob got twee...and as per usual his thinking too much about everything.  i can't imagine what it would be like to have to avoid the papz all the time...it would make you feel like a caged animal.  can't wait to see how rob responds to evie's outfit next chapter! great story hun xx lisa.

Reviewer: pearlgem (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2011 11:11 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Granny Knickers be Damned -

Happy New Years to you! 

I think Rob is definitely going to combust but its a good thing :). Cannot wait to read the next chapter...as for him becoming to dependent? Yeah I think this might be a problem down the road. I worry he is going to resent her because of it since he is just more vocal about it and Evie is more subdued about everything.

 

Anyway, love this, love you and look forward to more! 

Reviewer: boomerand (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2011 10:31 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Granny Knickers be Damned -

really ... right there, I may combust!!!!

Reviewer: SwimmingBee (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2011 09:30 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Granny Knickers be Damned -

Oh my goodness! Duders...

Number 1 - You're a bit evil for leaving it there!

Number 2 - Rob's going to die.

And number 3 - Lily is going to kill Evie if she finds out she covered her expensive, beautiful lingerie up with a ratty old plaid shirt! I'm sure Rob will like it anyway, and it's very Evie, but augh!

So anyway, poor Rob. He's all stressed and can't whack one out. He definitely needs his Evie! As for him realising he's becoming reliant on her, well hmm. That happens in every relationship at some point, I think! Whether or not he accepts it might be the next step. He seems okay with it, but I still have my worries about Evie accepting that she really does need Rob.

Aww, his presents were lovely! He really does enjoy a good cushion, doesn't he? The hat stand was sweet, but I shall be sad to say goodbye to the image of their beanie sitting side by side on the radiator! And the clock... Risky move by Rob, but lovely.

I can't wait to hear about the girls' visit to LA! I'm sure Rob will have no problem getting over his little (or not so little! Hehee!) predicament once Evie makes her appearance. Aww!

Love it, as always Duders! Thanks for sharing your wonderful story and characters with us!

Reviewer: Wilynn (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2011 08:35 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Granny Knickers be Damned -

You stop there? Are you serious? I hope the next chapter is around the corner!

 

Reviewer: louisianaartsyfartsy (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2011 07:14 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Granny Knickers be Damned -

Ummm... cliffy much?!?

Evil woman!

~taps foot while waiting for more!~

 

Reviewer: twi_mom_teddi (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2011 06:13 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Granny Knickers be Damned -

Yes - you are terribly mean!!  Poor Evie...but somehow, I don't think her fears are founded...Can't wait to find out tho!  : )

teddi

Reviewer: logano_gurl12859 (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2011 06:09 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Granny Knickers be Damned -

i agree with Evie on the turbulence, i don't like it either. and i love the in-flight movie choice. can't wait for more!

Reviewer: KathyK (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2011 05:56 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Granny Knickers be Damned -

I'm still laughing my ass off over Rob's problem. Poor baby! Happy New Year to you! Yes, I think there will be some combusting going on, and I can't wait. I love this story. Thanks.

Reviewer: eshika (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2011 06:59 AM · On: Chapter 29 - The Hobo and the Booty Call

happy new year!!!!!!!!its more than 2 months...want a update now!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: PaulaSF (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2010 09:41 PM · On: Chapter 29 - The Hobo and the Booty Call

Ohh, can't believe that I already finish reading all the chapters. Can't wait for more! I would love to read more Tom's POV though. I LOVE him, and I love the way you portrayed him on this story, is exactly the way I  imagine him to be, really friendly and just awesome. Oh as for the chapter, BOOTY CALLS FTW Can I have one of this Rob, please? I'm so happy that Twee is okay! After the hell she's been through, she's back!! This girl is amazing!

Reviewer: Wilynn (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2010 07:30 PM · On: Chapter 29 - The Hobo and the Booty Call

This was a very clever way to move them forward and get things more back to normal. Great chapter!

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2010 06:36 AM · On: Chapter 29 - The Hobo and the Booty Call

A bigger sofa? Oh, oh a lovely big rug to roll around on and lots of cushions? Lol.

Oh boy did Rob dazzle Dorothy.  That woman will never be the same again she'll be telling all her friends down the bingo about the beautiful boy with the dazzling smile.  I think Twee might be getting a lot more baked goods in the future.

Mmmm, booty calls *sigh* there's nothing like 'em, I'm glad Twee made the call and made her intentions clear.  I think they needed that or else they could have been tip toeing around a lot longer becoming more frustrated with each other, normality is more of what they need and I think they have that back.

I can't believe Rob is about to go away again, they have so little time together Lily is right about Twee spending as much time with Rob as she can.  Twee is lucky to have such a good friend a lot of friends would be more than miffed about that.

As ever, I can't wait for the next chapter.

Jane x

 

Reviewer: SwimmingBee (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2010 07:22 AM · On: Chapter 29 - The Hobo and the Booty Call

Nope, I've never made a booty call. I'm far too well-behaved. Pffft, bwah ha! ;)

What a gorgeous chapter, Duders. I had a cheeky little smile on my face from start to finish.

I love that Rob was all nervous when he dropped the muffins around to Evie in the beginning. And she pulled him inside by the toggles of his hoodie. That little visual just struck me as so cute... It was playful Evie and Rob. It matched the rest of the chapter perfectly!

Aww, the beanies beside each other on the radiator! I remember pointing out that I loved that image way back in the beginning of this story. I love that they still do it. So sweet.

Their fun times on the bed with the chocolate piping bag were just so much fun! It was lovely to see them playing again. Just having some silly time. Yay! And then... Dorothy Day! Hehee. The image of Rob looking like a hobo and scratching his belly made ME thud this time, Duders! :)

Yayyy for christening the kitchen!! Go Rob! And go Evie for being so brave and putting out the booty call! I'm so pleased our Twee is back. Onwards and upwards!

Love it, as always! Thank you Duders!

(And hey, remember our rule we made? That when we made it to Chapter 30, we'd officially not be newbies anymore? That means this is your last newbie chapter. Woot, woot!)

Reviewer: ruthhazelton (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2010 12:24 AM · On: Chapter 29 - The Hobo and the Booty Call

Uh - definition of a hair grip (which is obviously British) - like a barrette?

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