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Reviewer: vartan22 (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2011 07:52 PM · On: Chapter 19 The Rumor Mill
absolutely frickin awesome - great job
i loved how you handled a potentially awkward work/personal situation and made it comical
i cant wait for dinner
Author's Response: I'm so happy you liked it, thank you!
Comedy needs to be in most aspects of our life to make them better I think. hehe Glad you liked it!
Dinner is next, I promise ;)
Reviewer: MeyaRose (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2011 07:45 PM · On: Chapter 19 The Rumor Mill
ugh, ending right before the meet the parents!
Author's Response: Sorry! The chapter had to end at some point and that was the logical place. Next chapter will be all parents, I promise!
Reviewer: Tina02 (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2011 07:36 PM · On: Chapter 19 The Rumor Mill
great chapter.
glad that bella gets to keep her job.
the interview should be funny.
can't wait to read what happens next.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! Yeah, no way could he fire her! I have more fun to be had with her job ;) The interview should be a blast. More soon, I promise!
Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2011 07:32 PM · On: Chapter 19 The Rumor Mill
Great Chapter.....
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you liked it!
Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2011 07:16 PM · On: Chapter 19 The Rumor Mill
buddy is so cute protecting bella!
Author's Response: Isn't he? He's like a mentor/friend/father and boss all in one! Can't beat that!
Reviewer: bab1067 (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2011 07:04 PM · On: Chapter 19 The Rumor Mill
I really enjoy reading your story. Awwwww, the relationship Bella has with Buddy is great. Had to laugh when he made the comment to her about the hot ass and caught her off guard. Well, I think the interview with Lauren and Mallory will be most interesting as Bella has what they want. God, I love Emmett! Locker room fantasy fufilled......... Would love to have an EPOV on the conversation w/ Emmett after the interview, his converstation w/ Buddy, what he was thinking when Bella was filling him in on picking him over her job and the interview gossip interview. Good for her, she knows what she wants and she's not willing to give him up. Can't wait to see how dinner with the parents goes. Hope you had a great Christmas and New Years Eve!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoy it! Thank you! Bella and Buddy are definitely great friends as well as co-workers. Poor B, her new nickname will totall be Hot Ass. Wait til Emmett hears. hehe
Lauren and Jessica's interview will be fun, I know it!
Emmett...hehe. I promise you'll get some of his take on the locker room. Maybe not when he first figured it out, maybe as an outtake, but you will hear about it. I coudln't not! hehe Maybe I'll do an outtake on all of those down the road :)
Bella definitely knows what she wants and it's Edward!
Thank you! I hope you had fantastic holidays as well. Dinner is next! :) Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: kycee (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2011 06:50 PM · On: Chapter 19 The Rumor Mill
So will the next chapter have the gruesome twosome? I love that title for Lauren and Jessica, it fits them perfectly. I know it will have the meeting with the parental units, I was just wondering if it would also have the interview. I loved that Bella is so sure of her love for Edward that she will pick him over anything. This story just keeps getting better and better and I did not think that was possible because it was already SO GOOD! LOL
Author's Response: Hehe no, next chapter is dinner at Carlisle and Esme's. Probably the chapter after that though. I'll definitely be doing the interview. So glad you enjoyed their nickname!
She's definitely come a long way in accepting her love for Edward and his love for her. They keep showing it to one another in every little way. I'm so happy you're liking it even more as we go. Excellent compliment! Thank you :)
Reviewer: ubuhall (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2010 07:29 PM · On: Chapter 18 Post Game Interview
*** TOUCHDOWN ***
Well EPOV defintely scored a touchdown for me LOL that was awesome!!! I know we r back at the beginning now but I sure hope u r gonna take us another few yards, or chapters I mean LOL ... can't wait for the next chapter :)
Happy New Year!!!
Author's Response: Happy New Year to you as well!
I'm so glad you liked it :) EPOV was pretty hot huh? Loved getting into his head in that moment.
Oh yeah, we have many yards to go yet and we're going beyond this point for sure! I hope you continue to like it!
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2010 01:02 PM · On: Chapter 18 Post Game Interview
*Happy dancing* ooooooh that was every bit as hot as chapter 1, loving EPOV.
I loved it when he pulled his jersey out for her to wear excited about her wearing his number, *sigh* I'd wear his number any day of the week. Then he throws her over his shoulder *me next please, jumping up and down* and tells Bella he doesn't care who sees, he's tired of hiding *swoonysigh*
I can't wait for her to have dinner with Carlisle and Esme. More pleasey, please, *jumpyclaps.*
Jane x
Author's Response: Jane,
Thank you! I thought it was fun to be inside his mind. So different and hot on a different kind of level which made it a lot of fun.
I would totally wear my boyfriend's number everywhere. hehe Jerseys are awesome. Shoulder throwing is even more awesome. My guy would die if he tried that with me. hehe Still, a girl can dream.
Dinner coming up soon. A few work type things for B to deal with first :) I am writing dinner next though!
Thanks so much for the review, love your love for the story!
Amy
Reviewer: buggybell13 (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2010 08:50 PM · On: Chapter 18 Post Game Interview
loved it! cant wait for more!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you're anxious for more. I'm working on the next chapter today :)
Reviewer: ArodLoverus2001 (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2010 04:41 PM · On: Chapter 18 Post Game Interview
Awesome update!!! can't wait til she meets the parents... please update soon..
Author's Response: Thank you! Working on it now! More soon :)
Reviewer: Tina02 (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2010 01:19 PM · On: Chapter 18 Post Game Interview
excellent chapter.
the meeting of the parents should be interesting.
will everyone else be there as well?
can't wait to read the next chapter.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it :) Meeting the parents should be interesting, but no, this first time out it's just Bella and Edward. I'll have the gang all get together at some point!
Reviewer: nsturms72 (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2010 05:56 AM · On: Chapter 18 Post Game Interview
Loved this!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! It was fun getting into his head for that one :)
Reviewer: cathe (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2010 06:30 PM · On: Chapter 1 Halftime
oookaaaay!! Best first chapter ever! Looking forward to reading the rest...
When Bella and Edward had sex I was a more than a little irritated, can't a professional woman interview a man without getting it on (even though it is Edward)!? But you redeemed yourself by revealing their previous relationship, wonderfully done. And yeah, it was hot.
Author's Response: Haha thank you! I didn't want to make them huge sluts so of course I had my little twist in, which made it a lot more understandable! :) I'm glad you enjoyed it! I hope you like seeing how they got to that point!
Reviewer: MaryAliKent (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2010 01:45 PM · On: Chapter 18 Post Game Interview
Wow, great story! I love chapter one! (the first one). I thought "this Bella is crazy..sleeping with the target of her interview" but then again, this was Bella and Edward we're talking about. What else could happen. Then when she let the game fall and said he was her boyfriend it just made the chapter that much hotter!! LOVE IT!!!
Ali
Author's Response: Ali,
I'm so glad you love it! hehe Yeah, at first it seemed like a very slutty reporter and football player, huh? But they're very much in love and that's the lovely twist. I hope you enjoyed it in his POV :) Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Amy
Reviewer: sundevil (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2010 10:39 AM · On: Chapter 18 Post Game Interview
I love football and I love Twilight. How could I not love your story. Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Me too! Kinda mad it took me so long to get around to combining them! Love that you love it :) Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: viking (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2010 10:02 AM · On: Chapter 18 Post Game Interview
Loved Edward's POV! Thanks!
Author's Response: I'm so glad :) I had a blast writing it! More soon!
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2010 07:47 AM · On: Chapter 1 Halftime
:)
Author's Response: Ahh the beginning. So much fun!
Reviewer: chocolatehurricane (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2010 10:05 PM · On: Chapter 18 Post Game Interview
Pure awesomeness!
Author's Response: Thank you! Loved writing it from his POV :)
Reviewer: vartan22 (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2010 06:37 PM · On: Chapter 18 Post Game Interview
best xmas present ever!!!
Author's Response: :) I wanted to thank you all for reading and that was the best I could do! So glad you liked it :)
Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2010 05:46 PM · On: Chapter 18 Post Game Interview
I loved seeing the interview from his POV. it was even more incredible this time.
And I agree -- best interview ever!
Author's Response: ;) I'm glad you think so! I felt that way myself, it seemed hotter through his eyes. I guess the porno aspect? I dunno. So happy you liked it!
Reviewer: sfspeedy (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2010 05:38 PM · On: Chapter 18 Post Game Interview
nice. that was a nice christmas treat.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! It was my way of thanking you all for reading :)
Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2010 04:51 PM · On: Chapter 18 Post Game Interview
Great Chapter.....
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you liked it :)
Reviewer: tan (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2010 02:47 PM · On: Chapter 18 Post Game Interview
so loved it from his point of view. when i got through reading the last chapter, i went back to the beginning and read the first chapter all over again, just to get the feel of where they were heading.
i really am enjoying this story, looking forward to the rest. keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you loved it! I thought it was fun to look at through his eyes and I'm glad you went back to compare. We'll be moving ahead now. I'm glad you're ready for more! Thanks for reviewing :)
Reviewer: binga (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2010 02:05 PM · On: Chapter 18 Post Game Interview
love love love :)
Author's Response: I love that you love! Thank you for reading and reviewing :)
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