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Reviewer: ClearFlower (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2011 03:43 PM · On: Epilogue
Great story with big personalities (:
Author's Response: Haha very big. Thanks so much!
Reviewer: RobwardLover (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2011 02:03 PM · On: Epilogue
That was awesome, start to finish!! :)
Author's Response: I'm so glad you think so! Thank you!
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2011 05:35 AM · On: Epilogue
Wow four years on, kids, the whole shebang! How cute is Ryan and so fitting that he should be a 'mini me' of Edward. Poor Rose missing out again but, lol, two girls for Emmett, he's going to be such a papa bear when those two grow into teenagers and the boys seriously begin to hang around, maybe he'll get some help keeping them away from Ryan and Wyatt, you know what they say......better the devil you know, hahaha!!!
I've really loved this story, thank you for sharing it and I'm looking forward to the outtakes.
Jane x
Author's Response: Jane,
Haha yep, jumped ahead again and I wanted to show that next generation! I think Em would love to have a Cullen boy sniffing around his daughter!
I'm so glad you loved it! Outtakes coming soon! Thanks so much :)
Amy
Reviewer: craving2read (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2011 06:06 PM · On: Chapter 31 Changing Field
LOL....this Emmett character SOOOOOO needs this straight talking Rosie to keep him in line. Hilarious chapter.
Author's Response: Haha that he does! Rose is his perfect match :)
Reviewer: craving2read (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2011 03:08 PM · On: The Emmettake: Emmett & the Extinguisher
ROFLMAO! Epic solution to covering for Edward at bed check. Edward seriously OWES Emmett big time for covering for him. $100,000? Whoa - steep fine, coach.
Love Emmett's out look on life. Great character.
Author's Response: Hahah Emmett had a fantastic time keeping Edward out of trouble. The money is nothing to him and this is totally not Em's first time getting fined for a prank :)
He is a lot of fun! So glad you're enjoying him!
Reviewer: ast (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2011 01:05 AM · On: Epilogue
can you write some outtakes for their future as well? I would really enjoy and appreciate it...
Author's Response: Definitely planned :) Thank you!
Reviewer: JacksonsGirl1 (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2011 07:37 PM · On: Epilogue
Love how poor Em is getting his Karma returned to him. Two daughters, oh my oh my! Love little Ryan how cute is that really Tuhdown too cute! I really have loved this Fic, i'm sad that its going to end but looking forward to the outtakes!
Thanks for the update
Melly
Reviewer: craving2read (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2011 07:00 PM · On: Chapter 19 The Rumor Mill
LOL! Love, love, love Buddy! What a wonderful character.
Alice is my hero - her threat to call her lawyer who'd be interested in a case if Ted decided he could dictate who his employees could date. Nice little speech.....
Author's Response: Thank you! Buddy's a great guy!
Alice is definitely not someone to mess with :) Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: sherrilovesedward (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2011 09:36 AM · On: Epilogue
This was one of the best stories I have read and really enjoyed reading it. I have to ask you something. You really did a great job at describing the football information. Are you a football fan? I have only watched it with my hubby. I understand it and watch because of him. We live in Florida and he is a die hard Miami Dolphins fan. You really did some great descriptions of play by play action. THANKS FOR THE AWESOME WRITING and look forward to the outtakes you have written. Sher
Author's Response: Sher,
Thank you! Yes, I'm a die hard football fan. I went to Florida State Univ (where the Nole in my name comes from) and root for the Bucs in the NFL (middle of the name). I adore the sport. Kinda hard not to when you're at FSU in the early 90's, when we ruled the sport. So much fun. I miss those days!
I'm glad you enjoyed the football and the story! Outtakes to come!
Thanks again!
Amy
Reviewer: samekraemer (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2011 08:35 AM · On: Epilogue
That was so damn cute! loved it very much! Thanks for sharing it. I hope you write something else...I'd love to read it.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you loved it! Words with Friends is underway and I have more up my sleeve as well! Thank you :)
Reviewer: Velvetwhispers (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2011 06:32 PM · On: Epilogue
i hav to say when i started reading this i was sucked in right away ,one night my hubby asked me what i was reading and i told him a football story ,i thought he was going to bust a gut laughing. You hate football he would tease me. I told him i hate his football but if Edward jasper and Emmit were playing I wouold be glued to the TV and would prolly let him buy a 3d *giggle* looking fwd to more stories from you .. thank you
Author's Response: Haha well I'mg lad i could draw you into a football story! :) They would definitely keep women glued to the television. I'm so happy you've enjoyed it! Thank you :)
Reviewer: readerofthis2 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2011 03:00 PM · On: Epilogue
I love your story. :))
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Reviewer: ashleighbabe (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2011 02:12 PM · On: Epilogue
I loved this story since chapter 10. It was an amazing, funny, creative thing, and I'm so sad it's over! ;'( What am I gonna read without this!? I thought this epilougue should have been longer, but I liked it. Thankyou so much for this amazing story, I shall never forget 'First&Ten'
Thanks,
Ashleigh x
Author's Response: Ashleigh,
I'm very happy you've loved it! There are outtakes to come so you don't have to say goodbye quite yet.
Sorry, I think the epi was exactly the length it needed to be. We got to see where everyone is and that they're all still together ;)
I'm so glad you enjoyed it and I think you for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: ladydiamond (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2011 01:48 PM · On: Epilogue
How come Carlisle wasn't at the superbowl? You didn't kill him did you?! ;_; And awww Ryan is adorable!
Author's Response: Of course not! Carlisle works for the team and he was doctoring! I'm glad you liked Ryan :)
Reviewer: marrisa (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2011 10:20 AM · On: Epilogue
aw, that was absolutely adorable and a great ending. a story about their kids as teens would make a fantastic story...
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm getting a lot of teen requests! I'll think gaobut it and see what I can do :) I'm so glad you liked it!
Reviewer: viking (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2011 07:30 AM · On: Epilogue
Big smiles!!!!! It was such a great story!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! It was a pure pleasure to share it with you!
Reviewer: hisgreeneyes1 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2011 05:51 AM · On: Epilogue
I wish there was a number higher than 10 to rate this story I loved it from the beginning to the very end!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so happy you've loved it all the way through. It's been a pure pleasure to write :)
Reviewer: StarryLuna (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2011 05:10 AM · On: Epilogue
Emmett and the paso doble...mmmmmmm. Such a sweet peek into the future! Love Charlie spoiling Ryan. I imagine he has a secret mini Seahawks jersey hidden for when Ryan visits (my mother-in-law keeps Redskins crap at her house to put my son in when he stays with her. Poor baby - must burn his skin.)
Oh the things this story has done to my brain. My friend was showing me pictures of when she and her husband went to Redskins fan day at FedEx and they'd gotten to visit the locker room. I saw the picture of the locker room and immediately broke into a sweat thinking of this story! LOL
Author's Response: Hahah I am quite certain that Ryan has his own Seahawks jersey! We'll probably see him again via outtake because he's such a cutie. Paso doble indeed! :)
Ick, Redskins crap! Love that the locker room makes you think of this story! If only! :) Thank you for the review!
Reviewer: VAMPIRE JO (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2011 03:24 AM · On: Epilogue
Babies, wedding and more babies, can't wait to read those outtakes! Loved this story from start to finish, loved all the characters most of all Emmett (big goof) Sad that this has ended but can't wait until the out taked are done, and hopefully a new story?!?
Jo x
Author's Response: Hehe lots of outtakes to come! I'm so glad you've enjoyed them along with me. Such a pleasure to play with these crazy characters. Lots of outtakes and I have 2 other stories running on FF, one is here! Words with Friends :) Lots ahead! Thank you so much!
Reviewer: vampiregirl1001 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2011 01:35 AM · On: Epilogue
I LOVE! LOVE! LOVE It!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :) I'm very happy you love it!
Reviewer: navy_wife (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2011 10:46 PM · On: Epilogue
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!! <sniff, sniff>
Author's Response: Haha hope they're happy tears for the most part! So sweet. Thank you for reading!
Reviewer: jaay (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2011 10:16 PM · On: Epilogue
i loved it :)
Author's Response: I'm so glad! Thank you :)
Reviewer: Rgwmnks (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2011 09:14 PM · On: Epilogue
Your very welcome & a big ol' THANK YOU for writing it so we could/can enjoy it! I am anxious to see what you come up with by way of outtakes! We loves u bunches!
Author's Response: You're quite welcome. It was a pleasure to share it with you! I have had a blast and I love you all too! Many outtakes ahead! Thanks so much!
Reviewer: Saydonee (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2011 09:10 PM · On: Epilogue
I know them asking Edward about Dancing with the Stars was just part of the setup for Emmett. But it would be really funny if someone from Dancing casting saw that interview and contacted Edward for real and if he went on there and won, ROFL.
Author's Response: Haha yeah but Edward's so not the dancing type. Way more Emmett's cup of tea :)
Reviewer: g_divs (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2011 08:42 PM · On: Epilogue
i absolutely loved loved loved this story. it's such a great mix of football, love, and all-around hilarity. can't wait for the outtakes!
p.s. your versions of carlisle, esme, charlie, and renee are my favorite! p.p.s . nice to see someone who is a big football fan like me! thanks for not glossing over the sport and actually getting into the details of the plays and such :)
Author's Response: I'm so glad you loved this story :) It was a lot of fun to combine football with fic. I'm happy you had fun with them and my crazy parents :)
Thank you for taking the time to read and review! I really appreciate it!
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