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Reviewer: MeyaRose (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2010 10:06 PM · On: Chapter 2 Where It All Began
:D
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! Thank you! New chapter this week!
Reviewer: metoo (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2010 09:59 PM · On: Chapter 2 Where It All Began
Author's Response: Hmm nothing here but thanks :) Hope you enjoyed!
Reviewer: april09 (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2010 08:21 PM · On: Chapter 2 Where It All Began
Love reading the 'before' part of the story. Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'll have a new chapter in the queue in a couple days :)
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2010 07:49 PM · On: Chapter 2 Where It All Began
A++++++++++++++++++++
Author's Response: Awww Thank you my dear, so glad you're liking it!
Reviewer: Gabi-b (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2010 07:42 PM · On: Chapter 2 Where It All Began
OMG I loveddd
Update ASAP, pleaseeee
Xo, G
Author's Response: Thanks! I'll have the new chapter to you soon, I promise! Sending it off Tuesday probably :)
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2010 07:40 PM · On: Chapter 1 Halftime
I really liked this. I like the fact that obviously they were an item before hand and it just wasnt a cheap fling. Great job.
Author's Response: Thank you! Here and there! hehe I didn't want to make them sluts and I had the idea of having them already be together before I sat down to write it and loved how it turned out! I'm thrilled at the response. So happy you like it!
Reviewer: katiecave (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2010 07:05 PM · On: Chapter 2 Where It All Began
i was very suprised by the twist of the first chapter and i cant wait to see where you go with this.
Author's Response: I'm glad the twist was a surprise! I wanted to go back and show how they met and got to that point and then I'll take them beyond as well. Should be fun, I hope!
Reviewer: april09 (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2010 07:00 PM · On: Chapter 1 Halftime
What a cute twist at the end! When i read about B's 'recent' experience, I thought at first that maybe they each were with other people, but a quick re-read points to all the clues.
Author's Response: :) What girl would flash back to another lover when she had a sweaty Edward ready to ravage her against the lockers, right? hehe Yeah, the clues were there but pretty hidden, so I'm happy most people don't see it til the reread! Thanks for doing that!
Reviewer: trixie11 (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2010 06:51 PM · On: Chapter 2 Where It All Began
Ooohhh... the end of this chapter is a tease. How could you?? :) Can't wait for the next post!
Author's Response: You won't have to wait for long! New chapter this week I swear. :) I'm glad you're excited for it!
Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2010 06:39 PM · On: Chapter 2 Where It All Began
loved it! can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: I"m so happy you loved it! I'll be sending a new chapter out this week :) Thank you!
Reviewer: Indianwalker (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2010 05:42 PM · On: Chapter 1 Halftime
So CUTE! Loved it!
Author's Response: Thank you! Finally married my love of football with fic! I'm happy you enjoyed it!
Reviewer: Ashley1621 (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2010 05:05 PM · On: Chapter 1 Halftime
Amazing! I loved how I was surprised towards the end to find out they were dating! That was a great surprise! I can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad I was able to surprise you like that! Few people guessed! I am going back to the beginning in the next chapter so I'll show you how they got to this point, Thanks so much for reading and reviewing :)
Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2010 01:32 PM · On: Chapter 1 Halftime
that was a great chapter. i can't wait to read the rest of the story!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! The next chapter is already in the queue so hopefully it'll be to you soon! We're going back to that first meeting...Hope you like it!
Reviewer: Gelix (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2010 12:51 PM · On: Chapter 1 Halftime
Good start! Can't wait for more :)
Author's Response: Thank you! 2nd chapter is submitted so hopefully soon! I'm glad you like it so far ;)
Reviewer: Gabi-b (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2010 09:53 AM · On: Chapter 1 Halftime
I lovedddddddddddddd
Author's Response: Thank you! Chapter 2 is in the queue and 3 is ready to run, then we'll all be caught up!
Reviewer: Sarahhh (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2010 05:34 AM · On: Chapter 1 Halftime
Awwwh. :)
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! More to come soon!
Reviewer: naughtydreamz (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2010 04:24 AM · On: Chapter 1 Halftime
Oh holy hell....that was sofa king hot. Totally surprised me at the end with the reveal that they're actually a couple. Loved it!
Author's Response: :) I'm glad I was able to surprise you! I knew all along I wanted them to not be that slutty so it seemed the way to go! Next chapter we'll go back in time to show how they met. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: jerseyhalliwell (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2010 03:57 AM · On: Chapter 1 Halftime
this story is beyond awesome :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! I love football and why it took me so long to incorporate it into fic is beyond me.
Reviewer: kycee (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2010 01:06 AM · On: Chapter 1 Halftime
I had already read this oneshot. Glad you are expanding it.
Author's Response: Thank you! New chapter up soon!
Reviewer: kycee (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2010 01:06 AM · On: Chapter 1 Halftime
I had already read this oneshot. Glad you are expanding it.
Author's Response: :) Thanks!
Reviewer: carebear121 (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2010 11:02 PM · On: Chapter 1 Halftime
I loved the twist! They seem like the cutest couple ever. Nice story idea :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I didn't want to make them too slutty so I wrote the twist, had it in mind and decided to go with it! I'm glad you like them. I'm taking you back to how they got to this point next.
Reviewer: MeyaRose (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2010 10:57 PM · On: Chapter 1 Halftime
I could tell that it was a one-shot at first, but I'm so happy that you're continuing the story, it has so much potential!
Author's Response: I seem to have trouble keeping my one-shots as one-shots! I get too interested in the characters plus the response has been great so I had to continue. I'm glad you enjoy it so far!
Reviewer: trixie11 (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2010 10:12 PM · On: Chapter 1 Halftime
Great story! I loved the ending. Thank god too... I was really beginning to question Bella's attempt as a "serious" sports journalist!
Author's Response: I'm glad I could fool you! Believe me, I wasn't about to let her compromise all her principals just for a hot QB. Not that I can't understand wanting to! hehe The next chapter will go back and show how they met and we'll see just how they get to that point and beyond. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: roxxidoll (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2010 10:11 PM · On: Chapter 1 Halftime
That was very cool! I kinda suspected it at one point, but still you made doubt myself! Update soon!
Author's Response: I'm glad you were questioning it along the way! Most people got completely fooled so good eye! I'm glad you liked the twist. I'll have a new chapter very soon, going back to the beginning :)
Reviewer: deleepowman (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2010 09:56 PM · On: Chapter 1 Halftime
Great storyline, with a terrific surprising twist, glad you are expanding this
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it and the twist as well. I didn't want to make either one of them tnat morally compromised. hehe Next chapter will go back to the beginning! Thanks for reading :)
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