Your donations help keep this site running, thank you very much for the support!
Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2010 02:42 AM · On: Chapter 5 Game On
I loved how much Bella has affected him. Emmett and Jasper's teasing was hysterical. I really enjoyed their work out time together.
Great job describing the games and plays.
Can't wait for their date!
Author's Response: :) I like to think I get the guy mentality pretty well...they may be filthier than that sometimes but I like their dynamic as well. Bella's definitely on Edward's mind and we're all pretty excited for the date I think!
Thanks for the compliment on the football, means a lot to me ;)
Reviewer: april09 (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2010 08:24 AM · On: Chapter 5 Game On
Can't wait to read about the date. Loved seeing Emmett and Jasper give him such a hard time!
-Melanie
Author's Response: Gonna work on that this week, can't wait to see how it goes myself! I loved the boy teasing as well, so much fun!
Reviewer: LoveTwilight4Ever (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2010 09:22 PM · On: Chapter 1 Halftime
No no no, I really dont mind!! I actually liked that you put details about the game in!! Its forcing me to learn and I always wanted to.. Im just too lazy :P Haha
Cant wait fpr the next chapter, Prisci.
Author's Response: Haha well thank you. A couple of people thought it was too much but the majority were receptive which is nice! I probably won't be as indepth in the future but it was fun to let myself go like that!
Getting to work on the next chapter this week :) Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: LoveTwilight4Ever (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 04:24 PM · On: Chapter 5 Game On
Oh shit!!!
Your storie is really good and in the first chapter you really made me thing that it was a one night stand!!! But you completely lost me when you were talking about football... though I understoud that they won! Yayyy!
Can't wait for more and espacially the date!!! XD
With love, Prisci
Author's Response: Haha You're not alone, I managed to fool almost everyone which made me happy. I'm glad you're enjoying it :) Sorry bout the football but I hate football fics that don't incorporate it. Future chapters won't be quite so heavy with the football part. The date is next :) Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Saydonee (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 09:01 PM · On: Chapter 5 Game On
loved the razzing with emmett, can't wait for the next one!
Author's Response: Thank you :) That was a lot of fun to write. I have to expand my magazine knowledge now!
Reviewer: deleepowman (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 06:04 PM · On: Chapter 5 Game On
He definitely has it bad for Bella
Author's Response: He does! She's under his skin in a big, big way!
Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 01:07 PM · On: Chapter 5 Game On
great story...
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm so glad you like it! Thanks for reviewing! :)
Reviewer: Saydonee (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 10:36 AM · On: Chapter 4 Pre Game Speech
yay, they cleared the air
Author's Response: Yep! No long drawn out issues from me!
Reviewer: signy33 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 08:04 AM · On: Chapter 5 Game On
Wow, i really like your story, but you totally lost me during the football game's description. I tried googling "first and ten", wich brought me on a site explaining everything about football (very well done, by the way), but i couldn't really understand the rules when i've never seen an actual game. I think i'll try to find a video on youtube beacause i feel like i'm loosing too much of your fic. It seems like you really like this sport, or is it just an impression you want to give ? Anyway, i can't wait to read the next chapter, finally some Edward-Bella alone time !
Author's Response: Haha yes, I can assure you I really like the sport. I don't really like sports fics that don't contain the sports the athletes play so I'm including some here and there where it's important. Sorry you couldn't follow along but I'd be happy to help in any way possible. First & Ten, for instance, is when a team takes over possession of the football. They get 4 opportunities (called downs) to get 10 yards, so the first possession it's always first and ten to go until the next first down. A football field is 100 yards. I'm sure youtube can help you at least get a general idea of what was going on!
Yes, the date is next, should be interesting to see how these two do when they're alone at last.
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 11:23 PM · On: Chapter 5 Game On
That was just great! The game was very exciting...you have a gift for bringing this sport to life in words.
Emmett is just to funny...I do believe his character is going to have me in stitches in the chapters to come...
Author's Response: I love writing Emmett! He manages to steal scenes in all my fics it seems :)
Thank you so much for the compliment on the football portion! I know some people aren't into it but I really don't see the point of writing a football fic without having some of the action! I won't do it every chapter but sometimes it needs to be there.
I'm so glad you're enjoying it, thank you for the reviews!
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 10:56 PM · On: Chapter 4 Pre Game Speech
Yay! That was great! I loved that they worked it out on thier own...lol...that is so Alice to listen in by the door. God I love that good hearted lil pixie...
Author's Response: Hee, I'm sure if they hadn't, Alice would have found a way to get them together again but I wanted them to work through stuff on their own. Nothing contrived, just opening up and letting one another in. So glad you liked it! And yes, of course Alice was listening! She's too much fun. She and Emmett really need to hang out!
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 10:33 PM · On: Chapter 3 Are You Sure You're Not a Kicker?
Aww its a shame that blond bimbo had to ruin a good thing...it's just crazy I tell you...I sure as hell hope all will be straightened out soon...
Author's Response: Hee, it will! I never like to draw out angst, it's not my thing! This is going to primarily be a fun and romantic story and I'll do my best to keep it that way :)
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 10:12 PM · On: Chapter 2 Where It All Began
LoL...well that was a memorable first meeting...God I love Alice and Jasper...they are just so cute and perfect for each other...
Author's Response: :) It was memorable! A&J are cute and I'm going to incorporate them into the story a lot since they're the BFFs after all! I'm doing my best to write an Alice we can all like!
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 09:16 PM · On: Chapter 1 Halftime
Well that was one heck of a twist...you seriously had me there with them...me thinkin this was thier first meeting...lol what a shock to find they have been dating for two months...lol
Author's Response: Haha I managed to fool most everyone with that and I loved it! I didn't want to make them total sluts and I really liked the idea of them havng that tie. Now I'm exploring how they got to that point and having a blast with it!
Reviewer: Saydonee (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 08:03 PM · On: Chapter 3 Are You Sure You're Not a Kicker?
cluelessward isn't even thinking about taking a number right in front of her, lol
Author's Response: Haha he just wanted the girl gone, didn't really know she'd react like that. He definitely was having a clueless moment!
Reviewer: viking (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 08:02 PM · On: Chapter 5 Game On
I LOVE this story!!! I can't wait for Emmett to meet Bella. I'm sure they'll hit it off. Thanks for the chapter!
Author's Response: Haha Yes, Emmett meeting Bella should definitely be quite an experience! I wish I could hurry up and get there myself :)
Reviewer: Saydonee (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 07:15 PM · On: Chapter 2 Where It All Began
great first meeting and i love stories that get right to that instead of having a few chapters build up
Author's Response: Thank you! I don't want to wait to get them to that chapter 1 status...it takes a little time of course but we're gonna get there!
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 07:13 PM · On: Chapter 5 Game On
A+
Author's Response: Thanks hon!!! :)
Reviewer: Saydonee (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 06:55 PM · On: Chapter 1 Halftime
wow, great intro!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! I had a lot of fun with that chapter for obvious reasons :) I'm glad you liked it!
Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 05:47 PM · On: Chapter 5 Game On
great chapter, i can't wait until the next one!
Author's Response: Thank you! The date is coming up! ;)
Reviewer: muserockz (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 05:43 PM · On: Chapter 1 Halftime
aww that was a cute ending!! and very hot as well haha
Author's Response: :) Thank you! So glad you liked it! It was going to be a one shot but the amazing response made me have to write more :)
Reviewer: emma08 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2010 10:06 AM · On: Chapter 4 Pre Game Speech
Great story. I can't wait until the next chapter!
Author's Response: Aww thanks! Trying to work on it this weekend but my laptop is giving me fits! Hopefully soon!
Reviewer: NuclearLove3640 (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2010 11:54 PM · On: Chapter 4 Pre Game Speech
LOVE it already! Really well written and Seriously?! Edward sounds HAWT, like hotter than vampire Edward. Sooo... when's the next chapter? heheheheheh :)
Author's Response: Hehe well I'm right fond of him! I have always had a thing for QBs though! I'm glad you're enjoying it! I'm getting to work on the next chapter tonight so hopefully soon :)
Reviewer: emma08 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 06:55 PM · On: Chapter 1 Halftime
The last part of this chapter was awesome...I was totally not expecting that revelation.
Author's Response: :) Thank you! I wanted to make it a suprise. Glad you liked it!
Reviewer: jacoblucas (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2010 08:23 AM · On: Chapter 4 Pre Game Speech
I am so glad u decided to make this into a story...I LOVE it and and can't wait for the next chapter!!! How often do u update?
Author's Response: Thank you! Right now I'm on a two week schedule. I update Taste one week and this the next. Taste is due next week so we've got a little over a week on this one. I just posted the last chapter Monday :)
I'm honored that you like it! Thank you!
Submit a Review
|
© 2008, 2009 Twilighted Enterprises, LLC. All Rights Reserved.
Unauthorized duplication is a violation of applicable laws.
Privacy Policy | Terms of Service
All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the intellectual property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of Stephenie Meyer. No copyright infringement is intended.
|
|
