Aww, that was really cute. It took me a minute to figure out what was going on there at the end but I liked it! Looking forward to reading the rest.

i love your story, but IT'S 49ERS not 9ers

OMG, that was great! I love that Em is still winner in his head at the end, that is something that is so genuine & lovable about him. He has a great sense of humor! Getting in his head, had a smile on my face the entire chapter, just love this Em :)  ~Tracey xoxox

What a fabulous Friday treat!  I've been missing this story like crazy, especially since football season is in full swing.  Glad to check back in with our favorite horndogs.  I'm really hoping an outtake with Em on DWTS is in the future.  I'd love to see which pro he'd be partnered with.

Author's Response:

Haha I'm so glad you enjoyed it!  There are definitely more outtakes coming but writing Emmett dancing was NOT easy and I don't watch the show so that would be tough :)  Thanks!

Loved it, loved it, loved it.  Fabulous!!!  Please say there will be more updates, I love this story and I never want it to end, lol.

Jane x

Author's Response:

Thank you!  There are more outtakes to come, Jane! I promise ;)

AWWW!!!  I miss this story soooooooo much!!!!!

Author's Response:

Me too!  It was fun to pick them up again!  Thanks ;)

Oh God I love this story...the update popped up and I was oh, so excited to see more of perfect 10 and diane sawyer.

I really like your writing style.  Some times I find in fanfiction that the story feels fake somehow - the language is too formal and it feels like people are trying to sound smarter than they really are.  e.g. " Bella had a meager breakfast in her utility apartment" instead of saying Bella's breakfast matched her living space, simple.

You break that mold.  Your words are so clear and accurate that it makes reading easy and enjoyable.  That takes talent in and of itself.

Plus you can move the plot along quickly, editing down to only the most essential plot points.  Bless you for that!

Finally you add sex where it belongs and appropriate, not just to write it in.  The plot and story take priority over the sex, and I thank you.

So, do you think that you might start adding a new chapter to this story every couple of months just for us fans who want to read more.  I would love to hear about children, Edward taking kids to the first day of school, the end of his career, Bella becoming host of sports centre - just little important days like that throughout their lives.

You wouldn't have to post weekly, just when you feel like coming back and adding an important day, like a scrapbook.

Just an idea from one of your, and this story's, biggest fans.

Jenn

Author's Response:

Jenn,

 

Thank you!  I'm so glad you love it!  It felt good to pick the gang up again!

I like to write as "real" as I can in a fantasy world.  The conversations are all as I see them in my head and I don't like formal writing either.  I hate reading something where contractions belong and people don't use them.   That's not how people talk in their everyday speaking, so I don't want to read:  I will take out the trash right now.  I am sure it is important to get that done.  Etc.  Blah!

I try to write what we all want and while sex is a huge part of their life, it's not the be all and end all.  I like the downtime too and I'm glad you do as well.

I have plenty more outtakes plan and will get to them as soon as I possibly can ;)  I'm still heavily embroiled in Words with Friends and Words with Strangers over on FF but as those wrap up I'll be posting more :)

Thanks so much!

Amy

 

those last couple of chapters were freaking awesome...i really hope you update with how edward finally proposes and when bella got pregnant!  i hope he goes overload just like emmett!

Author's Response:

Edward proposed in Chapter 44 sweetie :)  There are outtakes coming though!

Phew, I need to win the Euro Millions Lottery and get myself a plane, lol.  They certainly made sure their entrance into the Mile High Club was thorough, hahaha!!! 

Loved it!!

Jane x

Author's Response:

Hehe Talk about flying the friendly skies, huh Jane?  :)  I want one too!  Thanks!

Just so funny!

Author's Response:

Thank you :)

Oh Emmett, my goodness the fact he made it through that pregnancy is impressive. Wonder if he thought Rose was fragile after the birth? she's tougher than he is. So cute that Edward is jealous. thanks for the update!

Author's Response:

Hahah I'm sure he drove her nuts for 9 months...and probably after with little baby Megan! 

So glad you enjoyed it!  Thanks!

well hello there stranger! Haven't heard from you in a wee while! did you miss us?

How sweet is Emmett? and Jasper he makes your heart melt! Poor Edward wanting to propose, but he was right not doing it then it would have looked like he was just jumping on the bandwagon.

Glad your dad's ok.

Hope to hear from you soon

Jo x

Author's Response:

Jo,

Hi there!  I'm good, how about you?  Of course I missed you.  Sorry, this was in the queue for way too long!  I actually pulled my other WIP from here because I'm tired of the waits.

Em is super sweet isn't he?  Jasper did a good job with his proposal we know B&E got their perfect one already!

Thanks so much!

I hope to have a new outtake in the next week or two :) 

Thanks!

 

Amy