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Reviewer: darkmoonsfalcon (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2012 11:50 AM · On: Chapter 1

fantastic story can't wait to read the next chapter!

Reviewer: Maranda (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2011 10:13 PM · On: Chapter 1

I so hope you update soon! I would love to see Edward's reaction to these events. Bella's virginity (which he considered his), was taken by his father figure. I would love to see him walk in on them or something! Oh, please give me a preview!!!

Reviewer: erose614 (Anonymous) · Date: June 29, 2011 09:20 AM · On: Chapter 1

Please post more! Love this! Very Hot! I'm definetely wanting more!

Reviewer: Lady Skyelite (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2010 01:18 PM · On: Chapter 1

I wish you would give us more, more Carlise, Bella, Jasper, Alice, all of them. And get Eddie the fraidie cat up and off with Bella! Maybe a live demo for him-starring Bella, carlise, and Jazz? Now THAT would be HOT!!!

Reviewer: cagemydreams (Anonymous) · Date: October 04, 2010 01:43 PM · On: Chapter 1

I loved your little dig at the sompletely ludicrous idea of a half-vamp half human baby! Are you going to continue this? I am REALLY looking forward to more!

Reviewer: famousmercury (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2010 10:41 PM · On: Chapter 1

Great job:)

Reviewer: shelbielyncullen (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 11:09 AM · On: Chapter 1

I absolutely love this!! Please update :))

Reviewer: cnramsey (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 08:43 PM · On: Chapter 1

You've sucked me in...Now give me more...

Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2010 03:51 PM · On: Chapter 1

Yay yay yay. I love Carlisle and totally saw the ust in the movie. I am so excited for the fic, and can't wait for more. Great job!

Reviewer: littlemiss185 (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2010 10:10 AM · On: Chapter 1

I LOVE this story!!!  Please, please, please continue!!!  

Reviewer: twibrarian88 (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2010 11:29 PM · On: Chapter 1

This is so different from your other fanfic that it surprised me.  I wasn't sure that a Carlisle / Bella story or pairing in any form was something I could deal with, but you drew the emotional portraits so well that it made sense.

 

Thanks for sharing.

 

P.S.  I still think regularly about Facebook Friends, and will be thrilled to see it progress now that your muse has returned from its vacation......

Reviewer: inge80 (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2010 05:33 AM · On: Chapter 1

You have a huge fan already after one chapter!!! This was sexy and damn hot. I never thought about Bella and anybody else and here she is with Carlisle... I love to see what's coming. Since the whole family has been together I love to see her with jasper... or Alice... well... it would all be hot really....

"Like the deepest hunger and the most profound satisfaction all at the same time; like your true self is known and worshipped by your partner in the most loving and complete and way; it is the embodiment of perfection; it is-- It is exquisitely divine." 

How do you come up with this... really awesome!!! Wish I could write like that… then again, I’m from Holland and my English isn’t that great that I could produce something as awesome like that… I’m way jealous haha :)

I’m so looking forward to the next chapter(s)!

Inge

 

Reviewer: Donna Lynn (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2010 09:54 PM · On: Chapter 1

I admit the Bella/Carlisle interaction was hot but I was disappointed there wasn't any Edward, but a arousing story nonetheless...

Reviewer: scrapmypieces (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2010 06:12 PM · On: Chapter 1

Dang..... let me get that again... DANG!!!!

Let me get my chin from the floor and expect chapter 2 ´cause... DANG!

Reviewer: loverlover (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 09:51 AM · On: Chapter 1

i need a ice cold shower after listening to carlisle's voice lots of lemmons please

Reviewer: CRAZY4RPATZ (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 03:27 AM · On: Chapter 1

What a great first chapter. The sexual tension between Bella and Carlisle is intense.  Can't wait for the Chapter 2.

 

 

Reviewer: gd_girl05 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2010 11:33 PM · On: Chapter 1

OMG!!! That was awesome! I can't wait for more.

I love the idea of Carlisle and Bella. 

Reviewer: sprazinko (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2010 06:38 AM · On: Chapter 1

this is really good cant wait to see what happens next

Reviewer: wilson0518 (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2010 06:28 PM · On: Chapter 1

Great beginning :)

Reviewer: PurpleBunnyJess (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2010 05:08 PM · On: Chapter 1

wow that was uh smuttawesome

Reviewer: Bruiser (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2010 04:03 PM · On: Chapter 1

YOU!  <gasp>  You are devastating and you are divine.  No one writes Carlisle like GreenPuma.  You crack into that candy-coating of control and reveal the creamy compote within.  Da-ha-ha-ha-haaaam.

I want a freakin' bumpersticker that says, "Like the deepest hunger and the most profound satisfaction all at the same time; like your true self is known and worshipped by your partner in the most loving and complete and way; it is the embodiment of perfection; it is-- it is exquisitely divine." 

I LOVE that you used tupelo to reference their eye color.  NEVER seen that one before and it's perfect.

Thank you, for writing something so innovative, and so refined, so scintillating.  So Puma, woman.  Can't you see you've already made me lose control?  Why do I sense that it's about to get much better?  <shudder>

Reviewer: Lissa Rose (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2010 06:18 AM · On: Chapter 1

Great start!  I can't wait to see Edward's reaction, but I think it might be more interesting if she went to Alice for a bit after this.

Reviewer: fandjio (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2010 01:15 AM · On: Chapter 1

I really like the beginning of your story

Reviewer: nanaL89 (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 11:40 PM · On: Chapter 1

ooo that was um..um..good love me some b/c lol

Reviewer: cagemydreams (Anonymous) · Date: May 29, 2010 09:41 PM · On: Chapter 1

Are you going to have her interact with other characters as well? Jasper and Emmett, for example? Or will this be strictly about Carlisle and Bella's relationship? I love how you are portraying their characteristics to such a heightened degree and would love to see you do it with other characters as well...

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