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Reviewer: Tabby917 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 11:30 AM · On: Chapter 16: Covering and Junk Food

That is going to be freaking hilarious!!!

Reviewer: Tabby917 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 11:21 AM · On: Chapter 15: Edward and Drunk!Bella

I'm assuming it's probably jasper, james.. Or worst case scenario Esme or Carlisle

Reviewer: Tabby917 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 11:06 AM · On: Chapter 14: Radio Stations and Lab Partners

jasper and bella for the teaser? Or possibly Bella and Edward? I guess I'll have to read to figure it out,

Reviewer: Tabby917 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 07:21 AM · On: Chapter 13: Ultimatums and Tears

hehehe the teaser was quite adorable! I loved it!

Reviewer: herron1 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 07:12 AM · On: Chapter 1: Five Years Ago to the Present

Ok seriously, i don't think i have ever enjoyed a fanfic this much. Every part of this story has me on the edge of my seat. I simply love it.

I am very much an Edward/Bella fan but reading this i have to tell you i'm definately leaning towrads Jasper/Bella. The pain and raw emotion that you have them go through and the way you portray it in your writing is amazing. I think at this point I'm going to be slightly heartbroken but so happy with whoever Bella chooses.

Once again I absolutely adore this fic so thank you and well done on creating such a masterpiece.

Reviewer: alice18431863 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 06:26 AM · On: Chapter 19: Crimson and Gifts

What a bitch!!!!!!!!! I hope she gets what she deserves!!!

 

you know you love me,

xoxo,

Alice

Reviewer: twiighter143 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 05:52 AM · On: Chapter 19: Crimson and Gifts

i'm very happy to have the next chapter. I love this story

Reviewer: Tabby917 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 04:57 AM · On: Chapter 12: Lamb Chop and Dilemmas

ohhh no!!! This is gonna be rough huh?

Reviewer: laed (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 04:52 AM · On: Chapter 19: Crimson and Gifts

Oh how I love the evolution of E during the course of this story. He has done a complete 360 since B arrived and I am definitely hoping she chooses him! He is being kind, vulnerable, patient and understanding. Who would have ever thought the Douchward that started out in this story could turn out so darn adorable!

J on the other hand, hasn't changed much at all...he's made choices out of weakness during their relationship, and he's still making choices out of weakness now! He didn't learn anything from his previous mistake w/ Maria.... how hard would it have been for him to tell Irina 'No thank you, I plan on asking Bella to the dance'.....not hard at all, but b/c J has no cahoonas, he tells Irina that he'll go with her. It's the same mistake he made with Maria for goodness sake!! IMO J has had plenty of time/opportunity to make up it up to B, but he hasn't. Instead he's wallowing around in self pity for a situation that he created. B deserves better.

I vote E/B all the way!!!

Reviewer: VampSK (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 04:50 AM · On: Chapter 19: Crimson and Gifts

I was so glad to see an update to this story!  Still one of my fav's!  Looking forward to see how the dance goes! :) 

Reviewer: Tabby917 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 04:40 AM · On: Chapter 11: Laughing Games and Melodrama

My high school wasn't very strict. Especailly to student who had already graduated. So it's very believable. The joys of a small town. ;)

Reviewer: Tabby917 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 04:24 AM · On: Chapter 10: Silk Robes and Car Cables

is that Bella meeting Maria? I can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: Jj Em Gothical (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 10:58 PM · On: Chapter 19: Crimson and Gifts

Oh, God. I'm scared at where this is heading.... I like Jazz and Bella together!

 

Nice Update!

Reviewer: AngelAtTwilight (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 09:23 PM · On: Chapter 19: Crimson and Gifts

Nice update!  I cannot believe Lauren -- wait, I CAN, but, I cannot, at the same time.  What a wench.  I hate girls like her.

 

Regardless, Bella and Edward should open their eyes and realize how good they get along and how well they know e/o, even without fully knowing e/o, you know?  They get their instincts, their hidden feelings... that's so hard to do, but they do.

I'm still betting on B/J or all solo, but as I'll say it everytime, I'm rooting for EB.

Reviewer: Tabby917 (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 08:24 PM · On: Chapter 9: Linen Closets and Calls Accepted

Welp it's bed time for the human... lol... But I'll be back bright and early to continue this wonderful story. If you'd like to chat... Please email me at Singingangel336 at yahoo dot com. This things usually blocks when you send and email so hopefully it works! :)

Reviewer: Tabby917 (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 08:13 PM · On: Chapter 8: Bikini Strings and Testing

I don't remember if it was this chapter or last when you mentioned "Flowers in the Attic" That is my FAVORITE V.C. Andrews series. I have all her books. *smiles proudly* I started reading them when I was 16, that's when my mom figured I was mature enough. Some of her plots are a little out there. I'm re reading Melody right now. :) It's nice to find someone else who knows that book, likes Buffy, and twilight! I think I've found a new BFF!!! LOL.

Reviewer: Tabby917 (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 07:57 PM · On: Chapter 7: Vinyl and Interruptions

Laurent obviously, she was his wing woman after all. He'd be able to give her mucho advice!! Plus Alice and him would get along PERFECTLY!... Fashion...

Reviewer: Tabby917 (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 07:45 PM · On: Chapter 6: Slow Dances and Awkward Glances

I love it!! I guessed tanya by the strawberry blond hair! :) And her and Charlie? hehehehe... THat was funny!!!

Reviewer: Tabby917 (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 07:00 PM · On: Chapter 5: Confrontations and Conversations

The Bronze? As in Buffy's Bronze? Sunnydale's one and olny cool hang out place? Nice! I like it! :)

Reviewer: Tabby917 (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 06:44 PM · On: Chapter 4:Texan Twangs and Salad Dressing

ooohhhh the lauren thing made me crack up!!! Ranch in her hair!!! *giggles* I LOVED it

Reviewer: Tabby917 (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 06:30 PM · On: Chapter 3: Pwetty as a Little Pwincess

hehhe, I loved this chapter. Bella's grand appearance! Classic!!! :)

Reviewer: nikki2714 (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 06:26 PM · On: Chapter 19: Crimson and Gifts

OMG!!!!This story is great!!!!New favorite!!!!Read all 19ch today!!!!Can't wait for next update

Reviewer: Tabby917 (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 06:17 PM · On: Chapter 2: James and Close Encounters of the Sexy Kind

forks hotties I like it! And I'm not normally for the all human, and out of character stories, but thus far I really... REALLY..  like it!

Reviewer: Tabby917 (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 06:01 PM · On: Chapter 1: Five Years Ago to the Present

OMG! I just started reading it and I'm in love!!! I loved that Esme was so human and mom like. Never EVER have I read a story where she lost her temper!! And I LOVED it!!! :) Great Job!!!

Reviewer: makovitza (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 05:42 PM · On: Chapter 19: Crimson and Gifts

Aargh! It's killing me to see J so unhappy! When E and B interact and his eyes sparkle there's a part of me that is happy (I mean, who can resist green eyes?!?) but another part that is like "nooooooo, don't do this to Jasper!!!!"

The Emmett POV was a nice little bonus - I wanted to hug him when he told E he really needed to talk to J. As for the Lauren POV - I thought getting an insight into her head might make me slightly more sympathetic towards her, but really she's as awful as ever.

Anyway, thanks for another great chapter. I can't wait to read more! :-)

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