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Reviewer: Mademoiselle Chocolat (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 10:34 PM · On: Chapter 2: James and Close Encounters of the Sexy Kind
Bella's a bitch. I know she needs revenge, but does she get better? I'm enjoying the story so far.
XoxoX, Mademoiselle
Reviewer: baileygirl (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 07:32 PM · On: Chapter 19: Crimson and Gifts
This is my new favorite story! I can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: ContemptuousCullen (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 05:46 PM · On: Chapter 6: Slow Dances and Awkward Glances
“Stop what? And why are you here? Isn’t there carpet that needs munching somewhere?” *LMAO*
Priceless!!!!
Reviewer: Natchy (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 04:02 PM · On: Chapter 19: Crimson and Gifts
I'm so curious!
Wanna know how this will end! ;)
Can't wait
Reviewer: baileygirl (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 12:37 PM · On: Chapter 15: Edward and Drunk!Bella
Awww. I'm starting to like shamed and apologetic Edward. It's refreshing. ;p
Reviewer: baileygirl (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 11:22 AM · On: Chapter 12: Lamb Chop and Dilemmas
That seems to have happened really fast. First/second base to home plate. Big jump.
Reviewer: baileygirl (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 11:16 AM · On: Chapter 9: Linen Closets and Calls Accepted
Oooh weeee. No Edward isn't going there.....
Reviewer: baileygirl (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 10:56 AM · On: Chapter 9: Linen Closets and Calls Accepted
Oooh weeee. No Edward isn't going there.....
Reviewer: baileygirl (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 10:55 AM · On: Chapter 8: Bikini Strings and Testing
HA!! Love that he was "tested"....and failed! What a bitch-ass.
Reviewer: baileygirl (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 10:45 AM · On: Chapter 8: Bikini Strings and Testing
HA!! Love that he was "tested"....and failed! What a bitch-ass.
Reviewer: baileygirl (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 10:15 AM · On: Chapter 3: Pwetty as a Little Pwincess
God, talk about a fantasy come true...to be able to say FUCK YOU to someone who was mean to you. I'm so excited to see Bella totally mind-fuck Edward.
Reviewer: baileygirl (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 09:57 AM · On: Chapter 3: Pwetty as a Little Pwincess
God, talk about a fantasy come true...to be able to say FUCK YOU to someone who was mean to you. I'm so excited to see Bella totally mind-fuck Edward.
Reviewer: baileygirl (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 09:36 AM · On: Chapter 1: Five Years Ago to the Present
Oh sweet, sweet revenge.....
Reviewer: Hollzama (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 07:29 PM · On: Chapter 19: Crimson and Gifts
What a little bitch! But what else can we expect from Lauren?
Man I feel so bad for B E J and the little love triangle they kinda have going on. There just seems to be no good way out of it! Well, it took me two days to read up to here, now I get to play the waiting game haha.
Can't wait to read more as usual <3
Reviewer: Hollzama (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 06:55 PM · On: Chapter 17: Solace and Slutterina Barbie
I don't mean to be nit picky, but in the last chapter Bella asked where Edward's parents were, and he said they were out of town and he would join them Thanksgiving, so I figured he wouldn't have been in Forks for this? It just bothered me a little and I noticed it because I read these back to back.
Now that I got that out of my system, yay for Edward being a sweety :D I think I'm on Bella's side here. She knew she was being irrational and voiced her insecurities to Jasper, yet he still went against her wishes when she was right about Maria. I still feel bad for Jasper, but not as much now that he still hasn't done anything to win her back. I'm leaning toward Eddie now *giggle*
Reviewer: Hollzama (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 11:30 AM · On: Chapter 14: Radio Stations and Lab Partners
LOVED the radio bit and Alice's reactions to the love songs playing, hilarious! Also when Edward poked Bella and ran off, scared he touched her XD
Poor Jasper, but at least Edward is starting to be nice now <3
Reviewer: carissahess11 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 05:53 AM · On: Chapter 19: Crimson and Gifts
when are you going to updateeeeeeee?? pleasee
Reviewer: Jmmt007 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 09:28 PM · On: Chapter 1: Five Years Ago to the Present
AMAZING!!!!
Reviewer: Hollzama (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 08:08 PM · On: Chapter 6: Slow Dances and Awkward Glances
Wow. Normally I'm an ExB fan..but holy cow am I rooting for Jasper this time around! I really love your versions of the characters, so witty and hilarious, especially the banter between Alice and Edward. Priceless! I've never had so much fun reading fanfic before XD
Since you seem to be a big BtVS fan, I have to mention we named our dog Buffy haha <3
*goes off to read the next chapter*
Reviewer: Hollzama (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 07:48 PM · On: Chapter 5: Confrontations and Conversations
LOVED the BtVS reference, perfect idea :D And ahh this story is making me so giddy, must read more! <3
Reviewer: Hollzama (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 07:32 PM · On: Chapter 4:Texan Twangs and Salad Dressing
ohmuhgawd, you got me cracking up too! This stuff is great, I love her sweet revenge muwahaha! I also love how Bella isn't a complete slut or anything; it's nice to see she can still be somewhat shy, but still have confidence too. Bravo!
Reviewer: MaraCullen (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 12:58 PM · On: Chapter 19: Crimson and Gifts
Get out!!!!!!! She gave her condoms???? Omg, what a slut!!! Last chapter i got crazy coz i thought it was the last one...then sth told me to go back to the story anddddd....Oh my god I haven't seen chapter 19!! But now what??? I honestly can't wait for the dance... so plz make my day and update!!!! I will owe you forever!!!!!
Love,
Mara
Reviewer: MaraCullen (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 12:41 PM · On: Chapter 18: Hair Combs and Stolen Kisses
Oh my god...I want an update asap...!!!!!!!
Reviewer: kiwigirl82 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 10:29 AM · On: Chapter 19: Crimson and Gifts
Love the story! I'm so torn, Jasper and Bella seem so good together...but Edward and Bella - a whole other level! Looking forward to reading more!
Reviewer: MaraCullen (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 09:53 AM · On: Chapter 15: Edward and Drunk!Bella
AWEsome chapter!!! Best so far...
"A bird cackles through a window. Want to kill bird.".......lol!!! This is EXACTLY how I am in the morning!!!
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