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Reviews For Our New Life
Reviewer: taintedangel30 (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2012 01:47 PM · On: The Coven

this is very scary!

Reviewer: HattieGood (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2011 08:13 PM · On: Drama

I love this story. It makes sense and helps one get a feel of what there life is like.

Reviewer: Jessmarie646 (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2011 07:21 AM · On: The Coven

I really enjoy reading your story I can't wait to see how it all plays out

Reviewer: MoiAndrea (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2011 09:19 PM · On: The Coven

OMGGG THIS IS REALL GOOD!!! Please please please continueee

Reviewer: hugsandkrisses2 (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2011 05:41 PM · On: The Coven

i know im joining late, but i just discovered your lovely story today. i am enjoying it immensely! i just realized that im writing very formally.... I LOVE IT! hope you write soon, and if you need any sex scene advice ;) you know where to come.


Reviewer: Themslovebug90 (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2011 08:18 PM · On: The Coven

Awesome story...can wait to read more

Reviewer: leximason (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2011 03:59 PM · On: Drama

this story is so good! I haven't been this excited over a fanfic in a really long time. please update soon!

Reviewer: tibbs8482 (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2011 05:44 AM · On: The Coven

I like the story so far.  Please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: someviolence (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2011 04:34 PM · On: The Coven

please write more soon! the story is amazing :D

Author's Response:

I'm working on it, I promise! The new coven are giving me some problems, but I'm sure that I will prevail!

Reviewer: dnabgeek (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2011 09:26 AM · On: The Coven

Very interesting choice... Can't wait to

Reviewer: lalaladiamond (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2011 06:59 PM · On: The Coven

write more i need to know what else happened

Reviewer: lalaladiamond (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2011 06:28 PM · On: Needs

she's pregant

Reviewer: socalaryangal (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2011 08:06 PM · On: The Coven

oh how studid am i realizing i started reading something not finished i think its called noob.oh wellnext time i will read better this is my first time on this site lol

Reviewer: socalaryangal (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2011 05:49 PM · On: Drama

so far its great

Reviewer: sogian (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2011 07:10 AM · On: The Coven

OH MY GOD! What did Bella do? They are in so much trouble... They so much want to take her in their coven and really hope so that they are not. I'm so with Edward in this. He sould be negative about the hole thingh but he can't say no to Bella even when he have to. Can't wait to read the rest. Update as soon as you can.

Reviewer: sogian (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2011 06:40 AM · On: An Idea

xaxa they can't keep their hands of its other. I love your dtory so far... What is it going to happen with the succubus? I have so many questions...

Reviewer: MalinB (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2011 04:46 AM · On: The Coven

Welcome back! I hope that 2011 will be a better year for you! I'm so glad you're back, but I hope that you don't feel "forced" to finish the story. 

This chapter was really good, and I love that you're going (even more) mythical! I'm so excited to see where this story is heading!


Take care!

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2011 04:38 AM · On: The Coven

what an amazing chap update wow Bella has famous teachers muah hahaha...  Hopefully they actually can help her because Edward needs some loving hehehe  Look forward to the next post.  Trust me I understand I haven' been able to update in a while either and I have a chap done it just needs editing but some family stuff has put my own writing on the back burner but at least I can still read!

Reviewer: sogian (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2011 05:04 PM · On: Visitors

No, No, No... How they now about Nella allready? Are they going to forse her to join them?You can't do that... Bella belongs with Edward!!! Please just be a simple help they want to give and not to take her. And Bella can't thing at any moment that maybe Edward is better of without her and leave him. I just take it...

Reviewer: sogian (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2011 04:44 PM · On: Succubi

ow! Bella is succubus after all. Can't believe it. Can't wait to see how this is going to go... She can't even resist her jealous...

Reviewer: sogian (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2011 08:45 AM · On: Questions

What?? What do you mean a succubus? And what does it have anything to do with all this?? A succubus is stealing the energy of her partner? And why Balla hadn't allredy show anything? It's been 10 years since she was changed. What about the chamges? Would she like to sleep with other men to? that would be awful.

Reviewer: sogian (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2011 08:02 AM · On: Needs

OW God What is wrong with Edward? Is it something serious? Are they even going to find out what it is?

But their lovemaking... GOD... just no words...

Reviewer: aly1390 (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2011 06:33 AM · On: The Coven

Hi! found your stor browsing the 'most recent' category and I'm deeply intrigued with your whole Bella-is-a-succubus plot line, I kind of thought that this would be some light hearted post BD AU and oh, how wrong I was. I love the way you write their personalities aside from Emmett ( I doubt he's that idiotic), also integrating the 'original' feme fetals into the story is brilliant!I've read a lot of fics that have succubi and incubi in them and so far this is one of the most creative twists...

I can't wait for the next chapter, I'll be waiting patiently for you rnext update...

Reviewer: Koekedeke (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2011 05:27 AM · On: The Coven

I love it!!!! Love the succubi's background stories (always had a soft spot for mythology). Will Rose develop her powers?

Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2011 05:08 AM · On: The Coven

I know I've told you this countless times before, but I am so THRILLED that you're back to updating this. And this new chapter is absolutely amazing! That the 3 succubi are such legendary women will certainly make things much more interesting now. And thank you for including Bella's increasing beauty. Now that her powers are increasing and developing, that her beauty and sexual appeal grows as well is an excellent development!


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